Reviews by asam75
Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 47980
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Carlisle may have loved his wife, but he was willing to barter his son's happiness and well-being.  I think he underestimated his wife, who undoubtably would have traded her peace of mind for her son (besides she was already suspicious of them).  Edward's marriage to Tanya would have caused Esme great distress.  Carlisle was selfish in both of his actions.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Thank you for taking the time to post.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Good chapter.  Bella behaved with grace and ingenuity.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Apart from screeching like a shrew and flinging potatoes, Bella held tight to her class and principles.

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184183
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an exciting start to a new chapter in this story.  And in my experience, the supernatural element was quite plausible.  Thank you for continuing.  I

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good to see this again. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

While I don't lie the way they immediately ceded to Roberto's demands, I realize it is more important that they get out and about.

Love the last photo.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella had it all, until she lost it. When life offers you a dream so far beyond any of your expectations, is it reasonable to grieve when it comes to an end?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88307 Read Count: 38297
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Aug 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

You're doing a good job pulling it together.



Author's Response: That's really nice of you to say. Thank you very much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

Banner by Clo Rodeffler

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Good to see this back.

Hopping For Love by Sher Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Sometimes we overlook the golden egg that is out in plain sight.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15200 Read Count: 1308
[Report This] Published: 12 May 2016 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great ending...thanks.

Summary:

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Bella has her life planned out. Her business is sucssesful and she is surrounded by people she cares about, so why is she so lonely. Fate changes her life but will she follow the righ path.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76583 Read Count: 542900
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2016 Updated: 17 Oct 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Good chapter.  Esme is lucky in the timing of this attack as she now has people who will support her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good chapter, but I hate hanging here.  Aro's right about how concerned the Cullen's weren't about her, but then again that was Jasper.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I feel Bella is inappropriate at times with her temper.  She overreacted banning Esme from her son's house and contact with grandchidren.  They say you catch more flies with honey than vinegar.  Bella has gained a powerful enemy. 

 

 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoyed it...so she's mob born and doesn't know it.  Good start.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Interesting.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was a very good chapter...lots happened.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's too bad she lost her cousin.  I think they could have related to each other better than she will with Aro.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good story so far.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this new story.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm guessing that Alec's interest in her has to do with her name, Corsaro?  I think you should have seen the red flags long before eight months.



Author's Response:

I agree, she should have realised way before then. However when your desperate for somebody in your life, you may bury your head in the sand rather than face what's in front of you. Also remember she hasn't know any affection or attention all her life, untill she met Alec.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

If he thinks his fiance is using him that's only because he won't talk to her.  His running off doesn't help.  There are always going to be bad days and extreme stressors in his job.  If he's going to run off to drugs and whores as a default, she should just let him go...he's not worth it.  His whole family is crazy or has behaved so at one time or another.  She should consider trying to leave like she did before, though it's made more difficult due t oAro now. 

Can't wait for the next...seriously.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good chapter.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

With them worried about Bella because of the families in town, I was surprised to see her out and about alone.  I know she has protection, but since they didn't help her with the bouncer at the club, they aren't close enough to be effective.

Thanks for the chapter.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Enjoyed this chapter...especially the part about "dumbing" Isabella down.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good chapter.  Like the way you quickly got to the ball.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you for your hard efforts to post.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good question Edward.   I re-read that part several times in the last chapter.  I thought t first that Aro was a hallucination the way that he just popped up.  No one else seemed to notice him or comment.  Why didn't Jasper's man (I noticed he called him Boss) speak up?



Author's Response:

Hi, asam 75,

I think Aro waited deliberatly untill Jasper had left, leaving only one of the lower ranking men to deal with Bella. Aro seemed to pose no threat to Bella and he will know she is related to him. If there had been a scene, or Bella had been distressed by him there, i'm sure he would have informed his boss. However, only the Cullens themselves knew that Aro needed to be watched, as he may be a threat to Bella. They had not made it know to the men. Probably now hoping that with the wedding, he would accept things and back off.  Hope this answers your question.

 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Thank you for finishing this story...a happy ending for Edward and Bella.

If you decide to do another, I miss the one you started where Bella left Edward to tour Europe and do volunteer work.  When she returned, he had already moved on (even though they'd been together for 7-9 years and she was only gone 6 months).  I guess you removed it, since it's no longer here.  I'd love to see it finished.

You get very good numbers in reviews for this site.  Look around...many multi-chapter stories only get 2-3 per chapter.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I have been really lucky with people reading and reviewing my stories. I have only ever posted on this site. What holds me back is every day details, such as, going to school, college, university. It's all different from what I've been used to in England. It makes it harder to write about something you have had no experience of. I think that is what happened with the story you spoke of, I did take it down. I tried to put too many facts in (from  the internet) and the story itself got bogged down and lost. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Knowing people are reading my stories and seem to be enjoying them, gives me the encouragment to continue.

Summary:

 

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AfTer they return from Volterra. Bella realizes nothing is going to change - unless she changes herself first.      


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10391 Read Count: 3503
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Jun 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Bitch Brow

All valid points on the behavior of these vampires.  I never understood the premise of repeating high school ad infinitum and placing themselves so close to humans.



Author's Response:

Thanks, yes very masochistic, I always thought xx

AAP

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Puppy Training

Always wanted someone to tell Jake these things.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Yes never could see that one myself, he may have looked 25 but was actually 16ish,

although he acted much younger, 

what self-respecting almost 19-year-old would entertain that !!!!!

AAP

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Poor Bella, though she's already gotten more than she could have expected.



Author's Response:

Agreed! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Thank you.  I'm not familiar with the movie.



Author's Response:

The movie is "Love in the Afternoon" (1957), directed by Billy Wilder, starring Audrey Hepburn and Gary Cooper. But you can enjoy the story without knowing the movie at all. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 41083
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Exciting start.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Didn't Alice see them coming?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178598
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

We have confirmation the Jared was working for the kidnappers. Now will someone help Edward?

Summary:

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When a small town girl finds herself in a world of trouble, she turns to an old ‘friend.

 

Rated: NC-17 for the following strong language, drinking, some drug usage, SEX, violence, etc…

 

Genre – action, adventure, drama, romance,  some horror, gore, death

 

 


Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Chibs
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 292645 Read Count: 38020
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2016 Updated: 27 Mar 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Everybody hates Chibs

Good chapter, though I'm not so sure it would be all that easy to haul around a 150 lb. plus duffle bag on a bike.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Housecall

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Arrested Development

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - A crow and his swan

Thanks for the chapter, but I'm not happy that you're working on two other stories.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the chapter. However I have to please all my readers and not just the one. I have other stories to work on. Such as life. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Old Lady

Can't she just call a wolf down and take care of Clay?

I'm enjoying the story and mix of SOA storylines with unique directions that they follow.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Luck of the Irish

Good start.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A Scotsman’s Wrath

Lots happened...thanks.

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 333060
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I see that Alice threw her grandmother's term "soulmate" at Edward in describing Angela.  I wouldn't put it past her to use this prediction against Edward in getting him and Angela back together...you know Angela all "in need" and don't turn away from her.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent and engrossing as usual. I'm guessing that Edward is Ethan's father, but due to a genetic anomaly, this chimera, the DNA test results in a false negative. As a lawyer will Edward have a case where this exact scenario results in a court case? Will he then re-think what happened with Bella?

I want to read it all...now! 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I need to remember to read from this site in the future.  Edward's a nice guy, just easily persuaded by Alice, Angela and eventually his family and lawyers to severe ties with Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Three friends became brothers as they fought together on the front lines. But now, separated from their troop, injured, they must fight harder than ever to make it through alive. As they journey through the deadly Dunes, Major Whitlock, Sergeant McCarthy and Private Cullen will learn more about themselves and each other than they ever thought possible. 

Will they make it out alive? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19697 Read Count: 5164
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2016 Updated: 15 Sep 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 7: The Thief

Thanks.

Summary:

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Shy, reserved Edward has a little too much Jack Daniels after finding his fiancée cheating on him. Waking up the next morning in a strange woman’s bed, he fights the pull he feels for her. Will he realize they're fated for each other, or will he only focus on their differences?

 

***So that you know up front, this story has been pulled after the first chapter. It still makes a lemony-filled one shot if you want to read it as-is. If you're interested in the published version, you can find me in the Amazon store under my real name, Lara Norman.***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 49596
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

I saved your opening quote...it has me thinking.

I'm enjoying the story...thanks.



Author's Response: Oh, well thank you. I tried to pick quotes that really had meaning, so I'm happy it spoke to you.

Summary:

Time can be a funny. Sometimes it's cruel. Sometimes it's not. What happens when it's got Bella Swan and Edward Cullen in its webs. A/U B&E All Human. (Please remember this is a fictional story, please suspend your disbelief and just enjoy. Thanks!)  


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5252 Read Count: 223
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2016 Updated: 08 Oct 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you. 



Author's Response:

You are welcome, and thank you for reading and reviewing!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary:

Three-month AU detour, Sept-Dec 1793. Set in the aftermath of Ross's betrayal. Demelza takes a different path. Novel-based with some takes from the TV production.


Categories: Poldark
Characters: Ross Poldark/Demelza Carne
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3504 Read Count: 129
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2016 Updated: 24 Nov 2016
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmm, got more?

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91389
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh, I've been waiting for this...Lizzie Bell and Eddie Lamb.  Of course in real life, the McCarty's would have had to be more active in reuniting Bella and her family, but this works for me.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

My main thought is more, please more.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 28 May 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Things are looking up for Lizzy Bell.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I feel so bad for Lizzy Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor lizzy Bell and her Eddie lamb.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

With all the planning, it happened during a snowstorm. Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks, I enjoyed the entire story.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You have a large section duplicated in the text.

Waiting on the big reveal.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Thanks,

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The wedding will explain Carlisle and Esme's rush to leave New York.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Nice ceremony.  I hope the death certificate doesn't become a problem.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Emmett is willing to step up and of course, Rose wants the child.  Emma Rose is a good name.  Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thanks.

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64410
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

My main thought is that if you're running from powerful people, you don't step into the public light.  Esme is foolish and risking her son's future.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise

This is gong to hurt everyone.  I don't know why anyone in hiding would go public the way Esme has.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

I'm not sure how Carlisle thinks he will control a grown man/boy for years.  He has a tenuous hold at best.  I hope Edward brings his whole "family" down.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Confessions

Carlisle is crazy to think you can take a mature boy and change him into a Mafia don.  He'll fight him all the way even if it takes years until he has enough power to do so.  Carlisle's time would have been better spent producing another heir.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Thanks, but was that really smart?  She did some real damage that Carlisle will see.  A slap seems more appropriate for the name calling. And frankly, that is what she did without any excuse for needing it to make a living.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Thanks...though it got a little gory.

Summary:


Summary: Bella is deaf and due to her disability she is unable to do the one thing she's always wanted to do, follow in her father's footsteps and be a firefighter. Overcoming the hatefulness of several people, she works in the firehouse, but can she be the saving grace in a scary emergency situation? 

Book Cover and regular Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77829 Read Count: 43247
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2017 Updated: 24 Jun 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start to a story I'm sure I'll enjoy.

Summary:

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Edward and Bella are best friends, have been for years. They'd do anything for each other, but would Edward asking her to help him and his wife, Tanya have a baby be the breaking point? Can she sacrifice herself to help them? Will their friendship be able to survive?


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23857 Read Count: 29173
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2017 Updated: 11 Jun 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 28 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Why does he feel she's obligated to talk to him...to carry his baby?  He and Tanya are being very selfish.  I think Bella's actions speak to her answer.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good plan.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

"I've never been more turned on before in my life."

"My girl is so turned-on"

...really, Edward?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward really should rethink the whole "having a baby with Tanya" thing...no matter how they choose to accomplish it.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A cheater and a liar, who can't figure out what he wants.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Celebrating what good news?  He doesn't even know if he wants a child...why would he use his friend this way?  He feels stuck..I guess in his relationship.  He needs to figure all this out.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

His behavior is all kinds of wrong.  He's celebrating with his wife, happy in his marriage.  But he still doesn't know if he even wants this baby.  What about the life he is bringing this baby into? He is very selfish and very male...taking the line of least resistance and whatever sex is offered to you.

I'm not liking Bella either. Sleeping with a married man, taking whatever E throws at her.

I am enjoying this story and loving the frequent updates. Somehow, Tanya is the only one I can like here.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Drabble drives me crazy...at least you post frequently.

I hope Bella lays claim to this child.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

"...stuck on stupid..."  Perfect definition/description of this Edward.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What story?  They haven't started the insemination process yet.  The birth date won't correspond with the supposed conception date?  What are they doing?  This is a mess that will leave both women in pain.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He is a bastard...to his wife, to Bella.  The dates won't align, the insurance won't be charged.  The proces isn't as simplistic as Edward makes it seem.  Bella would be given fertility drugs to make conception as likely as possible.  The sperm would have to be tested before using.  Bella would have to be tested.  I don't really care about the technicalities, but I do about the characters...and I really despise Edward.  I trust B won't end up with him.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This is the kind of story I could devour in a night.

Poor Tanya.  She was hurt when she wasn't part of the "process"...how will she feel when she learns that there was no "process"?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Keep walking, Tanya.  But Bella, no matter how much you love Edward you need to think long and hard about his behaviors throughout this.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 31 May 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Now this doesn't surprise me.  They should have had a contract about the baby.  Did they?  If so, Bella could be the one fighting for custody.  Of course, Tanya is invested in this baby...that's part of the betrayal.  This the easiest way for her and Kate to get a child.  Between the divorce and DNA, Tanya shouldn't have a chance.

Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After their whirlwind romance, can they make it down the altar or will one or both get cold feet?

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6546 Read Count: 1137
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter.

Summary:

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After working on a horror film with hotshot director, Edward Cullen, Bella has finally had her big break through as an actress in Hollywood. Unfortunately, the fame has introduced a dangerous man into her life. A man who watches her every move. Will her former director and ex-lover be able to save her or will the dark side of fame consume them both? M for Violence and Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94303 Read Count: 19308
[Report This] Published: 22 Aug 2017 Updated: 19 Jan 2018
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Safe and Sound

The Police song quote at the beginning is ominous.

Summary:

He buried his secrets, but he should have checked for a pulse.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8760 Read Count: 2361
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2017 Updated: 31 Oct 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great opening.  I could visualize it easily with scenes from Buffy, the Vampire Slayer playing in my head.



Author's Response:

 Oh, God, it's been years since I've seen an episode. I should find those and watch. 

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84380
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Thanks.

Summary:

Mechanics and Mistletoe

Bella, an uptight, cold executive, is on her way home for Christmas. The first Christmas she’s been home since she started working for the Fortune 500 company that hired her from college, almost ten years ago. The only reason why she’s going home is to meet her brother’s new wife and her parents threatened to cut her out of the will if she didn’t make time to see her family. However, it’s snowing, a blizzard and Bella’s car wasn’t really designed for the cold. Or snow. Or anything other than sunny, perfect weather.

Edward Cullen is alone on Christmas Eve, working, as usual. His family was long gone and all he had left was his family business, Cullen Towing Service and Garage, though that wasn’t going well for him. Business was slow. His bills were piling up and he was afraid he was going to lose his livelihood if something didn’t turn around. Over the radio, he heard about a stranded driver, stuck on the back road. Edward pulled on his winter coat, gloves and started his truck, driving to the location.

A small sports car was stuck in a ditch, almost completely covered with snow. A beautiful woman, wearing heels and a fur coat was shivering outside her car. Edward immediately recognized her as the girl he once knew and had secretly crushed on for years. Her brother, Jasper, pretty told him to fuck off and said that she was too good for him, a grease-monkey, a blue-collar boy.

Can this uptown girl fall for a guy with grease on his hands?

Banner by Clo ...  thanks girlie!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44621 Read Count: 13896
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How could Jasper think he could get away with that?

Only one chapter left?  I'm really enjoying this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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One summer between high school and college changed Edward's ideas about his life's plans. Could he really build a life with a much older woman two thousand miles away? My entry for the TwiFandom News Forbidden Fruit Contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59156 Read Count: 13000
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2018 Updated: 04 Oct 2018
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wondered about FROG jam so much that I had Bing searching for it while I read the end of this story.  I like fig jam and I love ginger, so I'd probably like it.

Poor Bella, poor Edward . . .thanks for the chapter.



Author's Response:

That's what I always do when I come across something I'm unfamiliar with in a story. 

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39694
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks.