Reviews by coulierb
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113783
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So glad to have you back.  I hope things continue to get better.  You are truly missed.

thank you for making these characters human.  I like how Bella snapped at Edward, we all know she didn't nean it, it was just the stress.  I love how Drea is taking care of Max.  Way to go!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Peter is just creepy.

I'm hoping Rio will be one of the hero's of the story. 

The girls spying was fabulously funny!!! I'm surprised threats of punishment weren't thrown at the girls. 

Missing d/s play but ready to get to the drama. 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just love your stories!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It's good to see them connecting again. Too special to let that fail. 

Cant wait to see shat the kids will do...once E&B are back together of course.

The Broken Road That Led Me To You is a great story. Hard to read (sad, shocking, gut wrenching,etc.). We don't give these women enough credit for how incredibly strong they are.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Pretty light chapter but I think sets up a lot that is to come. I just hope all the Cullen's come out safe. 

Glad to see Jack met someone, just hope they both finish school.

Hope the next chapt is up soon.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Those crazy people have Seth & Jesse. I'm shocked that Bella and Sue, Edward for that matter, believe Seth & Jesse would allow this to happen to their kids. Even after seeing their house...  And Seth being nasty to both E & B. The clues are glaring!!! I believe S & J did what they had to do to protect the kids knowing E & B would take care of them. Now I'm worried they may die before someone figures it out. Where is their security?

 

Really great to have another chapter from you. Love this series!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Patience is a virtue. Lol. We just love reading your work. Great chapter, got a nice mix of everyone?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very sweet, innocent & vanilla. Thanks for that Insite. Does that mean Lexi will be the one kidnapped and then Rio to the rescue? Oh, and they forgot the condoms...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I likes this chapter. It was great to get a lot of Jack & Bonnie and see how their relationship was going and where it was leading to. It was also nice to get a small glimpse of Jasper & Alice. I'm hoping next year will show more of Edward & Bella asthey work  on repairing their relationship and if course the drama ahead. I only fear one or more if the kids will die and I so hope that doesn't happen

 

i look forward to reading more from you next year. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ahh, you work is worth the wait!!  

I'd like to hope that Daryll will come out a hero. Yes, he should have come forward before, but he is probably the kids only hope.

Why the hell hasn't the FBI searched the rest of the property yet? They would have found the letters. What about any of the other workers? And, I think the Kindle may save the day. Some of them have GPS trackers. The Cheif (asshole) probably doesn't know that.

Man, the only issue with waiting for the next chapter is worrying about the kids.

Be well and hope to hear from you again soon. 

Tangled Hearts by Flora Mile Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella life was everything she had dreamed it to be, a successful writer, a fiancé and everything is going the way she wants it. Until one unfaithful night changed it all. Can changing ones life plan work out the way you really want it. Is doing Artificial Insemination and creating a life going to make her truly happy?

Edward had seen enough tragedy, not only in the loss of his parents but now with his brother and his brother’s wife. If anything else happens, would Edward truly be standing? He might be a successful heart surgeon, but even then can he heal the hearts of two three year-olds?When Bella and Edward’s paths cross will it make them or break them!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83640 Read Count: 18792
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: A baby is born with the need to be love and never outgrows it.

Hi. I'm new to your story. I'm enjoying the story and you characters. Sometime the chapters are a bit long.  But incredibly well written and enjoyable. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Black Hole by addict_writer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

New attitude. New job. New friend with benefits. What started out as casual takes on a whole new meaning when things twist and turn and sink into the abyss of reality. One big mistake changes everything.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121478 Read Count: 119273
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Saw that coming. Sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Still with you. Just kicking back and enjoying your work. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Sweet

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Knew that was coming. What's eating Edward??

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Humm, what was the room for. and, btw, 15# lb babies are very much an oddity.  She could have never pushed that out. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ok, with the opening authors note I'm not sure if this was the end or not. Humm. Guess I'll wait to see if theirs another chspter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Reality check. Always a good way to learn to appreciate what the other does.

ice enjoyed this story but not sure where it's going.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Depression. It happens every time there is a loss. Glad she is seeing the other side now. 

Summary:

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Edward Cullen found the love of his life six years ago at summer camp, but after losing contact with her, he doesn't know where to begin the search for his lost love. That is until Emmett shows up with a couple of surprises of his own.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: The Forbidden Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14610 Read Count: 2009
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2013 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Thanks to My Brother, the Bear

That was a sweet story. Thank you. 

Summary:

Edward finds what he needs most in an unexpected place. After finding her ... he needs her, craves her ... because she is the light of his life.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34269 Read Count: 4608
[Report This] Published: 04 May 2013 Updated: 16 Sep 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Light

Great start. This has a lit of potential. Thanks for letting us know it will be a "slow" updater. I will patiently wait.

 

Ok, did I wait long enough. Lol

Thanks for sharing your talent!

 



Author's Response:

lol, nope sorry. Thanks for reviewing. 

Summary:

 

Edward has had a guitar in his hands for a long time. He forms a band with a couple of guys from school and plan to move to LA when school is over. Will The Midnight Riders become famous? Or, will they just be a shooting star?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81615 Read Count: 6274
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Down At The Whiskey

Ok, has possibilities.  More please. 

Summary:

Bella Swan is lonely and looking for an outlet. When she is out of commission she finds the answer to all her prayers, in the way of fan fiction. Follow Bella on her journey to become a writer, and see who she bumps into along the way.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32766 Read Count: 3976
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2013 Updated: 16 Sep 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Creative Writing Professor and the Dominant Within

  Really loving this story. Envious that there is some (hope a lot) behind it.

More please.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Writing with Errors

Enjoying the concept. Can't wait for more.

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: None

OMG. I laughed my ass off at the Tena Lady Awards.  I had no idea what that was until I googled it. Incontinence pads, briefs & diapers and Rob Pattinson or Jackson Rathbone...too funny!!!!

For this chapter, loved it.  It was the shining moment of a crapy week and its only Tuesday.  Give me the harpies and punishment any day. :)

My question is when Edwards story catches up to when he meets Bella, will we get the same chapters rewritten in his point of view? At least the parts where they are together? I think I would like that. I'm eager to see his mind at work.

Until next time...be happy.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 92180
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Sniff, sniff. He'll be OK. 

Still cant figure out why Charlie did what he did. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I see Bella saving them all.

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130017
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

You'd think Alice & Rose could be better at weaving their stories. Humm, wonder how long it will take for Bella to put it together? Ready for more action. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Teaser indeed. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

So brutal. Would love to think this only happens in books but it would be delusional to believe that. Or maybe wishful thinking...

theirs I read thus story the more I want Charlie & Emmit to turn out to be good guys. I hope the both of them together brought Edward in as undercover to get the Volturie and more importantly, protect Bella. They all need out.

Love the drama in this story. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

No doubt Aro is evil. Death would be too good for him, let the bastardized suffer.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

Fun

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Pure sweetness. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

Ahh, poor Edward. His day sucked and now his girl is leaving. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

I was hoping the DNA test woukd show another lie by Aro. Too sad that scum has to be her sperm donor. It would be nice to see him get his own kind of justice/treatment. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Go get her, I have s feeling Charlie & Emmit will be with you. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Too sad. Yeah for the kisses. I bet she gets the condo in his building. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Not surprised by her reactions. Glad we're moving yowTd healing and HEA. I so hope she is not AROs daughter, that it was just wishful thinking on his part. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 180: Chapter 180

Really, he was going to walk away....  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Bella will forgive her if the reason is meant from the heart. I think there is more to Angela's side of the story we haven't heard yet. 

And, what good reason did Edward have for leaving her??? I'm not understanding this need for time apart. I guess I'll understand soon. 

Until next time....

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Definition of rape?? "Rape is a type of sexual assault "usually" involving sexual intercourse, which is initiated by one or more persons against another person without that person's consent." I'd definitely say she was raped. 

Great chapter, hurry Edward.




Author's Response:

I guess what I want to say is that she won't be 'taken' against her will. By your definition, yes, she was 'raped.' However, she will not be violated in that manner (having penetrative sex without her consent). Thanks for staying iwht me...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Emmitt reaction  was not shocking. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Sweet hugs. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Hurry, Bella needs help. (Lol). Can't be good the longer she is gone. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Blissfully cute. This must be the calm before the storm?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Nice one Bella. Gave her hell!!! Can't wait for the showdown. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

Awhh. Sweet!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Awesome sex scene!! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

And why is he in trouble??? 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Yep. Knew it was Charlie. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Happy to meet Esme finally. Sweet as expected. Thanks

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Sad! Terrible to know those types people are out there. They don't often have children that turn out so good. Edward is one of the lucky ones. But one can only imagine the burdens he carries.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Ain't love grand! Another (hot) milestone conquered! 

Thinking maybe Charlie and Emmitt know Edward is FBI and they are the ones who asked for the help. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

It seems the elements are against them. First he tells her she can't cum until they're back home, then he agrees to make her cum on the dance floor, then shit,  Bella's attacked. Now they're traumatized. Been a hell of a lot of emotion in the last two chapters. 

Ready for more :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

So sweet, I see lots of crap is yet to come. So for now, I'm enjoying the fluff.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Uh ho.  I feel trouble starting to rev up for Bella's family and starting the downfall of Edwards deception. 

Another great chapt.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

So I say over reacted to Carlisle's text. Glad I did. This was beautifully written.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Edward will Kick their asses!!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Poor Edward. Now let Bella take care of him. Sweet!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Glad he's OK. Too much pain!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Interesting. Wonder how his thumbs are. Lol.  Last two chapters were good. I hope both Charlie & Emmit are the informers. 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Charlie has to be the informant. He is clearly planning on his life being taken away.  Boohoo. I find it funny how you can make us love the bad guys. Even though it seems they ( Emmit & Charlie) have changed their ways...they gave still killed people. 

Until next time...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Finally!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Boohoo, more please. Lol.  lovin it!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Yummm :P

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Another's lemony chapter, how will we ever survive. Swoon, Lol.

bring it...please. 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Just caught up with three chapters in a row. Love getting them like that. Now... Go find her! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Ok, you warned us. Still sucks :)

another great chapt.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

I'm bracing myself 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Sulpicia must have been forced into her place. Maybe she'll be some small relief for Bella. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Did I see that coming 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Very ready for her rescue.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Thank god. I didn't think my heart could handle more. Bravo to you, that was awesome. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Glad he could get Charlie out for Bella's recovery. I almost hate getting new chapters cause their never long enough. Lol.  Thanks for the great story. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

200 chapters, yeah. That means there is lots yet to come. 

Now off to recovery. Now they'll both have trama to recover from and live through. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Humm. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

She'll forgive him.  Hopefully before he walks out. If not, Charlie will set her straight. I wanted to say he would kick her ass, figuratively of course, but that woukd be insensitive given her condition. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Yeah. Go Bella!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

Nice Edward/Esme moment. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Edward as a cheerleader, um, not so much. That is unless he keeps it as a male cheerleader, I could see possibilities there. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

It's sad to say, but yes, this could happen in any hospital enemy with the best intentions.  Edward to the rescue was great. She needs a hero. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Yes! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

I think Charlie already knows. I think Renee told him. I think Bella was a product if rape.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Ahh, home at last!!!  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

Thank you!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

Sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Patience. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

I'd say panic & Edward are what's coming next. Although I understand her need to get back to normal and depend on herself. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

Crap. It sucks they're both a mess of hurt neither deserve. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

Glad to know it's moving forward. And glad Edward told her it would take time to forgive her. They are like two peas in a pod with their experiences now. They will heal better together I think. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 183: Chapter 183

She can do it. I predict this will be what finally healed her and allows Edward to touch her. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

Something doesn't seen right. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

Good job B

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Will be glad to get this part over. Would like to see a little stress free lovin 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

The next best thing would be if he was painfully tortured & killed prior to meeting his painless death sentence. Which in the US takes about 7 years to carry out after all legal actions are exhausted. 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

Awesome chapter. From Esme to the cemetery to making love. It was perfect. And, thank you for the long chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

I really loved the long chapters. These are good but...