Reviews by Lisalou
Summary:

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Edward Masen is a normal 17-year-old boy who dreams of becoming a soldier, but when tradegy strikes his family, his entire life changes. Edward is introduced to the supernatural world he had no idea even existed, and he certainly doesn't want to live in it.

It was during the month of March in the year of 1918 that the first signs of the influenza was revealed to the public, although no one ever imagined the damages this historic event would have on the American people.
One citizen in particular faces an irrevocable change that cause a chain of e...vents to unfold through the twentieth century. The price was to give up his old life, but he would later gain more than he ever thought he would.

A Pre-Twilight Canon story about the life of Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Angst, Family, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight Origins
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117254 Read Count: 14589
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 20 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I just feel more sorry for Edward. He is once the odd man out! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Thanks for the update! Rose is going to be so mad when the change is over. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: She will be Rose! ;-)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I think what he was doing was a good thing.He saved a lot of women. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

So things are going to change for Edward now. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I have loved reading this story! I can't wait to read what you write next. I will miss this story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I liked it very much! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 May 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I am glad you gave us an update. I have missed this story. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Good riddance Charles! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

It's sad that Edward feels like an outsider. I feel bad for him that he is not able to remember his life before turning. Thanks for writing and giving us 2 chapters today.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

That is so sad that he killed that young girl. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Yes, well we know that his record isn't the cleanest...there will be more so brace yourself :-)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I'm glad Edward can help Esme out! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Thanks for the update!!!
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I love this take on his change. I am enjoying this story a lot. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail cullen

Author's Response: That's great! :-) If I only could get more people interested it would be a complete feeling :-)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I was so happy to see this update. I love this story. I caught myself holding my breath at the end of the change. It has been a long time since I have read a vampire fic. I feel so bad for Edward.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Do not feel bad for him :-) We all know he will get his happy ending eventually even though it's a hundred years from now x-) And yes! It took me too long to update this story! Hopefully it won't happen again :-)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I was so glad to get 2 updates today. I am loving this story. thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: I would get the chapters our faster if it wasn't for the fact that they go through three people before coming back to me for final editing :-P

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I was so happy to get this update. I wish more people would read this. They are really missing out! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: It's because the romance/lemon wave is upon us. That's all everyone wants to read now :-P

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Rosalie and Edward never did like each other. Carlisle should not keep bringing people into Edward's life without talking to him first. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: However, we do know there are a few more needed for the coven to be complete ;-)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

You did well with it! I never did like the fact that Alice moved all of Edward's things out and gave him no room. That is just mean. He was there first so he should have the best room. I can't believe Esme thought it would be rude for Alice and Jasper not to have a room, but didn't think it was rude that Edward didn't have one. Do you think it is because he doesn't have a mate? If that is the case, I've sometimes wondered why he even stayed with them at all.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I hate seeing him so lonely! I isn't that much longer that he has to be alone. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I'm glad you are feeling better! Thank you for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Yes, I'm feelings loads better, thanks! :-D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

You did well with the labor. It was totally believable. I am thinking the baby will be a boy that kind of looks like Edward.
I think Edward's boss is going to send him somewhere else. I hope not though.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa....Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

I'm so glad Bella has Jessica. I feel so bad for her. I wonder if Edward will ever come clean with Bella. I hope he stops trying to turn her into her mother. I really want to see Esme and Renee get into trouble. I'm not liking Edward yet either.
I love this story. Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

I wonder where Bella is going to go. I hope Bella and Becca can destroy Esme and Renee. Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

He can't be the bad guy, right? I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: I'm not saying anything x)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

Well, Edward really sucks! I was thinking the school wasn't so bad, but it really is. I hate Renee, Esme and Edward in this one. Becca promised to snap her out of changing too much, but I'm glad Jessica and Leigh did first. I just wonder what Edward did to Peter to make him stay away. Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I really hope all of that wasn't a bunch of BS to get her to trust him again. I think I could really hate him if he made that whole story up. I'm so glad Bella isn't trusting him fully.
I was so happy to see this update. I was missing this story. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Weeeell! Edward doesn't really care about Bella at this point, but it will change! I promise

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Happy Birthday!!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Thanks for the 3 updates. I can't wait for the next update. I'm just wondering if the baby is Edward's or did she pick the sample because it had the characteristics as Edward? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

OH, I want the next chapter!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

I am glad Edward is putting Bella and the baby first. Thanks for writing,
Lisa....Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2018 Title: Shattered Reflections

Thank You!!!!! I can't wait.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2017 Title: Shattered Reflections

It has been a crazy week. Sorry for not getting back with you sooner. I would love to re read this story!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Dared to Truth by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Dared to Truth banner by Christag Banners

 

Banner by Christag Banners

*Written for the Fandom4OK*

Summary: One party. One kiss. And one age-old game of Truth or Dare that... well, you'll see. Just like you already can how much I hate writing summaries.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17269 Read Count: 2412
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dared to Truth

I would definitely read more. Please continue this story. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday!! Thanks for giving us a present. I just love Levi. I really enjoy seeing Edward and Levi together. Edward's family better be good to Bella when she does spend time with them. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't have any suggestions, I just can't wait to see what you come up with. I loved the chapter. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This should be fun. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so loving this story! I love how Bella and Edward's relationship so out in the open...no sneaking around. It makes it not seem as bad that way. I can't wait for the next update! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hope your mid-terms went well. I was so happy to get your update. I just wonder if it was only Tanya trashing Bella's room or if Alice helped? Poor Bella. At least the guys and Esme like her. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa..Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm so glad Alice and Emmett are being nicer to Bella. I still really hate Tanya. Way to go Emmett...standing up for Bella and putting James in his place. I can't wait to see what Edward has to say about all of this. I feel bad for Bella having to put up with Tanya and her friends.
I was so happy to see that this updated! I am loving this story. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love that you have stories floating around in you head! That means we will have more to read.
I am so glad Edward is going to ruin James. I am also glad he sent Rose home. Edward is falling in love with Bella too. I was sure he was going to tell her that he loves her.
I was so happy to get an update. I love this story. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I will read this story where ever you post it!! This chapter made me feel sad for Bella. She has already fell for him and I think he is falling for her also. I can't wait to see how things go with Tanya now. I love this story. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really hope he shows up. thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I will never walk away from this story!!! It is my favorite one right now. Please write your story YOUR way. I love the story you are telling. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG!! That was awesome. I can't wait to see what happened on the 14th. Has Bella been with anybody since she left Edward? Has Edward? This is my absolute favorite story! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54714
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Edward was remembering what happened when he was hurt. I don't know if he has had a chance to go back and think about it since everything was happening. I really hope Bella and Edward can move forward. It was such a blessing that Edward found Emmett and saved him.
For a little while, I was wondering if maybe what Emmett was experiencing was real...that maybe people were after him and Edward really did have something to do with it. But I guess that isn't the case. Like maybe he really isn't crazy.
I really love this story. Thanks for writing. I put in a friend request for the face book group.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

You're right on with the first part of your comment--something very important happened there and that door is now open.  But you also caught that he didn't have time to think about it yet--good work!!  Oh, the Emmett scene was so hard to write--he's such a sweetheart that I hated to do that to him.

Nope, Emmett is a true schizophrenic and it's separate from what's going on with Edward.  Interesting idea, though.  I'm so glad you love the story!  Thanks for reading, and reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I'm sad to see it end. I love this story. I kind of thought that was her reason for not getting in touch with Edward. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Me too.  :(  I will certainly miss these two!  I'm so glad you love the story!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

This really breaks my heart. I guess it would have been better not to remember. But since he has remembered some things, remembering the rest might not be as bad as he has been thinking. I hope Bella can help him. Thanks for writing. Still loving this story!
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

*sigh*  I know.  It broke my heart to write it, but there's a reason for everything.  Yes, I do think it would be better if he remembered either nothing or everything--pieces of things is not really helping him to figure out who he was at all.  Bella will do everything she can to help him--but I'm sure you already know that from her character.  I'm so glad you love the story!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I feel bad that he might not get his memory back, but I'm so glad they are finally getting together. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

It's a distinct possibility, but it might not be the worst thing for him, especially if his past is not something he would be proud of.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Poor Bella. I hope Edward realizes he hurt her. He really could have handled it a lot better. I still don't think he really was bad before, but even if he was he can turn his life around now. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Oh, he knows.  He never meant to hurt her.  It was a moment of weakness and he regretted it instantly.  We'll just have to see how he moves forward.  Thanks for reading, and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Happy Birthday and thanks for the present. That did make up for the past chapters! I'm so glad he didn't just leave without talking to her. I made me so happy that they both love each other and they shared that love. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad this one made up for the others.  I was happy to get out of all that angst!  Nope, no New Moons here, I promise!  Thank you for reading, and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I'm glad they are in a good place and he knows he needs to live in the now. I can't wait to see what happens at the bar. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Aww...isn't it great?  The bar should be fun!  ;)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Loved it!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Congrats!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't wait for Friday. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sorry for the cliffie here, but it was necessary!  More answers on Friday!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Another heartbreaker! Please let him still remember Bella and love her. I can't wait for the next update. Happy
Thanksgiving

Author's Response:

I'm sorry!  We'll find out soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I can't imagine why Bella hasn't called him. I hope everything works out. I would love the outtakes after the epilogue. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Bella has her reasons, and she thinks they are good ones.  You'll find out in the last chapter! 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I

Thank you for the update. I have really missed these 2. Can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

If Only by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

IO

 

*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

"Come over, I need you. Now." As always, I go to her. Except this time, it may be the last. I love her deeply, but I don't know if I can do this anymore. Each goodbye is harder than the last one. I want more than just being hers behind closed doors. If only we could truly be together; if only we were meant to be. 

AH/OOC, Told in EPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17231 Read Count: 7974
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Dream That Will Never Come True

that was a good dream to have. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Hi Lisa :) Yes, I very much agree! That was a great dream to have indeed. Nothing like waking beside hot Edward and having fun times with him, hee. Im glad you are looking forward to finding out what happens next. I will be posting chap 2 very soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Remembering The Past

Definitely not liking Bella. I thought I would never want Edward with anyone else, but I do want him with Irina. Bella blew it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Hi Lisa,

Thanks for the review. Wow, I am so bummed that many readers do not like Bella. I guess that is my fault for writing her the way that I did. I never meant to paint her to be the bad guy here ;( I know she looks bad but she isnt as awful as everyone believes
and there is her side of the story too. Irina isnt all that perfect either, thats all I will hint at that, lol. Anyway, thank you for reading! I really do appreciate it very much :) ~Leslie

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Goodbye's and Promises

I love this story. I can't wait to see what got them to this point. It is so frustrating that Bella would be with someone else. I need to find out why she broke it off with him to begin with. I don't like this Bella too much right now, but I love your writing. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Hi Gail ;)

Wow, thanks so much for the wonderful review! it really made me smile big. I appreciate it. I am working so hard on this story so it makes it all worthwhile that you and others are enjoying it ;) As for your comemnt on you wanting to know what got E & B to this point. You can re read chap 3, it gives you a look into their past. I will also be posting another flashback chapter soon, so that should answer some of your burning questions too! I can understand your frustration about Bella being with another person. Its hard for me to write. I get too why you dont like Bella much either. But I hope you and others will see her a little differently down the road. Things will get better for these two, I promise that ;) Thank you so much hun for the great review! Im very glad you love my writing and that you are enjoying the story! I appreciate ti so much! ~Leslie

Summary:

Bella and Edward were the very best of friends in High School but when Prom came their lives changed. Now nine years later they both struggle with the mistakes from their past that has separated them. Can they find one another and save their friendship? They need to forgive themselves before they can forgive each other. Rated M for adult themes including abuse.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158404 Read Count: 36889
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 15 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see what happened between them. Thanks for writing. I am loving this story already.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

THANK YOU!

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

I loved it!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Mismatched Love by WeeAndJess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: 

Zany Bella is the maid of honor of her sister’s wedding. She has to deal with Charlie, her soon to be brother in law and his uptight rich family who don't like her. To top it all off, Charlie's brother Edward is back and they seemed to be pushed together in everything they do. They are a mismatched pair that can't seem to tell each other how they feel.

BANNER BY Deebelle1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67590 Read Count: 40439
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am loving this story! I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

He wasn't drinking for once. Thanks for writing

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really hate that Edward turned out to be such a dick. Poor Bella. He knows how bad Tanya always treated her. Why would he talk to her about Bella? I can't wait for the next update. I love this story. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I was getting a little scared at first that maybe the baby was Edwards. That thought also crossed Bella's mind. I'm glad Edward was upset about things like that happening under his roof. I just hope there aren't any little Edwards that will show up.
Loved the update!! Thanks for writing. Will There be an update to COABW any time soon?
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I hope she gets her memories back. Emmett and Rose need to be dealt with. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

fvwl

A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126173
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Something needs to be done with both Peter and Charlie. They are horrible people. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Just...Oh? I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yay!!!! He told her. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope Edward can take out his dad before his dad can hurt Bella or him. thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Carlisle will have to pay!!! I'm glad Edward is being loving toward Bella. I think she loves him too. Thanks for writing.
Lisa....Gail Cullen

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please Edward, tell her you love her too!!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Please tell me he didn't rape Bella. Bella needs to remember what he did to her and tell Edward. I hope Edward kills his dad. Thanks for writing
Lisa....Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was odd. Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think both of them are falling in love with each other. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hope he knows he is in love too!!! Please don't let him ruin it for Bella. Thanks for writing,
Lisa....Gail Cullen

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Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I wonder who it is? Maybe her dad? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Where I Belong

Lauren is an ex girlfriend Edward had sophomore year that he dated for a while that dumped him with no explanation. I'm thinking daddy dearest got to her and she took the payoff.
I'm glad Edward is blackmailing his dad. Give him some of his own medicine. I don't think Edward would actually follow through though. Part of me wishes he would though.
I'm glad Bella is back so they can talk. I am sure Edward kept all of the bad stuff from Bella so she wouldn't be upset, but I can see why Bella is mad being in the dark about it. She could have handled Carlisle better maybe.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts. So, Bella's back but they have a few things to hash out before things can go back to normal. Thanks as well for partaking in my little game. You were right about Lauren and here's your reward: … About twenty minutes into the movie, a tall blonde entered the screen and Emmett laughed out loud. “Ed, if I didn't know any better, I'd think that chick was Lauren.” Before I could say anything, Rosalie scoffed at him. “I'm surprised you even remember the names of all your tramps.” Emmett answered her with a wide smirk. “Sorry to burst your bubble, princess, but I actually do know the name of every woman I granted the honor of satisfying me. And one of them has been said a lot here tonight.” He paused for a moment to revel in her angry scowl. “I wasn't talking about one of my past companions, though, but of Edward's.” He turned to look at me. “Don't you think she looks like that girl you dated in college?” I hadn't actually thought about her in a while, and I hadn't seen her since we'd broken up, but maybe there was a slight similarity. I was totally surprised though when Bella put the movie on hold and asked, “What was Lauren's last name?” I frowned slightly, but answered without delay. “Mallory. Her name was Lauren Mallory. Why do you want to know?” Bella's expression showed shock and some realization. “You said she dumped you without a real reason, right?” I just nodded, even more confused now. Bella seemed to notice and started to explain. “Your father mentioned her. He said that the Mallory girl,” she made air-quotes, “skipped town for twenty-thousand dollars.” Her eyes were locked with mine, grief darkening the deep brown. “I'm so sorry, Edward.” “If that chick took money from your good-for-nothing father to leave you, then she isn't even worth another thought. I never liked her anyway.” I could always count on Emmett to have my back. “I know,” I agreed. “But it still hurts to know how easy it was to leave me behind.” It wasn't hard to get over Lauren by any means. Our connection had never run very deep, but she had been my girlfriend, and it was hard to learn that something like that happened behind my back. Then something occurred to me. “Did Carlisle say anything else?” … What else did Carlisle say? See you next chapter with the answer.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Invasion

I really wish Edward would just tell her how he feels. He should stay the night in her room to help with the baby. Thanks for writing,

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. He will soon. Just a little longer now. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose

Emmett is crazy for doing what he did. It will probably work out alright though. I think Edward is getting ready to kiss Bella and trying to hold himself back. Thanks for writing,
Lisa....Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I know what Emmett did isn't actually reason for laughing and it was clearly wrong. But I'm glad you weren't too hard on him or me. This is fiction after all and it's supposed to be entertaining, not a guidebook on what's right or recommended to do in RL. Oh, I feel like you can read my ming about the teaser ;). Next chapter will end with a bang. See you then.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

I loved this story!! I will miss it. I am looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Support System

I liked Alice and Jasper way better than Emmett. At least Jasper didn't attack anyone. I'm not liking Emmett very much. Its good that Rose took up for her. Why didn't the pill work? Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. I promise, they'll find out why the pill didn't work. No way of birth control is 100% effective, apart from abstinance that is, but The Bible makes me doubt that, too ;). Anyway, there's a reason why it didn't work in Bella's case, but it'll take until chapter 7 for them to find out. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Surrender

That was awesome!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks! So many readers were frustrated with Bella for so long. Maybe she could win some of you over again ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

I am so excited to see where this story goes. I can't wait to see Edward's POV. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Next chapter will shed a little light on Edward's background and how he met Bella. See you then.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - The Prodigal Mother

I'm so glad Esme wants to be a part of Christopher's life. I hope in time Edward and his mother can have a relationship. I know it can't be fixed over night, but eventually they will both be happier for it. I don't think his dad will ever change. Too much has happened. I wouldn't want Edward to forgive Carlisle and let him back in his life. He has done nothing but hurt Edward.
I think Emmett is the one that is talking in the teaser. Thanks for writing and enjoy your vacation.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so sorry for the delay in replying, but my family didn't leave me much time to go online during our vacay. Anyway, I'm back and here it goes ;). I'm glad you could forgive Esme or at least see where she's coming from. Understandably, Edward has a bit of a harder time, but he'll come around. Next up, we'll learn a bit more about Esme's past and Em and Rose have little bit to share as well ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - When It Rains, It Pours

I really hate Riley. What did he want her to do? Pine away forever? I hope they are not in Bella's next childbirth class.I'm glad his things have been destroyed. I would have left them in the apartment.
I am glad the baby is alright. I am hoping the baby is a boy. Maybe the fall was a good thing. This way Bella and Edward can spend the holidays together, then maybe they will admit they are both in love.
I think the teaser is Edward's hateful dad.
I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I guess Riley's pride is hurt. He'd probably have wanted Bella to mourn their relationship instead of jumping into bed with the next warm body. But I can assure you, Riley won't show up again. Yeah, Peanut's alright. I wouldn't let anything happen to him ;). I agree, the teaser definitely sounds like something Carlisle would say. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors

So far the visit is going well. Way to go Charlie...I didn't expect him to let them sleep together. I was happy to see them getting closer. Edward is so sweet. I hope Renee and Charlie don't hear her throwing up. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for your nice review. Yeah, the visit is going well. There will be a little bump next chapter, no pun intended, but a lot of sweetness, too. See you then.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Rose does not need to be in the delivery room with Bella. I think she went about it all wrong. Rose should have just offered to support Bella in private, but let Bella and Edward discuss it by themselves. I'm glad Bella chose Edward.
I think Bella's ex is who is in the next chapter. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Oh no! I just saw that I never answered this review. I'm so sorry. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets

That is so awesome how Bella's parents accepted the baby news. I can't wait to see them grow closer. I really hope nothing happens with the baby. Edward's family will not be as accepting I'll bet! I wish Bella would have got him to play the piano. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can assure you that nothing will happen with the baby. It'll be born happy and healthy. You're right, the Cullens won't be as hapyp about the pregnancy as the Swans are. And the piano thing will come up again later ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale

I think she is looking to see when she had her last period. At least Bella knows were to find Edward. I really don't like Carlisle. I can't wait for more!!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You may be right with your guess. Yes, since Edward tried everything in his might to find Bella, it's up to her now because she at least knows where he lives. That is if she remembers. She ran away in a panic after all ;). I see why you don't like Carlisle. I don't either which makes it hard to write him. But sometimes a story needs a villain. See you in Bella's head next time.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

Riley is a piece of work. I hope something bad happens to him.
I think Edward will be happy to see Bella at first, but with his daddy issues, I think he might not take it well. Carlisle will be an issue for them I'm pretty sure.
Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. As far as I've written so far, Riley won't be back. But I'm definitely thinking about having him make another guest appearance. Edward has daddy issues for sure, but I think he's strong enough to be his own person in a situation as important as theirs. But we'll see.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

I'm glad Edward took it well. That would be so odd to have to go through. I can't wait to see them get to know each other better. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I think, if I were Bella, I would have died a thousand deaths if I had to tell a complete stranger news like that. But he's a good guy. And the getting-to-know-each-other will be interesting. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps

Loved it! Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. See you in Forks next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I bet Jessica told Edward's parents. Could Jessica and Tanya tell Bella was pregnant? I wish Bella would give into her feelings for Edward. I loved the kiss. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. No, they couldn't tell that she's pregnant. The dress is flowing freely and Bella isn't showing that obviously yet. Bella will give in, just not yet. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Busted!

I kind of hope Edward meets with his dad without Bella being present. She doesn't need to hear the awful things I'm sure he will be spouting. Edward should go to him before he corners Bella. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I think I can ease your mind by saying that Bella won't meet Carlisle - yet. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Two Blue Lines

I love drunk Edward. Hate his dad! I'm glad Edward stood up to him. I just hope his dad can't take away his trust fund.
I can't wait for Bella and Edward to become a real couple.
I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Merry Christmas
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Merry Effing Christmas

I hope nothing happened to her! I hope Carlisle will leave Bella alone.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I can assure you that nothing bad will happen to Bella, but she'll worry Edward a bit and probably you too. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Ambush

I really hate Carlisle!! I really don't think Bella should have just left him like that. She really needs to talk to him. Bella shouldn't make Edward worry about her and the baby that way. Maybe this all could have been avoided if Edward would have told her the truth about his dad from the start. I hope Edward doesn't think Bella took a payoff like his other girlfriends did.
I think Edward is talking to his dad in the teaser. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella didn't really leave - for long. And they will talk soon. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Labor Day

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Outtake - How It Began

Thank you so much for the outtake. I have missed these two so much.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I could give you the last missing piece to E and B's story. Now I can say goodbye to them with a clear conscience. Now, maybe you already checked out Tie the Knot. If not, I hope to meet you again over there.