Reviews by DeeDee81
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108993
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am loving this so far, can I be really selfish and beg for more?!?!? Tattward DILF makes me sigh! I love tattoos, I have ten, love them. Bella seems to like them equally, I can't wait to see were this goes ;)

Author's Response:

whahahahahahahahaha you dont have to beg! I have a large portion of the next chapter already written and I'm hoping to finish that today. Then it needs to go through my Beta and I hope to bring you the next chapter tomorrow ;)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am loving this so far, can I be really selfish and beg for more?!?!? Tattward DILF makes me sigh! I love tattoos, I have ten, love them. Bella seems to like them equally, I can't wait to see were this goes ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you again whahahahaha you submitted the same review three times :P Dedicated much? LOL

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am loving this so far, can I be really selfish and beg for more?!?!? Tattward DILF makes me sigh! I love tattoos, I have ten, love them. Bella seems to like them equally, I can't wait to see were this goes ;)

Author's Response:

And thank you again hee hee

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really don't know how I managed to leave my last review three times *facepalm*

Eek they're going out on a date, I get so excited over the little things. Edward sounds like such an amazing dad in this, makes me *swoon* lol

Author's Response:

Hee hee, I thought it was great! More reviews for me WEE! :P

And yes they are :D I'm writing it right now

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's official, I want this Edward he's making me swoon!! That view of seattle is gorgeous, I'd love to go there some day, Reading so many stories about just makes me want to see what it's like for real. Maybe one day, possibly when I'm old and grey and my kids are all grown up Lol

Author's Response:

Mmmh, me too! I've been doing so much research about the city on Google that I feel like I practically live there :P I seriously want to go there some day but I live in Holland so my dream is still faaaaaar away :P

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG the wrath of Esme!! Lmao, that was genious!! It's unbelievable how much that happens though, some people are just rude but it's perfectly natural to breastfeed your child. I'm from northern Ireland and there was a huge campaign over here about womans rights to feed their babies in public.

Edward is just the sweetest thing ever, I want one Lol

Author's Response:

Sweetheart, we all want one :P hee hee.

And yeah, no meek and quiet Esme in this story! I love Esme and I love her even more when she asks crude questions and goes up into someone's face about something that's rude ;)

I never breast fed my child, so this isnt a personal experience of mine but I know it happens a lot and that just pisses me off. I thought it would be kind of perfect to use in this story.

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm sorry to hear that RL is turning a crazy for you, it always comes first so don't worry. I had my first daughter at 19, now I turn 29 in middle of April and she's almost 10 and my second daughter has just turned 3, time flies Lol

writing is supposed to be fun, so only do it when it is and not causing you stress. I'll still be around when you next update!

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I wasn't expecting a chapter for a while so I had a little fangirl moment when I seen the update alert! Lol. Loved the chapter, I'm intriged as to what Bellas present will be for wendy ;)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh god this brings back memories of a family holiday to Salou in spain when I was a kid and we went to this haunted house. It has real actors as well and was scary as hell, we were in it for half an hour and I came out shaking it was so bad. It had creepy rooms and corridors and rickety steps. So so scary, never again would I ever go inyo anything like that in my life. But the way you described it in this was spot on, you had me cringing over what was coming next Lol

These two are so sweet together ;)

Author's Response:

Hee hee, I think I might have given myself nightmares. Unfortunately it's not a real haunted house, or I might have wanted to go ;) On second thought... maybe not :P

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Edward is all confuzzled Lol. I'm sure he'll work it out soon enough :D

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aw I kinda teared up Reading this, it was very sweet :)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love Hocus Pocus, one of my favourite movies from when I was kid...back in the days of old...god I sound like a granny and I'm only 28...but it seems like so long ago that that film came out.

I don't know why but I keep waiting for the shoe to drop, like either James or Heidi is going to show up. When Reading stories my mind constantly wonders in so many different directions. I guess I'm an over thinker lol

Author's Response:

I know what you mean, I turn 21 in two weeks and even I feel old when it comes to that movie!

But don't you worry!! this story is mainly fluff, I don't do drama and angst well and even when I do I want it to be over as quickly as possible so I can continue on the fluff ;)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow in suddenly got very hot in my livingroom Lol I love the relationship these two have. Poor Carl, getting your arm reset is horrible, I have first hand experience :(

it must be fate that you updated today. I was only home from booking in with my tattooist. It's my birthday on 17th April and that's when I'm getting my ink done. This will be number 12, I'm running out of room Lol

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow in suddenly got very hot in my livingroom Lol I love the relationship these two have. Poor Carl, getting your arm reset is horrible, I have first hand experience :(

it must be fate that you updated today. I was only home from booking in with my tattooist. It's my birthday on 17th April and that's when I'm getting my ink done. This will be number 12, I'm running out of room Lol

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella's boss is such an ass. She could fight him in court for unfair dismissal, single mothers have so many rights these days. But I get that she hates her job, like so many jobs I have worked in the past I was secretly begging to be fired even though I was too stubborn to quit.

Wow edward has a loooot of money, 50mil, my eyes exactly almost popped outta my head when I seen that not so small figure lol

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

*Pouts* it's almost over *sadface* lol

it does make sense for them to live together rather than Edward just paying for her living expenses.

I have been trying to work out how to make banners for a long time, I feel like I should be wearing a hat with stupid written across it. There is a programme that was recommended to me that may be useful to you, its www.piknic.com

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

*Pouts* it's almost over *sadface* lol

it does make sense for them to live together rather than Edward just paying for her living expenses.

I have been trying to work out how to make banners for a long time, I feel like I should be wearing a hat with stupid written across it. There is a programme that was recommended to me that may be useful to you, its www.piknic.com

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I'm so sorry chick, of course I'll still be here when you feel like getting back to it again. I don't know if this will help but both my daughters have different dads who left me the minute I found out I was pregnant. I know it's probably different to what you have but it does get easier, as they say time heals all wounds, and what gets you down only makes you stronger.

I hope you feel better soon (((Hugs)))

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I'm so sorry chick, of course I'll still be here when you feel like getting back to it again. I don't know if this will help but both my daughters have different dads who left me the minute I found out I was pregnant. I know it's probably different to what you have but it does get easier, as they say time heals all wounds, and what gets you down only makes you stronger.

I hope you feel better soon (((Hugs)))

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

Welcome back!! I was all excited when I seen the update alert! I still want one of these Edwards, he makes me swoon ;)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Aw Im so sad to see this ended, but it was a great story so thank you for sharing it with us ;)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

Dooooo it! I absolutely loved this story and would love to read more. More tattoos kiddies, fluff and love Lol.

Author's Response:

And another resounding YES!!!! hee hee, I'm beginning to believe people were dying for a sequel...

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Ooh I'm liking this so far :)

I've been using FFn for over a year now and a lot of my favourite stories are being deleted and pulled from there. So I've stumbled over here as I don't want to start something new and have it pulled again. Also if you have a FFn account be careful as there is supposed to be fake emails going around from this guy named James, he's either sending the emails or has hacked into FFn system. Just be careful if you recieve anything from this guy ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the heads up on the fake emails. I do have a FFn acccount and have been posting over there first. But with all the crap going on wanted to post here as well so my readers would have a place to go is for whatever reason it gets pulled.

 

Glad you are enjoying the story so far. I have another story as well called Worth the Burn that I am co-author on with My Bella. She has benn post on FFn as well for a long time and has moved it here for same reason I have. So if you have time check it out. I know if yo like this you will like it as well.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Disabled List

Aw so both Edward and Bella are lonely. I can't wait to see what kind of a connection these two will have when they do meet ;)

Author's Response:

I don't think you will be disappointed. :)

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Foul Ball

Oh crap his foul ball knocked her out. I'm running to read the next chap to see what happens Lol

Author's Response:

Yep it did. But so worth it to meet Edward right? LOL

Summary:

Bella goes out for a girl's night out and ends up having a one night stand.

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Thank you to mkystich for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2526 Read Count: 1136
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG I was not expecting him to have a wife! Holy shit. I'm excited to see were this goes. If I was Bella and found out that not only I had a one night stand but also got pregnant by a married man, I wouldn't need to blame the sickness on the pregnancy, I'd be puking my guts up and worried that if he could do that to his wife then he could certainly do that to me as well.

Reviewer: DeeDee81 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wait, after reading the reviews a lot of them are treating this story as a one shot, Is this true? I would encourage you to continue as it was left on a cliff hanger with a lot of unanswered questions