Reviews by rodeinti
She Used to Be Mine by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

SheUsedToBeMine

Once upon a time, Bella & Edward had their whole lives ahead of them, but a tragic loss proved too much for them to survive. A chance encounter years later changes everything & nothing between them. Now, the truth comes out & both must face the demons that led them to this point & find out what is still left between them. Because it isn't just about them anymore.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58599 Read Count: 8511
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2021 Updated: 04 Jun 2022
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Date: 18 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - She is Hard on Herself

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 16 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - We've Both Made Mistakes, Haven't We?

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE..I'M REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY..UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN

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Date: 02 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - It's Not Simple to Say

New reader to your story!! I love it.  I can't wait to see what happens next!! well done!1 until you post again

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Date: 16 May 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Everything Changes

Thank you for the updates..well done.  Things are moving in the right direction for them😍😘Anthony is quite  happy with the way things are progressing  with his parents😘😘until you post again well done

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Date: 07 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - That Most Days I Don't Recognize Me

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 07 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - That Most Days I Don't Recognize Me

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Lost Inhibitions by littlebella13 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

She is the shy, laid-back kind of girl who has many inhibitions when it comes to the opposite sex. He is the confident and very Dominant alpha male. Can he bring her out of her shell and make her lose those inhibitions?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission, Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Risqu, Romantic Comedy, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1508 Read Count: 1290
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2022 Updated: 10 Jan 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

New reader to your story.. Well Edward is down to give Bella multipe orgasm.  Will she leave with him? She just might.  I would have to try it if I felt the way Bella does.  until you post again

Wistful Thinking by WannabeWest Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Bella, a 23 year old college student, hopeless romantic yet perpetually single no thanks to covid restrictions shutting down all social aspects of life for the past two years. Her best friend’s brother, 28 year old rough around the edges, player Edward, whom she had a major crush on while growing up, comes to visit. The country goes into immediate lockdown, meaning wherever you are, you’re stuck there until lockdown is lifted. Follow along as Bella and Edward evolve a childhood friendship into an exciting relationship while stuck together on campus during a global pandemic. Is Edward really guilty of the reputation he’s gained or is there more to him behind those dark green eyes? Can Bella take off those rose tinted glasses and realise what real love looks like beyond the world of Disney princesses?


Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13146 Read Count: 799
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2022 Updated: 29 Jan 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update..well done..i'm sorry Edward got in trouble saving Bella /Peaches but what happenned to ass hole that attached Bella/Peaches, he should have gotten into to trouble also.  until you post again.

 

PS. I'm sorry it happenned to you in real life.

Through Your Eyes by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 144]
Summary:

 

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Freaky Friday with a Twilight Twist. New Moon AU.
As much as Bella and Edward love each other, they can't possibly understand what the other's life is like. On Bella's 18th birthday, instead of a paper cut, a switch is about to make Forks even weirder. DRABBLE

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68800 Read Count: 30926
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2022 Updated: 16 Nov 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..until you post again

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Date: 08 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Thank you for this story..I'm so enjoying it..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..How will they handle thiis?  what will the Cullens do?  How can it be fixed?  so many questions..until you post again

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Date: 21 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Thank you fo the updates..I'm all caught up.  I can't wait to see how Carlise helps them if he can. until you post again well done

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Date: 30 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Thank you for the update..until you post again

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Date: 05 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Posses and Posies by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 120]
Summary:

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Local lawman Edward Cullen knows there's more to his job than glad-handing and being quick on the draw, he just hasn't seen it yet. Bella Black arrives in Rosewood, Colorado ready to move on from her past with the freedom being a woman of means affords. Can the good marshal be the fresh start she needs, or will the Wild West be too much for both of them to handle?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60463 Read Count: 12552
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2022 Updated: 30 Sep 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank  you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 19 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank you for the update..the story seems very interesting. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds

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Date: 30 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update..well done..Their first date was nice..they learned s little more about one another..Until you post again

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Date: 16 May 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again 

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Date: 24 May 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for the update..what came over Edward?  The cups will do it to you..lol..Bella handle it well.  Rosalie is my girl . Edward did remember what happen but when Rosalie got back he knew.  lol..Alice reassurred her they would be married in the spring.  I hope that happens for Bella since her first marriage ended so soon after marriage. loving this story until you post again

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Date: 30 May 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..well done..Things are progressing  nicely  with Edward & Bella. I hope there trip is quick & safe..until you post again

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Date: 07 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 19 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..yay they are getting married..until you post again

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Date: 24 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

aww thank you for the update..well done..to cute..I can't wait for them to be married. until you post again

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Date: 05 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you for the update...well done..They are pleased with one another..until you post again

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Date: 07 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thak you for the update..well done..things are moving right along..until you post again

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Date: 14 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..well done

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Date: 08 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 22 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 29 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you for the update..well done..Bella is trying her best to be brave..until you post again

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Date: 05 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you for a wonderful story well done

Without Wings by meteoronamoonlessnight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary:

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He's been missing for 3 years. Now we finally have a target. For him... we will be the ones to burn the world to the ground to get him back. Time to suit up again. #3 in the Fallen Series.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73461 Read Count: 7706
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2022 Updated: 22 Sep 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Thnk you for the update..well done..until you post again.  great story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

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Teddy and Izzy by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 170] New!
Summary:

teddy & Izzy


Teddy and Izzy were best friends till they weren’t.


Choices and circumstances define who we are. But can we come back from hurting the ones we love? Can a bond we had be strengthened again?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 125992 Read Count: 10387
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2022 Updated: 22 Apr 2024
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2024 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow thank you for the update..Poor Izzy, she sure endured alot. I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again

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Date: 14 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thank you for the update..I hope Izzy gets to talk to Teddy.  well done.  until you post again 

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Date: 12 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you for the update...well done.. I can't wait to see what happens next.  Will Teddy & Izzy get a chance to talk to one another?  Did Teddy get a chance to write Izzy his letter?  until you post again.  I know Izzy is the one helping out.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

New reader to your story I love it well done..until you post again

BRAVO!!!🥰😍

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Date: 18 Sep 2023 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update..well done.  Teddy had a panic attack. Now he knows Izzy & Marie.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

Mystery Girl by FireRed21 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

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Edward stumbles upon a photo of a girl while he's in the mall. He immediately falls in love with her and is determine to find her. A/H Story inspired by On My Mind by Cody Simpson which I do not own. One shot.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2044 Read Count: 1476
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2022 Updated: 12 Sep 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Mystery Girl

Cute story I'm happy Edward finally got to meet his mystery girl.  well done

You Are the One for Me by tibbs8482 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Summary:

Edward at the age of 34 is to become the Don of the Cullen family.  But first he needs to be married as that is the final prerequisite by the family.  Bella is all alone in the world.  At only 18 years old she has been through enough to last a lifetime.  Bella accidentally crosses paths with Edward and he finds her to be very attractive.  Could she possibly be the one for him?

Cannon characters     Edward/Bella 

Disclaimer:  Twilight characters are owned by the wonderful Stephanie Meyers; all original characters are creations of my imagination.  No copyright infringment is intended.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4946 Read Count: 2515
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2022 Updated: 11 Aug 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

New reader to your story..very promising, can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank you for the update..Your off to a good start. I wonder if Bella will go with Jason..until you post again 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I will post again on Friday.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank you for the update..well done..Bella is going to give Edward a chance.  I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.  until you post again

Fire In The Water by meteoronamoonlessnight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 120]
Summary:

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The ocean gives, but it also takes away. Knowledge is the same. Because once you know, the opportunity for ignorance is over, and you can no longer outrun the truth. When a handsome stranger shows up at Bella’s bookstore, she can't overlook the guarded expression in his eyes. Soon, her predictable small-town life will be unrecognizable.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60114 Read Count: 8912
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2022 Updated: 15 Feb 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for the updates..well done..until you post again

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Date: 22 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

New reader to your story .  I love it well done!!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I'm hoping his past doesn't catch up to him.  until you post again



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow thank you for the update..well done..What will Bella do?  I would get to know him better since she is smitten.  Yes he has a dangerous past, maybe they are not looking for him.  One could hope..until you post again

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Date: 06 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait for you to post again.

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Date: 11 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

AWW Thank you for the update..well done.. finally they let each other know howw they felt.  until you post again



Author's Response:

They're so good together!

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Date: 18 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 26 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..well done until you post again

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Date: 03 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 16 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update.  I wonder who this man is? Is he there for Ward or just a tourist.  I'm happy Ward was able to speak with Riley to bring himself some comfort.  Well done until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again..Let's hope ward's sister is ok



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

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Date: 21 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you for the updates

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Date: 17 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

Thank you for a great story..well done.. I'm happy it turn out well for Wade & Bella.  Beth survived  she is happy with her family. Not sure about Esme & Carlise what happened to them? 

Grabbing Onto Love by flamingpen18 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Isabella Swan moved to Forks to spend time with her dad before she graduates. She meets Alice and becomes close to Alice and her family. Edward knows she's his mate. Bella knows somethings is between them, and she wants to know what it is. Bella always gets what she wants, and she wants Edward.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46957 Read Count: 2702
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2022 Updated: 07 Jan 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

New Reader to your story!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! until you post again.  I want to know who hurt Bella.

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Date: 23 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Black Tears by ReasonToBe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

After the death of her father, Bella found herself having to take care of her ailing mother. With her brother, Jasper, away in another country, everything was fine until she lost her job, her perfect apartment and had to live in her car. That was all before a stranger offered a job that would lead her to believe that beggers can't be choosers.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80885 Read Count: 4661
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2022 Updated: 25 Apr 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2023 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thank you for a lovely story.  I really enhoyed reading it.  well done.

Searching for Hope by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 349]
Summary:

One night, an empty road, and a girl who needs a savior. Heavy Angst, Tough subject matter, possible triggers. Read with caution. Canon couples, non-canon families. Buckle up and enjoy the ride.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 176386 Read Count: 28061
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2022 Updated: 06 Jul 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

New reader to your  add story..Well done..let's hope he doesn't  get away . No more deaths. If he gets away someone Has to kill him before he Can hurt anyone else.  Until you post again. Great story

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Date: 15 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thank you for the update..Edward & Bella went to the hospital  to see James..that was huge for Edward.  Maybe he will heal also..until you post  again 

 

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Date: 18 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank you for the update..well done.. I wonder if Edward wll tell Bella how he feels? He knows she is damaged and young, been through hell & back.  I hope they can help each other.  I want them to find Bella's baby.  I hope she is alive & well.  can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

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Date: 21 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thank you for the update..Well done..I don't  know why the Forks police felt they had to tell that Bella was found. I agree she needed a little more  time..until you post again

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Date: 24 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow Thank you for the update..I think they have enough info.  What if Sam killed hope how is finding her going to help, I guess DNA but Bella would be crushed.  Until you post again.  I can't wait.  They bettere find something they can hold him on.

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Date: 25 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update.. Forks police Arrgg..until you post again

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Date: 29 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thank you for the update... well done..I sure hope tha that's Hope.  I can't wait until the next chapter..until you post again. BRAVO!!!

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Date: 07 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Thank you for the update..thank god they found Hope.  I hope Bella gets to keep her daughter.  Angela & Ben can still stay in Vanessa life but Bella needs her Hope to recover from the hell she'd been in.    Until you post again!! I can't wait for the next chapter.  I'm also happy Samm didn't kill the baby.

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Date: 10 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know what they can do either.  I hope there is a way for everyone to be happy. Bella has to get better.  until you post again

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Date: 12 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Aww thank you for the update..Bella is crushed 😣 I don't  know  if there was any other way to tell her. I don't know what they're  going to do. How does Bella get a chance  to see Hope? Until you post again..well done 

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Date: 21 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know what they're going to do but I hope it works.  Marcus, Maggie I hope they can help Bella get Hope back & heal.  Until you post again

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Date: 24 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thank you for the update..this is going to be a hard road for Bella.  I don't know if she will get Hope back.  I hope they can work something out where Hope is in everyone's life.  Bella, Angela & Ben.  I guessing the Cullens also.  Edward will not leave Bella.  Well done.  Until you post again

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Date: 27 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thank you for the update..well ddone..until you post again

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Date: 06 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Thank you for the update..this can be real. There is no way they are married.  I hope there is not a marriage license for them.  No way.  well done.  until you post again.  Bella has to get herself together to be able to speak on what this man did to her.  until you post again

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Date: 08 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow just wow.  I can't believe this. They have to get to the bottom of this. No way are they married.  I hope they can fix this.  I like that the judge isn't having any bs in his court room. I'm happy Edward & Carlisle got a chance to talk.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  well done. until you post again

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Date: 18 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Thank you for the update..well done..Sam & his council buddies need to be castrated..until you post agin

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Date: 22 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know if these people will ever pay for their crimes.  I sure as hell hope so. This is crazy that no one stood up for these young girls.  I hope EVERYONE involved will be punished.  until you post again

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Date: 01 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Thank you for the update..well done..I'm happy Yorkie got arrested ..until you post again

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Thank you for the updates..well done.. what an AMAZING story. Sad part is this probably true some where in the world. People are crazy. I hope Jane Dow is there little girl, how did Sam come in contact with her.   until you post again.

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Date: 18 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Aw thank you for the update..well done.  I hope the visit goes well.  until you post again

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Date: 24 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Thank you for the update..well done.. Bella is very strong. I'm happy the visit went well. Hope didn't cry when she was with Bella.  I'm so happy it was a nice visit.  I'm not sure how Bella is going to handle this from now one.  I hope Bella can stay in Hope's life.  Until you post again.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

thank you for the update..well done.  It was hard to read.  I feel so bad for Bella, her thinking is correct thinking about Hope/Vanessa. Bella realizes that Ben & Angela will give a good life.  I like the way Edward exolained to her that Hope/Vanessa can still be in her life.  I hope it works out for Bella & Hope & Ben & Angela.  until you post again

 

BRAVO!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2023 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Thank you for the update..well done.  I'm happy Angela & Ben camre to the court house to show Bella support.  I wonder who has Sam back that he is all clean up?  I thought the people on the Rez realised what he did to those little girls.  Until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2023 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Thank you for the update..well done.  That was ruff but I'm so proud of Bella.  Until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2023 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Thank you for the update..enjoy your family. Bella has been through a lot.  I'm happy she is strong enough to say what has happened to her & the other girl.  Well done

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2023 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again..So proud fo Bella!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2023 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Thank you for the update..well done.  I'm so proud of Bella.  Uncle James put up quite a fight.  Until you post again  BRAVO!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2023 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Thank you for the update..well done..Bella is really healing I'm so proud  of her..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2023 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Thank you for the update..I hope they see this is just a lie.  What about the little girl he killed.   I can't take Sam.  I hope the jury realizes he is sick in the head.  No way he should get off.  I hope they find out the inmates got to him and did to him what he did to Bella. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Thank you for the update..well done.  I really appreciated this chapter especially after their last court appearance.  I sure hope they convict his sorry ass. until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Thank you for the update..well done.  YES he is GUILTY!! I hope the rest of them that turn the other way and let him harm those little girls get in trouble also. Bella has a long road ahead of her but with her family & the Cullens help she will recover.  Very good story sad but very good.  Unilt you post again

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Date: 05 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 71: Outtake Six

Thank you for the outtake

Dangerous Curves by heartfortwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary:

Cullen Enterprises takes over Newton Holdings in a hostile takeover. Breaking up the company and selling the pieces for profit, much like hundreds of companies before. Except this takeover is far from the ordinary. Almost forty-year-old Edward Cullen has plans for the building and the intelligent, curvy twenty-five-year-old woman who fascinates him. Olderward/Curveyella HEA

Dangerous Curves


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53621 Read Count: 26482
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2022 Updated: 10 Dec 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2023 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update..well done.  I hope all is well.  Welcome back!! Bella sure put Tanya in her place.  lol..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

New reader to your story..well done..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update ..Well done..until you post sgain

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for the update..I hope Edward can fix this.  Maybe Esme can help.  well done..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..well done..Can't wait to see what happens next..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you for the update..I hope you feel better soon. Edward finally let Bella know how he feels.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Edward is really weak, I wonder how long it will take him to recover.  I can't wait to see how he gets Thomas back.  until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..well done. Edward is home😍I hope he gets better soon—until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..well done.  Edward is on the mend.  I can't wait for Bella to tell him about his sleazy friend. Edward will destroy him, I'm sure of it. Edward is so happy right now, he'll be happier when Bella & him make love.  Until you post again.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2023 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2023 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update..well done.  Bella finally told Edward what happened.  I can't wait to see how he gets him back.  Like Edward said he knows his weaknesses.  Until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update.,well done. What a beautiful  wedding😍. I can't wait to find out what Edward did to Thomas. Thanks to Jasper's quick thinking we will have to wait until the honeymoon is over. Can't wait to see how things unfold with Rose & Emmett, Jasper & Alice .  Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for the update!!Thomas got what he deserved!! YAY!! The wedding was nice and now they are on the wedding night.  Edward is happy as a pig in slop.  LOL When Balla told him she had to tell him something & it was that she was ovulating Edward was very happy.  Hoping Bella will get pregnant soon.  I wish them the best hopefully there will be no more drama.  until you post again  well done.  I so enjoy this story

Shape the Narrative by LaMomo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary:

ShapeBanner

Sequel to “Correct the Narrative.” OlderWard, LawyerWard
After years of pining for Bella from afar, Edward finally confessed his feelings to her.
But between their age difference and busy careers—Bella’s impending MBA graduation, Edward’s academia at Cornell—will they be able to navigate all the challenges they face in their new relationship?

Follow their fast-paced romance as they shape their narrative.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Narrative Series
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67629 Read Count: 14441
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2022 Updated: 29 Aug 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Thank you for a lovley story.  I really enjoyed it. Bravo!!!