Reviews by cjrich
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923038
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok, all I have to say is...write fast!!!!  Thanks, Cheri



Author's Response:

A lot of it's prewritten. I'll put out new chapters asap :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OK, seriously can't wait to see what happens next!  Thank you!!



Author's Response:

lol...ok.. will post the next chapter then :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Involuntary Rapture

Well, this is getting exciting.  Can't help but wonder about Bella and what Grandpa(?) has up his sleeve.  Please write fast...

Thank you!



Author's Response:

lmao... u mean move the chapters over fast! You got it!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Not sure how Edward is going to take Elizabeth's new training? Bella either for that matter.  Think we are in for a wonderfully bumpy ride! Alice must be Mary Alice, right?  Will be interesting to read that story.  Thank you and can't wait for Tuesday.



Author's Response:

What's tuesday?

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Love this story and want to let you know that sometimes it makes my stomach a little sick, but it is HOT!  Update soon!!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Alright!  Disgusting, but nothing more than what he deserved.  Worry about Edward and Bella tho, he is pissed.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That was a wonderful break in the terror of James. Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Pretty hot for a virgin bride!  Any bets on who will be in Bella's bed in the morning.  Yup! I think so too!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Never ever bet against Alice!!  Come on wedding night!  Thanks - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wonderful, but rotten!  Thanks - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 76

Ok, so how many confessions will there be?? Could be anyone, could be he just got what he deserved and died on his own. Can hope can't I?  Love this story, thrilled to see this update. Can't wait to see where you take us.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Love the picture. Can't wait for the wedding night.  Little nervous here that they can't pull off the charade.  Fingers crossed.  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

So right, sad chapter, bawling here.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 66

Wonderful chapter, but still think Edward needs to get his head out of his... guess that is Emoward tho!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

OME what a chapter!!!!!  I don't think I took a breath the whole time! Glad Carlisle didn't have to kill his father even tho he deserved it, but not sure what that would have done to Carlisle.  What can I say, you gotta love Emmett.  Boy does he have a tale to hear.  Hate being a pushy bitch, but I hope you write fast beacuse I don't think I can wait long to see what is next.  James, Alec and the rest of the "society" are still out there...and there are 5 1/2 very buised and battered people to see to. Possibly the best chapter I have ever read on TWCS!  Wow, what a chapter!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

I'm sooo glad you liked it. That means a lot to me that you said that :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

OMG Emoedward is back!  I understand the misunderstanding, but darn that fella needs to man up!  As you can tell I am very invested in this story and yes I do love it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65

This story just keeps getting better and better. Need Edward back tho. He needs an Emmett head slap by Rosalie! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

Love Alice and Jaz.  Perfect!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Wonderful pics of our boy! That man is a God. Yes, short chapter, but Edward is back and heading in the right direction finally!!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! That was nasty leaving us at that point.  Guess it was a good thing Edward left his phone.  Come on Friday!!! XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

I am sooooo confused. Bree died didn't she??? If not nobody had more right to kill Jamesicko than her. Can't wait for the next chapter!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Bree did die...

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

So wonderful to see this update. Thank you! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 81

Beautiful chapter, wonderful pictures, amazing. XOXO,Cheri

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44065
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dr. Cullen's Office

Don't be nervous, wonderful chapter. Only Bella could be this lucky!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Wishes Granted?

Oh, now that was a cliffie!!! Don't care how long it takes I will wait for the next chapter!!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prom Night

Think you have out done yourself with this story!  Can't wait to hit the 'next' button!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Good job Dr. C!  Wow, what a hot chapter. Plug, wand and him...can't wait for more!!!  Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412077
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So thrilled to see you have posted here.  Have loved this story and was so afraid it would be pulled from FF along with all of the other stories that I love. 

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! - Cheri

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Next chapter might be a good one, but this one was WONDERFUL!!!  Thank you

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

What a wonderful chapter!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

And I am going to miss reading this wonderful story.  Still, tho, looking forward to the next chapter!!   Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wonderful, just wonderful!  Thank you - Cheri

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Banner by OTBGraphics, texture by Rachel


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 141990
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wonderful story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: News

Wow, have fallen in love with this family!  Great job!  XOXO, Cheri

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wonderful, again!  Love the hot tub and love her with her first pizza.  Will miss you next week.  Been RECing you to everyone I know.  - Thanks - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I want to apologize, this story has had me so floored, so enraptured that I haven't looked up since I started it.  I also haven't reviewed and for that I am ashamed. This story is wonderful, so well written and so hearfelt that I am in awe. I can't wait to hit the 'next' button and get to the next chapter.  Wow, well done story, just amazing.  Thank you for sharing - Cheri



Author's Response:

Dearie, that's nothing to apologize for! I appreciate the review, though.  You're going to make me blush! I'm glad people are enjoying my little plot bunny.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just a wonderful story and can't wait for it to continue.  Thank you! - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this story!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

What a wonderful chapter!  The kitten idea is brilliant.  Love this story and can't wait to see what happens next.  Thank you for sharing your talent.  Signed, Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you, and glad you liked the kitten! I thought about a puppy, but they're too boisterous for shy Wisp.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Can't begin to tell you how much I love this story.  I have gotten so involved and get so excited when I see an update.  Want to kill James of course, afraid of cat food, not good, not good at all. Really like all the "Cullen Clan", you really have brought them to life.  Thank you for sharing your talent and can't wait for the next chapter.  Cheri



Author's Response:

Thanks for such a sweet review! I enjoy writing the Cullens, they all have such different personalities. :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. I also can't imagine the depth of how broken Bella is.  I know that we will get her back story at some point and to tell you the truth, not sure I will be able to handle it. Just the last chapter and the kitten food broke my heart. 

The beautiful way that you write draws us in to this heartfelt sad story and I just can't thank you enough for giving it to us.  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have said it before, but when I see that you have updated I can't open fast enough!  This story has made such an impression on me and I can't begin to thank you enough!   Poor Edward, wish he realized that all his guilt is just the perfect way to show that he IS doing the RIGHT thing.  Who cares what other people think if Bella is impoving and happy, yea I know only in fiction do the authorities not matter.  LOVE this Edward and love the way you write!!!!    Thank you! -  Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well, I for one love what falls out and onto the screen.   Loved her sharing with Edward, loved her delight and maybe a memory of being read to.  But mostly I love how you write, how you can take just a few words and make all of us feel so deeply.  What a talent you have and I can't thank you enough for sharing. Will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Get so excited when I see your update.  Thank you for posting early. Love that Edward had a bigger meltdown than Wisp.  Loved her reaction to the shower and how sweet that she ran a bath for Edward!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved the quick update, but mwahhhhhhh I want more!!!! Darn, almost wish I didn't have a non-internet two week vaca coming up, ok not totally, but now I have to wait for two weeks to find out what happens.  That all being said, I love the way you handle such a tough subject.  So much compasion, so much love.  Love all of these Cullens! WONDERFUL STORY.  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This story has me so hooked. Love the way you write and the story is horrible, sad, and beautiful, so thank you!  Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful, just wonderful and so proud of Wisp and Edward too. Thank you for coming back, LOVE this story and the way you write. Thank you, Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved it in FanFic, love it even more right here, again.  Yes I read them both, because I can't get enough of this story.  LOL, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Wow, big change in W...Bella. Not sure who to feel more sorry for, Edward or Bella. As always love this story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh no, Wisp will be devestated if something happens to Pet.  Would love to have seen her reaction to 7-Up.  Sweet and bubbly.  Think it will be a favorite!  Happy New Year and lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Crying here, not sure if they're happy tears for little Wisp or sad tears for this amazing story ending. Feel Wisp has been a part of my life for a very long time. Truly hope to see more outtakes (loved Disneyland) or dare I suggest sequel... Would really like to see Felix get his due. Regardless of what you decide I would be thrilled to read anything you are willing to share. I have said it before but you are an amazing storyteller and I am honored to have been allowed to read your words. Thank you and I hope that this is not goodbye. Wishing you all the best. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324331
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

Best chapter ever!  Hot sex, hot Edward and Maggie and Lauren go down!!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown

Always and forever!  Love this.  Can't wait for the Oscars.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

Thank you for the update.  Hopefully next chapter will find them back on the kitchen table!!!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

Wonderful to see this chapter.  Very happy thing seem to be back on the right track for these two.  lol,   Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

I am so enjoying your story!  Thank you!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage

So cute!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - My First Day

Wonderful story, can't wait for more!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Ok, I really LIKE kinky Edward and this chapter was wonderful!  Thank you.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Confidant

Wonderful and hot chapter.  REALLY enjoying your story and love kinky Edward.  Hope to see more soon.  Thank you.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks

MORE MAD AT EDWARD THAN MAGGIE RIGHT NOW! Hoping that Bella doesn't give up on his ass and head back home to Mom, don't care how stressed he is!!!  Can you tell I love this story?   LOL, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

I just want to say how much I am enjoying your story. Love older Edward and younger Bella stories.  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

Wonderful to see your new chapter.  I have missed this wonderful story.  Love the storyline, love the characters.  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

So wonderful to see this update!  Love this story and was wonderful to meet Eric.  Now looking forward to some more Edward and Bella time!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

I LOVE CHARLIE!  Thank you for bringing him into this story and making him a good guy!  Thank you too for the update, I fell in love with this story from chapter 1 and jump to read any updates you send out.  Love little boy Edward, Dom Edward and all the others in between!  LOL, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

I know, I know its just a story, but I hate to see them fighting or at least not having hot kinky sexy sex.  Thank you for the extra chaptes tho.  I jump up and down when I see a new update of this story.   Lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

Crying here. Those two have a lot of work to do, but I can't wait to see it happen.  LOL, Cheri

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

OK, still crying my eyes out here.  PLEASE, please don't make me wait too long.  AHHHHHHHH.  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

Finally, peace!  Maybe now we can get on to the the hawt make up sex... lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer

Wonderful to see this story back!  Can't wait for the showdown!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - His Parents

Love this story and so darn excited for you!!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

Lovely to see this update. This story is a favorite of mine and thrilled to see the world to see E/B as a married couple!  Wonderful.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

Just gotta tell you how much I love this story.  Tough chapter for little Bella.  Glad she has Edward, his team and her friends. Great job with the demanding Edward, you gotta love him!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

Wonderful to see you back I have truly missed this story! That being said great chapter and can't wait to read more about their vacation. XOXO,Cheri

 

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ycte

Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104499
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26- Making plans

Just want to thank you for this wonderful story.  Love each and every chapter. Love this family, yes it is a family they just need to realize it...I'm sure they will and I am enjoying the ride!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8- The first day

Can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. Thank you for this update and look forward to the next. Hoping for a HEA, and excited to see how they get there.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, I like this story and think you wrote a wonderful chapter.  Looking forward to the next one.  - Thank you.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

Falling in love with this story!  Thank you. - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

Can just picture Daddy Edward holding his brand new baby girl...   Thank you!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

Truly loving this story and so glad I got to read all 6 chapters at once.  So much easier to really get into a story this way. Can't wait to see what happens in the coming chapters!  Thank you for sharing this story!! - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

Wonderful story.  Feel bad that they never talked to each other and that it lead to them giving up on each other.  Hard seeing both sides of this...  Thank you for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter.  - Cheri



Author's Response:

thank you!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9- Family time

Ahhhhhh, I just hate to see these chapters end.  Love this story and can't wait for the next one to update.  Such a sweet story!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- Explanations

Love this story, what a wonderful family and I can't wait for them all to realize it!  Sad for the delay in updates but glad you let us know so we wouldn't worry that this story was MIA.  Have a great vacation and enjoy!   Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

Wonderful story, thank you!  Cheri

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

Yet??????? Don't care how cute you have made Tayna, the woman has got to GO!!!!!! Really enjoy this story and love your updates.  Hint, hint...more soon?  Thank you - Cheri

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

LOVE this story. Bella must feel like she is in a fairy tale with all the celebs and fancy yacht.  But then again I guess when you have Edward to look at, everything else probably fades away.  Was kind of hoping the yacht would sail minus Tanya tho... but maybe she will get dropped overboad somehow... As usual LOVE Alice, besides E/B she has always been my favorite and I don't care for it when authors try and change her so thank you!  I know I sound like a broken record, but, write fast please!  LOVE to see your updates and love how the little 'moments' are happening now.   Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Kat - I can't tell you how much I look forward to the updates to this story.  Actually squeel when I see a new chapter posted.  Love your characters, love the connections between all of them and LOVE the girls, Love the pictures of the girls, they look like Edward and Bella to a T. Love your words.  And now can't wait to see Edward's reaction to James's interest in Bella...  Thank you and...WRITE FAST, please!  Cheri

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Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15- Fireworks

Kat - I can't thank you enough for the extra chapter this week!  And what a wonderful chapter it was.  Love how warm and wonderful this story is.  What could have been all agnst is sweet and handled with class.   This whole story is.  Love how sweet Edward is with Bella and she with him.  I know they will realize they should never have parted and I want that so much, but I don't want this story to end anytime soon! - Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! You have no idea how happy your review made me!! <33

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Confused

Love the direction that this is going and of course, the "accidental" kiss and love the password.  No wonder he didn't want her to know it!  Can't tell you enough how much I love your characters.  Jules is a doll, just so easy to picture her in this story with your perfect pictures.  Glad it was Em, not Rosie for lunch! Thank you - Cheri  oh and by the way...bye bye Tanya!!!!

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

Oh boy this ought to be a very interesting party...  Love the way you write this story.  I know, I know Tanya is a very nice person in this story, but she has to GOOOOOO!  Thank you for giving all of us this warm, sweet, wonderful story.  I just can not get enough of it!  LOL, Cheri

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

Beautiful, beautiful chapter.  They soooo needed to actually talk.  Let each other in and understand how they felt.  Wonderful, but darn you must be a parent because the girls timing was impeccible!  Thank you and I know I say this every chapter, but...WRITE FAST!      Cheri

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18- A long way to go

Ok, so they are talking, FINALLY! As much as I am looking forward to dinner at Alice's Edward needs to have the TALK with Tanya, like YESTERDAY!  Those two precious girls, are completely responsible WHEN these two get back together.  If it weren't for them and the love that Bella and Edward have for them I can only imagine how these last few chapters would have turned out.  I know I say it every chapter, but it is true more and more each chapter, this story has found such a place in my heart.  It is truly a story of love and I thank you for sharing it.  That said...WRITE FAST!!!!  LOL, Cheri

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

Kat, so thrilled you're back!!!!!  Not witching, but you had me scared girl. I am so in love with this story and I have to admit I wasn't sure you were coming back - SO THANK YOU.  Now, loved this chapter but was a little worried what James might due, but you made it work and even set the stage for the big boot for Tanya.  OK, sorry Tanya but it was never gonna work out for you and Edward.  There is only one woman for Edward and of course it is our Bella. I can't tell you enough how much I love your characters, from Emmett to little Jules.  Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with all of us out here in fandom. Happy Holidays, lol, Cheri   PS Can't wait to see what the morning brings!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21- What feels right

First welcome back - so missed this!  Second, finally Edward is growing a pair!  Third, I LOVE those two little girls.  It would never be boring with those two beauties around!  Seriously I am so glad they are working toward being a family again.  I'm hoping for a wonderful day of the 4 of them in the next chapter and maybe a great night...for the two of them?  Can't tell you enough how much I enjoy your talent.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27- Change of plans

And I still love you and this story! So wonderful to see this update. You made my day. Thank you and thank you Auntie Alice. XOXO,Cheri

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22- Terrified

First off I am thrilled to see this chapter.  For this story I will truly wait as long as it takes.  Second you are going to have a very lucky little girl if her mommy is anything like this story portrays.  Your belief in family shines thru in every word of this amazing story and between that and your wonderful talent for writing yes she is going to be one lucky little girl.  Congrats by the way and all my best wishes for the next four weeks and beyond.  Even if you can't post a new chapter keep us informed on how you are doing and maybe even the name of the addition to your family when she arrives? As for this story one thing Bella could give this man who has everything...a little boy, even if he thinks he is done with babies.  XOXO, Cheri   

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23- The Date

Cannot tell you how THRILLED I am to see this update. Have loved this story from your first chapter. I know R/L is R/L, but I have never forgotten this story or stopped looking for it.  Your words, your pictures have left a wonderful memory with me and I can't wait to see where you take this beautiful story. A big welcome back.  XOXO, Cheri

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy

I have the same exact goofy grin on my face. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

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Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25- Our happy place

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!! So thrilled to see another update and yes I saw the Lemonade Stand wish list and couldn't agree more. Your characters feel so real and right. Won't beg yet but I hope you continue this amazing story. XOXO,Cheri

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Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28- Normalcy

So wonderful to see this update. Can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. Thank you for an amazing Christmas present. XOXO,Cheri