Reviews by turtle1954
Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15513
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please update

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39946
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Esme

Loved this chapter. Esme was so brave.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

His father needs someone to beat him up. He is a bully.



Author's Response:

Amen to that!  I'm sure if I took up a collection, we could hire a hitman!  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113226
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 22... all of it :)

Are you going to finish this story. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 22... all of it :)

Are you going to finish this story. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 22... all of it :)

Are you going to finish this story. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 17 Part 3

Is Edward really that gullible to believe that Tanya would ever think about the baby. He knows she only thinks about herself. Also she must have gotten his phone and turned it off. If he were any kind of man he would call about the baby himself. He knew how cold he had been when he came to the photo shoot. He really should man up and send her packing.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 21 Part 2

Thanks for the update

Summary: Past Featured Story

The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134264
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

He should let Alice and Rosalie have a go at Tanya. Hopefully He will find Bella soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94203
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty

Please update

I miss you by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 198]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When geek medical student Edward meets geek student/librarian Bella. They fall in love in the library. Lies are told and secrets are kept soon rip them apart. Can they endure the events that follow to find each other again.

This story has a happy ever after.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174321 Read Count: 53443
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2015 Updated: 14 Oct 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So glad they finally get to meet again. Hope Katie is ok. Love this story.



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for leaving me a review. They both seemed surprised to met each other. Lets hope they can hash out their differences. How can Katie not get well with a great doctor as Edward ;)

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Carlisle needs someone to beat his a__. He is nothing but a snob. I really hope Bella doesn't let him break her and Edward up. She needs to tell Edward what he said to her.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me a review. I've been wanting to kick Carlisle since I've been writing him. I hope you continue to read the story.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Boy Edward turned out to be a real prick. I hope he is left with nothing and no one who loves him. He really just makes me sick. I hope she doesn't go back to him. She deserves so much better than him.



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for taking the time to leave a review. Edward has just let his new found confident go to his head. Next time we will hear his explanation for his behaviour. Will Bella give him another chance or will she stick to her decision ;)

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

When did Edward turn into such a prick. He never listens to anything Bella says. He acts like his time is more important and his friends.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review. Edward has really let himself and Bella down.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Thanks for updating. He finally sees how he messed up. That Renata was just using him.

Hopefully he will grow up. I know they get back together because of the first chapter but I hope it doesn't take a long time.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. Edward has had to learn the hard way. Let's hope he has learnt from his mistakes.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Pleaseupdate



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for leaving a review. I have been ill for the past 2 years, and I have been back in hospital and had another surgery, plus treatmet afterward. I have another surgery next month, which will hopefully be the last. The next chapter is with the beta, but she has the kids on holiday. As soon as she sends it back I will put it straight up. Sorry you've had to wait such a long time.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thanks for updating. Glad they found each other again.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me a review. Let's hope it can get better.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thanks for updating. Glad they found each other again.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review. I'm glad they have found each other as well.

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 47997
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Please update

Love Will Find A Way by mjpilar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Can Bella moving to Seattle help her and Edward find something that neither think they good enough to have. It is a little thing called love.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25290 Read Count: 12348
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2015 Updated: 25 Sep 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33862
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward needs to decide his wife should come first in his life. If she needs to leave he should go with her.



Author's Response:

Agreed! A choice must be made!

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32488
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Please update and finish story

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

Buying Love GIF

Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307307
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

I hope Esme has the most painful death anyone could have and Felix too.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 59

I really hope Bella kills Esme. I hope Edwards mother is all right. I knew that Esme would get to her first and kidnap her while they were waiting on a court order.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Definitely someone's bitch who likes to give lots of pain. Esme should be placed as someone's plaything who uses chains and starves someone like she did Edward.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 87

She will be found quilty on all counts. Hopefully she will get the death penalty.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66

I really can't blame Edward for being angry at his mother. He was hurting just as bad as she was and he was just 14 years old. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69

Charlie needs to have a little of Esmes treatment for a while. 

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 97954
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Edward mother is just plain crazy and a drunk.

Summary:

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Changes occur in your life every day. No one knows that better than Bella. Her life will be forever changed after today. They all will. Warning - this story is about 9/11 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34421 Read Count: 32837
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Dec 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Please update

Summary:

A horrible accident leaves her in a coma, when she wakes with no memory of her previous life, she has a hard decision to make; the past or the present. A man ready to help her remember, or a man ready to help her start over. Living in the dark for so long, only to find out you may have made the wrong decision leaves her world crashing down around her. All human. Warnings in each chapter.B&E A&A J

bella, edward, addison, avery, james


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32189 Read Count: 2372
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Sparks Fly

Please finish this story

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45838
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Bittersweet Symphony

I hope Renee gets the death penalty for what she has done. I'm sure it was her in the rental. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 21: America's Favorite Dancer Is ...

So glad she beat Alice. They really need to do something about Renee. She is an evil witch. Alice is too. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Nightmare Come to Life

Renee and Alice need to get a long sentence in jail.

Tie the Knot by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Banner made by heartfortwilight

 

 

 


Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117195 Read Count: 55452
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - False Pretenses

Vicky was all right but James is a scumbag.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, James a jerk, but Vicky really is nice. I guess he had his ways of getting head-over-heels-in-love Vicky to spill her friend's secret. See you next chapter.

Summary:

A man who has seen to much in life to question, returns home to his family after serving his country. However  he can't forget what he saw. Sworn to secrecy, but unable to forget, He prepares his family  for dooms day,  even if at times  they  think he's crazy.  What would you do to prepare? 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61656 Read Count: 7602
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2016 Updated: 22 Mar 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This was a sad chapter. Edwards dad died a hero. The woman should not have pushed him toward the zoms, but I quess she was scared. I quess all of the people know they are taking a chance every time they go outside the walls.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 May 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Please update

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35339
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

These two old men need someone to slap them around. They are always trying to cause problems for Edward and Bella. Always betting on something stupid. Don't they realize they are dealing with people's lives. They are disgusting.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177483
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)

Please update

The Bunny Ranch by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Her outward beauty entices him, her innocent optimism intrigues him, her loving heart ensnares him. A lighthearted, fluffy tale about how a twenty-something's sanguine leash on life brings joy and happiness to even the gruffest member of the Playboy Club. A/H

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65809 Read Count: 24546
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please update and finish story

Summary:

BANNER

Isabella's parents were murdered. Her sister betrayed her and her marriage is on the rocks. Things couldn't get any worse, right? Bratella Mobward - PART TWO - The Ties That Bind


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26487 Read Count: 57113
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2016 Updated: 11 Sep 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Please update and finish this story 

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 183857
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love the way they got to the women. Also loved what Bella did to him.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella had it all, until she lost it. When life offers you a dream so far beyond any of your expectations, is it reasonable to grieve when it comes to an end?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88307 Read Count: 38296
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Aug 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I have never liked Jacob in any story. He is always there to cause problems. Bella and Edward have enough problems without Jacob causing more. Please don't let her start seeing him. Edward already thinks he isn't good enough for her.



Author's Response: You're right about Jake, he is there to serve a purpose. Remember it's an hea.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Please tell me that this does have a HEA. Poor Bella is so depressed, sheneeds to get help from someone. And Mike needs someone to kick his behind into next century 



Author's Response: It does have an hea,but it's a long road to get there.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I really hate that Bella has pushed Edward into thinking everything is his fault. She needs to see a doctor herself and get help. I know she is grieving for her parents and probably has postpartum depression. She is also grieving for the baby she lost. She needs to get some help.



Author's Response: You're right about all of the above.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Mike is a pig. She needs to report his behavior before he tries something to hurt her. She should also tell Edward and start looking for another job.



Author's Response: Yes! You really are right.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue

Really enjoyed this story



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 May 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

So far Bella and Edward have a lovely romance going. What happens to make him leave? I hope this is a HEA and not like the ending of the song.



Author's Response: It's chapter 16 before we see what starts to go wrong. There's definitely an HEA. And Rose said, I bet they were both stiff.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Jacob is pushing her to forget about Edward. He wants her for himself. 



Author's Response: That's very true.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I am glad she told him to leave. He always tries to get her when she is vulnerable. 



Author's Response: Yes. She's not falling for his crap anymore.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280569
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really hope they can stay together. If she is a writer she could write anywhere. I hope the kids like her.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Why would it be so bad for everyone to find out she has published books. I'm sure she told Edward about it. Just because she writes doesn't mean she is an awful person.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

You do not have to be a sexual deviant to write about sex. I am sure Tanya sent the email. Carlisle is just being his stupid and controlling self. They will be really sorry when they find out she was going to come out as the author. Carlisle wants to tell Edward how to run his life, how to manage his career, and how to raise his children. He would prefer if Edward stayed single. 

Summary:

 

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Bella had worked hard and studied hard. She graduated at the top of class. What would her first assignment be?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25483 Read Count: 6511
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - assimilate this

Please update

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER

Most mothers would do whatever it took to provide for their children, which was exactly what Bella Masen did when she found out her husband had left them. With the walls closing in and the debt collectors on her doorstep, how far was she willing to go?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45714 Read Count: 124443
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2016 Updated: 29 Jan 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I really think Bella needs to think things over before she completely looses Edward. She isn't so innocent herself.she should at least give him a chance.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Bella is acting like a child. I agree Edward should have told her when he lost his job and not left like he did. He should have realized Paul was up to no good. But he now has to work for Carlisle and Bella needs to get used to it. It was her own fault she was attacked. You don't go running around where you don't know anyone or the language.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I think Bella is being unreasonable. She doesn't have to work as a prostitute anymore. I know she never had sex with her clients but she did everything else. She needs to try to accept the life she has now.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Esme is a real piece of work. She wants her way in everything. I don't know why Edward can't see that.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yay, they finally got married. Glad she told Esme off and also that she told Edward how she feels. Hope they have a HEA.

Summary:

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Edward's story was a good one, but his setting didn't feel real and his heroine wasn't someone you wanted to see triumph...until his sister took a trip to Forks to get him the information he needed to complete his novel. What he hadn't bet on was the beauty that acted as her tour guide. Once they meet, something changes for the pair of them, leading to an annual pilgrimage and a connection no one can explain. All they know, is it helps to know that there is someone who understands them, somewhere out there.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4462 Read Count: 597
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2016 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Please update and finish this story 

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 40951
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad she finally called Edward. Now maybe she will be safe for a while.

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332883
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am very proud of the way Edward is stepping up and being a father to Ethan and a good friend to Bella. Hopefully they can work their problems out. I hope all of the people involved with making Bella's life a living Hell get what they deserve.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope they do bring charges against Alice and she goes to jail. I hope Edward has it out with Jasper. Angela should also have charges brought against her. I really hope these two get a HEA. Very good story. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Angela needs to be strung up somewhere. She is the slut. I really like this Lauren and Jessica. They are really trying to help Bella and are trying to get her to realize her father is an abuser. I do hope this has a HEA. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She was given the date rape drug. They probably took pictures of her too. Alice is a real Bitch in this story. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Angela is a slut. Alice is a spoilt brat. I like this Jessica and Lauren. I hope this has a HEA. I also can't stand Bella's parents. Especially her father. They didn't give her a chance to grow up and want to tell her everything she is to do and act. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I bet Angela is the one who did the DNA tests or she fixed the results. She is a tramp. I hope they find out what she did before too long and before Edward does and says anything really stupid.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

No Alice is a bitch. I doubt if she is even pregnant herself. Bella really needs to grow up and stop being such a push over. She needs to grow a backbone and stand up to her abusive father. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really hope the baby isn't from her being raped the night she went to the party. I think someone needs to tell Edward how Alice and Angela have been treating Bella and all of the lies they have told. Also Jasper needs to grow a set of balls and man up to his part in the things done to Bella. Edward needs to know how she has been treated.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope how soon he sees the truth about Alice and Angela. They are the skanks. Bella's parents need someone to beat the crap out of them. They are so religious yet treat thier daughter the way they do. The father is just an abuser. These people make me so angry. And Edward needs to open his eyes and listen to a few truths. Jasper needs to man up and confess he did not speak to Bella or give her his number or message. If Edward had any sense he would realize things aren't the way his sister says.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I think Bella should tell Edward about how her parents are treating her. Also Alice invited her parents to upset her and to be cruel. Angela is just as bad as Alice. Jasper is just a wimp. He needs a good face slapping too. Edward and Bella should also talk about what happened between them. I know they don't because of chapter 1 tho.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think Angela is a fake just like Alice. They are both bitches. I hope Edward realizes how they really are. I know it takes a while for him to grow up. Bella needs to grow up too and not believe everything her parents think. Edward also needs to realize Bella's parents are abusive and mean to her.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think Charlie is worse than a drill Sargent. Bella should stop lying about to her parents about the pregnancy scare. She needs to tell them it was Jacob and he was cheating on her. She has led a very sheltered life with a drill Sargent for a father. She needs to make some friends.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Her parents are terrible. Charlie needs someone to belt him up the side of his stupid head. He is a controlling SOB. I have never really liked him in any story or the movies either. He is controlling. No child should have to work for love from their parents. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hope Alice gets jail time for her part in this. She is an evil witch who deserves everything that happens to her. Jasper is going to need counseling after this. 

Summary:

 

The Prince

In the hot, dry desert, can the Prince find true love or will an arranged marriage dry his heart into sand, or it will she be an oasis to his heart? E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1756 Read Count: 4893
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2016 Updated: 09 Oct 2016
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 07 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Please update

Summary:

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Banner by CloRodeffer

Photographer Bella Swan loves everything about living in Hawaii. The beach, the surf, the warmth. Everything but the two weeks when Professional Beach Volleyball takes over. Now, she's been cast with the joy of capturing every moment with her camera. Only, a tall, auburn haired player isn't making it easy for her to stay professional. Cannon Couples. UA and MA


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102425 Read Count: 41182
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2016 Updated: 19 Dec 2022
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This disease sounds so bad. It is heartbreaking to think she will have such a terrible death. She can't plan for a future. It is so very sad.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh this story will be getting good. Really hope Emmett can cure Bella.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

When r we going to find out what disease Bella has?

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What disease does Bella have? Will we be finding out soon?



Author's Response:

I'm honestly not sure when you will find out. It just depends on when it fits into the story. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I really hope Bella gets cured.

Summary:

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Shy, reserved Edward has a little too much Jack Daniels after finding his fiancée cheating on him. Waking up the next morning in a strange woman’s bed, he fights the pull he feels for her. Will he realize they're fated for each other, or will he only focus on their differences?

 

***So that you know up front, this story has been pulled after the first chapter. It still makes a lemony-filled one shot if you want to read it as-is. If you're interested in the published version, you can find me in the Amazon store under my real name, Lara Norman.***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 49596
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

She's just like she is in all stories a flake.



Author's Response: It took me a minute... I thought you meant Bella until I remembered I asked about Renee. She's not the greatest, but I did write her as a wonderful mom in another of my stories. I don't always want to stereotype them.

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50915
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward is a dick. He is married and fooling around in the same house his wife is at. I don't blame her for taking off. I wouldn't go back for a few days either.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward is a dick. He is married and fooling around in the same house his wife is at. I don't blame her for taking off. I wouldn't go back for a few days either.

The Magic Within by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 383]
Summary:

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In a world where magic has ceased to exist for hundreds of years, a sole male possesses an unknown power. It slumbers deep within him, churning and pleaded to come out.

 

But, he does not know what it is.

 

He's an everyday, ordinary man, with a mediocre job and tiny apartment and an obnoxious downstairs neighbor. Edward Cullen does not know what is in store for him when something inside him awakens and makes him the most powerful man in the world.

 

Goodbye, mediocrity ...

 

She is like him, ordinary, mediocre and stuck in a loveless marriage to a monster where she endures his anger and rage. But, within her soul, is another type of energy. It keeps her alive and pushes her forward, but she wishes it would just go away. Isabella Black just wants to end the nightmare of her life and start new.

 

Walking into a lawyer's office, she meets Edward Cullen and something between the two of them sparks. Not as a client and attorney.

 

Something deeper ...

 

 Could it be the magic within?

Banner by Clo Rodeffer! Thank you so much!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89673 Read Count: 52555
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2017 Updated: 25 Feb 2018
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Really glad they messed up Carlisles car. It's a shame they couldn't do anything to him and Esme. 

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91229
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hope they torture Aro,Caius and whoever else was in on it. I hope Bella remembers her father. Emmett and Rose have raised her well.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really hope that Aro and Caius get what's come no to them soon. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Aro deserves to be killed along with everyone who helped him

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64343
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

I really hope Edward gets to kill Carlisle. I hope he really makes him suffer.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

I really hope Edward gets to kill Carlisle. I hope he really makes him suffer.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

I bet Bobby sees Esme at the gallery. Carlisle will find her and Edward now. He will try to turn Edward into a man just like him.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

Carlisle is a cruel bastard. I hope they find the tape and he goes to jail and the electric chair. Him and his whole team.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revelations

I really hope Carlisle gets what's coming to him very soon. He is just scum.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Don’t blame Bella at all. Edward has done all matters of evil stuff for his father. Who is he to condemn her till he finds out her situation.