Reviews by beck
Strawberry Wine by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 255]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Seventeen year old Alli Wilson falls hard and fast for the cowboy next door. She lies about her age, and has the most magical summer of her life. Things get down right awkward once school starts and she stumbles in to her AP English class to find the cowboy next door is her new teacher.

First assignment? An Essay: How I spent my summer vacation.

Lemons.

 

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54159 Read Count: 21171
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2012
Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The instant chemistry between these two is very well written. You can feel their butterflies and you captured the rush of a surprise instant attraction perfectly. And I'm a bit less sceptical for the poor guys that swear, "she said she was 18" .



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. This was a very fun story to write.

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm with the other reviewers on this one - HOW did Jason not totally go off on Allie? And why would he want her to date highschool boys if he plans to get back together with her?



Author's Response:

He wants Alli to try to have a normal highschool experience. It's the ol' If you love someone set them free thing. Yeah, it doesn't work so well for him...

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This should be interesting. Does Jason the saint get jealous???

Please post soon!



Author's Response:

I promise, Homecoming will be a beautiful disaster.

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I would definitely have thrown up. Definitely. Allll over my cute little school uniform. Gah.

 

I used to have Bantam chickens! They do make cute little eggs.



Author's Response:

I love chickens. I wish I had the yard to keep a few of them again. I would make sure to have some Bantys!

Thanks for all the reviews. You're a spped reader!

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Squeeeeee! You're posting again! How did I miss this?!?! Can't wait to catch up.

VERY sweet/sexy lemon btw.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm trying to post in my other story too. Thanks for the reviews!!

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Community college? Is he reallly buying that?



Author's Response:

*shrug* It seemed like a plausible idea at the time.

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awwww. Jason's in love. His heart is going to crumble when he finds out the truth. OMG School starts!!!



Author's Response:

The fist day at a new school is always a bit nerve wracking, no? ;)

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awwwwww. I love the apology!

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Margos the best. I would like to hear more of the dinner arguments - that was funny.

So, if gram knows, then Linda was the only one at dinner that didn't know about Allie and Jason.

Homecoming!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks  - if this were a tv series, I would love a full episode of the dinner argument. Hehehe

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yvette is evil. So, Josh took her to Homecoming? Haha -him leaving her for Alli.

 

What will Jason's mom say????



Author's Response:

Jason's mom is a reasonable woman. I think it's good he tells her.

Second Spins by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

 

Lara's common sense and her body are of two different opinions when it comes to Julien Diotallevi.

She remembers all too well the passionate summer they spent together on the French Riviera. It left her heart-sick, pregnant and alone.

She never expected to see him again, but what happens on the riviera doesn't always stay on the riviera. Now he stands before her, still as breath-taking as ever, only this time he comes bearing startling news, and a legacy of danger.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Mystery, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44801 Read Count: 5671
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 08 Oct 2014
Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm. I'm interested enough to keep reading. I don't trust Julien.

This is good so far. I'm glad I don't have to wait for the second chapter.

ps - HOT virginity scene!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Julien's not such a bad guy - give him a chance!

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh a cliffy!



Author's Response:

Just trying to keep ya interested!

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Lol - I like Popps. He doesn't put up with any shit.

I really liked the nursing scene, and the UST in the solarium. I'm looking forward to the next chappie - please post soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I like Pops too. I picture him looking like Wilford Brimley.

Next chapter will be posted on Monday. (tomorrow)

Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

::fanning myself:: That was perfect! I love his answer to her demand - "No."

Thank you for an awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117809
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Isis sent me over and I must thank her! Favorited! I can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you Isis for reccing this & thank YOU for reading :)

Summary:


    Elizabeth Masey didn’t believe in ghosts - until she started having an affair with one...

  

Our heroine is a trust fund baby suffering from a recently broken heart. Needing a project to distract her from her heartache, she decides to turn her newly inherited family estate into a bed and breakfast. Her plans grow complicated when she is informed by the caretaker that Stormclyffe House is haunted. Things heat up when the sexy contractor she hired to do the remodel starts showing up in her dreams. Add to that one stuffed weasel, an ancient hi-fi system that only plays oldies, and a new proclivity for sleep walking in the nude, and Elizabeth just may be in over her head.


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2217 Read Count: 3559
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: beck Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I heard you had started posting another story! Glad you're back. Does this mean you'll be posting more to Second Spins again? Prettyprettyplease?



Author's Response:

Soon! I have to finish a novella for a publisher's prompt, but once it's finished I will get back to Second Spins. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Deven sounds hot!



Author's Response:

I think so too :)

Reviewer: beck Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ooh! Can't wait to find out what the connection is. Thanks for this story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Thanks for the reviews. The connection is revealed in the next chapter - I just posted it. Enjoy!