Reviews by janosch73
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1114049
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

Lol, flabbergasted Jasper

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Glad he won but Tanya didn't.

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Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Love your Emmett!

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Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 14 part 3

The dedication of the award was so well said.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

He is opening up about his feelings... Great!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

You write the best evil Tanya!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16

That was hot!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Only you NJ come up with plots liie these! I liked the start.



Author's Response:

I'll take that as a compliment!!!!! 

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (part 1)

Aww, pictures are in this version. Great!

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 2 (part 4)

What a delivery!

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 2 (part 5)

One of my favourite pics of him. Often my avi and the way I imagine a daddyward!

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 2 (part 6)

I can only imagine how that kind of a worrying situation with a baby must feel.

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 2 (part 7)

That mani is one of my all-time favs.



Author's Response:

I love it too

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 3 (part 3)

Loving this story!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Wow, what a bitch, more worried about her dresses than her som!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 3 (Part 7)

Lol, picking up soup from an Irish pub!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 4 (part 1)

I want more of this! Drabbles always frustrate me...I want everything, NOW!



Author's Response:

giggle... that's how it works... we drive you insane.. think of it as foreplay!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

She needs to start breastfeeding Charlie so she doesn't dry up. Soon!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

Finally she gets to nurse him!

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Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 4 (part 4)

Finally she nurses him! Nice that Edward gave her privacy.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Loved this chapter! And my second-favourite Cullen is also in the story. Yay!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 5 (part 7)

Love the rude and bellious Jasper!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Men and their obsession with breasts!

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Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

God how horrible Tanya is. I hope her dress ripps at the Oscars from the butt seam so that she humiliates herself!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 5 (Part 10)

Love the feelings of Edward!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

Felix Vampiro...lol



Author's Response:

you laughed too... i couldn't resist. He has no last name!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

Lovely dorky Alice!

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Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

Awww... Edward being so emotional!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Oh, I thought earlier that Alice was talking to Edward, but it was Jasper. In the next chapter I noticed the same that I didn't know anymore who was saying what. Or that might be just me.



Author's Response:

I should go back and rewrite that. It shouldn't be that confusing for the reader. I'm sorry.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

Love Alice as a firecracker and Bumblebee is such a good nickname to her.

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 6 Part 1

A small baby nursing is such a beautiful sight.

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 7 Part 6

Finally Edward gets the answer to Elizabeth's father...yay!

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Awww...finally thry mert!

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 8 part 3

Such a cute picture of the boy.

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 8 part 4

That pic about Jackson is just too much! It will be entertaining to see what Tanya thinks about the new housemates! ;)

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Wow, I wouldn't mind being a nanny for that salary!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

A kid running sround only in diaper...isn't it so unamerican? Something I've never understood. What's wrong with that?

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

I've been offline and on my holiday for the last two weeks, so I missed your bday. I hope you had a good one!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Skinnydipping competition? ;)

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

What a hilarious dream!

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

Wow, quite an age difference! 

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

How wonderful that Elizabeth will get a male figure in her life.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

Excited about your book news and been missing this story, too.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 11 Part 1

Lovely chapter. I can't wait for the confrontation between Tanya and Edward.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

Oh man, your Tanya really is the worst example of a human being.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

Wow, I for sure didn't expect that Tanya and James had been fucking for years. And please let Charlie be Edward's. It would be just too cruel otherwise.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

Aww, he's expressing his feelings! 

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Can't believe how selfish Tanya is.

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

OMG, nude photo shoot and poor Charlie is freezing!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Awww, how sweet from Elizabeth. And I had been waiting for that Daddy!

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 16 Part 7

That's so scary!

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

Such a cute pic!

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 17 part 1

Elizabeth is melting his heart, too.

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Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

Who doesn't like butterfly kisses? I'm not one of them.

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Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 18 Part 6

Hmmm...loving the impatient Edward...

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 18 Part 8

He's going to woo her...yay!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 18 Part 8

What a nice cliffie!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 18 Part 9

Love the flirting

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Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 18 Part 10

Lol, caught redhanded by Emmett

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Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 19 part 1

Lol, so somebody needed a release.

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Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 19 Part 2

Lol, he doesn't like to watch himself in a movie. Just like Rob.

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 19 Part 8

Now we're getting to the smut! Yay!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 19 Part 15

Bella's a sexy mink, love it and the gif!

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18

Every person in love is beautiful and sexy.