Penname: rodeinti [Contact] Real name: robyn odei-ntiri
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 88932
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling

thank you for the update......they are finally together, I hope they get pregnant and we find out who wants Bella dead

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3983]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 981978
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I absolutely adore and love this story!!!  You did an AMAZING JOB!!!  I love your characters, I love the CULLEN family and all there friends.  Carlise & Esme have one hugh family and all those grandchildren.  I love that they are so close.  They had there ups & downs but rose above it.  I can't wait for the continuation of this story.  bella is going to do well with her art, Edward will win another oscar.  Emment and Rosalie deserve a little girl.  until you post again

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 208] New!
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 201590 Read Count: 38572
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 May 2021
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Date: 13 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 41: Getting Will's help and Jenny going to Sleep

Thank you for the update..well done..Wow I can't wait to see who the babies belong to...until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review as always

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Date: 08 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 40: Jane's Story and Aro's End

Thank you for the update...well done!! Aro finally got what he deserved..I like Jane's story telling, Aro had to feel like a piece of sh$t although I know he didn't..tha's crazy that you ould treat your own children like that...I hope Jake gets his family land back and Aro is in Hell!!! until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, i was worried this chapter would be too hard for some to read. I just wanted to give Jane a chance at justice and to send Aro off to hell while showing just how far reaching Aro crap went. I hope to post my next update soon, but i have an assessment for my collage due on monday so ive had to delay working on the next chapter till after that! Thank you again, rodeinti for your continued support of this story it means the world to me :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 39: Jenny's Surprise

Thank you for the update..Jane got her revenge!!! now what if Jenny is pregnant with two baby daddies..I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! i cant wait till i feel satifide the next chapter is perfect and that you liked this update so much! it means the world to me!

 

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Date: 19 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Bringing down the Moles

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see how they get there answers..I hope its before Aro can do any damage.  until you post again, hopefully tomorrow..smiley face



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! it means a lot!!! Sadly can't post today, but i am hoping by next thursday i'll have the next chapter up for you all. Smiley Face

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Date: 17 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 29: A well-deserved holiday

Nice..very nice..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

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Date: 20 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 44: Playtime with the Kids and a Heart to Heart

Thank you for the update..Yes I am very pleased with the family.  They really know one another.  Hopefully Bella will be ok soon.  I can't wait for Jacob to get there and see what the Cullens can do for him and his family.  until you post again.  Well done



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and i am glad you liked the chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 28: The final stretch

Thank you for the update..Well done..it's almost over..I hope the rest goes as planned..until you post again 



Author's Response:

And that you for your review!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Time to gather the pieces - part one

Thank you for the update..I hope everything  goes according to plan..I want Bella & Edward back together ASAP..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank s for the review!I got some nice and evil plans for how they handle James that I hope everyone will love, just got to make it flow right.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 23: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly

I love this story..I was shocked that Bella killed Victoria but she had to go..lol..I don't trust Aro or his wife..I hope nothing  happens to the baby..I like the way they work..Edward and his team so far have everything under control..I hope it stays that way..until you post again..Well done..Bravo



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

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Date: 25 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Tying up loose ends

Thank you for the update..I still dont trudt Ato and his wife..I hope Aro is not smarter then them..he must pay for what they did to Charlie and Renee..until you post again..well done

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Date: 13 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 25: A race to the finish line, Bella style

Thank, you for the update..Well done..I hope they succeed in there mission because I don't want Ago to torture  Bella..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 43: Alice

Thank you for the updates..well done..I'm sorry Bella hurts her hands, but when she recounted everything that has happened it was a lot..Poor Alice..Edward Sr is very strong..I hope Edward and Bella can give him back his land.  Aro was one sick puppy..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and your right Aro is very sick, thankfully he wont be hurting anyone else anymore. Edward jnr was trained by someone so Edward snr is a very complex man like his son and i just wanted to show one side of him that wasn't all emotionless. Everything will work out for the best for everyone as well as they can :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 154860
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

thank you for the update............I hope Bella is going to be ok

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes Bella Edward & Jasper are on there way!!!.How did Edward know it was Bella class?.um....he just knows his wife to well....lol

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

that Alice ......she is something.........very cute story so far.on to my next chapter 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well alright...this man is clearly deranged.....what is Edward going to do?.Weher the hell is his kid......do they even go to the school?..or is the child so scared that they are sitting in the class  with a disguise on.....lol.....maybe the child went to the school another time...I'm onto the next chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well that was special......Poor Jessia ....lol...the girl is deranged.one dance , and she thought  that adonis wanted her........loll.on to the next chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ok clearly Phil is one crazy mother...........What about Esme & Carlise, I couldn't believe they treated Bella that way.....My eyes were watery when I read that....What is there problem?...on to the next chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow.Esme is a piece of work

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella & Rosalie had a good time..........

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

thank you for the update......a lot of abuse in this  story.everyone has been touch by violence.........The little boy whose father was crazy as a bed bug.....The doctor his father was really crazy abuse your own children, I can't fathom that.I have three children that worjk my nerves something but I would NEVER harm them like that...I hope Bella walks again and they get their family....Edward needs help to resolve his issues with his family..well done....until next time

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 83311
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two

that was AMAZING!!!.thanks for the update..I'm sorry it's coming to and end.I love this story it reminded me of the proposal with Sandra Bullock and Ryan Reynolds...Well Done Bella will get her HEA and so will Edward....I liked the ladies at the wedding swooning at Edward and Bella loving it!!! until you post again

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 41759
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Past Actions and Current Consequences

thank you for the update.I agree with you, you should duck and hide...Thank you for reposting the chapter, cause I didn't get to read it....I love this story from FWAR and then you stop writing....when I saw it here , and saw yu were writing again I was ecstatic , I really wanted to know who they did at the dance competition...........now I know thank you....I need to know when Tanya is going to get her comeupence.....until you post again

Summary:

Edward and Bella finally found their way back though the darkness that nearly consummed them. Will they be prepared for the wildest ride yet? Canon couples, AH and NC-17 for the usual. Third story in the My Boys series.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86867 Read Count: 35828
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 May 2013
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

new reader to your story...I'm gonna have to read the other 2 to fully understand whats going on..............I love this story.......I'm hoping the babies are going to be ok, also hoping they look just like their father.  These children will be loved and spoil rotten, can't wait for that to happen

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

thank you for the update.I'm sure everything is going to be ok

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

thank you for the update...I'm sorry rl is kicking your butt, grateful you still find time for us............the babies are coming!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 415857
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning

thank you for the update...EDward & Jake were funny......Bella introducing Edward as her boyfriend .um that was huge right,  Charlie didn't know right?  Can't wait to see what's in the letter he left.   I hope Bella does well at school..until you post again

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100260
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

Well, Well...thank you for the update........I wonder will they ever calm down with one another.....Atleast Bella held her own..Edward words sure do cut

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions

New reader to your story........Oh my , why did Mr. Newtown have to walk in the mens room at that point....Bella has lost her job...so not fair....lets hope Mr. Cullen has wonder what has happen to his waitress...........can't wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hi there, I hope you'll enjoy it :0)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: New impact

thanks for the update.....I wonder didi Edward just show up or has been thinking of Bella like she has been thinking of him...I'm sure Mike has a propostion for her.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Second chance

only Edward

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Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Surviving the fisrt day

wow the first day wasen't nice at all.



Author's Response:

Nope...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 110433
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Minneapolis

AW she almost said it, so he could hear her, but Edward kept stopping her

Summary: Past Featured Story

CFoW

 

Lily O'Brien is a hopeful child. Will her special cups of hot chocolate and a new friendship with Dr. Edward Cullen make her greatest wish come true? Aaaaaw moments ahead.

 

*Edward, Bella, Alice, Charlie, Angela

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28639 Read Count: 8711
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I so adore this story!!!..........It was so heartwarming, I loved the charaters, Lily was a hot mess the way she had them all wrap around her fingers was amazing!!!.WELL DONE!!!....I enjoyed the ride

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 254790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises

thank you for the update.I love this story!!! You ladies ROCK!! AMAZING!!! Yes I'm am happy Gina got what was coming to her.I wish Jane could have gotten to her though...The kids seem so happy with Edward, Carlise, Esme, Jasper & Emmet...I wonder how long it will take Rose to come around.until you post again

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View and being such a wonderful part of our success in writing this story.  We both put a lot of time into this story and we are very grateful to have the following that we have gathered.  Because of the upheaval going on in Fan Fiction we are both concerned that HCV will or could fall victim to the haters and be removed – should this happen be assured that this story can be found on TWCS under the same name and it updates on the same schedule.   We are also going to be posting a blogspot for this story and all of our stories, therefore we will always be able to be found.  So rest assured that HCV will go on, no matter what.  A lot of you are asking about Sue and when her return will come.  We have made no secret that she will make an appearance, but before she does there are a few other things that will happen.  At this point her return will not be for a few chapters yet.  There are a lot of comments about Rose and there isn’t much about her in the next chapter, but after that there will be some things coming up.  As we have said other times there are approximately 30-35 chapters within this story, and there will be around 6-8 Out-Takes posting...The Out-Takes will post under the name ‘Enduring His Cimmerian View’.  There were not a lot of questions, and we have covered most of the comments concerns or worries, but if you have more questions you can always find us on Facebook under TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  There are always people leaving comments and their theories there, come join the conversations.  Kasi &(Nikky)

 

Chapter 22 Teaser...subject to changes during BETA process.

We spent most of our day watching Christmas movies, and for supper we had a huge spread of really fattening foods.  I had Eric prepare for me several wonderful dishes.  I had wanted something easy for today - something that wouldn’t take away from our family day.  The dishes he made only needed to be warmed up before serving.  The kids loved it, but then again, we had some great things to choose from.  Bella really loved the extra cheesy enchiladas and the lobster bisque.  There were so many things to choose from that we had enough leftovers to last us for the next few days.  After we ate, we cleaned up the kitchen together. 

We all settled down in the living room after the clean-up was done for our new tradition.  After we were all settled in, I passed out a few gifts to each person in the room.  “Okay, here are a few gifts that you get to open before we go to mass tonight.”  I made sure to pass out the gift bags that held our new matching clothing that Esme had chosen for our first Christmas mass together.  I had asked Esme to help, and she did, but then refused to let me pay her back for the gifts.  Esme said that the new outfits were from her, and that she was happy that I and my new family were going to attend services together.  

“Edward, we can wait and open these gifts tomorrow, can’t we?”  Bella asks.

“No, Baby; these gifts are for tonight for our church service together.  This is our first Christmas mass we get to spend together and these gifts will help make it more special.  They are from Esme, who wanted to help make this special.  There are gift bags for each of us.  Okay everyone, open them up and let’s see what we have.”

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!

Ladies thank you for the update.I just LOVE this story!!!.WELL DONE!!!.....Where do I begin............I like that Bella save Edward from Sally.she's quick on her feet.......If Bella's only lie is her age then i'm sure Edward will get over it.....she really has been through a lot.doesn't want her sibling taken from her...Edward going to have to wait 2 more years before he can have her......I'm just happy he put the brakes on or he would have ended up in jail.....lol.who knew she needed protection from him...lol.I like their time together and I'm happy Bella was able to tell Edward her lie....What will Edward tell his shrink.......What will he tell the guys, they all love her....until you post again.........BRAVO!!!



Author's Response:

Hello our faithful readers and reviewers!  We were expecting a bit of a lashing from some of you, and we have gotten a few but nothing like I expected.  Please let me remind you all now first and foremost that we are both happy ever after kind of gals.  Little refresher is needed about ages, and a few other things, since there were a few questions.  Edward is 28 and will soon be turning 29.  Bella just turned 11 when the twins were born, Sue left when Bella was 13, and Bella has been working for the university for over 5 years.  Bella just turned 19 in chapter 8.  Edward is 9 and 1/2 years older than Bella.  Before Sue left, she obtained a fake ID for Bella that said Bella was 18.  Therefore everyone surrounding the apartment building assumed she was of legal age.  Sue needed everyone to think Bella was 18, and she was sure to scare tactic that into Bella.  All these years, Bella has continued to maintain the age Sue said she had to say she was, in fear of not being able to stay with the twins.  Now for Bree Tanner and James...Bree Tanner was the female student from Edward’s Summer school course he taught.  In the summer for the past several years, Edward has been helping his good friend Marcus by teaching the kids who struggle to pass, or are so far behind they may not graduate high school.  Bree Tanner was the hoodie wearing shy and quiet girl from chapters 1 and 2.  Bree lives in Forks and attends high school at Forks High.  James Hunter is a Math teacher and the truancy officer for the Forks school district.  We don’t want to give too much away, but if you think back to the earlier chapters, when Edward had to take a break from his panic attacks, he was clear to tell Marcus his concerns about Bree being abused.  Bella is naive about many things, but she has grown a lot in the past few chapters.  We want to be clear that Bella feels as if she lied to Edward, she started trusting him a long time ago and when she started trusting him she feels she should have told him then.  Edward doesn’t feel betrayed by the lie, but he is more of in shock by the lie.  When he thought he was almost 5 years older than Bella he was concerned with the age difference, mainly because of how innocent she is.  Now that that almost five is almost ten, he is confused.  The next chapter will have you cheering Edward on, and hating his guts too.  We don’t want to give too much away, but I will say this, we are both excited at the prospect of the reviews after the next chapter posts.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing this story, you all have no idea how much your words mean to us.  Thank you, Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Teaser for Chapter 18: Confessions  (As always subject to changes in the Beta process.)

Leaving Bella’s place, I get in my car and drive.  I don’t even slow down when the speedometer hits one-hundred-thirty miles per hour; I just keep driving.  I am racing to get away from the fear and the rage that is inside of me. I still feel so angry; how the fuck did I not see that she was only nineteen?!  I mean, she looks so young; I am so fucking pissed at myself.  She is still a baby, and the fact that she is only nineteen, doesn’t keep me from wanting her.  I want her, and I need to be with her.  I want her in every way, which is so fucked up. I shouldn’t want to be with a nineteen year old girl.

 

She was thirteen when Sue left her to look after Seth and Leah.  She was so fucking young, and she ended up in Aro’s club at thirteen!  Fuck, if he would have said yes to her…if she was in the pictures I had to choose from…I would have picked her…I know I would have… fuck! I could have really hurt her.  I am really fucking sick! Thank God he said no! Fuck, the dip shit pimp that said yes...shit! I’m sure she would…fuck I don’t even want to finish that thought.

 

“FUCK!” I scream out and I do an illegal U-turn at eighty miles per hour.  I decide I need to see Aro. If I find out that fucker knew her real age, I am going to add that motherfucker to my shit list.  I am going to hurt him so fucking much, and anyone who tries to stop me, too.

 

 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Snow Storms

i LOVE THIS S TORY .YOU TWO LADIES DO A amazing job!!!.   I have to answer on fanfiction because I don't get reply's on this site..........I don't know why.sad face..love the story



Author's Response:

Hello to our faithful bunch, thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 20 of HCV.  Nikky and I really are so grateful to all our wonderful readers and reviewers.  In the author’s note I asked all of you to tell me what your favorite line from the story so far.  Here is Nikky’s from chapter 19 – "Have a good night, and keep Little Edna in your pants. And I do mean your pants. Close the door behind you when you're able to shut your mouth and leave." I stand there for a minute with my mouth hanging open, before shaking my head and leaving.   My favorite quote so far is from Chapter 20 – "I will use the adult terms, and try to stick to the given terms of penis or vagina, but please, for my sanity, can we not call my cock a winkie?"

Many of you are wondering who is behind Bella being hurt.  Bella actually fell, but it was what took place at the college before she left that caused her the issues to be as sick as she is right now.  In the next chapter that person and their actions will be handled, and handled quite well.  Some have worried that we may have Bella been brutalized or raped and we want to be clear that we would not ever do that in this story.  We both agree with you that Bella has been brutalized and hurt enough from her so called loved ones to cause her anymore brutalization.  There was an attack against her at the college before she left, and as I said that will be handled quite well. 

Thanks again for all of the wonderful attention and recognition you all give to His Cimmerian View.  Your responses mean the world to us, thanks.  Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Chapter 21 teaser…subject to changes during beta process…

I make it back to my car quickly.  I open her door sitting her in her seat and strap her in as best I can. “Baby, you’re in my car, I’m going to get you to Carlisle.”  I kiss her head, close her door, and run around to my side.  I get in and start driving without waiting to put on my seat belt. I switch the heat on high. “Baby, I got the heating on for you. We’ll be there soon.”  Please God let us get there soon!  I fiddle with my cell getting the hands free turned on, so I can call Carlisle.

“Hello Edward,” I hear Carlisle’s cheerful voice come across the hands free.

“Can you get to the Hospital, right away?  Its Bella, she is hurt. I found her in the park unconscious. She has a head wound, and she’s been lying in the fucking snow for about an hour.”  I try to calm my voice, the last thing I need to do is break down.

“Edward, I’m on way back to the hospital now.  I just left a few minutes ago. I should get there before you do.  I will let you go. The last thing we need is for you to crash.  I’ll be outside with a team ready for you when you get there.  Drive safely, son.” Carlisle disconnects the call, not waiting for me to reply.

“Baby, we’re almost there. Come on Baby, wake up for me.”  I stroke her face, while driving around the fucking cars that are in front of me.  These people are idiots, they are driving like old people fuck, slow and sloppy.  I commit many driving penalties, yet I am driving better than anyone else out here.  I’m sure I’ve been caught on nearly all the speed cameras that are up.  I sigh out in relief as I come up to the hospital.  I pull up in front of the emergency doors and I see Carlisle already there.  I pull to a stop and he waves to the door and opens Bella’s door with his other hand.  He picks her up turns and places her on a gurney.  I jump out and catch up to him.

“Hey you can’t park there,” I hear. 

Turning around I see the security officer glaring at me, and I throw him my keys.  “Then you move it,” I say.

He catches my keys, and looks at me.  “I am not here to be your valet.”

I turn back and glare at him.  “Then call and have it fucking towed, I don’t give a shit.  My girl is… fuck!”

I feel Carlisle pull on my arm.  “Mitch please can you park the car for my son, she is in critical condition.”  Mitch looks at Carlisle then to me and his face pales, but he nods his head.  I feel the air leave my body, she’s in critical condition!   “Edward I need you to calm down and come with me.”  Carlisle pulls me along with him and I head to the trauma room.  I see them removing her clothes.  “Edward, do you know why her clothes soaking wet? Even under her coat is wet. There is no way this all occurred from her lying in the snow.” I shake my head at him, because I don’t know. I stand back and watch them work on her.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

thank you for the update !!!.ladies I'm speechless well done.......Billy was a wealth of information..I'm sorry Edward had a panic attack, but happy Carlise was there to help him.....What can I say about Sue, Tanya what ever her name is..happy that the twins are Edward's and him and Bella can be a family for real......Bella took very good care of those kids....Jane is about to have a great time with Harry, James it doesn't matter, he won't be rapeing or abuseing any more young girls......well done ladies!!! until your next post 



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 139351
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: One for the Money

thank you for the update.sorry about your family.I love this story and like Alice can't wait for the wedding.until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Silent Lucidity

I so love this story...they are perfect for oneanother

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

thank you for the update...........I love this  story..I hope their secret is safe..they are in love and really getting married that is all that matters

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Sea of Love

thank you for the update..the wedding was very nice.................Esme and th egirls were nice to.............I love the toast that Garrett & Angela gave...............well done.,felt like I was there sitting on the beach watching a beauitful wedding!!!..........now for the honeymoon and those grandbabies Esme wants...lol

Dangerously in Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought she had found everything in Edward Masen while she was at high school, but when he mysteriously vanishes from her life without a trace Bella has no choice but to move on.

When Bella moves to Washington DC three years later her past comes back to hit her in the face and she realised that loving Edward is going to be a dangerous game, full of fear, pain, action, but most of all passion. AH    

Thanks to my Beta'a Sally and NeeNee.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133255 Read Count: 64999
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

new reader to your story, I just love it.....Can't wait to find out why Edward had to leave.................Where is the rest of the family?...Will they make it through the night without making Love....I seriously doubt it.....I loved when Edward was teasing and Tanya was having a fit!!!!......Can't wait to see how the story unfolds, until you post again



Author's Response:

Hi rodeinti, thanks so much for the review. I'm new to this site. I only joined today so thank you for being one of my first reviewers. :)

 

Bee xx

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

thank you for the update.I love Edward & Bella together.Can't wait to find out what he is hiding, and where is the rest of the family.until you post again

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1924]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 407477
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

thank you for the up date......Wow who knew Charlie would be so understanding.............Maybe he knows Edward would take really good care of Bella

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

thank you for the update

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

thank you for the update.....I'm happy your son is ok.....sorry you didn't do well on the test......I hope you still graduate with a good GPA.....Bella is going to tell Edward that she feels the same way....I hope ..........since Alice was able to show him that Bella will be his....WELL DONE!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

thank you for the update..love your story ....can't wait to see how it all unfolds

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yea Charlie so what do you think?  I think that will be fine my Bella will be close by and I can see her when I want...Thank you Dr. Cullen

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

thank you for the update.Bella is making progress

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Very nice I wonder what Edward's idea is?....um until you post again....thank you for the update

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella could stay at the CULLEN HOUSE!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

thank you for the update......Edward is in his glory, but he has to get use to Bella scent, I'm happy his family is there for him. Bella is Edward's mate, I wonder how she'll take the news when she finds out.........Is this Edward goregous as Twilght"s Edward?..until you post again  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

thats right Edward play nice.....listen to Carlise..I'm sure Bella will talk to you again...thank you for the update

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

thank you for the update.I wonder what Bella will wish for

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

thank you for the update.....Edward is so stubborn..........I hope he isn't going to be stuck in Bella mind....since her shield is so strong

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

thank you for the update.........I wonder what they'll find in Phoenix

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE...BELLA IS MAKING PROGRESS

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

thank you for the update.Bella really isn't giving up.....she can really do what Edward does......lol

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

thank you for the update...it's coming back to her.smile

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

thank you for the update..Charlie...interesting

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

thank you for the update.I hope your son is fine soon

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

thank you for the update

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

thank you for the updfate....Bella kissed Edward in public not in the white room...that's what I'm talking aboujt

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

thank you for the update............what a makeout session they are having...smile they are

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

thank you for the update.....Bella is moving fast......lol......it felt good to her.I'm not mad at her

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

thank you for the update............well done

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421026
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

thank you for the update...Finally they are both on the same page...I love it.Bella finally gets what she wants and Edward can live again.WELL DONE

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I love this story!!!.so cute.....funny as HELL!!!.......Emmet is a hoot in this story ....Will Edward fix this and he and Bella get that baby...I sure hope so...keep me posted when you post

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

who knew Bella had it in her to tell Alice off

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Maybe Bella will get her baby after all

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

thank you for the update..I m please for my friends(Edward & Bella), I'm hoping they made that baby that Bella wants so desperately......until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

thank you for the update............I'm sure Edward is not going back either, she'll have to have a life in the country

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

thank you for the update...What will Bella do?..Tell Edward.until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

thank you for the update.....Edward came to get his woman..He wasn't waiting for her to come back.........not my boy...........can't wait for the next chapter.........well done...sorry again for your loss

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

thank you for the update............I'm so sorry for your lost........(sad face)

Summary: Past Featured Story

ATL

Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 474384
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

thank you for ther update........I hope Edward comes back in one piece.......Alice needs help fast........Edward's birthday was nice.........I want Rose & Emmet to try again, and hopefully they have twins........evryone who wants a baby should get one..........until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

thank you for the update.This Edward is in Love with his Bella .I'm happy they are getting away..I really didn't think Bella was going to leave Bailey, I thought for sure she was going to beg Edward for her to come and he would have said YES!!! what ever you want baby......I love it........I hope they have a great time and Bella gets to handcuff Edward

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

thank you for the update...........Edward needs to calm down..I prey everything is going to be ok.  they could be setting him up, maybe the man are just hideing....anyway Edward better come home in one piece..I hope he also calls Aro like he should..........we will see when you update again...........until next time

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

thank you for the update..I hope everything will be ok for them.....I know that women it Italy told them something would happen...I hoping that it dosen't........Edward & Bella gave those girls a show....well done.........until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

thank you for the update.............wow..these two are always having fun...I can't wait for Edward to find out he is having a son!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

thank you for the update..Edward say's yu only have to ask....lol.I hpe they have a great time in Italy and nothing happens to Bailey when there away....until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

thank you for the update........I'm so happy Edward was honest with Bella.I don't trust the new family.I could see the daughter telling Bella she had her way with her husband, just because.......

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

thank you for the update..........I love your story so much!!!.......Seth good looking out or should I say Sue..lets hope Edward's work is not a set-up and that he is going to be fine....are they pregnant again?.Edward did a oop's

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

thank you for the update..............look at all the love they have for one another..I love it........Is bella pregnant again?.....Did bella ever tell Edward what Sue said?...........until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

thank you for the update.They are really having a GREAT TIME!!!.I like when they spoke with Bailey via skype

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

thank you for the update.........they are having a wonderful time on their honeymoon...........Edward is a shopping fool

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

thank you for the update............What in the world is Renee up to?.Aro my kind of uncle....lol

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

thank you for a wonderful story....They will find out who killed Aro.Edward and Bella will have another child.............one could only hope that Alice is going to be ok, and it's not because of her that Aro got killed at his birthday party

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

thank you for the update.....Edward relly knows how to please his woman

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

thank you for the update...........what a nice family trip they are having, even if all Bailey gets to do is sleep and play with her new bear...this is mommy & daddy time..........love it ..........well done

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

thank you for the update..............I hope Edward listens to bella and does not tell that she is pregnant.....Seth needs to watch himself, the boss ain't to happy with him right now

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

thank you for the update...............will Edward ever learn?.....although he's been dying to speak with Seth aboujt how he looks at Bella any way......until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

thank you for the update...Greyson is on his way.........lets hope nothings happen to him or his mother....I wonder what the fall out is going to me over Billy's death?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

thank you for the update....I'm happy Alice and the baby are all ok....I can't wait for Hawaii and Edward to find out he is having a boy........well done

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

thank you for the update.....Bella needs to have that baby soon....I'm sure he'll look just likw his dad......................

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Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

thank you for the update....Bella put Alice in her place....Edward & Esme back her up.

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Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

tank you for the update.....do we know what that sound was?.I'm happy Alice is getting to much needed help...........Edward is a mess.......well done