Reviews by coulierb
My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Will It Ever End?

The anticipation to discover who the intruder/stalker is painful. I don't remember Leliah having red hair so it remains a mystery for me. And, the scenes are fabulous! The way Christian is with her; it's hard to believe there is no feelings... He is so in tuned to her needs. I guess that's just being a good Dom???

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Piano Works

Humm. I'm really enjoying this dom/sub story. But, I also love FSOG so I hate seeing Christian with others... when he is being compassionate.   In the FSOG books he always seemed so cold with others and when talking about his previous subs. I don't want him to be compassionate, caring and sweet with them. I hated he took Severine on the piano. That was supposed to be only Ana.

There, I got my rant out. Sorry.... My issues.

i am very much enjoying your work!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Sushi Schoolwork Security

Very interesting????

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Punishment Redux

Nice

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Ta Kill Ya

Uh oh. I think he is going to end the contract??

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Ups and Downs

I'm thinking she will end the contract just not sure when.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Après Dinner

 Would be interesting to have CPOV.  Love to know what he thinks. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: You Can Go Home Again

I fear we are coming to an end.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Sleepy to Seattle

It was so nice to get a new chapter. Thank you, you were missed.

master is not going to be happy. It will be an interesting visit when Carl shows up. I think he will learn a valuable lesson. Lol.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Confession and Inspection

No way is he mad at her. She did exactly as she was required and disclosed immediately upon return.

nice chapt but too short. :)

Summary:

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Born as a Roman slave, Eduardus serves a depraved mistress and learns that he is nothing. Stolen into a world of violence, Eduardus slakes his thirst without remorse, and learns that he is a monster. Fleeing to a world of asceticism, Edward finds relief in oblivion and learns that life is pain. But in rescuing his Singer, Edward learns that he must live.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55208 Read Count: 6107
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2014 Updated: 12 Aug 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Cognoscere

So sensual, nice!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Your Fic came to me as recommended. I've thoroughly enjoyed it and hope you will continue writing it. I thought it was a completed work so I was bummed that it wasn't complete. So the wait begins...

thanjs fir sharing your talent.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

Enjoying

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Incendere

Anticipation 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Concremare

Sad about Charlie. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Reperire

Sweet, finally.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Dedere

Too bad he didn't kill him.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Ardere

Yes! Sweet, love it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Outtake: Caesula

OMG.  I would like her dead... and not by natural causes. How terrible/awful for Edward.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So sweet and passionate. Poor Edward, his past unforgivable.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Instare

Way to go B & E. Sorry for your loss Lauren, lol. 

 

Gods & Monsters by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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A creature not of this world, watches and waits until he finds the perfect person to unwittingly play his game. Edward Cullen, a struggling wannabe in living in the City Of Angels catches his eye. How will the game play out when lust and deeper feelings are involved, can the demon put these behind him to claim what he wants? M/M Pairing. Drabble Fic


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Emmett (slash)
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Slash, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 611 Read Count: 499
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2014 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting. 



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Surrender

LOL.  Absolutely no complaints!!!

 

thank you!!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Really, no complaints? Wow! Thanks! See you next chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets

Renee is certainly perceptive.  Jacob sees the love already. Wonder how long it will take E&B B to figure it out. Hopefully not too long.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Renée seems to know her daughter really well. And Jake is looking right through Bella. Edward will soon know what he feels for Bella if he doesn't already. Bella will need some more time. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Yes. How could she say no. I wonder what pull "daddy" really has.  And, what lengths he will go to get his way. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Bella never actually stood a chance, lol. Carlisle will try to to get his way, come what may, but I assure you, in the end, he'll lose. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I had no doubt that Bella would want Edward there for labor & delivery. Very smart estate planning on Edwards end although, his father has had a lot of influence over his life this far, I'm sure he will have other devious plans if Edward doesn't meet his terms. Hopefully he can him stand up to him.  

And Rose, she is just being a good friend and looking out for Bella. And duh, it was only a matter of time for Emmitt & Rose. Lol.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you can see Rose's point. She wasn't being a bitch on purpose, only toward Emmett ;). Yeah, Carlisle isn't done yet. Two more chapters and you'll know more. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

So embarrassing. But, green eyes...



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Those eyes... I'd love to see them for real.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

Sucks. Good to know your own path.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, Edward needs to find his own way. And he will - eventually.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

Edward did right by Bella. It will be interesting to see what Edwards family will do.



Author's Response: It'll take a while until he'll tell his parents. But Alice and Jasper are next. See you then.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Labor Day

Sweet. Though I can't help but feel Carlisle isn't done yet.  Nice job on the labor/birth experience. Yea, it's definitely a more realistic birth experience.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can assure you that Carlisle won't be much of a problem from here on out, at least not for Edward and Bella. See you next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082124
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Sweet but too short as always.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Boohoo to those that don't like angst. (Really just kidding) I love the mystery and angst, otherwise stories can sometime be boring. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

So sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Sweet and hot!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awhh. Sweet. I feel the angst coming soon

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

Nice long chapter. Lol. Sad to know it's coming to an end.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Of course she'll say yes. She wants it even though she fights it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Kind of  good and let down at the same time. I really wanted Bella to be able to shoot James.  Sucked that he got to go on his terms and hi so he probably didn't suffer.  Too bad about Shelia, I'm sure she was another of James victims.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Sweet, everyone looking good. 

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Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Is Victoria a nice character in this story?  I still think it's James following or someone paid by James. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Sweet holiday. Alice, Lol. Now, what's up with Janes & Renee?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Bet it's James or Renee

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Sweet shooter.  Go Edward!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter too short. Maybe Bella has been going to rehab??

 

love the story, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Hot, steamy and very sweet!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

No angst yet but I feel it coming.

nice opening, thanks Alice.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Glad Charlie is here.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Oh yeah!!!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Cheesy but sweet 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Sad.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Sweet

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Can't wait for next chapt.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Awh. Glad Charlie is there. Bella needs lots of champions. And, ready for some drama.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Ahh, male bonding. Good.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Love the story and frequent posts. But it still feels like you are just getting in to it and it's done. Ugg.  Thanks, really enjoying it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Last three chapters have been good. I hope the date ends with more than a kiss.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Emmett will definitely be team Bella. She will help him heal as well.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Bella's going to find him at her house when she leaves the hospital.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Here's your 'Holla!'  Sweet chapt.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

So beautiful.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like lots of possibility. Love the banner.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Darn, wish the chapter was longer. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Jut caught up with thus story. Sounds interesting so far. I'll take the ride with you.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This is a fun read so far. Looking forward to the drama and, of course, the hot sex.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Yeah. I hope this helps her seek our help. It may make the difference now that she gas some support.

 

hopecully she has done support before the asshole James shows up.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Love it!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Love the car purchase. Serves the sales guy right for being an idiot!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Boys will be boys.  :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Wow. Is Charlie the husband?  Is he part of this?



Author's Response:

Charlie is the ex...he never really had a relationship with Bella, but a few conversations on her birthdays and Christmas. Only recently (Bella's birthday), did Charlie become a part of Bella's life again. Phil is the current husband and bats for the other team. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Too sad.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

sighing contentedly.  Indeed. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

So glad Bella is finally getting angry. All part if the healing process. Now she can fight back!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Sweet/hot

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

So nice to see things going well. But, where are James & Renee? Maybe they will wait until Charlie is there to strike. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

So glad he is there for support. Eager to meet Charlie and gain another protector for Bella.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I'm guessing Tonya.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Hmmm. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

How about dropping the towel!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Yeah, ready for some drama.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Yes, spicy lemonade please.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yum

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

He's a good decent man so he'll help her. That's when she'll confess why she did what she did. I see, maybe, another tissue alert coming.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Glad for some drama. Renee is a piece if work. Can't wait to see what Charlie does.  Hope RL gets better, it usually does with time.

 

best wishes!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Way to Es, Em, Ed & Gar. Friends & Family. Ugg, I dislike short chapters.  :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

72 chapters in, I think a lemon is warranted. Lol

 

lovin your work.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Charlie to the rescue. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Oh dear. I think we all know it was James. That means Bella is in grave danger....again.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Where is Renee???

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Nice!

ready for more drama and angst.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Nice

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Definitely bad guy.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

What's the deal with Laurant?  Somehow I think he's mixed up with James.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Who the heck is Laurant?  is he Jsmes in disguise or just paid by him?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Wondering how much of the story is left. Are we 50% though it yet?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Here is your lovin. I love this story. It's a quick read but not too quick. I would love a little more angst as you have set us up for so I'm guessing it will be coming our way  soon enough. I think Laurant is being blackmailed by James.  Or is simply teamed up with him. I'm scared for Bella, I can see one of them kidnapping her to torture and abuse her. I hope she gets to be the one to kill him.  And, where is her crazy mother?

Edward is definitely a hero and so is Bella. When is the proposal? 

 

Happy Holidays.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Laurant is going to happen!! Bad news. Somehow I think he's in cahoots with James & Renee. They will want $$ and Bella to suffer.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Shit, no!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Yes, definitely linked.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Ready for the drama.