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Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

Favorite Scream


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130015
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

Too bad we didn't get more Felipe, he seems like he woukd be a fun character. I'm sure Edward is going to make graduation. It will be sad when it's over.

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87100
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Not really sure if this is a new chapter or repost. Wondering if this story will continue??

Summary:

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Edward Masen is a normal 17-year-old boy who dreams of becoming a soldier, but when tradegy strikes his family, his entire life changes. Edward is introduced to the supernatural world he had no idea even existed, and he certainly doesn't want to live in it.

It was during the month of March in the year of 1918 that the first signs of the influenza was revealed to the public, although no one ever imagined the damages this historic event would have on the American people.
One citizen in particular faces an irrevocable change that cause a chain of e...vents to unfold through the twentieth century. The price was to give up his old life, but he would later gain more than he ever thought he would.

A Pre-Twilight Canon story about the life of Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Angst, Family, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight Origins
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117254 Read Count: 14589
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 20 Aug 2019
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Continue to enjoy your work.  Lovely to capture this part of their lives.  Not sure I'll like it when it gets to the time when he meets Bella and this ends.

 



Author's Response: What a compliment! :-D Thank you so much!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I'm new to this story and have been enjoying these last few hours.  I didn't read the original version so I have nothing to compare it to.  Is very well done!  I'm looking forward to reading your other work and the next chapter of this story.  I've never read one that spans this time in Edwards life.  It nicely fills the gap.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I am enjoying your story very much. I Read lots of ff but never have read a Twilight ff from this prospective. It's a delight and look forward to more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a single father and a police officer in Rock Island, Il. His new neighbor is his boss, Mike. What happens when Edward thinks Mike is beating his wife, Bella? Can Edward help save Bella? Does Bella need to be saved? Written for Jess2002, happy birthday to our friend. AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66334 Read Count: 26445
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 19 Jul 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

New reader to your work and enjoying it.  I think In this story Mike is not really her husband but her protector in a witness protection program waiting for rgd trial.

Could be way off but... will see.

 

 

Give Me Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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One shy virgin Edward, one confident Bella who wants to help Edward out. When sexual boundaries are crossed between these two friends, what will happen? (DRABBLE FIC Updated daily.)    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19286 Read Count: 50602
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this should be fun!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334476
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

Starting out very sweet & innocent. Wonder how long it will stay that way???  Hope it's a great love story with lots of drama and griwing oains along the way.

slready eager for more. 



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone seems to be loving the story and we are so happy about that.  Not a lot of questions asked this go around, but there will probably be some more by the next chapter.  This story will be somewhere between twenty and thirty chapters when complete.  We mentioned this will post once a week on Mondays.  If for some reason Kasi can’t post Monday morning, it may post late Sunday night.  The Cullen’s are very accepting of Edward’s choices in life and his lifestyle, therefore yes the Cullen’s would be good to Bella if she were to be around them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we look forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story goes.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

It's easy to see she is submissive but...I hope she is also portrayed as very strong. I see great things happening in both their futures. Edward, keep protecting her, not controlling her. 



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it. It was a pretty mild scene but I loved how you showed both sum & master errors. Yeah Bella for answering!! 

I think you are setting us up for the inevitable confrontation that Tanya & Bella are fated to have. Bella will handle it with grace. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We were very glad to see that the major majority of you are no longer questioning Edward’s abilities to do the right thing.  The next chapter is the chapter that will really set things into motion.

 We have had some concerns brought to our attention regarding the fact that Bella talks to Edward about herself in third person.  We are not saying that EVERY submissive talks to their Dominant in third person, but the research we’ve done, more often than not it is the way it is.  Keep in mind that we’ve spoken to Dominants and submissives alike during our research.  In this story Bella has a photographic memory, she could have read any number of books which reference the usage of third party speaking as a natural way to show submission.  Neither of us is saying anyone else should do this, but in this story Bella is quite the natural at speaking as a submissive. 

Some have suggested that Edward try to just be a boyfriend and not a Dom to Bella.  Edward will discuss all of this with her soon, we assure you that no stones will be left unturned.  Chapter eight you will get to meet Charlie, but first we will have a turning point in seven that many of you have been asking for and suggesting since chapter two. 

There have been a lot of comments and references about the neglect Bella has withstood from her ‘family’.  When Nikky and I first talked about this story I wanted us to play up the neglect, because it is a huge amount of the way many children live.  I have shared with everyone, in the author’s notes and review replies, that I was a victim of neglect.  When I talked about my own experiences it was not for your sympathy it was to say that I know it happens.  I want to say thank you to all of you who have made mention of my past abuse, and send hugs to those who have shared some of their own stories with us.  Not everything Nikky and I write about Bella happened to me, and as an adult I had a moderately decent relationship with my parents.  I cannot say that Bella will, or that this story will end with her having contact with her biological parents. 

We hope this addresses the majority of your concerns and or questions.  We will see you next week with a pivotal chapter in the story! 

Much love, Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:
“Please, excuse me, I need to take this,” I inform Aro and move away while answering my cell. “Beautiful, how are you this evening?”

I don’t hear a reply, but I can hear music in the background.

“Ah, shit! That hurt,” Bella’s voice comes across the line, but it sounds off and slurred.

“Bella, are you okay?” I ask alarmingly, already moving toward the exit.

“Oh, this ... weird ... I was going to call you.  I feel ... real funny ... strange.  My head ... hurt and ... I feel ... um ... so dizzy ...”

I see Felix standing guard close to the door and I head to him. “Bella, I’m on my way.  Stay on your cell.”

I pull my cell away from my mouth before speaking to Felix. “I need to go. Find Aro tell him I had to leave, he will assist you in any details you need.  Let him know he is in charge.”

He gives me a nod, and I exit the door and run to my car.

“Okay, Beautiful, stay right where you are and stay on the phone with me. I’m on my way to you.” I try to take some deep breaths to calm myself. “Where are you, Beautiful?” I start my car as I switch my cell to hands-free.

“I ... hum, bathroom ... I think. Fuck ... it’s warm in here.”

I know right now it is best to keep her talking. “Have you been drinking?” I ask frowning, because I know even when I’m out with her, Bella does not drink much.

“Nope ... I am ... a goo ... girl ... I swear ... Sir, no ... drink-ies ... for me.”

“There you are! I was wondering where you got off to. Who are you talking to?” I hear a male’s voice ask, and I move my car a little faster.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love how just knows what she needs. If all men were so I tuned with their women this world would be a better place. Lol. I was appalled to find out this allergy has happened to her four times. How many were intentional?? Renee,,,what a piece of work. She is simply jealous. Why the hell does Phil stay???  I'm with Edward, Jacob has something bad planned. 

Thanks for this story, I can't get it fast enough. :)



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

Wow, another great chapter.  It will be interesting to see the reasons behind why Bella's family did this to her.  It will also be interesting to find out about her college mates and what happened at Harvard.  You would think bullying was over in highschool.  Just wait until all those people see her with Edward. The women will be jealous. 

I think we will see more of Tanya.  She is evil with no concept of love.  She won't be happy Bella has Edward.

Also can't wait to watch these two fall in love and mesh their lives.  She has the makings of a strong woman and spectecular submissive.

Very eager for more.  Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent!



Author's Response:

Well it seems like more and more of you are hating Bella’s parents.  That is quite understandable, but you haven’t even met them yet.  Yeah you get to meet them.  Form your opinions after you do.  The back story of what happened at Harvard will come out, soon.  You will also get to see more of the sweet side of our DomWard in upcoming chapters.

We had people worrying about throwing Bella right into scenes and such, we want to assure you that there is no way we could write that, because there is no way she could do that.  This story starts in September, and they will be friends first.  Edward has feelings for her, but he knows she is quite broken.  Have some trust in us, we are not perfect but we do try to provide a decent story worth reading.

We’ve had a lot of people asking about chapter count, and posting time frames.  At this point we are saying around 25 chapters.  There are 14 written and once we have it fully written we will post much more often.  We could easily post up to chapter 12 right now, but then you would be stuck waiting for 13 and on up.  We would rather put you on a week wait now, than have to say, sorry we got writers block no chapter this week.  We purposely started posting after we had 10 chapters written for a reason. 

We’re going to start giving teasers like we did for His Cimmerian View, and this is the first teaser and it is unannounced, so enjoy.

Nikky and Kasi~

 

I chuckle, before leaning in to whisper to her.  “These are exhibitionist submissive and Dominants that are in these. There are many showing different scenes—new things—teaching methods.  Some have sex in them, but unlike porn these, or most of them I should say, are collared pairings, who have been together for a long time and both agreed to do this.  There are some that are of a submissive that is into humiliation.  They’d meet with the Dom several times and build a trust between them, before these filmed scenes take place.  There’s always a contract between both parties, and both are screened for STDs beforehand.”

Bella looks at the DVDs and then back at me.  “Are you in any of them?” she asks, her voice is soft and low.

I look at her shaking my head.  “No, I’ve never done that.  Well, I never had someone taking pictures or a video of it anyway.  I have done a few scenes with my sub at the time.  When I’m not with a collared sub, like my current situation, I’ve done scenes with submissives’ whom I have a good relationship with from my club.  I’m due to do a teaching scene about rope bondage and spanking at the club three weeks from now.  No matter how many scenes I participate in, the one thing I don’t do is have sex during a public scene.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can't wait to see about Charlie. Seemes like Bella adores him, but not so much her mother.  Edward is being a true gentleman. I love how he dished Lauren & Jessica.

This is a beautiful story, I look forward to seeing hiw it mixes with the BDSM world.  Edward is clearly already falling in love with her.  

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey everyone thanks for reading and reviewing.  There have been several questions and some we can’t fully answer to not give away too much about the story and where we’re taking it.  But let’s start off with the easy stuff.  This will be about 25 chapters in total, give or take a few and we update every Monday or very late Sunday night.  There are many questions regarding the scene that Edward will be participating in.  It is a scheduled demo, teaching session.  We don’t want to give away any info on the scene as of yet, but trust us that there will be nothing remotely sexual about it for Edward at all.  The submissive which will be a part of the exhibition will not in any way shape or form, want or try to keep Edward as their own.  As for more info on Bella’s parents and why they are the way they are, you all really have to be a little patient, you haven’t even met them yet.  There are a LOT of seriously wicked guesses as to what is going on and why things are the way they are, but so far nothing is dead on correct.  You can join us on Facebook, search for the group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Hope you enjoy the teaser... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  The rest of the night goes slowly and my mind often deviates back to Bella.  I end up texting her just to have some communication with her.

Beautiful. How was work tonight?  Did you get much work done for college?  I just finished eating some of the lovely apple pie that you made me. It was truly one of the best I’ve ever tasted. Thank you.  ~Edward

I try to focus on my work, but find myself unable to stop looking at my cell. I close the club and head home.  I’m sad and upset that she didn’t respond to my text. By the time I get home, I feel even more upset and even angry.  I wonder why she wouldn’t text me back.  Thinking over reasons, I make a mental list. 

Have I scared her off? No, I don’t think that’s it.  She wouldn’t have agreed to meet up with me if I had scared her.  From what I see and know of her, she doesn’t ignore people, so that can't be it. 

Maybe her phone is out of minutes.  Now this is more possible, because her cell is one of those cheap pay-as-you-go ones and she has little money.  If that’s the reason, then there is no way for her to call or text me back.  Do dorm rooms come with a phone in them? Not really sure about that, I’ll have to check.  I know she is the type of person that would try to keep money on her cell and would say if she was low.  She has often said she needed to switch her phone off because she was low on minutes. 

Maybe she fell asleep and is a deep sleeper.  It has been after midnight when I texted her.  She did say she was normally home before eight and in bed by ten most nights.  Yep, that must be it.  She’ll most likely text me once she’s awake.  I’m sure she’ll feel bad that she missed my text.  One thing is for sure, she doesn’t need me being on her ass like white on rice.

I feel myself calming down after thinking over the theories, and I decide to head to bed.  I wake up and look at my phone seeing it's a little after seven in the morning, but I still don’t have a text from Bella.  I frown and let out a sigh as I rub my face, knowing that I need to get moving.  I’m supposed to be meeting my dad at nine for breakfast, because he won’t be able to attend dinner tonight.

I get showered and dressed all while glaring at my cell.  I see that there is still no incoming text. I text my father to say that I’m on way, and ask if he could text me back to be sure he got my message.  I frown even more when he's answering my text minutes later.  Well, that takes away the newest theory that my cell is not receiving incoming text messages.

I arrive at the hospital and see dad is waiting for me.

“What was the texting all about?”

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love your story. It's truly one of my favorites. I can't wait to see this beautiful relationship develop. I love BDSM stories but much is not written in a positive light like I like to read. Kink & a good love story does it for me. :)

As for the rest, you have my admiration for surviving your upbringing. You could have lived your life as a victim or survivor and its clear to see what path you chose. Be very proud of yourself!!

Lastly, this is a work of fiction, maybe some of it is based on real life experiences. But don't we all do this? This is our frame of reality, it's what we lived. 

As for your story, screw all the negative comments. If readers can't be politely constructive then they aren't worth the time it too to type their response.  If they don't like, leave!!!!

Thank you for sharing your awesome talent. I would pay $$ to read it.



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's about time she gets out of there. Can't wait to meet Charlie. I'm trying to be non judgmental but really...how could a father let that happen or at least stand by and do nothing after the fact.  It must be a good story. 

MI love this Bella character, way too sweet and innocent. She is good for Edward. It's gonna be a great ride watching these two.



Author's Response:

Many of you are questioning how Jessica knows so much about Bella.  Bella and Jessica are both from Forks.  Jessica is jealous of Bella, because Bella beat her out for valedictorian.  Jessica was always the smartest of her class, until Bella came along.  Several years younger and doesn’t even have to try in order to surpass her academically.  Bella got all the best scholarships and awards, all things Jessica wanted.  When the stuff happened at Harvard, of course Jessica heard about it, and being from Forks she certainly knows Jacob.  A lot of you want retribution in blood or however it can be gotten.  Rest assured that what comes around goes around, but as long as Bella is close enough for them to hurt, Edward will keep his cards close to his chest. 

Things are progressing well, and where this is a slow burn thing will heat quicker now that she lives there.  It’s still a slow burn, but no longer dragging feet pace.  For the record, Edward does want her to go to supper and meet his family, but he is tense about it because his family is very in your face caring and loving and Bella is not used to that type of family interaction.  Edward doesn’t know it yet, but he loves her.  Be patient and you will see this, I assure you.  Next chapter will post on Sunday, see you then. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Yes, my girl performed a special dance for me earlier. She said she would, with our approval, teach something similar to Sulpicia.” Aro gets a dreamy look on his face and grins even wider at me.

“Yes, there have been talks about that dance your girl performed since I arrived earlier. If you are in agreement with your girl doing this, then so am—” Aro gets cut off with the ringing of his cell phone. “Speaking of my pet,” Aro says before he answers, “Sulpicia,” he says answering the call. 

Before he says another word he looks to me as if he is concerned. “Yes, I’m with him right now,” he stops talking and has a look of anger coming across his face. “Keep her as calm as you can. Edward and I will be with you both soon.” I look to him as he talks and close his cell.

“Sulpicia is at Bella’s work. From what I can gather, there is some money and belongings that have gone missing.  Her boss checked out the staff lockers and found a laptop that another staff member claims was hers in Bella's locker.”

I nod at him, but I know my girl and she is no thief. It only takes us a short time to reach Bella’s work.  As I walk in my eyes fall on Lauren and Jessica, standing together.  As I look at Lauren, I see she has the laptop I bought Bella.

I smirk and move over to them. “That's my laptop and I don’t believe I gave you permission to touch it.” Both girls look my way and Lauren glares at me.

“No, this is mine. Look, it has my name on it.” I raise my eyebrow at her as she turns it and shows me the stupid sticker displaying her name.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yes, I would lead the get Charlie & Jacob mob.  I'd add on Leah too.  Lol

This is currently my favorite Fic for so many reasons. I look forward to every new chapter. 

I would love to see Bella pursue a college degree that she desires. Doesn't have to be dancing but it would be interesting for her to do something she chose for herself, by herself. Especially with what we know of her intelligence level. I'd hate to see her a 24/7 housewife or slave/submissive. We already know she will be/is a brilliant submissive. 

Thanks 



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another beautiful chapter. Loved the dance and the surprise at the end. Wonder how he is going to handle it. We know she isn't ready. 



Author's Response:

Well it seems the majority of you really liked this chapter.  There was some confusion regarding Edward’s family, they all really love Bella, but have been warned to not be too handsy or huggy with her, because it is nothing she is used too.  Please don’t fret, Edward’s family is there and will be there to support Bella.  Lots of you still want instant retribution for Bella against everyone who has hurt her, but please be patient Rome wasn’t built in a day.  As always our update schedule is every Sunday night/Monday morning, so far I have been able to post every Sunday.  There is a lot of stuff going on and things will be interesting here very soon.  A lot of people were surprised by Bella’s actions of kneeling naked in his playroom, but only Bella knows what she wants.  Edward wants her there is no doubt about that, but he wants her to want him for herself—not just because she thinks this is what he wants.  Edward has a fine line to walk, but he is not stupid and will handle this situation accordingly.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:
I glance down at my cell, when it rings seeing that it says Beauty.  I frown, because I know that she should be about to start her last class.

“Beautiful, is everything alright?” I ask worryingly.

“Renee called, I didn’t pick up.  I was unsure if you wanted me to call you first or if it was just Charlie. I’m sorry, I just thought ...”

I smile and sit back down.  “No, Renee wasn’t on the list, but I’m glad that you called.  Please wait until I’m with you before calling her back.  I will make a list of people of who you are not to answer to, it’ll make it easier for you—us.” I hear Bella clear her throat a few times. “Is there anything else, Beautiful?”

I hear a light chuckle. “You know me so well.  Two things, one I want to know what would happen if I skipped my next class, and second, they want me to see Mr. Whitlock, Jasper, sometime today.”  I can hear in her voice there’s something more and I know this may need a face to face talk. “I am on my way to make an appointment with Jasper right now.”

I smile a little and grab my car keys.  “I coming and getting you from Jasper’s office, stay there until I arrive.”

“I will, Sir ... it’s, oh, Jacob,” Bella says.

“Well, hello there, Isabella.”

I move faster towards my car.  “Don’t speak to him.  Go into Jasper’s office and hand Jasper your cell,” I say to her, while Jacob was talking.

“I’m sorry, but he’s blocking my path.”

I let out a sigh, and start my car. 

“Who are you talking to?  Not that old guy?  Is he still fucking you?  I’m surprised he’s been able to keep himself hard around your whore ass.”

I grit my teeth together. “Shout Jasper’s name now,” I say as Jacob rattles on.  When I hear nothing coming from Bella, I put on a firm voice.  “Now, Little Girl, scream for him and hand him your cell.”

“Jasper!” I hear Bella yell.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Finally, I'm glad for the girlfriend as well as the submissive. I hope he makes love to her first before the playroom. I wonder what Jacob is doing. Something definitely not good I'm sure. 



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really really like this story. It's so refreshing to see a Dom depicted as a kind person. Aro too.  Not the stereotypical "bad" guy. Not sure about Renee yet... Need to see more. If I had my way I'd have a new chapter everyday... Thanks. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Renee is a fruitcake!!  Glad Edward is helping Bella learn to stand up to her. Humm, I like where there sitting to watch the game... Sounds like Edward will have some fun w/ his girl.



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She will say Hell no!!!  Should prosecute Renee!!!



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good chapter. Too bad for Eleazar. He needs some good lovin. The wedding was nice and glad Esme got to give it to Renee. Well deserved. Except, I wonder if Renee has a mental health disorder. That could throw on a wrench.



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ok. So here goes. I really thought he would have taken her on a romantic date then made love to her and I thought it wasn't suppose to be in d/s mode.  Not that it wasn't hot, I was just a little disappointed. I was waiting for the romantic date leading up to THE moment. 

Regardless, I love this story and anxiously await the retrobution that is to come. 



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The hint is the wedding ring. The world would be a better place if we all has this Edward. Swoon. 

I think Bella will fight back if Jacob & Paul attempt to touch her before Edward can get to her. 



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

How did they get onto the club and how did they get Bella in the room. And, how did the emergency buzzer get triggered. 



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Go Bella. Nice job with Charlie and all. I see all are getting done of what they deserve. Karma is a bitch well served cold. I hope ore to come. 

Also, this is the first Fic where James isn't the bad guy, that is a different twist. Nice. 



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved the retrobution Jacob & Paul received. Karma... Seems like they are all getting some payback, clever! The only one I worry about now is Sue. She doesn't seem so evil, I wonder what Charlie has on her to make her behave as she has? 

Looking forward to the wedding. Btw, I love the Seth character, sweet boy. 



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Charlie killed Harry. What I'd like to know is how Sue fits into this? Seems like she may have been forced into it or somehow is/was tring to protect Leah who is definitely mentally messed up.  Maybe Sue let Seth go knowing he was alright with Bella & Edward to try and protect/get help for Leah.

Thanks for all the mystery, it's been lots of fun so far. 



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This one was packed. I thought it might be the last. This has been an amaizingly fun, dramatic, suspensful and lust filled story. I look forward to the last couple of chapters and to reading more from you all in the future.

best wishes for a safe & happy holiday season.



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm sorry to see this coming to an end. It is a beautiful story.  

I loved the Rose Ceremony, very tender and meaningful.

 

Happy New Year to you and yours.  I hope 2014 brings more of your talent our way. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thank you for this wonderful story. It was full of angst, drama, family,

lust and love. Thank you for portraying the BDSM community in such a positive and loving story.  

The only thing that could have been better would have been to be able to read it from start to finish in one setting. It was torture to wait week by week. LOL

I look forward to reading more from you all in the future. Bless you and Happy New Year!!

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110632
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Just caught up on the last four chapt. For some reason I stopped receiving notices of new chapters. Back on track now. I was surprised to see such a time shift.  interesting to see where this goes. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

I guess she should have told him about going to her dads. I wonder about his job. It hasn't been discussed since he came back. And, really, they should just do it.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hate & love. So will he let up now?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ok. Fun chapter. I loved when Bella decked Alice. I'd love to learn more about Jasper and their relationship. Especially when Alice said Jasper had a "freak out." I'd love to know more about that.

Now, seeing as Edward can't really defend his nasty behavior towards Bella any more, I wonder how this will change him. And, his relationship with her family.  His jerk behavior can no longer be justified.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Enjoyed this one, eager to read more from you.

Summary:

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Edward hasn't been with a woman in two years, and is looking for a companion. Edward finds himself at the Lonely Hearts Bar. Will Edward find a companion to share his night with? Or, will it turn into more than he bargained for?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/OC, Bella/Edward, Edward/OC
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20217 Read Count: 1714
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Aug 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Escape from Quattro Amore

Interesting. 

Summary:

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Banners by: Le Crepuscule

 

SUMMARY:  A twisted tale of a trio of people who all crave the other in many different ways and how they become an Eternal Trinity. AH/M


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10128 Read Count: 8777
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Aug 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This could be fun to see continue.

Summary:

Banner by: Le Crepuscule.

 

SUMMARY: Three childhood friends, take their friendship to a higher level. How will things fit together when another person gets added to the mix? Will it be the end, or a brand new beginning? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Alice
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Femme Slash, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9158 Read Count: 7466
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Aug 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful love story. 

Summary:

 

Bella slips from her husband in the middle of the night escaping the grasp of her abusive husband and father. Fearing she will never escape the long arms of the law, Isabella does everything in her power to get as far away as possible. With a little help along her way, Isabella finally finds the heaven and the life she always wanted.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5369 Read Count: 1375
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2013 Updated: 17 Sep 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Escaping Hell

Very much going to enjoy this story. 

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54712
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

No, I don't like Garrett. He totally blew off Bella. And, his father, did they not think about anyone who had helped him? Poor Bella. Edward will be back for her soon.  :)



Author's Response:

Garrett will grow on you--eventually!  And Carlisle too--don't be too hard on him.  He's only thinking of taking care of his son, and getting him home where he thinks it's safe.  It's a father's natural reaction to pull their children close!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Last chapter it felt like Bella was not given even a simple courtesy. I'm glad to see it wasn't intentional. I like Carlisle as a good guy. Hopefully Edward & Bella can connect next chapt.



Author's Response:

No, it certainly wasn't intentional.  Garrett and Carlisle had a completely different POV on the situation, and they acted out of their love for Edward.  And he remembers and wants to talk to her!  That's got to be good, right?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Sad to see it end but have enjoyed the trip. Looking forward to the epi & out takes. Hope to read more from you in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Recently found your work. Have really enjoyed this story and hope to see more soon. 

ill be checking out your other work.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Charlie is my hero. Go dad!!!

If Only by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

IO

 

*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

"Come over, I need you. Now." As always, I go to her. Except this time, it may be the last. I love her deeply, but I don't know if I can do this anymore. Each goodbye is harder than the last one. I want more than just being hers behind closed doors. If only we could truly be together; if only we were meant to be. 

AH/OOC, Told in EPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17231 Read Count: 7973
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Almost Is Never Enough

So... I Don't want to hurt you but...  I woukd like to know what hold Riley has on bella.  And, I know they love each other but Edward needs to stop being a door mat and allowing himself to be stepped on.  Not to mention Irena...

Well, you do know how to get people to feel. lol 

thanks



Author's Response:

Hi there Coulier! Oh hun, thanks for being sweet and saying you dont want to hurt me. You didnt hun, not at all. I have gotten worse reviews for this fic. Well, not mean towards me but just towards the Bella character, haa. But, I understand why. Soon, you and everyone will find out what the deal is with Riley and Bella, I promise. Hmm, I get why you feel that way about Edward, I dont think hes really a doormat, hes just too deeply in love and definitely not good at decision making, lol. I am flattered when you said I know how to get people to feel, thanks. I try my hardest, haa. For real, I wanted to be real as it gets with this fic. I dont usually write perfect characters. I like them flawed, it makes it all the more real.

Thanks for giving this story a chance, I really appreciate it. Thank you for the review too! ~Leslie

What If by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wi

What would happen if Bella is in college when the Cullens came? What if Carlisle is acting his age? What if Twilight starts now, but with a twist, a huge twist named Carlisle Cullen?

A/J, R/EM Es/? C/B E/? All will be revealed later.

This story was inspired by Feral Blood.  It was dicussed with the writer of the story and she endorsed it.  I have in no way try to steal anything from that wonderful story, but her Carlisle opened me up to a totally different world and made it where I wanted to write and read Bella with other characters.  Thank you…

Banner is made by MMsimpy09.  She is trying to help me out, and works with me to do the Banners.  If you are interested, her site is here:

Meg’s Modern Art

This Disclosure is for all stories contained under this heading: Twilight is the property of Stephenie Meyers. All characters belong to her, the plot of this is my own.

For more information, check out my website: http://kittyinaz.wordpress.com/

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106015 Read Count: 22612
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Feb 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

New to this story.  Interesting take on the whole saga.  Enjoying it.

Summary:

Bella and Edward were the very best of friends in High School but when Prom came their lives changed. Now nine years later they both struggle with the mistakes from their past that has separated them. Can they find one another and save their friendship? They need to forgive themselves before they can forgive each other. Rated M for adult themes including abuse.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158404 Read Count: 36867
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 15 Apr 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Hi. I just found this story and have been reading it over the last couple days. I really enjoyed it. There were a few twists and turns I didn't expect which made it all the better.  I'm looking forward to reading more if your older stories and the newer ones.

 

thanks for sharing your amaizing talent.

Summary:

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When you met the right one nothing else matters but what if he is the undead and you are already in a relationship>


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35801 Read Count: 5629
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- The Birth of a Vamp

Interesting story. Difficult to follow at times but, overall enjoyable. I would have enjoyed the revenge. Lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Off to the Show - Chapter 18

Just found your story. Love it so far. I'm looking froward to reading more.

thanks for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Jeopardy- Chapter 20

I hope you haven't given up on continuing this story. 

 

There are many if eager for more...please 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Surprise!

Nice. Ana, did you really think you could hide using the car from him. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 23: French

So nice to have this next chapter. I'll be checking out your new book. Thanks for coming back.

Summary: Past Featured Story

svo

I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 72371
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ~ How to ask a vampire if you're dating

Too damn cute! I love it. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 ~ Wrapped Up

Love it!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

Yeah. So stubborn. Very well thought out on both sides. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 ~ That's Not Creepy

Have been enjoying your story the last couple days. A little slow moving but very enjoyable. Will stay along for the ride.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ Stay?

You know by the title I didn't think I would like this so much. But, I'm very much enjoying it. Just wish for updates sooner.

thanks for sharing your vision.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 ~ Getting Back To “Normal”

Closer and closer. Trying to have major patience waiting for the moment they give in to their feelings.

living every chapter :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 ~ Things Are Getting Weirder

Enjoying this very, very slow burn.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ Flushed Faces

Ahh , we're getting there. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 ~ Two Way Street

Sweet chapt. Mix between loving and hating the pace if the chapters. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

Sweet. Oh, this is a long, long wait... 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 ~ A Night To Remember

Sweet. Love the long chapters. Will it pick up speed anytime soon?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 ~ In the Eyes of the Beholder

You've been missed :)

another delightful chapter. Enjoying the slooowwww burn!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~The Start of Summer

So nice to have a new chapter, thank you.  This is certainly a slow burn.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983155
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Always good but way too short. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Bella us figuring it out. Why the hell is she fighting it?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

You got to take Paul down. Obviously Bella is not the first victim.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Fun chapter. Way too short. Sorry for complaining about that. Just when it gets good it done. Love it but frustrating. Oh well :). Bring it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

It was fun to see some of Jasper's family. Ridiculous snobs. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Yum!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

This is a fun story. I just caught up with it now, thanks to the recommended fics. My only complaint is the chapters are way too short.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Now we need to find someone for Em. Wonder what real excuse Rose has for what she's done. That could be an interesting story.

finally E & B are on the right track.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Yeah, finally!!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Good as always, just too short.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Good riddance. This is one of the least favorable Rosalie characters ever. Glad to be rid of her. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Sweet!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Nice

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

I can't wait for the time Bella us confident enough to tell Paul off. Somehow he should have to be accountable for cohersing his students. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

So sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Keep working on her. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Just saying...I'm with you!

hot!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Report him so he can't do it to others. B is lucky she didn't get an STI from the scum bag.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Way to go Bella. Longer chapter next time... Please.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Fluff :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Love it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Um, yeah baby. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Oh my.  He's wearing her down. While he's at that they need to take down the disgusting teacher.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Hiding out. Hopefully. I'd hate to see anyone kill him, that would prevent the well deserved trial and humiliation he'd have to go through.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Nice job Bella! 

And yes, The Rover was good. Rob have an amazing performance. Didn't matter if he was dirty or a little slow. I'd take him anyway I could get him.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Nice!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

Yeah. Got to love a happy ending. 

Thanks for the great read. Can't wait to see what's next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101884
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ok, way to make us cry!  I guess that means it's all happy from here??  Anyway, I'm in.

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

devil

Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

dvl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52216
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intrigued... More please. 

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

dl

Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97744
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bastard!!! What, now he's gonna keep her a prisoner? Is he gonna torture her too?

Will he force her to have sex...ahhh that would be too much.

thanks for the great angst...love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96526
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2014 Updated: 31 Oct 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She'll never be able to hide it from him. She's 18. Get OUT of there. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Hmm. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, shocked he could let her go home. What doe Phil have on her that she won't leave? I get the self esteem but does he threaten her mother??