Reviews by turtle1954
Blockbuster by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 440]
Summary:

Blockbuster Banner

 

Jacob abandoned Bella, leaving her and their son destitute. Years later, the book she wrote about their struggles became a bestseller. Edward, a film producer and former child actor, wanted to option Bella's book and turn it into a blockbuster. Falling in love wasn't part of the plan ...

What will they do when Jacob comes back?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 266372 Read Count: 44252
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2021 Updated: 02 Jul 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Alice is a mean bitch. I bet Jacob is having someone send the emails because he's to dumb to do it. Also I bet Paul is one of Jacobs friends.

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 118998
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Emmett would be the submissive. Rose the dominant.

Summary:

HnH

 

Keeping the town of Forks safe was Chief Cullen's job. But when a tragedy strikes, he has to learn how to cope when nothing feels right. Everything reminds him of what he lost and what he can't move on from. *character death and dark themes*


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49628 Read Count: 9301
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2021 Updated: 23 Oct 2021
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is so sad. To have to bury a child would be one of the hardest things anyone would ever have to do. I really hope Jacob goes to jail but I doubt if he will since it's on the Rez. They always take up for each other. But he was very negligent. Hopefully Bella will realize what a scumbag he is and stay away from him.I don't really see how she could divorce Edward then get with Him. She must be a little crazy herself. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Poor Edward. Hopefully he can get some help.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So very sad.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I really hate Jacob and Sam is a coward for not finding him negligent in watching Vanessa. That was his job to take care of the little girl but know he has to go play with his friends and let her get away and climb that cliff then jump. It is his fault.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I really hate Jacob and Sam is a coward for not finding him negligent in watching Vanessa. That was his job to take care of the little girl but know he has to go play with his friends and let her get away and climb that cliff then jump. It is his fault.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Why on earth would Bella divorce Edward and then get with that disgusting dog. He should never have been allowed to watch Vanessa. Bella knew he was irresponsible and a sorry excuse for a man. Edward was a hundred times better man.

Destination Date by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 121]
Summary:

Destination Date Banner

 

 

Edward Cullen and Bella Swan just started dating. In early March, they planned on going on a vacation together. Edward found a great deal to fly down to Brazil. Bella wasn't sure if she wanted to go with him since their relationship was so new.

Edward was quite persuasive. 

Bella said yes. 

They flew down to São Paulo to an all-inclusive couple’s resort, for six days and seven nights of tropical beauty and the promise of so much more. 

Three days after they arrived, all international travel was cancelled due to a fast-moving, highly contagious pandemic. 

What will happen with Edward and Bella while they are on their Destination Date? Will they be stronger upon their return to the states, or will their love survive? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77037 Read Count: 11897
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2021 Updated: 28 Nov 2021
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Tia is a whore.

Summary:

mc

 

When Edward heard his ex was talking trash about him, he decided to prove her right. Not even the sugar daddy whose arm she dangled from could stop him.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46345 Read Count: 14788
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2021 Updated: 26 Jun 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella seems to be a bitch in this story. She wants Edward to screw when she wants but her sugar daddy to take care of her and buy her things.



Author's Response:

I can't disagree.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Victoria probably hit him to be spiteful. She's a bitch.

Summary:

woti

 

 

The sin of love united them, but the strength of that love is what keeps them together. When people discover their relationship, will the thin ice they’re walking on begin to crack? Illicit Affair sequel. I recommend reading that one first.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110830 Read Count: 9799
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2021 Updated: 09 May 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What right should Jacob have anything to say about Bella? He got one of his students pregnant.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What right should Jacob have anything to say about Bella? He got one of his students pregnant.

Summary:

Blood Demons

Edward “Viper” Masen is the president of the Blood Demons MC taking over after a rival club murdered his father. His life is busy with running the legal and illegal businesses of the club. No time or heart for a steady Old Lady, instead he took what the Blood Succubus offered. No one would take the place of his Little Isa in his heart. The girl who he fell in love with one summer, sharing all their firsts with each other until she disappeared without a trace. 

 

Bella “Isa” Stewart, daughter of Charlie “Crusher” Swan and Renee Stewart is in exile in New York when her father catches her with a boy. Not telling why she wasn’t allowed to be with him, she is commanded to stay as far away from Phoenix as possible. Over the years her father comes to visit a few times, bringing his VP Demetri, who looks at her like she is something to eat. 

What happens when she receives a phone call from someone in her father’s club to tell her that her father is dead and Demetri did it? Then Demetri shows up at her apartment building with several other members. Hopping on her bike she heads cross country to hide out with a high school friend. Arriving in Phoenix, memories of the boy she fell in love swirl in her mind. Pulling into the parking lot to meet her friend, she comes face to face with a sexy man, covered in tattoos and wearing a leather motorcycle club vest with a president patch. He is a stranger, but there was something about his eyes. 

Can Viper protect her from Demetri and take revenge for him killing her father? How will he react when he finds out who she really is? Will they be able to wipe years away and pick back up where they left off?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31201 Read Count: 20910
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2021 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2023 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Really enjoy this story. Thanks for updating it.

Summary:

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Gravitational collapse is the tendency of matter to move toward a common center of gravity. When Edward and Bella's paths cross again, their worlds crash despite their reticence. This story is based on One Look, which was part of the Song to Story contest in September.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52819 Read Count: 5603
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2021 Updated: 10 Dec 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Jacob has always been an ass. Bella doesn't want him he needs to get on with his life and leave her alone.

Summary:

A Christmas Miracle

Dr. Edward Cullen had it all. A job he excelled in, a high-rise penthouse apartment in the heart of New York city, and a wife he loved more than anything else in the world. Edward is called upon to perform life-saving surgery on a patient who cannot travel. He was excited to do it, until he found out where it was, the Arctic Tundra. It would require him to be away from his loving wife for at least two months.

Bella Cullen supported her husband and when he came home and told her someone needed him, she told him to go. Kissing him goodbye at the airport, he promises to be home soon, leaving his heart with her.

What happens when two months later when the plane Edward is on to come back home crashes? How will Bella survive without him? Wanting to give up herself until she finds out a piece of him still lives inside her.

 

Do Christmas Miracles still happen? Edward/Bella HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10134 Read Count: 7466
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2021 Updated: 01 Jan 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

So very sad. But I believe Edward is alive.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Loved it. Can't wait till he gets back home to Bella.

Teddy and Izzy by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 170] New!
Summary:

teddy & Izzy


Teddy and Izzy were best friends till they weren’t.


Choices and circumstances define who we are. But can we come back from hurting the ones we love? Can a bond we had be strengthened again?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 125992 Read Count: 10279
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2022 Updated: 22 Apr 2024
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

All of those kids needs a god ass whipping. They are bullies who needs grounded forever.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading anreviewing.

I agree with you. There are to many bullies in this world who get away with it.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Esme and Carlisle baby Edward too much. He needs to realize what his bullying has done. So do the other children.



Author's Response:

I always think if you pamper your kids you can reap the consequence.  I can't see the other kids even been bothered by what they have done.

Summary:

Summary:

Edward at the age of 34 is to become the Don of the Cullen family.  But first he needs to be married as that is the final prerequisite by the family.  Bella is all alone in the world.  At only 18 years old she has been through enough to last a lifetime.  Bella accidentally crosses paths with Edward and he finds her to be very attractive.  Could she possibly be the one for him?

Cannon characters     Edward/Bella 

Disclaimer:  Twilight characters are owned by the wonderful Stephanie Meyers; all original characters are creations of my imagination.  No copyright infringment is intended.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4946 Read Count: 2503
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2022 Updated: 11 Aug 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please update this story 

Summary:

Cullen Enterprises takes over Newton Holdings in a hostile takeover. Breaking up the company and selling the pieces for profit, much like hundreds of companies before. Except this takeover is far from the ordinary. Almost forty-year-old Edward Cullen has plans for the building and the intelligent, curvy twenty-five-year-old woman who fascinates him. Olderward/Curveyella HEA

Dangerous Curves


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53621 Read Count: 26399
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2022 Updated: 10 Dec 2023
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please update 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2023 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please update

Can Love Survive All by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, but things are not the same as the events in 'New Moon' because Bella learns the truth as to why they left thanks to Alice, but in an effort to find them she gets attacked by Laurant, but then saved by the wolves only this time they were too late to stop Laurant from biting her and they let her turn into a vampire.

She ends up being forced to leave Forks for 24 years and when she gets back events happen that means that her path crosses with the Cullen's again...

Can the love between Bella and Edward survive him leaving her and everything she has been through since they left that wouldn't have happened if they didn't leave?


Categories: Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50929 Read Count: 1547
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2023 Updated: 01 Nov 2023
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Graduation, Fighting newborns and the Volturi

Please update



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'll be updating soon.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Heartbreak

So sorry for your loss.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2024 Title: Chapter 8: The Cullen's are Back

Please update



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will be updating soon, i have just had a death in my family so i need to deal with that first. please hang in there as an update is coming :)