Reviews by Ma Cherie
Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126173
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Of course Peter needs to die but Bella ' s father needs to be killed as well in my opinion. Any father who treats their child that way doesn't deserve to continue to breath.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward should probably teach bella how to shoot a gun. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ob my I didn't see that coming. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Surprising twist

 

Breaking Free by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

What happens when you cage something wild, feral and beyond dangerous? It eventually breaks free and brings Hell with it. Twilight Non-Canon AU Vampire/Human Major Whitlock/Bella Adult Themes/Content

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18152 Read Count: 15102
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2014 Updated: 29 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

If only you could see my face right know. I seriously just can't stop smiling. Thanks. I needed a distraction from my teething 3 month old.

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I find the story fascinating. I was just wondering has it been abandoned or is it currently still being worked on? I love the plot and I am fascinated with the characters. Both Edward and Bella are complex and I love the sweet innocence of Bella juxtaposed to the rather compromising position she now finds herself in.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91290
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved this chapter.  Especially the ending

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thanks for the update

Smoke on the Water by FyreMasen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Smoke on the Water is an annual barbecue and music festival held in a small Georgia town. It draws crowds from far and wide. Only this year, country star Bella Swan is gonna be the main act. What happens when a couple of good ole country boys win passes to meet her?

An entry for the Get Your Southern On contest. We won First Place Honorable Mention

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33786 Read Count: 13392
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 May 2015
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love this story! I just found it recommended by another story and decided I would check it out.  So glad I did.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Awe I'm so thrilled to know you're enjoying it. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you gave it a try too. Can I ask which story you found us from? I'd love to know. Thanks so much for reading and for the review. XOXO

Lissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

Thank god Edward finally got his head out of his ass! Let's hope he stays the course 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

I am warning  everyone  in an advance that if Edward is on a romantic date with Tanya while his sick child is in route to the hospital I might go postal.  For a man with means he seems incredibly inept and downright incapable of standing his ground.  the fact that he has continually allowed Tanya to walk all over him and his child in this sham of a relationship is disturbing. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Does edward have any history of mental illness? Cause his judgment sucks 

Summary: Past Featured Story

The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134559
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

Well that's not very Hallmark.  thanks for the updates



Author's Response:

Sorry Ma Cherie, but the love is going to start following again soon...a wedding is coming up in a faw chapters.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601920
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I liked Marcus ' s response to his sons behavior and punishment.  

Summary:

bannner

 

Isabella is an English woman, married to a Scottish laird, living in a foreign land. Will she be able to find the peace and happiness that she so desperately seeks, or will their differences be too much for them to bear? **Sequel to My Laird**


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20446 Read Count: 57222
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2015 Updated: 13 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Didn't see that coming.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171332
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

She is pretty resourceful for a 17 year old

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Truthfully I am not sure I would be acting any different than bella has been given the limited number of facts she has been given.  In fact truth be known I probably would be much worse.  In my opinion the Cullen's are due a reality check. If their intentions for her to be an actual member of their family st heart not just in name than this secrecy is not only counter productive but damaging. Bella would most likely be much more reasonable if they showed some trust and honesty. Let them have it bella

 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really liked this chapter. I still side with bella though Carlisle does have a good point.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135034
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 06 May 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love this story in check my email often to see when the next update comes in I have to admit I actually pulled off the road into a parking lot so I couldr read the update when it arrived

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 12 May 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella really should stop answering the door

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved this chapter.  I think they handled the discovery of their marriage well and I am glad there wasn't any forced drama. Personally I feel that her ex provides plenty of drama all by himself 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I feel so badly for her. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177703
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I love this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

Fantastic chapter. So worth the wait. Thank you 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

I love this story so far. Thanks for taking the time to write it. I seriously hate Jacob and I hope karma is swift and fierce.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 down to business

I just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite stories. it is one that I can come back and read over and over again. thank you for taking the time to create and share it

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat

I  loved the chapter. thank you. I will miss Alec.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

i love the twists and turns in your story. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

i love the twists and turns in your story. 

Summary:

 

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Bella had worked hard and studied hard. She graduated at the top of class. What would her first assignment be?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25483 Read Count: 6511
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - unexpected guests

love the chapter! well written, just the right amount of detail and mystery. I love the character development so far. thank you 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Revelations

I loved the chapter. specifically the characterization.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178598
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

UUgh? What the heck is wrong with this girl!  To be honest she has too many freaking issues! Man do I feel sorry for him!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter. I like the dialogue 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Fight! Fight! Fight!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awesome! Thank you for the back-to-back chapters I needed it this morning

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Thank goodness she has been rescued. 

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50945
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the chapter especially the last couple sentences. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

what is janina'so purpose exactly? though I am whole heartedly against suicide I honestly would not blame Bella in this situation. What does she have to live for? Carlisle is awful. Edward is worse and a cheater. Michael is a dead man and kind of gives me the creeps. thanks for the update. 

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53533
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

tthank you for the update. I am looking forward to Edwards reaction. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love a man with a plan! 

Summary:

Banner

 

Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 38413
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 24 May 2020 Title: Chapter 19: My Insecurities

I am on pins and needles! Thank you for your update

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: My Video

I just happened upon this story a couple of days ago and since then I have read My Stubborn Mate and My Headstrong Beta three times. They are wonderful. Thank you for sharing your stories and I am looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 09 May 2020 Title: Chapter 17: My Wolf

Very exciting! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed
Date: 09 May 2020 Title: Chapter 17: My Wolf

Very exciting! Thanks for the update