Reviews by TwilightMomGA
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752919
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Home

Oh it's gonna be good to have Edward home while at the same time it's gonna get VERY TENSE! Or at least that is how it happened when my mom came home from a surgery and had limited mobility for 2 months at home.

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Man oh man, has Eddie shoveled himself DEEP into a big ole' stinking pile of it. He sure as shitake better be praying & hoping that she will at the very least let him talk to her.



Author's Response:

LOL...I love your descriptions!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

Ok, as much as I can't stand Slutward, I abso-freaking-lutely LOVE the thought of Edward as S.W.A.T. OMG talk about yumminess.

Poor Bella, I can understand her prediciment to be the sister figure to the guy of her desires. Been there & done that & it's nothing but heartache.

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

So we had sadness, jealousy, flirting, excitement, danger & love all from Edward.... Now that's a good chapter!

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

I am one of the ones that totally back Bella and get it. While I'm happy as all get out that Edward finally Manned the Fruck Up and told her he loved her, his timing is all shit.

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

I think I nearly had my own private Edward moment at that date he planned for Bella. Talk about Fantastic!!!!! doesn't hurt that hockey is one of my 2 fave sports to watch. College football being the other. Oh and you did good with the hockey game.

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

This just gets better and better.

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Trevor is a jerk and now a really bad man. I'm glad Bella never got too close to him, but of course I know it's not over.

I just HOPE beyond Hope that Edward doesn't slip up and turn to Slutward to dip his stick while waiting for Bella, love of his life, and screw (no pun intended) his & her life up way beyond repair. I am always worried about that, because face it, he screws things up a Lot!

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

Eighteen hours & 62 variations of f*uck later......That is some Mighty Mighty Mighty Fine work there Mr. Masen & Miss Swan!!!!

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Outside The Bubble

*sniffles & wipes the massive amounts of tears from my eyes* How I love Carlisle! That was just beautiful. Thank you for sharing the bad news with us by mixing in the wonderful story lines of Em & Dr. C

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On

That was a 2 tissue and a shot of something strong chapter.

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There

I have to say that I do not think I have read a more moving and loving wedding scene before. The whole day was PERFECT! **your little lovilie is so beautiful in that dress**

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Everything

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!



Author's Response:

Thanks hon.  Don't forget to go check out Bella's Summer Knights when you're done.  They are the summer outtakes wrapped up with a future shot :)

Reviewer: TwilightMomGA Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

That was a beautifully written story. Kept me so very much interested in all the characters. Thank you for writing and sharing with us.



Author's Response:

Thanks hon...I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I Loved writing this story!  Thanks for all of the reviews!