Reviews by coulierb
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082124
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Almost.  Beautiful work, very enjoyable to read!  Thank you.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Uh oh. It's good to finally understand what the crazy ones are thinking.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Go Edward!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Perfect!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Oh the waiting. I have no doubt she'll say yes.  But then, it's going to hit the fan.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Yes!!  Very sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Sweet. I love the love before more drama.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Sweet. But ready to get James & Renee in jail.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Nice Christmas celebrstion. Love the love. thank hid Edward was with Bella. The message is clear and hopefully they will have enough that the police will get involved.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Bella is going to feel this is her fault and think Edward should leave her.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

About time.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

If I were Bella i'd have reacted the same. I'd hate to see my loved ones hurt because of me.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Wise Esme. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Sweet fluff.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Well, I guess they'll know the why shortly.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Uh oh. Something wicked is coming. :(

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Oh no. Where is Renee!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

I think for sure she will pull back.  But, I wonder if her mother is in Florida and is blackmailing her.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I was waiting for Charlie to return. Now, let's kick some ass!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

So, so sad. If I was in her shoes I'd do the same to protect the ones I love.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Family first!!!  I'll keep you and your in my prayers.  Peace.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 May 2015 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Uugh!!  TWCS is still not sending me updates. 

oh no, hope no one gets hurt this time.

At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26169
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, that was fuck hot. Congratulations, can't wait to read what you have next.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Getting better and better. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This continues to be a lovely story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Liking it so far. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Intrigued. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really nice!  Can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok, I really love it but... I'm confused at how Edward can know he wants that from her?  Will we get his POV to understand?  Is this what he expects from all of his subs?  I'm guessing there is much more to the back story we don't know yet?  Looking forward to finding out.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Go Bella!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love it, love the passion.  Will very much enjoy following this story.

Year Of Hell by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 283]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Banner by: Christag Banners

Summary: Edward has known Bella for five years, but after some time away from Forks, he learns even more.  Some bad people have their hand in the control of Forks. Will Bella and Edward be able to save each other or get lost in the mix? What happens when Edward’s friendship with Bella becomes so much more? Can Edward and Bella both fight the demons from their past and present to find their future?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 176064 Read Count: 55905
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2014 Updated: 19 Jul 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Day With Edward

I missed it the first time around so I'm looking forward to it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far so good. I've read all your guys stuff so I have lots if faith this will be just as good. This tis off to a great start and very different. Yeah. 

 

 

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, I'll bite. Let's see where this goes.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok. Intrigued.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm thinking both Tonya and Jacob are not faithful on their ends.... Maybe?

Claiming by Lilith Blood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44801
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow.  Shocking.  Hope the next chapt is soon.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG!!  I just whipped through the first 27 chapters. I sincerely hope you will continue this story. It's absolutely fabulous and delicious. I can see Ana is going to send him over the edge.  No way is she going to agree. I hope John is up to the task.  And, hopefully before he rapes her.  I sincerely hope Taylor won't let that happen.

tgankbyou for sharing your amazing talent!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow!  This is so good, sorry you gave up on it.  You wrote so well.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I've very much liked your story thus far.  I'm only hoping Christian will stop before raping her further and steeling her virginity.  Not sure how she could recover or forgive him or herself from that.  Perhaps it's time for him to have a moment of conscious. 

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I was grateful for the turn of events.  I love Bella, the strong one, who gave Carlidle his just reward along with Esme & Charlie.  I look forward to the sequel. 

As always, your work is  exemplary!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG!!!  I'd like to think she didn't really do that or maybe it makes me feel sick because I think she did great and gave him what he deserved.  I only wished she left him to die slower.

Can't wait to see what she does to Esme, Charlie and the rest of the pigs.  Hopefully Edward comes in helpes her save the rest of the day.  But, who will save/heal her.

Summary:

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When an amazing opportunity finally comes up to have everything they want, will they take it? Can they remain professional for the sake of success? Celebrating never felt so good.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56096 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2014 Updated: 28 Aug 2018
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Decisions, Decisions

This should be fun.

Summary:

A boy lost to addiction. A girl lost to herself. Tough love demanded she walk away, but years later they'll meet again at a crossroads. Drabble fic. AU-All Human. Tiny updates with no promises of regularity. Rated M, just in case.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1961 Read Count: 1017
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2014 Updated: 05 Sep 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Peeked my interest.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting. Like it so far.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like it's gonna be a fun one. Can't wait to hear from B.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

Banner courtsey of Mina Rivera

 

Edward & Bella may have had some difficulties in the beginning of their relationship but as they move forward, they will find that it will take even more work to stay together. In order to make her future work with Edward, Bella has to search out her past. It just may take this journey for Edward and Bella to learn the true definition of love. Continuation of Lottery of Life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80982 Read Count: 22997
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So glad this fun is going to continue.  It's fun to watch Bella grow up.  And, watch Edward curb his frustration trying to help her grow. Great mix.

Summary:

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While out for a night with the girls, Bella gets a text that sends her running home. A Texts From Last Night Contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 3403
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Running Home

Fun, fun, fun!!!  Easy to see why your the winner. You guts ROCK!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm thinking Edward is undercover? Or maybe James is the bad guy, never said what happened to him. Or, the overprotective Sam and maybe a partner.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Awesome banner by: LittleNudgerLove.

 

Set Post-Eclipse. Canon until that point. HEA. Mere weeks before her wedding, Bella disappears. With vampires, werewolves and humans to blame, no one thinks to look to the more sinister monsters lurking just off shore. As Bella is thrown into a frightening new world, Edward and Jacob must put aside their differences to save the girl they both love. But will they be too late? ExB

 

NOMINATED: for the Fanatic Fanfics Award 2015!!! For Favorite Action/Angst/Horror/Otherworld/WIP Fanfic.

FINALIST: Fav Newbie Author!

 

 

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'Still My Bella' Created by manu-chann, commissioned by silverhawk88.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251232 Read Count: 47813
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Nothing is ever that easy

Too sad. Need some hope 'bout now.  She has been so deprived of emotions for so long. Just too sad. Something's gotta give or she'll give up.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, it'll come. Thanks for the reivew! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Home

Well, you certainly earned the brow wipe. :)

I loved the tenderness that this family has shown Bella. Was beautiful to read.  I'm hoping when she has had time to heal she will be able to start communicating. Maybe if she got her legs back she will get her voice too??



Author's Response:

Lol, thanks. I'm thrilled you liked it, it was one of my favourite chapers so far to write.

As to the voice, you'll see... ;)

Update will be soon.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Unexpected

Sorry to say I don't remember Gio in the story. But, I'm hopeful he'll have some answers and refresh his role.  Still hopeful for a hea. 

Still lovin the originality of this story!!!



Author's Response:

Gio is the fisherman that the mermaids go to to get 'pretty trinkets' when out at sea. He also helped Bella with Riana when she was attacked by the squid and called Carlisle. He last appeared in chapter 11 so it was a while ago.

Thank you for the review! It's great you're still enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Leading the Charge

Lol. Hilarious is right, Team Edward & Jacob. But Team Emmett was the best.  

I'm so hoping for a HEA but it's driving me crazy trying to figure out how that can even happen. 

This is a great read, so very different.

thank you!!



Author's Response:

Lol, glad you liked it - couldn't resist putting in the 'teams'.

Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Mermaid Info

Congratulations!! You'll have to keep us in the know about the short story you sold. I Love your work and would support it by purchasing it.

I like the storyline, Kali & Rosalie, very sweet for Rose.  I feel like it's going to be bad for them in near future.  I'm not sure why they don't just move away knowing that all is not good with the wolves.  Like Bella, I feel like something bad is about to happen.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm absolutely thrilled. I can mentioned bits and pieces on here but I don't think I'm allowed to say anything specific, otherwise SS might be taken down. And we don't want that! :s I do have a twitter account now though and I post links to my original work there (it's @NemmaW if you're curious). My first short story book (which I contributed one story to) actually just went on sale today as an ebook. The paperback is due soon, I think. Sorry, I'm babbling, still so excited. But now back to SS...

Yup you'll be seeing more on Rose and Kali soon. ;) I have a couple of my fav chapters coming up soon and I hope you'll enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them.

Nemma x

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - The Kiss of Life

This was definitely a fun chapter. Nice to see the wolves , mermaids and vamps getting along.  Wondering if theres still a possibility of  the mermaids getting their humanity back?  And, love that Jake imprinted.  You never cease to amaze with your turn of events.  That makes this so much better!!

Best wishes with the job, until next time. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you're still enjoying it! :) Mermaids regaining humanity? ... Maybe ;)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Glass Coffins

Are the wolves going to give her back??



Author's Response:

You'll see, lol. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Blood-Typing

Wow, was she finally greiving her loss and her experiences?  Heartbreaking.  Where dose that leave her now?  Perhaps it was all the human visitors that brought it about? Poor girl needs a break.

contnues to be one of my favorite stories!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's great the chapter came across that way, that's pretty much what I was aiming for but didn't know if I'd hit the mark. New update will be soon. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Ridiculum Emmett

Ok so... Maybe when they're intimate she'll change back???



Author's Response:

... maybe ...

Thanks for the review. Update will be soon. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Treasure Trove

Not my usual kind of story but decided to give it a try. I've really enjoyed these first 9 chapters. Very creative and different. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Home and House-calls

This is a fascinating story. But, will it be a HEA for Edward & Bella?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Ethics and Resolutions

Her slowly losing her humanity is disturbing. I'm thinking drinking human blood could be her final loss of self.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Plan A

Now that I'm caught up with the story I'm sad I have to wait for more. Lol. Very creative and well written. 

Really enjoying and so curious how you are going to work it all out. I just hope on the end we have a HEA for E & B.  I look forward to the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Hi there, thanks for giving the story a shot, and for the encouragement and support. :) It's always nice to recieve reviews like your's.

The plan is ExB (personally I prefer cannon pairings) and HEA.

Thanks again. Hope you enjoy the rest of the read! :)

New update should be soon...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Strange Scales

Oh shit! How does this end well for the men?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Battle for First Beach - Part II

Go Bella, thank you for saving Seth!   Please stay and let the family help, so eager for the reunion.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Updating now... :)

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Mending Bridges

Sad. I hope it doesn't take long for them to get her out.



Author's Response:

No long now ;)

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land

My goodness. I'm glad she's back with the Cullen's.  But her legs back, yeah!  Hope they work.  Hope she can talk. Nice chapt.  Also, love Seth!!



Author's Response:

Hehe, lol, thanks! Glad you liked it. Seth is awsome and always so happy, he's hard not to like. I'll be updating soon! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Buffet Supreme

Aww. I love Em.  He's always such a brightly ray of light. He can make anyone smile.  so glad she's eating and that Edward is showing her affection.  

Your story is so different, I'm really enjoying it. Thanks!!



Author's Response:

Lol yeah, Em is awesome! :)

Thanks again for the support. And the lovely review! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Learning

More sweetness. Oh my, how do they get past this. I was sort of thinking if she stayed out of the water long enough she soul turn human again. But now, what happens to her legs, will she be back to before with no use?  And her voice??

Lovin your creativity!!



Author's Response:

*Big toothy grin* :D Thanks for the great review.

I'll be covering the issues with her legs and her voice next...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Home Comforts

Oh my, I was shocked that she could speak underwater. But, I really liked the sign language.  And I'm glad to see her & Edward getting back on track. 

geez, I thought for a long time they were going to get her back to human. But not sure it's going that way. So now I'm wondering about her life span? Can she become vampire or....



Author's Response:

We'll get to that. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - The Fallout of War

For some reason I stopped getting the updates. I thought you stopped writing. Glad that's not the case.

Was good to hear from Jake. Seems there is still trouble out there. I'd love to know what this Balthazar dude knows.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hmm, no idea how that has happened. I'm trying to make a habit of updating at least once a week, and I should be able to do that for a while so that'll give you an idea of when the updates will be posted. I'm thrilled you're still into it. Thanks for the reviews. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks

They are going to try and take Her. I'm hoping Jake & Seth to the rescue?

 

 



Author's Response:

You'll see. Just sorting out the update. Thanks for the reivew. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Confrontation

Oh no.  They came so far...  I wonder what it looked like to the Cullen's?



Author's Response:

You'll see their take on it soon...

Updating now, thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 May 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Aftermath

Thank goodness. Bella was so sure she would be asked to leave.  Now where does it go?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. New update will be soon. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - Solitude

Lovely chapter.  Riana and Bella's conversation was interesting. Latched on right away about the men and giving their mates their blood.  So, wasn't shocked at Edwards thoughts/feelings about not being enough.  

Hope for no more interruptions for Bella & Edward, they need to be one with eachother.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - The Council Hut

So sweet.  Jacob deserved to have this happiness.  Feels like we are moving toward the end.  Continue to enjoy your work.  Now off to check out your short story book.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked Jacob's bit. :)

Summary:

New probee officer Bella Swan is put on the Molten, Washington Detective squad. Once her probation period is over she gets assigned to pull duty with the narcotics squad. Will her direct supervisor Edward Cullen treat her like all other detectives, or will she have a lot to prove? What kind of trouble will happen when Edward's own life is in her hands. All Human.

BANNER BY: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20896 Read Count: 44718
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Fun story. You all never disappoint. I love thus kick ass Bella.  She is gonna show up all those  nasty men.  When this is done, Edward owes het a huge apology.

I loved the sceen where Bella stabs her own shoulder. That was awesome!!

 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Interesting story. Go Bekla, kick some ass and show em all!

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm hoping you continue this story. I see so much potential for a beautiful love story full of angst.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Where It All Began

This is fab. I love it being so different. Rarely get to see a "bad" Alice. Will it continue? I hope so.

Summary:

He was my best friend. He was the man I was in love with ... and he was leaving me. Will I be strong enough to let him go? Or will my silent wish be fulfilled? Canon Couples. AH. Rated for adult themes.

 

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3312 Read Count: 910
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2014 Updated: 18 Nov 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, too sweet.

Summary: Past Featured Story

vp

 

Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91259
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just picked up this story. I love it, can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner By: Tiffany Kennedy - thanks for making this banner for us.

After the death of Gabriel Swan and Charlie Swan, the running of Swan's Toys, Trees and Reindeer is left in the hands of a very young Bella Swan. Why don't the majority of the townspeople remember sweet little Bella Swan? Who is this cold hearted woman who is running the Swan Plantation? What will the workers do when the normal two week vacation at Christmas is canceled?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39677 Read Count: 21862
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 Dec 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet, sounds kind of familiar.

Summary: Past Featured Story

I was irredeemable. I was lost, and then ... she found me. A story of discovering yourself ... a story of resumption. OOC vampires, Canon couples. Edward x Bella. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74961 Read Count: 22725
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2015 Updated: 09 Oct 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts

Growing up is hard to do....

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter-25: A Soul for A Soul

Sweet.  Edward is finally getting it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

Oh yes! I love this Edward already. This should be a fun ride.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel

Definitely in need if redemption. But, kinda like this bad ass. Think Bella will straighten him out.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating

Him, this boy has no clue. He really does need redeeming. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream

Unexpected.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to hear there is going to be a HEA. Otherwise, way too heart wrenching. Although i'm guessing it will still be full of tears.

looking forward to it.



Author's Response:

It'll be a rough ride, but they'll come through it together.  So glad you're looking forward to it!  :)

Ascension by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A scarred prince shunned by those he fought for. A broken woman crippled by her past. A love story that lives to this day. Come. Walk back through the veil to times past and learn of the love between the Macedonian prince and his love.....his Isabella.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3169 Read Count: 626
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2015 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Interesting.

Redemption by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

An American soldier physically wounded and mentally scarred in war. A Muslim woman hiding in fear in a society plagued with misconception. A moment of weakness shattered them forcing them to face the realities of their lives.....lives that would be incomplete without the other.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1840 Read Count: 475
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2015 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Sounds like s great stiry for current times. 

1) we treat our veterans terribly.

2) many hold "groups" responsible for the acts of one or few.

The Descent by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

She sought an escape from the pain. She found it. New Moon AU DARK CONTENT. Read warning heading chapter. Mentions of self harm. Do not read if it's not to your liking. NOT A FLUFFY FIC. You have been warned. Bella paired with either Jasper or Caius. You Choose pairing! Will Not Be a Poly!


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Caius, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4010 Read Count: 1021
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2015 Updated: 07 Jan 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it so far. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my. Definitely Jasper!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Nasty Tanya.  Good job Edward.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

How does one get to be as ugly as Tonya?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Priceless!!!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

Uh oh. She's gonna get an earful from Bella if she's rude to Elizabeth.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 (part 2)

In my area an ounce of human breadt milk is anywhere from $4.50-$5.00 per ounce.  Kudos to all those woman that donate!!!