Reviews by coulierb
Summary: Past Featured Story

Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96525
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2014 Updated: 31 Oct 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ahhh. Sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Slime. He needs to pay!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Uh oh, did something bad happen at the house while he was in school?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Go Esme. You rock!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Sweet

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good. Will Phil be back or us he done with?



Author's Response:

he will be back

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Sweet

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

:) sweet

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Sounds like everyone is accounted for, is this story coming to an end?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Just curious where this story is heading. More angst, drama, I see pregnancy in the future and prom.  What else??



Author's Response:

There will be drama, a bit of angst.. but will have a happy ending.. a wedding and college... a beautiful baby. :

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Sweet. Too young, but sweet.

Summary: Past Featured Story

swapping personalities

Illegal racing. Learning from mistakes. Living on the edge. Edward is forced to be part of an exchange student program to keep him out of juvie after he injured a man during a race. He decided to be good and change who he is, but can he do it? Especially when he’s surrounded by his only passion—cars.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71216 Read Count: 24030
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2014 Updated: 14 May 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Interesting. Will give it a shot. 

Haystack by AstridGreenEyes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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At the beginning, I didn’t know what was happening; I thought that it has to be a bad joke. Now, the only thing I know is that I have to be quiet. There are too many of them out in the alley. If they heard me, it could be my end. My mind started to wander to my friends. Poor Felix… I can’t even think about him without feeling sick. Those things ate him alive in front of me! I only could hope that this nightmare won’t reach my home town.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25481 Read Count: 12258
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2014 Updated: 10 Mar 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting, I'll take the ride.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bad Edward. :(

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nice. What about Rose? 

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Yeah baby!! Sorry to see this end but it was a very fun ride. Thank ypu

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes, he finally waking up. The anticipation was....long. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So I really like this story. I found it as a recommended Fic. Once I started I couldn't stop. Sorry I didn't review till I got caught up.  I'm never sure if writers only want new reviews.

Anyway, this story is fun, sexy and hot. It will be interesting to see what mischief Phil will try and pull. I'm hoping Edward comes to her rescue. And, poor star struck Seth... Lol

Summary:

This is a collection of short stories based on a picture or series of pictures. It doesn't have to be read in order. Find a chapter you like and enjoy.  It includes some non consentual sex and some aspects of horror. This is heavy BDSM. Please don't read if it isn't your thing. 18 and up please.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5000 Read Count: 49661
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 22 Sep 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Master's Training

Great start. Loved it! Pics too.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478047
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yeah, Charlie. But, what have they done to him?  Love this story, fun, funny, intriguing, mystery, love, family... It's got it all!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Still lovin it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So, the kids are her siblings. Humm, interesting. 

Looking forward to the demise of the Blacks.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intrigued, I'll go along for the ride.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Last two chapters were great. Loved all the action and mysteries solved. I hope the next love scene will be a little slower, they need time to enjoy.

 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What a fun story. I love quirky Bella and all her nicknames. 

It will be fun to see a pissed off "Stark." Lol

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Stephen King.

This story is a ton if fun. Would love longer chapters.

i think Jessica is up to no good and Bella will come to the kids rescue again. I also think Edwards family had something to do with Charlie's death. Have a feeling this might not always be so cute & funny.

Lovin it!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Fun chapter. Do you think he'll ever ask her why she calls him Stark?  Also, when will we see Jessica get canned? I think she is more that a sitter, I think a spy for bad guys. Probably blackmailed to do it. 

Would love another chapter today!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is the most fun story I've read in a long time. In hoping the humor continues with  heavy doses if angst, love and lust all mixed in.

I'm thinking she is working undercover but maybe for her own revenge. 

 

Great read, wish for more chapters faster. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She is protecting the kids from what she was exposed to. Just font know heat that is/was yet.

lovin the mystery. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just keeps getting better!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this story. So much fun to read. I would like to know who hurt Ursela and I hope it wasn't Stark or his associates, that would be low.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Getting to know you. Sweet

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So much fun. I think Stark is right, somehow his family hurt Bella. But, I also think she knows he is the mob boss.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes, lots if info. Glad they're sharing. So what a low life who would beat up an old lady. I guess no more is need to be said about that character except maybe carma will provide a just reward. 

I was surprised Stark told her about breaking the guys fingers. I look forward to learning more.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It will be interesting to see Stark watch her fight. Lol I'm sure.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank goodness for Esme. And, Bella needs the support.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hhummm 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Holy shit. No wonder they want her.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

You know, I thought this was gonna be another gangster story. And it is but, I'm loving the twist with Bella, her past and her genius. Looking forward to figuring out the rest if the story.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I love the sci-fi in this story. Separates it from the rest.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Go Bella. Are we going to learn just how smart she is? Or what happened to mske her that way? 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Ahhh, too sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

She is pregnant. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Too sweet! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

You rock!!!  Can't wait for more.

Summary:

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Bodies are piling up in Chicago all drained of blood. Chicago PD, the FBI and the BAU are baffled. One lone coroner is hell bent on solving this crime. With the help of an elite investigation team they will solve the crime. But following the blood trail could prove more dangerous than he thought. Will he be able to keep his feelings in check about his new partner? Will he survive?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21407 Read Count: 1220
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2014 Updated: 20 Dec 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Completely lovin this!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56065
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Liking it so far, this  should be a fun one. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks for this sweet and fun story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Something with angst and hot sex is preferrable. Lol

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201851
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?

Catching up on your story. Enjoying it a lot so far.



Author's Response:

Aww... thank you for reading and letting me that you're enjoying it. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!

Recently found this story and am now caught up. It's been lots of fun and looking forward to more.

thanks



Author's Response: Aww... you're welcome. And let me welcome you to my crazy world of OTC. :) The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Successful Lawyer Edward Cullen and college student Isabella Swan both have very dark and extreme appetites for pleasure. The two meet one afternoon and the attraction is instantaneous. Certain that the other will never accept their personal lifestyle choices, they fight the almost irresistible draw to one another not realizing that they both have more in common than they realize. NC-17 for a very good reason. Multiple partnering, non-canon kind of.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Romantic Comedy, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 223504 Read Count: 137434
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm new to your work. Been enjoying it very much. I'm hoping the story will start to pick up now that B&E konw how they each feel.

 

i see a threesome with the ladies happening...



Author's Response:

A three some could definitely be in the cards but I haven't decided yet.  We shall see.  Thanks for reading. I really appreciate it! 

Judgment Day by 2amlovesick2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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This fabulous banner was created by debzdezins. Thank you so much!

Three innocent people, each surviving day by day until their lives intersect. One man accused of a crime he didn't commit. A second man setup to save another. A young woman whose life is threatened, hiding from a killer on the loose. Connections are made. Bonds are formed. Each living with the hope to see their own Judgment Day. Canon pairing AH M for violence and adult content.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 314922 Read Count: 30028
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2014 Updated: 14 Mar 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Go Bella. Lol. Now, let's get back and save the boys.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

For what ever reason ffn wouldn't let me "review" for the last 36 hrs.  Just kept getting error messages. :(

It was sickening hearing Apep.  Not sure why he gave up so easily and spilled, but glad he did. if I were Edward I'm not sure I wouldn't have pulled the trigger, maybe even  just to be sure he could never kill again.  Ok, one more bad gut to go... 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

My thoughts when I wrote this was, since it finally registered Victoria would never be his and he saw Stefan behind her, the game was over. Then finding out Banner next and Yorkie had already spilled, why not just let it all out. He knows what awaits him. I honestly don't think you would have pulled the trigger if you were Edward. lol You seem much to level headed!

Thank you so much for continuing to read and comment. It makes my day.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

"Before Judgment Day, I feared the fires of Hell - After Judgment Day, I set the blazes and watch them burn"



How fitting!!



Author's Response:

OMG! I didn't think anyone was paying attention to my headings. Thank YOU!  LOL

I wanted you to know that I have tried to figure out how to send you a personal message to thank you for all the reviews you have left. Alas, I still can't figure it out. I hope you recieve notification of this note. I appreciate your time and comments so much. It has been a joy seeing you back each week. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So glad they are on to healing and finding justice. If we all had such a loyal group of friends.

great chapt. Loved how Edward and Emmitt state their intentions. And, the innocence between E & B is so sweet.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very much enjoying the complexity of this story. Really starting to get an idea how it all comes together. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your patience in the beginning of this story. I promise that from here on out you will be hearing from Edward and Jasper more. I just needed to get the characters who have a part to play in position. As someone said, 'All roads lead to Alabama.' Until next Saturday, have a great week. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank god. And, very sweet end of chapter.



Author's Response:

And now begins part two of this story. Thank you for reviewing. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So nice to see some goodness. Way to go Charlie.  I love the way you are bringing all these characters together. Wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Times are changing and the abuse is at an end. That's not to say everything will suddenly be rainbows and unicorns. There is much to do and I hope you like where I'm going to take this story.

I'm happy you liked Charlie's contribution for righting a wrong. One down and a few more to deal with. More connections will be made soon.

Thank you so much for reading and I hope I can keep your interest.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Wow. Edward got his chance to say his peace. Very elegantly said and from the gut. I also appreciate he got in a few punches.  You made his character so realistic believable and human.  So perfect!!  Of the 5 years I've been reading Fan Fic, this is in my top 5.  I just love it. Complex, well thought out, great plot, wonderful characters, historical,  family, friends and love. Just splendid.  I hate that it's coming to an end.

i hope you consider writing more.



Author's Response:

I have tears in my eyes, so humbled by your response. *Blowing out deep breathes - trying not to hyperventilate*  Wow - your top five. That is so incredibly amazing. Thank you so much for taking a chance on this story. Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU!

I do have other ideas for stories I'm currently fleshing out. However, I'm not a quick writer and I hope Lilith and Ficfangirl will be on board again. They honestly helped make this story so much better.  Again, thank you and I hope you enjoy how this story ends. It's different. :) 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting, I'll take the ride. 



Author's Response:

I hope I will be able to keep you interested.  Thank you so much for giving this a shot. I really do appreciate it. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very interesting story. I am enjoying getting to know all the characters. Should Be fun to see how they all come together. 



Author's Response:

All the characters are definately from different walks of life and have individual crosses to bear. I hope it will continue to hold your interest.

Thank you so much for giving it a try. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Heavy. Lots if history. Enjoying so far.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm so curious to see how this all pulls together. Very intriguing. 



Author's Response:

Think of film noir type movies. Double Indemnity, The Maltese Falcon or Laura. They are oldies but goodies. The plot does come together, I promise. Thank you so much for taking the time to read.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank god for modern day forensics. I wonder which one of the cops or judge is guilty of this crime. There gas to be a reason for seeing him convicted.

Now, let's see Esme, Carlisle and Rose break Edward free and flee to meet up with the rest if the gang. 

 



Author's Response:

Oh the choices are endless as to who the culprit is. I wish getting Edward out would have been as easy as that. Had I thought of it first that is. Alas, my poor brain didn't go there. :)  

Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate it very much!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

How much can one person take before giving up?  Rescue cannot come soon enough.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, very intense story. Now caught up and will review regularly.

There is still more we don't know. What is the relationship between Newton & Banner? That is the missing piece?  What foes Newton have over Banner? 

It's been fun watching how you brought all these characters together. I love Billy/Bella/Tonya. 

 



Author's Response:

Welcome back! 

Hmm, Newton and Banner. Is that the connection or is it something entirely different? I'd love to answer you, but that might ruin the plot.

I'm thrilled that you are enjoying and story and Bella's various personas.

Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate it so much. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Even though you know it happens, it's still hard to imagine people being so crule just because they can.

I hope Emmitt, leading by example, will show the other guards how respecting the prisoners will in turn allow them to return the respect.

srill trying to put the pieces together. Why frame Edward? Is the judge the murderer? Is it a family member???

 

Oh, and where is Charlie???

Lovin your story



Author's Response:

I agree with you at how crule people can be. Unfortunately, it still exists today.

Emmett is a fair man and seeks to right the wrong. Luckily, there are more people like him and you never know, sometimes even the most harden person can change their views.

You will be hearing about Edward's backstory in the next chapter. Some parts are based on a true family incident. You can decide if family had anything to do with his predicament. 

Charlie is not forgotten. He will be up in chapter after. 

Thank you so much for continuing to read. I appreciate very much!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow. The treatment really sucks. I hope they run soon. I feel bad things coming.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Cruel. It makes you wonder why god allows it.  How can man be so evil.



Author's Response:

The travesty is - I sugar coated how these men were treated. The reality is - it is a part of American history that has been glossed over or hushed up. We are the land of the free and most people would never think such barbarism could happen here. If you think about it, this was happening less than 100 years ago. That's not ancient history.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh no. He needs out! Well, he never should have been in the first place.



Author's Response:

Agreed on counts. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Go Warden. A just reward well earned. Hope the guy he shot is OK. So glad to see things movin on. Anxious to see where Charlie & Renee come back onto play.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I see more justice coming their way. Still eager to find out where Renee & Charlie are.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ahh, Newton is Riley. 

So glad Charlie & Renee are back. 

Excellent chapter. Emmit & Rose are great!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Aaww, that was freakin sweet. Nice!!!  Now I can't wait for E & B and E & R.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Loved the bank robbery. 

Niw it's all coming together. 

Ok, now we need B & E to get intimate. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Aww, too fucking sweet and innocent. Nice!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

The plot keeps unfolding nicely.  Lots of answers coming.  I hope Riose and Victoria will be safe. Although I believe Rose could kick some serious ass. It would be great if James was alive and we had another happily reunited couple.

Happy Holidays!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Good to know we're movin on. I feel like this story has been a epic tail. So involved with so many characters. Very well thought out. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Lots coming together now.  Looking forward to Bella being reunited 

with her parents and finding out who killed the girl.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I am still amazed at the complexity of this story. Captivating and very well written. 

Min eager to see what else you write once this is complete.



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a wonderful compliment. Now you know how convolited my mind is. hahaha I have written one other story and it's posted on another site. I might put it up after I edit the beginning a bit more. I didn't have Ficfangirl in the beginning or Lilith. Thank you, again. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh geez, I can't wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be good. Lol

I liked how Edward had the near panic attack in the courtroom. You don't miss any detail, nice. The banter between them all is great. I loved the quotes "To new beginnings" and "To our Independence Day." Both so fitting. 

I eagerly await the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for noticing the small details. To me it would be hard to return to where I was judged and condemned. I think it's uncanny that you mentioned 'To new beginnings' and 'To our Independence Day.' Those words play into the next chapter story line and the epilogues. Do I know you? Have you hijacked my computer? lol

I hope the last chapter gives you a good closure. The epilogues should tie up the loose ends. Thank you for your time and your comments. I appreciate you and them so much.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner courtsey of Fallingsnow Winter

Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ugh. I gate cliffies. Lol

loved how she handled Charlie and how she responded to Edwards speech at the press conference.  Oh, and escorting Charlie out, a small gesture of righting a wrong so long overdue.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This is turning out to be a beautiful story.  I'm new to your work but am enjoying it. Very different and incredibly funny at times.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm liking that Edward will redeem himself. And, Bella will stand up for herself against Charles. I would like to possibly see a sequal. We know almost nothing about the Cullen's. It would be intriguing to see B & E mix their real worlds up.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow. Edward, you certainly were hurt and pissed when you wrote that. How the fuck are you gonna revover this when it goes public? You used her and her fathers name.  I see more articles will need to be written to fix this...if that's even possible.

Nicky written.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well, Michael hit the nail on the head didn't he.  Jealousy... I hope it takes more than an in sorry for this to be fixed.

I'm not surprised to see Bella react this way for her grandfather. He was always the one who showed he cared. 

great chapter.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Can she forgive Edward?  Can he forgive himself? Was it really because of jealousy that he wrote the article? Really.... Wouldn't he have had time to think about his action before he submitted???

 

i think there's a lot left to figure out, hope it's not going to end soon.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Awesome. Loved the ending, very comical!!!  Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've not read anything from you all that I haven't loved. So count me in on this one too. So far I like "Newton" the dog. And obviously Edward may regret telling the police where the kids are. 

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126011
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Humm, can't decide if I like Edward or not. For sure he is changing.  But, oh my, how he kills is disturbing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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She's haunted daily, but learns to deal with her gift, helping those in need. He hides behind his opinions, seeking closure, barely living. When their worlds collide, can they help each other? A story of loss, love, and betryal with a supernatual twist.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43076 Read Count: 10308
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 04 Jul 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: No Words

I'll bite. Sounds like a good read. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Two troubled pasts that took different paths. She takes life by the horns and tries to live it to the fullest. He hides away on the mountaintop, rough all around. What happens when they meet? What happens when their worlds’ collide?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: mamih's favorites
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55154 Read Count: 24661
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jul 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Crash

Wow, really liked it. Very different Bella, almost ashperger's the way she talks. And Edward, does he loose time??? I'll keep reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward are both at a crossroads in life; either move forward or forget about what once was.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2475 Read Count: 1044
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2014 Updated: 03 Jun 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can see the possibilities....

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29435
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Land of Confusion

So nice to have another chapter. You've beeen missed. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: My Month in Review

Yum.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: The Way You Look Tonight

She's had a good week. Still don't like Christian being nice/sweet with his subs. But, I do like the content of the story. And, hiw well written it is.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: The Wisdom of Our Elders

Hmm. Is meeting the ex pivotal?  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Never, Ever

You go girl!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Fire and Ice

Wow, what an emotional release. Very interesting take on how BDSM can help. I love this aspect. But, it almost seems like Christian is having an emotional tie to Severine???

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Doing Penance

This is such a different take. Thank you for showing how BDSM can work without the romantic emotions. It's also interesting to see Christian with a sub before Ana and learn more about how he is the way he is.