Reviews by TwiAggie94
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward seems to be a good guy at heart. And honestly Bella needs the disaplen. She did not have a parent. What will Charlie's role be later.

Good chapter. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow. Can't wait to see the talk. Where were the 25 spankings? Fun little fix.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The daddy is odd, to each their own kink.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start. Woill have to see how much "trouble" will our miss Bella get into. :-)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Something tells me it will not be so "easy". 😉

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years into her marriage, photojournalist Bella, is worried that she isn't enough for her bi-sexual husband. Can a meeting with a mysterious street artist allow them both to fulfill their undisclosed desires?

 

Lemons Poly/Slash Edward/Bella/Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9218 Read Count: 6224
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 05 Jan 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Undisclosed Desires

Great os.

End of a Long Week by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

This is a little Lemon Drizzle I wrote for Jasper's Naughty Girls. Based on this pic

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1023 Read Count: 1843
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good quick hot bit. Wish it had been longer. Meg

Calving by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Volturi Dairy by fetish-fanfic fan piece. What happens the first time Bella gives birth.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2285 Read Count: 4662
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 24 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well done. I loved that story. It was great.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my take on Bella's Hucow birthing experience. I was very excited when FF gave me permission to write it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

One day in gym class, Forks High learns that Bella Swan can kick. The football team needs a kicker.

The result of that: Bella makes the football team.

The problem: None of the guys want a girl on their team.

 

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74692 Read Count: 22155
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2014
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Moments Like This

Great!

Control Freak by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

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Banner made by Ima Twi Hard

My enrty for Fans Vs DV.

 

Edward has been looking for the perfect partner. A story of relinquishing control.

 

BDSM Themes ahead.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6706 Read Count: 3725
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 18 Mar 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice. Sad it may be your only of the genera
. You did well!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It was just really hard to write, maybe I'll just sneak some light bondage in my other fics. LOL

Summary:

 

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

 

 

This gorgeous banner is brought to you by the artistic styling of one MissKinkAtYourService.  I bow to her greatness as she always gives me the most amazing banners.  Check out her blog at

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 7789
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

God I love your friendly sky's. Wish there was more!

Author's Response:

They are pretty friendly, aren't they?  I didn't plan to continue this, but you never know what the future holds.  Thanks so much for the rating and review.

Nickey

Summary:

"Go to the restroom. Take of your panties and throw them away" AU,
ExB OOC Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3267 Read Count: 2306
[Report This] Published: 04 May 2011 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice.

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 143999
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Beautiful story... Not sure why it took me so long to read

Thank you.

Summary:

 

 

 

 

Late one night while house sitting for her dad's friend, Isabella gets caught

acting out one of her fantasies by none other then the star of them. Carlisle Cullen. OOC/ BxC

 

 

This story contains graphic sexual situations and is not suitable for those under the age of eighteen.

 

 

*UPDATE*story has be beta'd and I plan on writing another Chapter or two.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3384 Read Count: 6378
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2011 Updated: 10 May 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

We need to know what toys she brought. It was a hell of a lemon. Good job.

Summary:

 

A/N: This is my entry from the Beautiful Bellies Contest. The prompt and picture I used were surrogacy & #7 (milkshakes).
To Read all the other entries, visit www . fanfiction . net / u / 2791564 / Beautiful_Bellies

Huge thanks to saritadreaming for holding my hand on this one and pushing me in the right direction and working her beta magic with my abuse of the comma. If you haven't read any of her stories, run now.

I admire those who chose to be a surrogate and those that decide to use that method to bring a child into their lives. I've thought about being one myself, having enjoyed both of my pregnancies (I know, not everyone has the same pregnancy experience), but now that I'm older, it's no longer an option. Hope you enjoy this one shot.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10005 Read Count: 765
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2011 Updated: 10 Jun 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cool story.

Author's Response:

thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Swan begins her career halfway across the country, it quickly becomes more than she expected. Teamed up with Emmett "Bear" McCarty, she is the voice of reason on Kansas City's lewd and popular morning radio show. Sparks immediately fly between the two hosts, but fate adds another person to the mix-- one of the show's surprise guests, jumpstarting more than just her heart. 

 

Follow Bear, Bella, and the morning show crew through the fun and exciting world of being a local celebrity. See how tragedy unites them and how love heals them.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, gratuitous sex in every chapter, and rock & roll! 

 

AH, NON-CANON, OOC. Bella/Emmett, Bella/Tanya, Bella/Emmett/Tanya, Leah/Jacob, Leah/Riley, Angela/Demetri, etc.

 

WARNING: Does contain femmeslash and polygamic relationships.

 

rock music inspired collage

 

A Yellow Grape Tomato Award nominee (Best Slash/Femmeslash OneShot) of the 2011 Tomato Soup Awards! 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett, Bella/OC
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Femme Slash, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories, Entertainment Biz Buzz
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41576 Read Count: 19562
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2011 Updated: 02 Sep 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: "Reflections," a Leah/Riley O/S

Enjoyed.

Author's Response:

Hello, and thank you, TwiAggie94! 

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Full Forward by evilnat Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets a hot footy player. AH BxE

 

**written for the Another 'Ward' on the Barbie one-shot contest**

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5304 Read Count: 1421
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 29 Sep 2011
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263168
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes

Wonderful story... Not sure why it took me so long to find and read. Meg

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Whoop!!! Love the ending. Hope your son continues to follow in your Seth's footsteps. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

His dad is an ASS! Love Bella, she rocked!

Meg

Summary:

OS/AU/Dark/Lemony. Previously known as "The Lady of the Mansion"

There were many stories and rumors going around the small town regarding the old mansion deep in the forest...Some believed them wholeheartedly while others were skeptic, but no one could deny that if you were to walk in the forest on a dark night, you might not find the way back to your loved ones ever again.

"He fed when he wanted, took who he wanted, and killed anyone who was foolish enough to try to stop him from doing either. He had his discipline and knew how to install it in those he led in countless battles for territory."

WINNER Best Cullen Lovin' in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7371 Read Count: 1754
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Devil and his Maiden

Enjoyed

Have Mercy by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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Take one diabetic rockstar, who has to hide his true nature, and trap him in an elevator with a doctor who happens to be of the same persuasion. Will the good doctor have mercy on him? C/J slash. Written for Fandom 4 Juvenile Diabetes.

 

award

 

BLOG RECS!!!

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6843 Read Count: 998
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cool story! Meg

Author's Response:

Thanks darlin'!

xoxo

tb

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Video Clip for Fanfic: http://youtu.be/vntcQzzYOFQ

3 years have passed & things have changed alot for bella... After all she's not human sort of, So what happenes on the date of her 21st things change when someone brings a certain cowboy back in her life? JXB PXCh Ra:M

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Elemental Series, The Elemental Series
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82450 Read Count: 32180
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Outtake Eleazer's POV from chapter 37

Loved it all. Meg

Summary:

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One rule for buying at auction. Never buy blind. Jasper knew this, but he did it anyway. What lies in the ruins of what he bought? Can he fix everything there?

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77066 Read Count: 33535
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wonderful touching story! Enjoyed all of it! Meg

Friends and Lovers by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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Sometimes opportunities present themselves & you have to make the most of them. What starts as an innocent camping trip among friends turns into so much more. E/J slash. NC-17 for mature themes. *2nd place winner for Judges & voters choice in the DYAC contest*


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6429 Read Count: 990
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute! Enjoyed the outdoors. Meg

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb

Snow Blind by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Emmett and Jasper seem to have bad luck when it comes to the holidays. Will a trip to England & finding an enchanted cottage change this? Rated M for magical mischief. Em/J/G 

 

*winner of BEST LEMON & BEST USE OF BANNER in UnwrapThis11*

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Harry Potter, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Emmett/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3686 Read Count: 707
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute.... Great start to a trip..

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it TwiAggie! Thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb

Elf by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's had a rough year and is ready to turn her back on the holidays until a chance encounter leads her to find someone to take care of ALL of her needs. Soft BDSM E/B

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14571 Read Count: 25313
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun stray to a story! Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love you epov. Looked up the Story of O.
Little harsher than what I like o read.... :-)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So happy he made it back before she awoke... Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm sad with Bella that he is leaving.... Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So she like some pain? Great visuals with your words....

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh Edward.... Take her with you when you go home... Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh such punishment.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

My my.... How will he leave her?

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Fantastic... Can't wait for More. Meg

Rescue Me by KellanCougar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

KC - Rescue Me

KC - Rescue Me outtake

KC - Rescue Me, long days hard nights

 

Summary: After his ex's betrayal, Jasper had withdrawn into a life of isolation. But one night, stranded by the side of the road, he finds himself rescued in an entirely different way.

WARNING - Adult themes

Banner 1 by vbfb1
Banner 2 by Nanadb

Banner 3 by Ellie Wolf

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Emmett/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22199 Read Count: 5161
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Dec 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sweet

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412089
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun sweet start.

Summary:

Bella has always lived in the shadow of her twin brother, Edward. But on a graduation trip with their friends to a secluded cabin, she starts to develop feelings for his roommate Jasper. How long can they explore their feelings while keeping Edward in the dark? Non-canon pairing.

 

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Banner featuring pictures of the cosplay group, The Olympic Coven, used with permission. Photo credit for Rose and Emmett photo to @andywryly

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25705 Read Count: 13721
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great story enjoyed!

Heroes by naughtydreamz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Past Featured Story

heroes

 

A struggling single mom, a fatherless boy with big dreams, and a man on his way to fame and fortune.  All of them could use a hero.....

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23148 Read Count: 37148
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Sweet.. Yep I teared up several time. Enjoyed!

Meg

Summary: Past Featured Story

really hot, shirtless guy, hot chick, snowy backdrop and the always awesome fire

                                                             Banner by: Ellie Wolf

"Don't you understand, he'll die if you dont't!" Iz just shrugged a light sholder at her, "I understand perfectly. What you fail to understand is how little I care. What happens to him is in no way my problem."

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116973 Read Count: 94727
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Jul 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36

Absolutely fantastic story. l I'm sure I have read it before as parts seemed familiar to me. I love is she is so kick ass. I hope that you get to finish some of your stories that you have in process thank you for sharing your words and all the time you've put into the stories.

Summary:

 

 

Their music lifted you up, spun you around until you were out of breath and completely unhinged. The way it sank to your bones and tangled in your hair, yanking and tugging it, making you want to get down and dirty. It freed you to do the forbidden, the illicit, the dirtiest, most darkest fantasies. ExB UST Mature. Drug use


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8948 Read Count: 3124
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

More more ..... Ugh what happened? Loved your words! Thanks for sharing. Meg

Summary:

 

She's a rockstar and he's a musician. Let's take a peek at a morning of their life. EXB Mature. Olderward. Written for Fandom4JuvenileDiabetes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4060 Read Count: 6230
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet sexy story. What did her band mates say when she finally arrived?

Enjoyed.
Meg

Author's Response:

they probably were not pleased, I can tell you that

Summary:

Entry for Jasper's Darlins and The Major's Army Not Your Mama's PBJ: Edward left, Bella moves to Georgia to start her life over after she realized the Cullens won't be back. One night she's rescued by someone with a connection to her past.    


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24719 Read Count: 1824
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Happy dance. Enjoyed. Meg

Summary:

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Jasper dreams of finding "the one." Can a combining of summer camps make his hopes reality? 3rd place popular vote and Judge's Pick in The Summer It All Began contest .


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Emmett
Genre: Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19380 Read Count: 1985
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 01 Oct 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute! Meg

Summary:

Love

What happens when you end up stuck in an elevator when leaving work on a Friday night with the man of your lust filled fantasies?

Slash one shot written especially for a great friend, DelphiusFanfic on her birthday.

Nominated for Best Slash in Fandom Choice Awards.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25728 Read Count: 3124
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun times. Loved Rose. Meg

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

3up

A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222305
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

Great start. Really love a JBC story. :-) meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

Jazz you are a little shit. Glad hE sees it. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

You know.... Poor Bella her life repeatedly just bites!!!! Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up

Great start to what is what with the 3. Enjoying the building.
Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Lucky miss Bella...

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

Awe Edward. Not to sure about JB? Interesting. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Take Me Out...Pt. 2

Worried about Call? Feel he will cause heart ache.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2

Love Rose!

Summary:

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Edward overhears Bella complaining about her lack of ‘O’ at a party and he offers to help.  Too bad Bella’s never thought of him as being anything but her geeky lab partner.

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8082 Read Count: 2607
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute!

I wonder how was college. Meg

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks for your review!  Glad you enjoyed it.  I might revisit these two someday.  No promises, but I will keep it in mind. 

 

 

Summary:

  

When actor Edward Cullen meets with professional photographer Bella Swan to review his proofs from their recent photo session, he's in for a big surprise...and so is she!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2806 Read Count: 1998
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoop! Go Bella! Enjoyed. Thanks Meg

Now or Never by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella has been building up courage to ask her professor, she finds out he's even more willing than she anticipated.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2118 Read Count: 2624
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2012 Updated: 28 Aug 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute.... What happens next? Meg

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. It's just a one shot for now but I appreciate the interest. Sorry about the lateness of my response Gmail sent all my reviews to my junk mail.

Summary: Past Featured Story

cc

 

In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Wonderful story! So enjoyed the ending. Meg

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Cute story.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Bird

Good story, not the ending I expected. :-)

Summary:

The Master and Isabella

It was a great honor to serve the Master, and there was never a shortage of volunteers. She came to him of her own free will, eager to please and to be pleased. She had possessed his every thought since the moment he laid eyes on her; it was time he took what was his. 

No vampires, but still supernatual. See warnings in the chapter notes.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Mystery, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5117 Read Count: 2707
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2012 Updated: 31 Oct 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Master and Isabella

Naughty... loved it!

Summary:

AU/OOC. Sequel to TLotM 1 – The Devil and his Maiden, but can also be read on its own. Having grown bored, Jasper and Isabella take a trip to Italy to pay a visit to the Volturi and have some fun. The brothers are less than happy about the interruption, and Jane’s about to go ballistic. Also, how did the Vatican earn a new ghost?

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4306 Read Count: 591
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2012 Updated: 20 Nov 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Lady Likes Italian

Hope ther will be more. These two are fun. Reunion with his captain? Thanks. Meg

Summary:

 


Jared struggled with everyday life, being poor never helped him. When he is about to give up on everything, a letter arrives inviting him to a well-known event that is well known in the community for people never returning from. Things are not what they seem in the Swan Mansion.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jared
Genre: Friendship, Historical, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5365 Read Count: 1255
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2012 Updated: 12 Dec 2012
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Enjoyed

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152446
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awesome story... Enjoyed your drama! Meg

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Our home

Brilliant
Loved it. Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Running for Love by Sarge's Girls

Bella is the daughter of the vice president of the United States.
Edward is a new member of her Secret Service detail.
Will they be able to fight their attraction,
or will her eighteenth birthday mean a green light?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19150 Read Count: 12439
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far this is great. I was reading in the READER, so I have no idea what chapter I was to, but Damn when you got to the 18 th b-day. Well done. Stopped before she saw stars.

Sad but I know they will get 'caught' betting it is Mike. I bet he will be an epic prick too. Well as Paul Harvey 'The rest of the story' will be be read later to day. Thanks for sharing your always fantastic words. ~ meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was fun to see Edward's POV

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You were mean when posting. Great place to end a chapter.

Broken Immortal by Sephrenia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Edward leaves Bella she gets changed when she visits the meadow. when she wakes she hides in the Cullen mansion. Will she be reunited with her mate? 1st story ... constructive criticism welcome

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Featured Story September 2013


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55208 Read Count: 60603
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very powerful indeed. Now as to her stomach. Got to see "what" is up.

Author's Response:

just a little bling .... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well that went well... Good to know she was able to reach Edward. Meg

Author's Response:

and you know he will break all speed records to get there

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It was a good year for Bobcat. Always wondered why they did not have a supply on hand. Meg

Author's Response:

see... me too ...I thought it just made sense to have some on hand.

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh I like what you did with Rose... A little honesty for the ice queen. Meg

Author's Response:

well she wanted the truth to be told .... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awe your own twist on her power. Very nice. Meg

Author's Response:

thanks ... I wanted her to have something that could be useful for more than just blocking powers ..

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Silver... Nice.

Author's Response:

yep .... I wanted to do a different story without a lot of angst ...  

Seph

 

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good start... Nice twist habit it be Demetri change her.

Author's Response:

thank you ... strap in for the road trip, there are some bumps ahead ... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

A bit of bling. Nice. F'n Rose. She is just so fantastic to hate. Meg

Author's Response:

I have never liked Rose and always thought the Emmett deserved better ...

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sweet road trip.... Hope Edward has Em join them.

Author's Response:

oh yeah ... not much point in taking a road trip without Emmett

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awe... Happy Em will be back.

Author's Response:

yep .... Emmett has the best idea for the trip 

seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Best buy... Hummm. Guessing 3 plug in travel mugs to heat their beverages?

Enjoying the story... Tons. Meg

Author's Response:

uh .. nope ... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hope someone warns the wolves.

Author's Response:

why should they be warned .... they certainly don't warn anybody ...

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Very cool use for the greater good. . Little loving for Bella I hope.

Author's Response:

yeah ... she has a gift that can be used for humans as well as vampires ..

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Em in Walmart. Love it!

Author's Response:

Be afraid ... be very afraid .. LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Too fun. Alarm clocks. Hating rose.

Author's Response:

just some simple fun ... even for Edward

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Go mama Esme. Trap that little witch.

Pusher. Cool. Poor Alice she won't know what to do.

Author's Response:

Esme is not as meek and mild as they all think

Poor Alice my foot .... she is waaaaay too pushing herself ..

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Beaver! LOL.

Go Esme!
"what have you done you stupid selfish bitch"

Oh Aro, you will pay for being an Ass!

Author's Response:

It takes me a little while but everybody gets what they have coming to them  ... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You've done a great job writing... The story flows very smoothly! Meg

Author's Response:

thank you ..  I tired to keep on track with everything .. I had to go back and read parts to make sure I hadn't skipped anything ... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow lots of action in that chapter.. Look out Aro!

Author's Response:

Look Out indeed ... he has quite the surprise coming

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Go Caius. The little pups are not as sweet in your story. :-)

Author's Response:

I don't think the wolves have ever been anything but arrogant and controlling ... I'm not a wolf fan at all

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The Doc having a gift... Persuasion.

Author's Response:

yep ... makes sense to me ...

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Mixing of blood... Very nice. I like the eyes. Nice. Better to blend. And a few creepers off the streets.

Author's Response:

yep .. helps control thirst ... they don't stick out like sore thumbs with the eye color ... and saves a few would be victims ... win/win

seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Drunk Jazz... Now if he could just add the feelings of being High. Not happy with Doc C. He has been a bad bad bad boy.

Author's Response:

I just couldn't resist giving the southern boy a good drink of whiskey

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I hope the surgeries went well. A little cocktail time. Wonder what a little coffee in Alice's blood would do. Ha! Meg

Author's Response:

the surgeries did go well... thank you for asking ... I don't even want to imagine what Alice plus coffee would equal ... consider me afraid ... very afraid .. LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yea Peter is coming.

Author's Response:

can't have Jasper in a confrontation without Peter ... It just doesn't work

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Twists a plenty.

Author's Response:

yep ... chubby checker fan ... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Stupid Vamp.... Should have known the Major would be where his captain was. Meg

Author's Response:

yes ...confrontation = Major and Captain

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow.. Bad ass Eddie! I like where you took his character.

Author's Response:

thanks ... I always wanted to see Edward kick some ass ..

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh Aro you will be going down.... Peter, your knower should have told you this could go badly.

Author's Response:

it will be fine

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awe. Marcus will be happy. And Aro will be a plume of smoke. Well done!

Author's Response:

oh Aro doesn't burn just yet ... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

He just keeps digging his hole deeper. Can't wait till they reach Didyme.

Author's Response:

be prepared to hate Aro even more once they get to Didyme ...

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Very sad to be separated form your Mate. Hope the next eye surgery went well

Author's Response:

yes I can't even imagine being kept from your mate for thousands of years ...  both eye surgeries went well thank you for asking ....

Seph

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Betting Jake may save the majority of the wolves lives with out blood shed.

Good to hear the patch is off....

Author's Response:

maybe a little bloodshed ....  yes that patch was a bear to wear .... the right eye was a little trickier than the left and they had to cut a little deeper ....   but all is well now .  :)

Seph