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Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Voicemails

Love it.  I'm with you.  I'm curious how Bella is going to track him down.



Author's Response:

Hooray! I will admit there were a lot of surprises, even for me, in how Bella decides to deal with him and the rest of the family.

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

She needed to get there to build the strength to fight back.



Author's Response:

I obviously agree, but that was seriously one of the hardest thing I have ever had to write because I absolutely did not agree with it. In the end, I had no choice. I had to go where she took me and it worked out the way it was supposed to.

Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it so much.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

Well, you won't find critism from me.  If I don't like reading something I just don't.  I respect all the authors and am grateful they chose to share their talent in this manner.  I'm no author so find it hard to criticize.  I'm more likely to make suggestions.

thus far I'm really enjoying the Bella & Alice team up.  I like how you validated Bellas feelings and let her be angry with Alice and not go for the easy forgiveness.  Not sure I like Bella cutting herself but understand how, in her mind, it helps ease the pain.



Author's Response:

Alice and Bella make a fantastic team, in my opinion. ;) I'm open to all aspects of constructive criticism as I feel it will only make me a better writer. I really didn't like Bella cutting herself, but it does get explained in much more detail in later chapters, especially when Carlisle finds out.

 

As always, thank you for taking the time to review.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

OMG.  That was perfect!  Wondering how long this story will be?  Will it end when they reunite and she finally forgives him?



Author's Response:

Right now the story is 31 chapters completed, but I will admit that it's almost over at this point. I feel there is only another few chapters and an epilogue left to tell before it wraps itself up. On the bright side, however, the chapters continue to get much longer in length as more and more of the family gets involved in the story. I hope you find it a fun and entertaining journey. :) Thank you for continuing to review. I do read and respond to every single one of them and they help to inspire me to keep writing.

 

More to come soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

 

 

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84410
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So intense. Does this story have  HEA?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Anastasia Steele was shipped off to a boarding school in New York the last thing that she expected was to fall in love. That was until she met 23-year-old English teacher Christian Grey. As soon as they both met they knew that they were meant to be together but others thought differently and decided to keep them apart. So they decided to runaway together and leave everybody behind. Rated M for Lemons and Language.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57737 Read Count: 7480
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2016 Updated: 14 Apr 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I don't think I read the Twilight version.  We'll probably learn soon but, how old is Anna in this story?



Author's Response: Ana is 17 years and Christian is 23 years

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella had it all, until she lost it. When life offers you a dream so far beyond any of your expectations, is it reasonable to grieve when it comes to an end?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88307 Read Count: 38297
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Aug 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Are we going to learn soon why she's, "Angry All The Time?"



Author's Response: It's chapter 16 when we start to see what's going wrong. Although there are hints along the way, that is the turning point.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Ready for the drama to start.  :)



Author's Response: Good, see you on Sunday. Lol

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Sad.  Does this end with a HEA?  Feel like we may need some hope in all the despair.  



Author's Response: There is an HEA. :)

Summary:

 

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Bella had worked hard and studied hard. She graduated at the top of class. What would her first assignment be?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25483 Read Count: 6511
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Welcome to SPAM Ms Swan

Clever.  I like it and will continue to read.  

Summary:

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After getting her heart ripped out Bella is offered a choice – of sorts.Where will it lead?

 

Rated NC-17 – for EXTREME violence, language, and sexual content featuring some harem and lesbian. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!

 

 


Categories: Twilight, The Walking Dead, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Negan
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63808 Read Count: 11741
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Batter Up

Well I've read it so far but really don't get it.  I'm OK with poly relationships but Negan is nothing to be desired or looked up to.  He his a hateful man who does evil things.  I find it hard to read and believe that Bella is accepting of this.  Maybe if she were secretly looking for ways to end him I'd find it more believeable.

The story is well written but I guees unfortunately not my thing.

Best wishes.

 

 



Author's Response:

I just wanted to say thank you for an honest review. You didn't personally attack me and gave your actual opinion. It's refreshing... as of late when someone doesn't like s story. I get harrassed and attacked on a personal level. So even though you didn't dig the story (whch I'm sorry you didn't) This review was refreshing in the sense of having a reader with class. Thank you. And yes this story won't be for everyone. It is more of one from the baddies perspective of things and out of my usual realm. I am wrote this for a good friend of mine. So it is meaningful to me <3 Thank you again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 9029
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it so far, can't wait for more!!

Summary:

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Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84338
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

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Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Too short but off to a good start.  Hope future chaps are longer.

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 118997
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Off to be a great start.  Thank you!