Reviews by Lisalou
Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER

Most mothers would do whatever it took to provide for their children, which was exactly what Bella Masen did when she found out her husband had left them. With the walls closing in and the debt collectors on her doorstep, how far was she willing to go?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45714 Read Count: 124535
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2016 Updated: 29 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Even though Alice says they are not prisoners, they still kind of are. She can't go back home. I'm glad Bella has Alice at least.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I too want to stab Edward!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Edward is such a stupid ASS! How can he think their life will be fine. I would hate him.
Thanks for the awesome updates. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

My guess is Edward is Little finger since he is missing his. I really hope he saves her!
I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Bad form Bella! I can get being mad at Edward, because I still am too, but that was a horrible thing to stay! Especially when the kids were there. How will she ever make that right?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So close to getting answers!!!! Thanks for the updates. I want more!!
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

There doesn't seem to be any love between them anymore. Edward just seems like a hard man. Poor Bella. Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next one!
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

He better let her get back to her kids! Please update really soon!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Edward better make it good! Although I can't think of anything that would make what he did alright. I would have a hard time forgiving him. Thanks for writing. I hope the next update is real soon!!!!
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

What was so wrong with baking Carlisle a cake? Edward was the one that got them in this awful situation. How will he ever get them out of it? He should have just let them be. They were way safer when Bella worked at The Rub.
I wouldn't trust any of his plans. Edward is an idiot!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

For once, Edward finally did something right.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I can't wait to see what kind of a job Rose has in mind. Thanks for writing.
Lisa... Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 May 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow! At least she won't have to actually have sex with them. I would really hate Edward for leaving her no other choice but to become a whore. He better have a real good excuse for what he did. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a stupid, stupid man!!! How could he bring his kids to this place? I hope Bella lets him have it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Edward isn't working on winning Bella's forgiveness acting like that!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

He went behind her back and saw the children already. It seems a little late to be asking her if he could eventually see the kids.
I don't know if she should take his blood money for the kids. I am curios to know how he has freedom now and more money.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I can't wait to hear what happened to turn Edward's life around. Is he now the boss?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I'm so glad he didn't kill Carlisle! Maybe being around him won't be so bad now. I still don't trust him yet though.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Things will never work out for those two if they don't start talking to each other!
I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I can't wait for the talk!!!!!!
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I can't wait for the talk.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Such a stupid man! I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I am so glad they had this talk. I only he would have opened up to her to begin with, all of this could have been avoided.
I am also glad he didn't sleep with anyone else. I didn't really think he had. Edward was just trying to stay alive.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I am sad to see it end! I loved how it ended.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178598
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I wonder who is taking the alpha females? I hope Bella will be safe.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I'm glad Edward didn't stop Bella from helping. I don't think the guys handled this right at all. Just how many changes does she have to go through?
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Jared is going to be trouble! I know he isn't going to take what Bella said seriously. Edward will have to do something.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

They can't hurt the baby!!! I hope the guys figure it out soon.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I hope he gets to Bella in time.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I really don't trust him!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Yay!!!! She will be safe now.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

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You know what brings a smile to my face? Memories of you… I wonder if your dreams are your reality. How I wish your life turned out exactly how you imagined it in your seventeen-year-old brain. Mine not so much.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11393 Read Count: 4701
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2016 Updated: 07 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Edward

I hope she is really mailing these to Edward!
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

This is an outtake from my story The Alpha. The moment where Peter turns Charlotte.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3532 Read Count: 465
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2016 Updated: 03 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Peter should never have bitten her without telling her all about himself. He should have got her permission first before biting her. It all kind of seemed a bit rapey to me. I kind of hope she doesn't want anything to do with him after she changes. It would serve him right!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50963
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was so happy to get the update today!!! I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good for Bella, standing up for herself!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope she shot Janina through Edward. Why wouldn't he come to his wife first?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

At least Edward didn't have to kill Carlisle himself. I'm not sure if he should have lied to Bella though.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53533
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Rose's family is in the mob too?! That is where all the money comes from. I wonder if Rose knew about it? There will be no escaping now.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Maybe Edward isn't too bad. Rose is an idiot. I don't really like her. I don't think she is really Bella's friend.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary: Past Featured Story

tnmc

 

Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157706
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good riddance Tanya!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She is so spunky! I would go out with him.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

She will when he realises he just has to ask x

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm so glad he didn't do anything with Irina. I really didn't want to read that.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Finally they opened up to each other.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I am so glad Bella kept her wits about her. She wasn't fooled. Edward was always careful around her so she really can't help them. Now that her phone is destroyed, she will definitely not help them. Jasper needs to get his ass there to help her.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Red Light by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

Bella is having a bad day that only gets worse when she finds out her marriage of 6 years is over.  Who knew running a red light would be the end of one life and the beginning of another. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29003 Read Count: 9850
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2017 Updated: 19 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why would James ever think she could overlook what he did? He is a very stupid man.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

I don't think he expected her to overlook it, he was just hoping she could forgive him.  I think he actually planned to make it up to her in some way but Victoria had other plans.  Keep reading. 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She won't even try to trust Edward because of the two jerks? I hope she doesn't cancel her date with Edward.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

After hearing his backstory, I'm surprised Edward took a chance with Bella after she told him she was going on a date with someone else. I guess her being up front about everything let him know she wasn't going to do things behind his back.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Keep in mind he met her while she was on a date with someone else as well.  He wants what she wants, someone oppen and honest.  She didn't hide anything from him and she didn't really owe him anything since they had just met.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

Summary:

BANNER

My ex-boyfriend came crashing back into my life after he got fed-up dealing with my crazy family's issues. Former Marine Cullen, turned P.I. says he is back to protect me, whether I like it or not. I guess that's how we ended up in bed together.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14954 Read Count: 6855
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2017 Updated: 14 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I wonder how Tia got away? I can't wait to find out.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That must be really hard...being so close to someone you love that really broke your heart!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Edward is some kind of a police officer? I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm thinking Tia is involved with someone from the mob or something like that. I don't trust Edward.
Thank for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

It Takes a Village by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 221]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

ITaV Banner

created by the wonderful heartfortwilight

 

 

Summary: Nowadays, families come in all shades and forms. When 32-year-old pediatrician Edward meets the woman of his dreams, he gets more than he bargained for. She’s captivating, but complicated, with her unconventional variation of family dynamic. Does she come with more baggage—or people—than he can handle? Will he be able to keep his distance? Maybe things aren’t quite as they seem. Sometimes, it takes a village...

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73244 Read Count: 29299
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2017 Updated: 30 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think Bella has a little girl and that is who he sees. I have a few ideas from the sneak peak so I can't wait to see if I am correct.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Hi,

 

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Well, there is a little girl in the mix. As your your ideas, I hope I can keep you guessing for a while because so will Edward ;).

Summary:

Tomorrow or Eternity

 

Eternity is never a certainty even for immortals. With death knocking on our door, we’ll love like no other for as long as we’re given. Tomorrow or eternity, we’ll be together.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33196 Read Count: 5105
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2018 Updated: 25 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ~Who Wants To Live Forever

did you mean to end it there? "But it was a
What comes next?
Thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out. Not sure how that happened, but it cut off half of the last sentence, which was

“But it was always worth it.”

 

It has been fixed now. Thanks again!!!

Summary:

Banner

 

***This story has been pulled to be published under Lara Norman as Bloody Halo*** When notorious criminal mastermind Edward Cullen came back to town, Bella was blindsided by old feelings of infatuation. She knew better than to dance with the devil... but she did it anyway.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2502 Read Count: 76833
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2020 Updated: 27 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

I am posting my review here since FF isn't showing them.
Edward just doesn't get what he is doing wrong. I hope Alice and Rose figure out that he needs to show Bella some love or he will never get anywhere. I don't think he is smart enough to figure it out on his own.
I love that he cut Esme and Carlisle out of everything. They need to pay for the damage that they have caused. I think Carlisle will still try to cause trouble though.
I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you for thinking of that!

So Help Me God by Della Aarohi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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Injured in a war and hardened by betrayal, she knew the moment she saw him that they would never be a family again. There was no forgiveness for her to get especially since he had claimed another.

Main Pairing: Isabella "Bella" Swan/ Edward Anthony Cullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10170 Read Count: 1555
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2020 Updated: 04 May 2020
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow! Angela isn't a good person after all. She destroyed everything. Poor Edward. I hope he can learn to love again.
I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Bella has really had a rough life. I hope eventually, Edward and Bella can fix each other. And I hate Sue. Charlie is no better. Bella should not do anything else for Charlie. Let his stupid wife do it.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68240
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

There will be hell to pay for all of those that crossed the Cullens! Charlie's fate will not be pretty.
I can't wait to see what happens to Irena and her Eleazer.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Way to win her over dickhead! Esme is going to have his ass.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I guess Edward needs to kick his own ass for leaving Bella. I wonder why he didn't think of what he did to Bella when Garrett was telling him about Bells.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Eleazar is delusional if he thinks Edward would ever marry his bitch of a daughter even if Bella isn't there.
I wonder what nut job Charlie is planning to do to Bella once he has her?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

It seems he forgot something besides Bella in the bed. He forgot to wear a condom.
I loved this chapter. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

I wonder why Edward hasn't tried to contact her? He really just wanted a one night stand? At least Bella knows where he lives and can contact him.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Someday by TheBlueScarf Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

"I've been chasing Edward Cullen since I was four years old and in all those years, it always felt farfetched. A dream that will never come true." Bella Swan has loved Edward since both were kids. She endlessly pursues Edward even when there is no hope. But when her dream comes true, her heart gets broken. Someday, they will find their way back again. BellaxEdward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23278 Read Count: 10889
[Report This] Published: 22 May 2020 Updated: 18 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Charlie will just have to get over it!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I hope Charlie isn't so mean. When people are young they don't always make the best choices. They both needed to grow up some.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

What a horrible man!
Thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

What did Carlisle mean by I own your life? I guess that is his dad?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella is playing games. She can't that oblivious. She knows what she is doing and she definitely knows what Jake has been doing all along. I can't blame Edward for getting so tired of it. I wouldn't blame him if he did get to fed up and walked away for good.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Why did you think that Bella is playing games and that she has known all along what Jake has been doing? 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella found out that Jake has had feelings for her all along a couple chapters ago. I think it was when she figured out that the Valentine's note was from Jake and they discussed that she doesn't feel that way about him.
Now that Bella knows about Jake's feeling and he knows Bella doesn't feel that way about him, she can't be that naive to not notice all of the possessive things Jake is doing. I think Jake is doing it to upset Edward and Bella is letting him. Can't she see that she is letting a 'friend' do things that only a boyfriend would do? If she isn't letting Jake do these things to get a rise out of Edward, then she is leading Jake on, letting him think that one day she will be his.
I could be off base as to what you are thinking as far as these characters go, but that is my take on the situation.
I love getting so involved it a story that it stirs up so many feelings.
Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward sees it the same way I do.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She should have seen what he would do with her letter.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm sure the note was from Jacob. He would give a note to someone that already has someone.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hope Jake moves on.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Why is Jake still trying to get between Bella and Edward?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Just because Jake doesn't see the relationship that way doesn't mean Bella has to be with him. It's his fault for hanging onto someone that he knows loves someone else.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward does love her? He doesn't seem like he is good at it or even knows what it means.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I don't like how she uses Jake as an excuse.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I was thinking bad about Edward, but not so much anymore! Bella is so naive where it comes to Jake. He has always been trying to get between Edward and Bella...And she let him!! I can see why Edward pulled away. She supposedly loves Edward but she lets Jake get too close and kind of leads him on.
Jake is pathetic. After all of these years, he is just hanging around waiting for something to happen between Bella and him. Get a clue Jake! if it hasn't happened by now, it never will unless it is out of pity.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! What a dick! I'm not sure why she even liked him after that. I would have stopped talking to him for good that day.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 May 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't know why Jake would hang around like that. If Bella doesn't love him now, she never really will. She would be just settling. How can he live with that?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Someday finally came for them!!
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 24 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was reading this on FF and there were so many adds all through the story. I couldn't enjoy it there. I will be reading it here instead. Do you know why so many adds are all through this story?
It looks like Edward likes to toy with Bella's emotions. I can't wait to find out more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119167
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Someone should take a knife and cut up that horrible man. See how he likes it.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I wish Rose would see how her two "friends" really are. I can't for Esme to get a hold of those two whores. Only the bride is supposed to wear white! I don't know who's dress was uglier, Tia or Leah. I think I will go with Tia.
I love that Edward put them in their places.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

I hope Edward can keep Bella safe. I would love to see Edward and/or Bella do unto him what he did unto Bella.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

I am so glad Bella is going to tell Edward what Billy did and said. They can fight it together.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

I hate when stories end!!!
I love that they were able to take all of those horrible people down!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

I hope the family accepts the marriage without any grief.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

Blood Demons

Edward “Viper” Masen is the president of the Blood Demons MC taking over after a rival club murdered his father. His life is busy with running the legal and illegal businesses of the club. No time or heart for a steady Old Lady, instead he took what the Blood Succubus offered. No one would take the place of his Little Isa in his heart. The girl who he fell in love with one summer, sharing all their firsts with each other until she disappeared without a trace. 

 

Bella “Isa” Stewart, daughter of Charlie “Crusher” Swan and Renee Stewart is in exile in New York when her father catches her with a boy. Not telling why she wasn’t allowed to be with him, she is commanded to stay as far away from Phoenix as possible. Over the years her father comes to visit a few times, bringing his VP Demetri, who looks at her like she is something to eat. 

What happens when she receives a phone call from someone in her father’s club to tell her that her father is dead and Demetri did it? Then Demetri shows up at her apartment building with several other members. Hopping on her bike she heads cross country to hide out with a high school friend. Arriving in Phoenix, memories of the boy she fell in love swirl in her mind. Pulling into the parking lot to meet her friend, she comes face to face with a sexy man, covered in tattoos and wearing a leather motorcycle club vest with a president patch. He is a stranger, but there was something about his eyes. 

Can Viper protect her from Demetri and take revenge for him killing her father? How will he react when he finds out who she really is? Will they be able to wipe years away and pick back up where they left off?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31201 Read Count: 20915
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2021 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

I wonder who she called?
I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen