Reviews by debmel
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: debmel Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 112: Edward

I look forward everyday to seeing what's happening to Sarge and Bella.  I love this story and love all the twists - Tanya's phonecall - so want Bella to bitchslap the she-witch in a future chapter.  You have both made the characters so believable and people we can care about.  Love the lemons - wow, omg, thud. Love the double postings especially when they're citrusy. Thanks for cheering me up everyday. Looking forward to lots more of Edward and Bella xx

Reviewer: debmel Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Beautiful epilogue.  The whole story - no words can describe how fantabulous it is.  I have absolutely loved.  I'm going to miss my daily dose of Sarge and Bella. Thank you for such a great story, great emotion and OMG lemons.  I will look forward to the outtakes and will definitely be re-reading this story again and again.  Thanks for cheering me up for the last few months - I've definitely needed the good feelings.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028970
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: debmel Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Love this story. The lenght of the chapters keep the sense of anticipation at a constant level probably about the same as bella's constant state of arousal. Looking forward to their playtime and how Edward reacts when he finally realises how much he loves his butterfly.