Reviews by coulierb
Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Not complaining but, will this one end??  Both the previous books only had 30+ chapters each.  There is so much more I can envision happening so was wondering if it will be as book IV?

Loved the makeup & tea party and OMG Teddy having to poop was hysterical!!!

Looking forward to the next post.



Author's Response:

Yes. Not to worry. It will end very soon. 



Author's Response:

Yes. Not to worry. It will end very soon. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Great chapter. Funny, silly and great sex. Who could want more.  :)

will you end this book and start #4? It seems there is so much left unfinished.  

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Still Enjoying.  Curious for what's next.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Yes, I think he will. 

 

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Still enjoying but wonder where it's going. 

Thanks

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Fun chapter. Was great seeing Ana handle Christian. And, OMG... The magical vagina. LOL

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

I feels like it's winding down to an end. Is it?

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

What an emotional rollorcoaster for all parties. 

Nice job.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Do you think you will start book 4 soon? Still seems like so much yet to come.

Thanks for another great chapter 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Ahh. Do that's what happened to Lorna. Is this story almost over or is there more to come? 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Gotta love shower sex. And Christian interacting with the kids.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

Too cute and sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Yeah. Thanks. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

All pleasantries aside...lets get to some fun. Lol

lovin it still!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Not surprised at his answer. 

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Awhhh, another happy ending. This should be an interesting story. Was sweet how Tommy patted Christians knee. I can see that Christian will be the one that wants to keep him in the end. 

Good chapter, eager for more. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Too cute.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Oh shit. Really glad for the added excitement, it's time for more drama. Yeah.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Got to love it!!! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I just finished reading this series up to this chapter.  I love it and can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Oh Grey. What r u thinking?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Awesome, fun chapter. I love the Jason & Gail characters. Would love an out take of the two of them.

Hope all is back to normal for you.

Until next time...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Glad Mia is on the mend. Woukd be too devastating to lose her or the baby. What's up with the writer who had the hots for her? Or will we hear from Tommy's mother or father? Or, the guy who knows about Christians past? What's yet to come? 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

As much as I love this study, I don't wish another child on them. I hope someone else comes along and adopts the baby. 

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Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Nice, sweet & hot.

 

thanks

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Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Got to love it:) thanks

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Another fun chapter. 

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Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Wow, that was fun to see a pissed off Ana. And, glad all is well.  More please.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I love your story and continue to read. Just wondering if your going to end book three and start book four?  I can see there is still much to come.

 

I love the kids talking, you do an awesome job with that!

Ready for more.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Ok, I feel the plot thicken. Either the girl killed herself or the grandmother is dead. Or, maybe I should just wait to find out. I love the cliff hanger.


Ready got the weekend. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Aawh. That was sweet. Somehow I think something bad is on the horizon.

Keep it coming...please :)

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Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Wow. Great chapter!! I think we all knew this was coming but hoped the mother would get through rehab. Great to see how Ana reacted and the emotional rollorcoaster about losing Sam.  Loss of a child NEVER goes away. Thank you for how you wrote it. 

What about the bio grandmother.  Where does she fit in? 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Oh my, always so so damn good and hot. Christian is so good with Tommy, vrry sweet.

Eager for more. This story never gets biring. Thanks for sharing you talent. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Love it!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Love the banter between them. Can't wait until Tuesday 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Excitement, yeah.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Very nice!!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Fun chapter. Glad to see self pleasure is always acceptable. 

Yumm! 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Awaaaah. Sweet.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I love reading your work to much to want you to push yourself. Please take the time to heal. 

This was another great chapt. We got to hear from Myra, the kids, Mrs. Collins, and hit sex. Poor Christian, I'm thinking he needs a chest x-ray to rule out pneumonia. 

I keep thinking more drama us coming. The subs, Tommy's mother & boyfriend. Or, some tragedy firm Virginia. Will have to wait and see.

 

take care 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

:) 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Loved the banter at the end. Funny & sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Omg. Please don't tell me your going to let him do this again...  She won't stay.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Thank you. Don't think I could read another betrayal. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Too cute. I love it when the kids are talking. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Too sweet.  What's up with Leila. She's it supposed to be around, and, why didn't Ana say anything to Christian about it?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Nice, sweet, hot.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Nice. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Oh how I love and hate cliffies. Fun chapter, I love to read the children's speak. Incredibly well done and very fun to read...just can't do it without smiling. 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Great chapter. And for those if us that wanted more drama...thanks.  Btw, your depiction of HELLP syndrome was spot on. Now we have to hope Mia pulls through as she is the one at the greatest risk. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Oh no!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Sweet. Go Christian, I think Teddy was just defending himself. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Lol. Pants, really Christian? 

. I can't believe Elena didn't take you there.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Lol. That was awesome!!!  Go Ana!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Interesting. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

L.A. Humm, will thereby drama?

happy holidays

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Ok, I'm waiting for the Sex/BDSM rooms.......

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

That was fun. I think Kate will be eternally jealous.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Didn't exactly expect that.  But I did expect Tommy's mother to cause some kind of trouble. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Wow, haven't had a good one like that in a while, Thanks!!!

Once the adoption is done us the story done as well?



Author's Response:

No. I have a couple of things in the works, but it is getting close.

Thanks

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Too sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

:) nice 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Wow, another baby? 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Another baby. Sweet.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Nice chapter. I love that he's stepping back and trying to be objective about the baby.  Very hot love sceen. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Ahh, back to some long awaited fun. Will never look at an electric toothbrush the same. Lol!!!  Great fun, thanks.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Nice chapter. I have seen adoptive women successfully nurse their baby. It takes a lot of dedication. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

"Wifely duties." Lol

love the kids

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

New it!! 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Sweet.  Now where will you take us on this ride?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

So sweet. Loved family bedtime. Kids are just too cute.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Too dang cute. Got to love it.

 

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 23

Just found this story. Totally in love with it. I hope you plan to continue posting chapters. 

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

New to your story. Lovin it so far. 

555-TALK by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella dials the wrong number one night and instead of getting her Mom she gets an erotic radio station's hotline? "Hello, this is Edward speaking, tell us your deepest fantasies or real life sexy stories."555-Talk banner by ysar




THANK YOU SO MUCH YSAR FOR THE BANNER! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44950 Read Count: 31096
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2016
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Call

Interesting so far.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Falling

Ok

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Oh Doctor?

Nice

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Introductions

Funny

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Melodies

Sweet. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: The Morning After

Uh oh.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Brasilda & Dinner Plans

I don't get the Bridzilla character but I guess you'll fill in the blanks.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Bittersweet Bliss

Bridzilla or mom. 

Appreciate the long chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: MOM!

Mom???

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Temptation

Go Bella!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Being 'his' girl

Who's watching?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113784
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love it! Can't wait to see what devious fun you come up with next. :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter.  The kids are all great. So, I think Lexi missed out learning about Charlie  & Renee. And Bella didn't connect with the girls about Max. Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself. The girls still need their bracelet/GPS. It seems Edward had more in depth conversations with the kids than Bella.

Ok, I sound like I'm Bella bashing, sorry. I love her character.

 

I loved the last sceen with Edward dominating her in the tent. Nicely done and just what Bella needed. 

Ready for the wedding.  And, I hope Rio saves Lexi when the time comes. 

 

Thanks for sharing your amazing talent!!!

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Catching up. Lost you out of my favorites fur a while. 

Not really cause I get to read 4 chapters in a row.  Yeah!

anyway, I love this story and want to see E&B make it back to each other.  And, we have to get the bad guy and save pre opus Max.

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love the tats. Very nice touch. 

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good security team, they were great w/ the little pne. Glad Max has his bracelet.

Fabius to see our Dominant back and w/ very appropriate changes. Still yummy!!

thanks for sharing your talent 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Kids. Got to love em. I loved how you wrote how fierce their love is so that the kids could tell by watching. E&B are good role models for their kids. We all have rough spots in life but I don't think many of are as lucky to be in such a fierce passionate love.  It's good god the kids to see the good with the bad...it's reality. 

Ok, now I want to know more about the guy with the vendetta. I take it it was the therapist Bella saw for her PPD.

Eager for more.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was beautiful... the renewal, Edwards talk with Lexi and jack coming to Andreas rescue.   

Thus will definitely be a scary ride. I just hope all come out intact.  I can see some heros in the making. 

I would have loved more D/S between E & B but I imagine that will come in time and there was certainly more to the story that needed to be told.

Eager already for more. :)

 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh waiting is so, so hard. But, definitely worth it. Another fine chapter. 

Hope all is well w/ your family. Kids r tough. The bigger they get, the bigger their problems get. But, in the end...it's worth it.

Hpoe the next chapter is soon.

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Michelle,

Wishing you well.  I just read PLU & AFLO again.  This is by far one of my favorite stories.  You have a wonderful gift!  Thank you for sharing your talent.  I can only imagine the hours it takes and the dedication to create this wonderful story.  I hope we hear from you in the future.

I hope you and your family are well.  Best wishes for your future.

a definite fan of your work.

Beth

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like that the girls were found unharmed but...and I get it was a distraction. But what is the plan? Prior to this chapter I thought they wanted one of the kids (dead) but now it sounds like they want them all.  

It also sounds like Peter is wavering. And, some of them think the chief is crazy and they don't trust him, so how does he have this power?  

I'm enjoying this story, thank you. My greedy self woukd like more chapters quicker.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This chapter covered a lot if characters. You never disappoint. Thanks for this lovely story. It has the greatest combination of love, passion, family & fun.  Loved hearing about Sam and Edward feeling bad he may have let him down by not being there. Can't wait for the next chapt.