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Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Yeah, I am excited to see Jacob in the story. I am glad that she will be getting her friends and family back. That is if James doesn't fuck it up.
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
I am dying to hear what Aro has to say. How was he led astray. I know that James pretended to be trained by him, but what was done to him. This is getting so good.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Yeah, I agree. Random sex in the middle of a police investigation would have been weird. I think Jacob took thar really well.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh crap. That happened faster than I thought. That damn James is too smart for his own good. I wonder when he realized he had found both of them. That POS needs to die. I kinda think it should be Victoria that gets to do it.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Holy crap, I didn't see that coming. Now he really is some deep shit. From domestic abuse to kidnapping to murder. All in a days work. Edward is going to go ape shit when he finds out the girls are missing.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Edward's phone call just made me tear up. That is the sweetest thing ever. This is getting so intense. How will they ever find her.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Yes they got the phone. Love it. How long before James realizes this and cuts it out of Victoria with a butter knife? I couldn't imagine how they were ever going to find them.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
Woo-hoo. They found the girls. Oh what to do with James now. I hope they learned their lesson about how they handled things last time. Although it would be nice to see James be the bottom in prison. I can't wait.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
I am so sad that this is coming to an end. I have been reading this story since last summer. I'm glad the girls weren't stuck with James for too long. They have been through just about everything.
I think some background into Bella could only enhance the story. So I say, go for it.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
I love the ending. It was perfect. You know they would have such a hard time after everything they went through. I have been reading this story ever since last summer. It is one of my favs and I am sad to see it go. I will definitely be reading all of your other stories.
Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Bella should just tell Charlie she was drugged. Why protect Tanya? I could kick Edward's butt. Why does he have to be such a prick? He is going to be sorry down the road when he wants to be with Bella. I hope she gives him a hard time and makes him prove himself.
Date: 02 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Jake always did have Charlie wrapped around his finger. I was so hoping she would tell Jake about being drugged. Why is she keeping that to herself
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I like where you are going with getting Jacob and Bella. I think love triangles are fun.
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64297
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
That story just breaks my little heart. How hard it must have been for her. I'm going to go dry my eyes now.
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
What a far way he has come from womanizer to proposing. I did like the part when she kicks him behind the knee. Awesome
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
What a cute proposal. I love the crossword puzzle. Even better was Bella messing up his flow.