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The Hex House by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

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Bella had a bad feeling about it. She knew that they shouldn't have gone to the Cullen's haunted house. Little did she know how bad things were going to get...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Mystery, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11043 Read Count: 1054
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: camp30 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey! Loved the lemon near the end, very well written indeed.



She couldn't help it. He was very attractive no matter how creepy he was acting. Time seemed to stop every time his eye locked with hers. It was as if the entire world fell away and it was just them. Heat crawled up her cheeks and ran down her neck. Her palms would start to sweat and her heart would race. Then he would wink and smile his patented little half-smirk. By this time, she was nothing more than a puddle of goo. She had to force herself to get a grip, to look away. He was like a magnet, drawing her in against her wishes.

This part was one of my favorites! You have quite a way with words! I think you should listen to your readers and continue this.