Reviews by twimam23
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366623
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Why Can't You Stay

Wow!! Totally didnt see the twist with Bree coming! BRILLIANT!! Really enjoying this story! Its really good so far! :) Xxx

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Walk Away

Wow! That was intense! Not sure Id have forgiven Edward so quickly tho, he really was an ass! Lol!

But Im loving this story so far!

 



Author's Response:

Bella's trying her best to be different and give chances this time. :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Keep Holding On

Ooo! Interesting! They really seem to be working things ot. And they're taking their time but to be honest Emmett and Alice are pissing me off more than Edward and Bella with their presumptions and the way they're being so careful incase they screw up again! Theres a few times in the past couple of chapters that Alice has done or said something, like when she unlocked Bellas bedroom door and walked in,that I just wanted to scream and slap her! And Emmett with all his comments towards Edward, wow what a dick! I mean it was years ago and its not like Edward did anything on purpose, its not his fault the girl wanted him and not Emmett. Ok, i think Ive talked enough about that.

But overall Im loving the story! Its really well written! The storyline is amazing! Im not normally a fan of AH stories but I read them every now and then and this has to be one of the best! :)

 

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Surprise

Havent reviewed in a few chapters so thought I would. Lol!

Poor Bree!! And lovin Jasper and Edward being all sweet to him! Lovely!

Now, is Edward really doing drugs? Or does he just not want to admit something to Bella? Im intrigued! Lol!

Oh so much has happened since my last review and I cant remember what! Lol! But I am really enjoying this story! Its amazing! Will finish the rest tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Searching for a Reason

OMG!! They actually went ahead and had Edward move in?! Ooo! I can see the shit hitting the fan!! Ooo! Is Bella going to move into Embrys place?

I cant wait to see where this is gonna go! And i keep thinking Numb nuts is Emmett or Edward but then theres stuff been said that makes it seem kinda obvious its not, but theres just something niggling at me that we know who numb nuts is! Lol!

And the past few chapters from when they were in hospital have made me feel kinda sick, angry and upset. But in a god way, in the sense that your writing is making me feel how the character should be feeling. I felt so sorry for Bella and I hated Emmett and oh, it was horrible, i felt like I was going throuhg the 'break up' too! :(

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

Ooo! I loved her day with Esme! It was all sweet!

And Im loving how everyone seems to be guessing at whats wrong with Bella and is getting it on the nose! But how has no one noticed that shes not spoken to Emmett? Although Edward noticed she flinches when hes mentioned, but Bella didnt pick up ono him saying thats twice now, or at least didnt ask about the 1st time! Intriguing! Lol!

Ok, Im done humming and hawing for this chapter. Lol!

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings

Woohoo!! Bella finally told someone! I kinda wish it had been the whole family in a group just to get all the reactions in 1 go, but it could be interesting seeing how everyone takes it differently!

Cant wait to see how this goes now though! :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Piecing It Together - Part 1

Aww!! My poor Emmett! Lol! I felt so sorry for him when Bella flinched and stepped back form him! :'( I almost had tears in my eyes for him! And hearing her explain everything to Emmett, that I did have tears ini my eyes for!

I liked Bella and Edwards convo at the end, when they coudnt sleep. They covered what they needed to and spoke honestly. It was sweet! :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 56: You Found Me

I knew it!! I just knew it! Lol! Sorry, just had to get that in!! Lol! Xxx



Author's Response:

LOL!  I love it that so many claimed they "knew". Hee Hee!

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 58: If At First

Wow! I loved the trip to New Orleans! It was brilliant! And so obvioulsy what they needed!

But hehe! Alice and Jaspers reaction to the triplets was brilliant! Off to read the next chapter now so I can see what happened! Lol!



Author's Response:

Yeah!! So happy you are really loving this story so much!! New Orleans was so much fun to write for them and watch them get close all over again.  And yes, leaving Alice and Jasper speachless was absolutely brilliant. I thank my partner in crime for that idea - Eternally Addicted.

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow! Just discovered this story! Its brilliant!

I can totally see Bellas mum having something to do with this case!

Cant wait for the next installment! Xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Renee's involvement is a distinct possibility. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mr cullen

 

Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67309
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved this chapter! Absolutey hate Tanya! Lol! Although personally Id have wound Tanya up some more if I was Bella. I would have told Tanya to keep replaying the sex scene in the woods because it would get Edward all hot under the collar and he'd have sex with Bella again! Hehe! That would have pissed her off!

I like the truth or dare game. I couldnt tell if Bella and Edward were going to go at it in front of everyone or were they going to leave. Hehe! X

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814520
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

When hes talking about Bellas rabbits, is she really talking about vibrators and he doesnt realise? Or did I miss something or forget something from earlier?

Katy x

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think hell has more chance of freezing over. Lol! Lovin it though. ;)

 

Katy X



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh wow!!! They are seriously lucky that Bella didnt blow up more coz I think id have been arrested if that ever happened to me. Lol!

 

Katy X



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this is garnering.  Thanks, Kasi~

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Aww! Loving Emmett, he was genuine and not obnoxious about it. He wasnt trying to embarass, that was nice. :)

 

Katy

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

About time. A Bella that actually tells Alice off for shopping and throwing her stuff out!! 

Good chapter too btw. Lol!! Xxx

A Light in My Dark by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Darkness was my friend, my comfort, my constant companion until he came back into my life for good, lighting my path and my soul. He is the light in my dark. Xtreme OOC Bella/Jasper Vampire fic. Mature themes/language


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26017 Read Count: 9232
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2014 Updated: 05 Jan 2015
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Lmao! His couch? Love the story so far! Xxx

The Wife by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

Bella and Carlisle are starting a new life in San Francisco with their adorable boys and supportive extended family. They've been through hell, but they're together. Aren't they? Will they be able to survive life away from Forks? NC-17, AU. The Wife, sequel to The Babysitter.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future , Read Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76251 Read Count: 43325
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2014 Updated: 08 Oct 2017
Reviewer: twimam23 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm sad Varners death wasn't more painful but I'm glad he's gone. Looking forward to seeing how Carlisle and Bella do now. 

Katy x