Reviews by k1942
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

17 year old Bella is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be all she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And will she still want him when one night changes everything? A/U Cannon pairings


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74283 Read Count: 29128
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Intoxication

Interesting! Edward's playing reached Bella in a way she hadn't expected. It showed her a very different Edward than the one she's been so angry with. Then, the big test to see how she could resist human blood. Guess it's pretty good it only took her three hours to control herself around the wonderful smell.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Convocation

Good goirl, I kind of wondered what the official story was myself. That was so sweet when Alice told Bella what would happen at the servise, and even sweeter when Edward tols her about Angela and Ben and how he had listened to her talk in her sleep!

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Fabrication

I'm so encouraged that Bella let Edward into her room, and listened to how they staged her death. I wonder how this conversation with Charlie is going to go?

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Desolation

That was so sad and painful, the exchange between grieving father and grieving lover. Wonder what's in the box that Charlie didn't mind parting with?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Progression

I think Bella really appreciated  Edward going to her dad's and bringing back her beloved books, favorite jeans and the album and diary. He scored major points by respecting her privacy and not reading the diary.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Attraction

Two steps forward and one step back, way to go Edward! Big dummy vampire! I hope Alice tells him what a dork  he just was!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Perception

My only thought was, oh shit! Sorry about that! What in the world is Charlie going to think? Did he even get a good look?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Desperation

That was a very close thing, between Bella and Jasper. More important was how Edward nearly forced himself on her. And most important of all, I'm afraid that pounding on the front door is Charlie! What a mess this is turning to!

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Emancipation

That was just plain heartbreaking! Poor Charlie, poor Bella, hell, poor Edward ! Let's hear it for Carlisle's bed-side manner.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Devotion

I think you handled that perfectly, and you're absolutely right about the necessity of her doing the awful deed. It's the beginning for the both of them  and I'm so glad they finally have a start!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Reconnection

 

Sure, I can't help but feel sorry for poor Ronald, but sadly, someone had to die, besides Bella that is. She and Edward are going to make it together, after all, they have forever! Cute place to stop, they didn't mind Emmett's vulgarity, but couldn't take Esme's sweetness. Who wants their mom to hear them making love?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Fusion

I truly hope no one hated on you for this is a really great story. You did a hell of a job showing us all another possibility. Edward and Bella and all the other Cullens are some of my favorite people!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Loved the way you wrapped this up so neatly. It was a blessing for Bella to be able to watch over Charlie and to watch Angela's family grow. I think you did an outstanding job with this lovely story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward never returned in New Moon, now a century after Bella's death a strange twist of events is happening. Could Edward have a second chance? Inspired by the FF Save You. Smut advisory. AU

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30863 Read Count: 9710
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise

Okay, I'm on his side, what is going on? This is spooky!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 2: There's a Stranger In My Car

I know it's next door to impossible, but what explanation is there? It's enough to make you believe in reincarnation!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Someone Slap Me I'm Losing My Mind

Well, he would be a damn fool not to make the right decision this time, in my opinion, anyway.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Tension

There have definitely been some improvements in Bella's attitude towards Edward and his ideas of what she should want!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Guilt

He really is getting a second shot, and has the tears to prove it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Redemption

I hope someone talked you into it. As long as he's going to change her, why not?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 7: A Sexual Encounter

I think you did just fine and most likely stopped where he wanted you to stop!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: It's All In The Past

I'm still waiting, like Bella, for the other shoe to drop. Is he or isn't he, will he or won't he? It must drive her half crazy, not knowing for sure!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Fire and Ice

You usually know when the time is right when that much love is involved. So, now he's finally ready! And about damn time, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Doubt

Why in heavens name would she do that when she loves Edward so much? I'm totally at a loss as to what would possess her to let anyone else touch her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Little Dreamer

Thankfully it was only a dream, but why now and why another boy? This is very confusing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Waiting

Could this be the man she was with after Edward left her, never to return, supposedly?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Enlightened

The album was kind of a surprise, until I remembered who had kept it all those years. Funny he never noticed that glimmer in her eyes was absent. Possessive Edward there at the end was lots of fun!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Pain and Pleasure

The way her change happened didn't bother me at all, just so it happened! The speed was probably a good thing for them both!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Pleasure and Pain

Hope you had a good time writing vampire sex! It's supposed to be the best, since they never need to stop for any reason, and the desire is always there!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: The Aftermath

Alice is so cute when she can't see things before they happen. I think it scares her a bit. This is great, because I never like for Bella to suffer through her transformation any more than you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Crescendo

It was so easy to picture that scene in my mind! Great job!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: My Happily Ever After

No problem, just the fact they were married made me happy! I liked the future plans as well.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

It was a new experience to focus solely on Edward and Bella , with no wolves and hardly any interaction with the family.  I liked it though, since they got their happy forever after!

Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

Did the last couple of sentences get lost from another chapter? Bella is in the shower, and all of a sudden she's facing her angry, bitter son . Kind of a huge leap. Or is it just my stupidity? Never mind, I'll just keep going and find out.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Quil sounds like a pretty nice kid. just a little different than his peers. It's so nice that Charlie and Billy come for Sunday dinner. I like families to be close like that, not perfect but doing okay. I wonder who Quil is going to meet at Forks High? heh, heh!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sounds to me as if Bella might be a bit dissatisfied with her life, not a lot, just a little. Like something is missing and she's not quite sure what.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

After only one day's exposure to vampires, Quil is starting to change. I hoope the tribal elders are going to be able to explain things to him. The kid has a really big surprise coming, and soon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So, daddy Jake is excited about his son becoming a shape-shifter. How nice of him to share with Bella. Jake kind of seems to be all about Jake and the rest of his family is secondary.  I hate to think that, but sometimes very nice people get a bit thoughtless.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Quil's first transformation went pretty well. all things considered. Now comes the informational portion of his new life, where the elders and his dad, fill him in on tribal history and legends. Wonder how Bella is taking all this?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm thinking Quil had a crush on Alice Cullen. That must be why he's not thrilled to find out she's a vampire, his natural enemy. Don't blame Bella one little bit for being hurt Jake never told her about this possibility. It's a lot to process, that's for sure.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So, Quil is Alpha and chief, and has two pack-brothers. More than that, they have made their first kill. Nothing like genetic memory, I guess, for knowing what to do.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thank the Lord Edward was able to stop himself in time. I'll bet he was shocked to realize that Bella knew what he was. If you're the mother of a shapeshifting wolf, it seems to come with the territory.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm very glad the wolves and the Cullens got through that encounter without bloodshed. Quil still doesn't understand what talents the vampires have, but I bet he will learn.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Trust me, Bella, Edward wants to be more than just your friend, married though you are! I can see why Bella would be fascinated, just a little. Think of the things he's seen, the places he's been and the things he's done. Boggles my mind!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews and for letting me know about the first chapter. The last three lines actually were part of the prologue and were split by chapter 1 somehow, so i think it should be fixed now. It's funny that I have had no one esle notice that. LOL

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Christopher better be watchful. I seem to remember Quil, the one he's named for, was the imprint of Claire. What evil little scheme have you cooked up for this Quil and Claire? No matter, at least he's getting back to school work again, even online is better than not attending.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That's how it always starts, isn't it? Just talking, getting to know one another, becoming interested, then fascinated, then who knows? Be careful, Bella you may become more attracted than you want to be.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Worried that his mom would be the victim of Edward Cullen, the kid hurts her himself, and then blames it on them. Nothing like a teenaged wolf child! This should be a lot of fun, explaining Bella's injury to Jake.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor Quil, major guilt over hurting his mom. Poor Bella, not realizing how Edward feels about her. Oh boy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

How mean of Quil to demand his mother not see Edward any more. He can't stand the fact his mom is friends with a Cullen. I don't think he'll be very thrilled with John imprinting on his little sister.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew it! Bella has feelings for Edward and compares him to Jake. Not fair, but there you are. How could you not be drawn to someone who's intelligent, interesting, well-traveled, and drop-dead gorgeous? No pun intended. Bella is loyal, I'll give her that. She believes in her vows and will try her damnedest to keep them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm getting a bad feeling that Quil is about to get a lesson in grown-up relationships. Bella hasn't done anything but text Edward, to let him know she's okay.  Still, I know he doesn't want her to have any contact at all. Since when do children tell their parents what to do?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh dear lord, how could this have happened? How could Quil have killed his own father? I feel  so bad for that boy, he'll never forgive himself, or his mother, I'm thinking. How absolutely awful.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well, I'm really not too surprised at Bella's choice. She's afraid of Quil now, her husband is dead at his hands and Edward is her only friend. Wonder what she'll do about Rebecca and burying Jake. I feel she won't be welcome in La Push now.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Edward is trying  so hard to ease Bella's grief. I think he would do anything to help her, and she can sure use some distraction right now.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

It's a tough thing to bury a parent, no matter your age. Quil and Rebecca got  through it pretty well. Telling his little sister the truth, all of it, was easier than I thought it would be. The awful thing is Quil imprinting on Claire. Now what will he do? 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

She made it through a pretty bad day, which is about all you can hope for. Bella is growing closer to Edward, despite the circumstances, or maybe because of them. She better pay attention when he tells her he likes cougars. She doesn't know they are his favorite food.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Now that Quil has found his soul mate, maybe he will be more understanding of his mother's feelings for Edward. Christopher is really a good friend and pack-mate. I hope he finds his imprint soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Good for Bella, standing up to Rosalie's attitude. She is always afraid Bella will betray the Cullens, which is ridiculous. I loved that  Bella called her out about Quil, too. Best not to mess with a mom, concerning her children.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So much for softenig his feelings toward his mother's special friend. This sure puts Bella in an untenable position. How the hell can she choose between Edward and her children?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Lot of difference in the way a seventeen year old looks at life, and the way a thirty-five year old does. Bella said it, if you don't ask for what you want, you don't get it. She has made most of the accomodating, so far, not counting how difficult it is for Edward to be around her. It will be very interesting to see what he decides.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Arrogant little pup! It's okay for him to have who he wants, but not his mom! Who the hell does Quil think he is? This is going sideways,and fast!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Bella really had a good cover story, too bad John is going to go tattle  to Quil.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nothing good will come of this. Quil and his mom really need to talk, a lot, about what's about to happen. I hate to tell him, but sixteen isn't old enough to run your mother's life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Well, I'll be damned! Alice bit Bella  and not Edward, I'm amazed! I thought for sure Carlisle would end up doing the honors. Now all hell is going to break loose, the wolves are coming!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Young wolves aren't too long on strategy, or they would have seen the Cullens were trying not to kill them. It's a shame about Rhett, and about Alices arm. I wonder if she can find it to reattach? Bella must have awakened from the change, causing Alice's vision.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Lucky Bella, all the way around. Her transformation only took two days and she didn't lose her hunger for Edward. Things weren't good in Forks , but at least Quil wasn't killed, and Alice won't be permanently disfigured. I just wish Edward and Bella could have some peace and security for a while.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Quil and Claire have had a pretty decent life, so far and are happily awaiting their first child. Charlie is getting old and stove up and Billy is dead. Life goes on. Now, if John and Rebecca can only find Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 35: BPOV EPI

That was a surprise! I never thought about something like this before, but it makes a lot of sense. That will be the oddest pairing, a vampire and a wolf, forever. Wonder what Quil will think of his little sister being what his mother is?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: QPOV EPI

That was a great story and I just loved it. It took a while and a lot of pain and anguish, but Bella finally got her family all together. How neat, to have a son, a daughter-in-law a granddaughter and a vampire daughter and a wolf son-in-law. Add in all the Cullens and you have a wonderful, loving family!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 37: CH28.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

Bless his sweet, old-fashioned heart, Edward is a never-ending delight! He loves Bella so much, he is willing to suffer any humiliation or difficulty to make her happy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: CH31.5 EPOV OUTTAKE

Alice may have started the process, but I'm sure Edward hurried things along by injecting lots of his venom as well. Besides, noe Bella would always smell a little like he does! Thanks for writing  a wonderful story. I really liked the fact of Bella being a mature woman this time around.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews, I really appreciate them and they were a joy to read.

 

The only thing that I think you had a question about or that I could address for you is when you said it was quick that Quil started the change whent the Cullens moved. I was basing that off Sam in the orginal books the Cullen's had moved to Forks two years before Jake changed, but Sam changed pretty quickly. So it started triggering the wolves right away, it just took a while for all of them to change. In this case, Quill was just the first.

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Neither one of them are doing well without the other, and both hate Christmas apart. I had a thought, about the shower sex the morning he left. Could it be possible she's pregnant? That would explain the tiredness and nor eating!

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Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Just as I suspected! Now Bella will have someone to think about besides herself and how miserable she has been!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I feel so sorry for the both of them! Thank heaven for friends like Alice and Jasper, at least Bella will have someone.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'll guess that the fact of them both hving dreams about the other is very significant.  They sure struck sparks off each other at this first meeting, at least.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Boy, am I glad Alice gave him that warning  when she did! Saved him from a huge mistake that would have ruined everything!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Not quite the romantic reunion they both thought it would be! What a damn mess!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

At least Rose has offered the olive branch, and Bella, good person that she is, accepted it!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor Bella , she had no idea what was happening and then Edward reacts strangely, no wonder she had a panic moment.  That bitch Lauren didn't help matters much either!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Labor must not have been too awful, if he talked her into two more babies! If she knew what he was hiding, though, she might shoot him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Aah yes, I remember it well! Typical new baby times and they are all different, too! It's a wonder any of us live through it!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That went really well for the first time away from the baby. He does such romantic things for them to do together!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

If I was Edward, I think my brother would be about to get his lights puched out! That was not a bit funny and no way to treat the brother you supposedly love!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

The price of fame, I guess! What a circus!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What a blessing , to be interviewed by someone Bella knew! Quite the stroke of luck! Looks like their life is just going to be kind of crazy for a while!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

A really wonderful wedding!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So far, so good, but even I'm curious as to where he's taking her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

What a truly unique and fabulous way to honeymoon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Now I really hope Edward gets home as soon as possible!

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Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Alice's timing left a bit to be desired in the gym! First she drags Bella there in case Dr. Cullen shows up and then cuts into the conversation just as he's about to ask her out! So, now brother Emmett knows about Edward's dream, and Alice knows about Bella's dream. Something should come of them knowing, I guess. Maybe help things along?

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Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So all the nurses are going to be broken-hearted because Dr. Cullen is dating Bella Swan! Hospitals are like their own little cities, aren't they?

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Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Face facts Dr. Cullen, you are falling for this woman!

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Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

There seem to be advantages to having a friend like Alice! I had a feeling the first time these two kissed would be earth shattering, and sure enough!

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Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

These two are amazing!

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Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is getting along with Charlie so well, I hope Alice's premonition isn't going to come true! I wondered about it when she told Edward not to fuck up with Bella.

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great doctor visit, but I'm curious as to what Dr. Brown was going to say, but didn't!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

What a fabulous life these two are looking forward to! It really could hardly be any better

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

What a sneaky guy! He always seems to get his way, too.  Great story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It's a most sexy and romantic honeymoon, sometimes all at once!

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank heavens they are back together and okay!

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Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thankfully they straightened that out! I don't blame Bella for getting the wrong idea, but assuming you know what someone else is thinking is always dangerous!