Reviews by dj071688
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Shy, reserved Edward has a little too much Jack Daniels after finding his fiancée cheating on him. Waking up the next morning in a strange woman’s bed, he fights the pull he feels for her. Will he realize they're fated for each other, or will he only focus on their differences?

 

***So that you know up front, this story has been pulled after the first chapter. It still makes a lemony-filled one shot if you want to read it as-is. If you're interested in the published version, you can find me in the Amazon store under my real name, Lara Norman.***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 49596
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
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Date: 16 Jan 2017 Title: Jack & Crush

OMG, it was really hot.  And the ending perfect.  :)  



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

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Date: 30 Jan 2017 Title: Jack & Crush

A miniature Alice, a happy announcement, and a wedding, perfect chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I love that you loved it, thank you! 

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An imprisoned man who’s run out of options to prove his innocence, a young attorney volunteering her time to help the wrongly convicted, and the actual criminal walking around free for ten years. The consequences of a crime are far reaching and often unseen.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46289 Read Count: 36384
[Report This] Published: 05 Oct 2016 Updated: 22 Dec 2017
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Date: 25 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You should be riding high from your win.  You earned it!!!!!  Excellent update.  :)



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Eeek! I really am. 

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Date: 28 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You tell her Charlie.  



Author's Response: :)

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Date: 04 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't wait to see Mike behind bars.



Author's Response:

:)

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Date: 11 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Let's get him Bella.



Author's Response:

You know it! 

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Date: 18 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hit him Bella.  Knock him the fuck out.  Send his ass to the Twilight Zone.  :)



Author's Response:

Lol, she should! 

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*reaches for kevlar vest, glock, taser, and knife*  Okay, I'm ready, bring it.



Author's Response:

Lol, you might want all those things. 

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Date: 08 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Our poor girl.  Edward is going to lose his mind when he finds out.



Author's Response:

We're going to get his POV, too.

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh Bella, where the hell did your common sense go?  



Author's Response:

I bet she'll ask herself the same question. 

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Date: 22 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh thank you for getting her out of this.  Hoping they all can cope with the potential PTSD.  Our poor Bella and Edward.



Author's Response:

It's going to be bumpy, that's for sure. 

Whats Love? by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is the smartest con artist with dark past.  She's tired of the con and wants to go home. Will Edward be what she has been looking for back home in Forks?

Extreme Angst and Tigger’s. 

 

An amazing author and beta wrote a summary of my story that I just had to share here. I really hope she doesn’t mind. PS (MeteorOnAMoonlessNight). 

Another new author with her first fic,  Bella is a hard hearted con artist, 4 times divorced. As things unravel for her in New York, she makes the decision to go back to Forks to start over, moving in with her foster brother Jasper. Flashbacks reveal that this genius has had a tough childhood with both of her parents dying, leading to a disaster of a foster home. She's really just trying to survive in a cruel world.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41336 Read Count: 23136
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2016 Updated: 08 Jun 2017
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Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start to what appears to be a entertaining story.  How she went from genius to a four time con-artist divorcee, should be interesting.

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Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, it was a very emotional chapter.  I can see that this is just the beginning of Bella's problems.

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Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think you found a Beta for the first two chapters.  You have a wonderful plot, just need to have someone help make it structurally sound.  Really liking it so far.  Has great potential.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am trying. :) 

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Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It shows.  There is a definite difference between chapters 1 and 2 in comparison to 3.  Whoever is helping you edit the chapter is working well.

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Date: 01 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It shows.  There is a definite difference between chapters 1 and 2 in comparison to 3.  Whoever is helping you edit the chapter is working well.

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Date: 05 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, there are so many laws that really just do not make living easy.  Bella should have been permitted to receive early emancipation.  Shame.



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There is, I looked it up 16 and has to be able to financially support yourself with any state assistance. Crazy 

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Date: 12 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hoping either Jasper saves her, or she has a knife under her pillow to cut off his dick!!!!!  Please do not let this 14 year old girl get sexually assaulted by this fucking dirtbag.



Author's Response:

I am going to thank you for your review becaue I love that you did. :)

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If your life was all you had to give your beloved, how could you not give it? I had to do it to save him.


 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33988 Read Count: 15086
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2017 Updated: 20 Dec 2017
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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, your writing is incredible.  Just saying.  Excellent beginning.



Author's Response:

I love you. 

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Date: 20 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Something tells me that I am going to hate Charlie with a passion.  js  Excellent start for this story.  Oh, the intrigue. 



Author's Response:

I think you're right! Thank you! 

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84338
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
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Date: 25 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 ~ When The Nightmares Come True

Holy shit!!!!  Charlie to the rescue.

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Date: 22 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 ~ Passion

One night of pure bliss, observed by a pyschotic murder.  Edward will protect her.

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Date: 17 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 ~ Texas Sizzle

Cold shower indeed.

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Date: 06 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I vote for option A and B!!!  Excellent update.

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Date: 13 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 ~ Not as it Seems

Wow, so the f*!@er is still alive?  Hunt him down like he dog he is.

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Date: 02 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery

Reading is fundamental.  Research is critical. 

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Date: 02 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare

I would say, hell yes, he did the right thing.

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Date: 03 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins

Oh, I know the choice of Garrett probably pissed off some readers.

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Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Hoping this isn't some type of trap by the sect.  Damn, sorrow all the way around.

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Date: 29 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I see a rough road ahead for our boy.  Hopefully with everyone's support, it will be a smooth one.  Well done.

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Date: 15 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wonderful update.

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Date: 23 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Mind over matter.  Or in this case Angela over disability.  ;)

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Date: 26 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

And now thegames begin!!!!!

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Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

There is no doubt in my mid that the creeper is ARO!!!  Fucking scum.  *gets out gun, loads bullets, and goes on a hunt*

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Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

Nicely done.

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a heart ripper.

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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great and hot update.  Interesting "meet cute".  ;)

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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm switching to FFN to finish the story.  A story which I am enjoying greatly.  ;)

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39670
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
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Date: 29 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow.  I'll be wating for my shipment of tissues to arrive.  

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Date: 29 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yeah, I sense that he is going to be very resistent to any type of relationship besides friendship.  We'll see.

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Date: 03 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh Esme!!!!  

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Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What will he do when he realizes that Bella has his dead wife's heart.  Wow, this is good.  Loved the movie with the same plot, Remember Me, with David Duchovny and Minnie Driver.  Great job.

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Date: 03 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wonderful update.  Congratulations on your Top 10 placement for Testing Faith.

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Date: 09 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Such a cute family.

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Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, there is no way to easily address this, but I think he will come to grips with the fact that Maggie, whom he loved, lives on in Bella, whom he has come to love.  Great update.  Sad, but inevitable.

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

WOW, that is a hard pill to swallow.  Feel bad for everyone.  Go get your man.

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Date: 21 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great job.  I am sure the sequel will be as wonderful as this one.

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65920
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
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Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Great addition to my library.  Loved it.

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Date: 21 May 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two - A New Leader

Surprise, surprise, surprise.  Great update.

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Date: 20 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Who is Renee Dwyer?

Oh Bella, you will be right by his side.

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Date: 14 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 July 18, 2017

So glad that Bella finally got to the root of the problem with Alice.  

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Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three - Justice Finally Served

WOW!!!!!  Now that is what I call retribution.  Damn that was good.

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Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

Excellent update.  Now the games begin.  

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Date: 16 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures

Love the occasional warm and fuzzy chapters.  With the exception of Alice.  Is she demented?  ;)  Great update.

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Date: 03 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

You nasty wench, did you have your dinner on that dining room table?  Ewwww.  Great update Sweetie.

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Date: 12 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  Hell yeah, I want to see this baby expanded.  

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

Wow, she is in so much shit right now.  Can't wait until she meets up with 'the' Cullen.

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Date: 04 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017

Perfect.  And the visuals are the best.  

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Date: 30 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Excellent update.  Worth the wait.  ;)

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Date: 25 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

Let the games begin.

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Date: 02 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017

Sick Aro, poor Quil.  Lake Como, here comes Clo.  ;)

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

Great chapter.  Love that he is there discovering his roots.

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Date: 10 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

You evil cliffie whore.  Excellent update.  Wish I was walking through the house with them.

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Date: 25 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - July 18, 2017

Now that is exciting.  She will be able to wear Edward's grandmother's wedding dress.  He will be totally shocked.  Excellent update.

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Date: 24 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

4:00 better be fine you freaking pervert.

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Date: 08 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Love is in the Air

Woohoo for Ben and Engela.  Love this story.  Can't wait until the wedding,  Oh, oh what should I wear.  ;)

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Date: 11 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Not so hidden

Well done Sweetie.

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Date: 21 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Father of the Bride

Great chapter.  Can't wait to see Charlie in Italy.

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Date: 02 May 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty One ~ Oh What a Night

Hm, I can't tell if Angela is pissed about this developement or not.  Hmmmm.

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Date: 25 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Time For a Wedding

OMG.  So Bella is Aro's neice.  But not really, because Aro is not a Volturi, only Bella is?!?!?

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Edward Cullen’s life revolves around his daughter and his job but when he is around his family, he feels that he is missing out on what they have. Can Bella Swan be what he is missing?

Fage Part 2


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4283 Read Count: 4235
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2019 Updated: 14 Feb 2019
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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that girl has some freaking nerve to be in her employer's bed naked.  Good chapter.

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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She is right, it is hard to trust someone who runs out on their family for two years with no word whatsoever.

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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh shit.

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Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aw.  Nice finish.

Summary:

Fool Me Once

Summary:  I awake to my Father knocking on my door. He's alive? What did he say? First day of school, how is that possible? Thank God that's possible, this time I won't be fooled!

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55814 Read Count: 13627
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2019 Updated: 31 Aug 2019
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 1: See You In My Dreams, Not!

Love the plot.  Story has great potential.  I'm in.



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

glad you like it so far xx

Alexis

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Heartfortwilight Productions

 

Wolf-Shifter and Earth Witch, Bella Swan, moves with her father to Forks, Washington to join the "Midnight Sun" Wolf Pack. After almost 21 years of living in hiding in the human world, Bella struggles to find her place amongst the Pack. There is so much she doesn't know or understand. Will she ever find her place when so many are against her? And why does she have such a strong connection to the pack's Beta, Edward? Will they both learn to follow their instincts, or will they simply be too stubborn?

 

Thank you Heartfortwilight Productions for this beautiful banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Mate Series
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105198 Read Count: 32341
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2019 Updated: 16 Jan 2020
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Date: 09 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 9: A Time to Grieve

I have to admit, the photos really add something to it for me.  Excellent choices.  Loved her getting to see more about her mom.



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Thank you!

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Date: 03 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 7: An Enemy or an Ally?

WOW!  Love the pics along with the story!!!

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Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 20: A Broken Friendship

Oh shit, I have a bad feeling about this meeting.  Great update.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

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Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 38413
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
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Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 35: My Trip to the Vault

And the plot thickens.  Thank you so much for this update.  Happy New Year.

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Date: 13 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 21: My Reluctant Heart

Not very comfortable with him going to see Jessica.  He better make damn sure she is aware that she needs to bback off or die!!!!!  Bella won't take that shit again.  Love me some Bella.

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Date: 08 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 32: My Deep Doubts

Good for Quil!!!  Say it Bella, say it.

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Date: 15 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 30: My New Home

These two never seem to catch a break.  Great update.  Can't wait for the new chapter of My Sun.

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Date: 08 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 29: My Mother's Things

I am sensing some type of significance with the music box?  So glad she has Esme.

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Date: 31 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 28: My Support

Oh, I love this Aro, and the relationship he has with Edward and Bella.  Riley looks like trouble.  Smackdown time.  Great update.

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Date: 30 May 2020 Title: Chapter 20: My Unanswered Question

*raises hand*  Me, me, I know!!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha! Loved this!

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Date: 07 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 27: My Allies

I am with Edward, Riley is up to something.  He needs to be taken care of.  Interesting shift in alliances with Jasper looking to Edward as his Alpha, and the wolves uniting with the witches.  Hmmmm. can't wait to see where we go next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review! We shall see! ;)

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Date: 28 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 26: My State of Normalcy

Shit Bella, take the escort.  James could strike at any time, anywhere.  

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Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 23: My Shopping Trip

If I was Bella, I would want nothing at all to do with the pack.  I have never seen such a more dysfunctional group of bitches in my life.  Her and Edward need to pack up and move away.  Start their own pack.  And do not even get me started on Rosalie.  Love when an author can write to the point to encite such strong emotions in their readers.  Great job.

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Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 22: My Cousin

Hm, not sure I would see Paul again until after that 21st birthday.  Her experience with Sam and Emily has to have a heavy bearing on that decision.  Experience has shown her how painful it can be when the imprint is not the current love interest.

 

Not liking Riley or Royce.  Definitely something up with those two.  Stand guard BellaWolf.

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Date: 16 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 33: My Revelation

Can't wait to find out why she had that spell myself.  Thanks for updating.

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Date: 06 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 37: My Alpha

Damn, I wish she would just tell him.  Loved the pack history.  Very interesting. Love when a fictional story manages to incorporate some non-fictional information within it.  Great update, and worth the wait.  Thank you.  Hope you are staying safe.

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Date: 13 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 36: My Heritage

Wow, I loved this.  Very educational.  Food for thought.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 22 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 34: My Broken Hope

Was it perhaps, Edward Sr.  He knew that she was moving 'witchy' things into the garage.  Interesting.  Edward needs to get his ass home.

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Date: 14 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 7: My Last Day

The honeymoon is over, but what a way to go out.  Bear traps?!?!?  Hopefully Bella can use her magic to find all the traps buried throughout the forest.

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Date: 20 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 25: My Date Part 2

Put that dog down!!!!!!!

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Date: 06 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 6: My Decision

Great update.  Love watching them getting their bearings.  So well written.

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Date: 20 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 12: My Aunt and Uncle

God  I love Aro.

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Date: 15 May 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Marking My Territory

Hottest Lemon Award goes to you!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha! Why, thank you!

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Date: 23 May 2020 Title: Chapter 19: My Insecurities

Oh shit.  Answer that question Edward.  

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Date: 12 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Okay, I see gramps having a hissy fit already.  Great update, now to your page.