Reviews by cullencrazed
Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: cullencrazed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why do I get the feeling Tanya and Charlie are the cause of Edward's accident? I can't see Edward not taking back control of his life if he has come out of the coma. So memory loss or is Tanya keeping him week so she can run the show. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185509
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: cullencrazed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this story, but I think people need to give Bella a break. Everyone acts likes she should just get over killing two people. I can see how that would tilt her whole world. It's very clear that the feds think she is the weak link. Let's not forget about Caius and his daughter. They are who I think are behind Bella's running into an interior designer.  They are going to try and get to her right under Edward's nose again. I also think Edward should give Bella some space. I can understand why she's mad about him bringing his family around. She should have some say in who is in her house. She needs a space that she can leave that world behind--- that's what this new house offered her. Edward's already taking that away from her. Everyone's going to keep pushing her until she completely breaks and I don't think either of them is prepared for that. Excited to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! RL has been crazy busy, but I am writing at the moment & I will hopefully get it to my beta soon. Thank you for your continued patience.

 

I loved your review and I'm glad you seem to get Bella. A lot of people does seem to think that she just get over the two killings, but it's not something I could easily get over and I'm sure if many people thought about it then it wouldn't be something they could easily get over either.

She is the weak link in the chain.

Lets hope Jasper finds out more about the designer soon.

I also agree that Edward was an ass. Bella should have a right to say who she wants in her house and its understandable why she feels that way with Em & Carlisle. x

Reviewer: cullencrazed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless

I'm always excited when I see an update to this story! I was a little surprised by the turn of events. I didn't expect Edward and Bella to have sex, yet. Bella so played Edward and he fell for it. I wonder if he realizes she used him as a coping device. First she smoked, then it was the drinking now it's sex. Anything to force her mind not to deal with the fact that she killed two people. I was right about the interior designer, but now Bella is aware of her almost bringing another deadly encounter into her life.  She almost broke down again at the thought. I wonder if someone is killed--Garrett will the guilt finally break her. I'm pretty sure she will put the two events together. I was surprised by Charlie's offer to join the mafia, but I do think it's out of love for Bella. I'm not sure where this tory is headed, but I'm loving the ride. Till next time.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! The next chapter is with my beta.

Edward certainly wasn't planning on having sex, but Bella played him and won.

You're right anything to make herself forget and now the bomb won't help her frame of mind.

Until Next time x x ;)

Reviewer: cullencrazed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless

My heart just breaks for Bella in this chapter.  She is so close to totally breaking down if someone doesn't get her help soon. I'm shocked Edward is allowing her to drink again. He's enabling her and I'm sure it's going to backfire.  Bella is showing all the signs of a complete nervous breakdown and pushing it to the backburner is not what she needs. He should have had Charlie stay with her until he came back. Not at all suprised that Heidi and her father are behind this latest stunt. Bella won't be able to handle a hit being out on her. I have the feeling that Bella is going to mix the liquer with the psych meds. I wonder what the finally breaking point will be for Bella to admit she needs help. Can't wait to see where this goes. Till next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. The next chapter is with my beta.

Bella hasn't been on her meds for a little while now. Its another thing that Edward let slide :/

But she does need help fast.

Next chapter is a turning point x

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cullencrazed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I just read this whole story and I think you're doing a really good job with it. it's funny and touching at times. I can't help but have the urge to junk punch Edward in this last chapter. WTH? Fight to gain her trust then through her under the bus because you're ego was hurt. That was an asshole move on his part. He didn't just insult her to her face like in the past, but to print it in the paper. Low blow. Really interested in how you are going to get me to like him again after that. An apology won't do it.

Reviewer: cullencrazed Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow! I am really curious how Edward will redeem himself after this. He let his jealousy and anger taint his entire article. He knows that there is more to her than that shallow girl she shows. There is somehing to be said for having someone lay out all your faults in black and white and Edward did that litterally for Bella. I hope she just leaves, gets herself together and proves them all wrong. I don't see how stabbing her in the back is going to encourage her to change. Having her self worth destroyed by someone she loved is how she became how she is. I don't know how Edward doesn't see that considering the conversation he has had with Bella's grandfather. Really hope he can explain himself.