Reviews by joice84
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

weird , I liked!! not so strong as I expected but I was afraid wathi´s in store for Bella

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

wow so scared!!!! he is mad!!!! I like this Aro

how about I receive alert????sorry my English , but I wanted so much have a  alert!!!:D

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

it´s crazy!!! will we get Edward in the next chapter??? I would love to see that he is crazy too ;)

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

he is finally here!!! Aro is so strange to see talking about taking the virginity of this and Bella  really twisted in a very cool!! I love it !!! and I´m crazy for more little Edward

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

probably, I would lol

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

this story is moving more confusing does anyone know how the father Aro is crazy lol

weird!!! I loved



Author's Response:

It appears that the only ones that TRULY know that he is crazy are our lovely READERS.. hahahaha.. Most of you would like to dispose of his body.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

opa É tão estranho lol

 o que aconteceu agora??

ansioso para a próxima! sempre

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

I´m so happy you guys, update !!! i hope have a new soon, one new chapter for week is great!! I loved it!!! crazy for more ;D  

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Oh god !!! I love the father lol

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

I never though Esme was so strong!!!! I loved it!!! and now I want so much know exactly what the hell Aro did whit her hoop??? ;D

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

I want to see the lashes!!!that is unfair, in the best part part you stop!!!!lol I love see a little bit of madness frm Aro, but I wanted to know is: how he knew what she did???? ;D

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

wow poor Chalie !!! so lost...

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Amanda happy 10th anniversary!!!

 

I´m so anxious for the next chapter !! Bella will see Aro and Alice??? oh my god *giggles*

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I wanted a present of new year!!! and oh my god where is Charlie ????

I whish you guys have a great New Year:D

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

wow he said it !!! after the last chapter, I´m happy Felix said something lol

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

he goes to town!! it´ll be awesome!!!! I can´t see an exit for this story, so everyone seems to be on the control of Aro, I think that if didn´t freak out in front of them all will never believe it this insane ?!?!? lol

I´m anxious for the new site!!! hopefully all right ;D 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Oh my... poor Charlie!!!

happy New Year´s!!!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Huuuhuu I almost can´t believe when I see it!!! wow is so good to have a new update and I loved this chapter!!! now is my new favorite!!! ;D please come back next week

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514602
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

69 in the chapter 69would be all good , but it was  nice to see Jacob I had not connected it to the man who found Edward´s mansion in Carlisle

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Oh my god!!! I can not believe how he found the house ??? Bella will have the strenght to scream and ask for help ???

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

wow this is big!!! Lurent is dead !! and poor Edward not see anything

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

wow I can´t wait the next update this is so freaking I loved!!!!!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

it is better what dead!!! I love the end of James!!! is so sad to see end of the story!!!! I really love then and hope continuer see things wonderful off you, thanks for write

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I love the end , I wanted more is normal nobody wanted the end lol it was great AND HOT LIKE HELL I hope can read your stories and maybe have one epiloge??? the end is always very sad but it was really amazing congratulations for your great job here!!! keep going you guys have a great imagination and I love can join it reading!!! ;D

 

thanks for let me read it and sorry my English :P 

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36887
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

no Jacob is bad very bad !!!!!:( I missed Edward

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wow I missed him!!!! poor Edward Chiefe Swan are so bad !!!!! I wanted so much them both together again

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hi!!! is so good to have a new chapter!!!! I´m glad for your husband and I wish your family get better always!!!

xoxo come back soon



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hi I just found you story "perfect wife" a few days and I loved every bit of it!!!was perfect!!! and  then I can not stop seein your new story, hope you can update soon, I loved it too!!! you´re a great writer!!keep the story interesting, and us not had a lime yet lol I loved it ;D

please update

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story.  I'm working hard on a new project that has a deadline.  I promise to get back on this very soon.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG you came back!!! I`m so happy to have a new chapter I loved it and am anxious for the next ;D with wolves

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

O my I really loved this chapter, and the battle!!! I don´t receive no one update for months  and now I had one and two chapter in line, it was a great presente!!! I can´t wait for the next chapter and to know how Bella will react and what Renne have to do with all it lol

thanks

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh my god you are so evil!!! I wanted read more, and now I´m crazy here for to know what are happen... that chapter was so cool I don´t want to stop read anymore lol I loved it and am anxious for the next please keep going ;D

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I missed this story so much!!!i can´t understand what poul wanted inventing this story about Bella be your imprint??? please give the next chapter more soon it is possible, I need a little love of Edward lol

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow what the hell!!!! Bella is reading mind now??? I want so bad to see it please don´t be evil don´t take so long I really missed this story!!!

xoxo 



Author's Response:

My novel is almost finished and then my focus goes back to CAM and ff. It seems there is a side effect from ingesting his venom. Just not what they expected. More will be revealed next chapter which should be up in June.

I promise she isn't absorbing everyone's powers. I hate stories like that.  ;)

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

wow!!!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh dear it was great!!!! i loved this chapter!!! Edward was so hot here !!!!

I'm sad because you are saying Merry Christmas and Happy New Year so soon!!! but I think is normal I'll miss this story!!! hope you can come back soon and hope you and your family have a Merry Christmas and a great New Year!!!

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'll be back in Jan with Carlisle's outtake and another chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh my god!!!you are back!! I´m so glad you are here again!!!! please not do hibernation!?!?!?

I miss that story so much, please update  update update

please update  update update

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I´m so happy to have a new update!!! I really missed this story and now I can´t wait the next chapter and know what happened in the end!!!

xoxo hope you be fine

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

I really missed this story!!!!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

I love this chapter the first time I see in fanfction.net!!!! I´m dying here to see more!!!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks. You guys dont know what these reviews mean to me. Im hurrying to get to the new stuff, promise!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Leaping

Oh dear it was so funny!!! I like Charlie so much!!! you make it so cool I really can´t wait for see what will happen when the Swans come in Phoenix.



Author's Response:

Haha thank you so much.  I'm glad you enjoyed Charlie.  He was a blast to write ;)  We'll see what happens when they all meet.  God help me in the writing!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

I started read it just a couple few days and I can´t stop!!! is so romantco and hot!!! is perfect and now I can´t wait to a new update, and see what are the reserves of Bella have, I know I have a lot!!! is to much perfec to be real lol just kidding I loved it!!! sorry my bad English, hope you can understand.

xoxo and come back soon ;D 



Author's Response:

Haha I'm so glad you love it!  I update every Monday so it's not too long between chapters.  It is romantic and hot.  Bella's reservations are normal but not a lot of them to be had.  It may be perfect but they do have issues, they just don't run away from them :)

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :)  See you next week with more!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

Hi!!I lost six chapters and read it all Oh god I was jumping here about Esme sickness, and crazy when Carlisle have Esme in kitchen ( I loved the daddy C lol) this story are so good i really loved to read it and always have a great time!!!

xoxo  



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're all caught up!  You picked a good time...the heartache is pretty much done now :)  Esme is just fine and Carlisle and Edward are back on the right track :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

it was so funny!!! poor Bella and Edward lol I don´t know who I loved more the crazy Renne or Emmett here.

I´m sad to know you will finish it so soon I loved follow you here!! but hope to read more of you soon too!!! 

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  They were crazy!  I've got plenty more that I'm writing so I won't be far :)  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

hi!!! is amazing how I never see the game and I do not have idea how it is, but when you writen it I always understand!!! I look in the google it and I found a lot the womans dancin!!! I was looking for someone look like Edward but i see nothing!! lol how you have a idea for do this Edward??? I loved the chapter!!!

xoxo  



Author's Response:

Hi!  I'm glad you can understand!  Means I"m doing a good job!  I have no idea why you'd see women dancing but I'll take your word for it!  I love football and I lvoe Edward so I had ot combine them :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Oh god not have any other chapter !!! I read all in here in one time and I don´t wanted stop please keep going!!! your story is so good and romantic I really loved it, and I´m looking forward for the next chapter!!! and to know more about James, sorry my English I´m from Brazil and I know he not is so good lol 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! There are teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

wow so cute !!! I want he move for Seattle too!!!

and I want kill Victoria ;D

I loved the chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

I don´t understand very well. who are jezebel??? and I lost something I don´t know what CD Jasper is talking about??? but I really loved the surprise of Edward he is so cute!!!! happy thanksgiving  I not have it here in Brazil but I think is very cool lol

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

{Jezebel is a term referring to a wicked woman. =) And this was the only mention of the recording being sent to jasper. It will be mentioned again later! Hope that clears things up.}

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

you scared the shit out of me now !!! I had think Victoria had does some shit here lol I loved the lemon it was so hot!! and cute lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

apenas oito ?!?!? : {Eu realmente quero saber o que James quer



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Oh my I´m crazy to know : what the hell is the problem of James??? why he care?? he have the girl and the job, Vick be made I understand but him, I don´t lol  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

the end always is sad!!! your story is so good and I loved follow you in this long way, I have always a great time reading it and hope can see more of you here!!! congratulations a really loved it!!!

thanks for writing

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow I loved it!! will be coming to Brazil???? that would be great!! I would loved to read his book

congratulations for the publication ;D

always anxious for the CAM

xoxo



Author's Response:

You should be able to order it on line as paperback or ebook.

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27174
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 part 2

Hi!!! I just found your story now I can´t stop read it!!! is so good writing and I a romance but not is slushy!! I loved how you writen it!!! hope you can update soon!!!! I just noted you like to repeat names lol ryley is the guy who know James first and before is the kid who Anthony dont like and James was the guy who spank Alice and who almost abuse Bella now I´m think is the same person???? I really loved it and I can´t wait to see more!!! sorry my english  is terrible I know sorry

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi, welcome :-) I'm happy you like my little world. I have repeated a couple of names  -well spotted,- but maybe I did it for reason ;-) I have finished the next chapter so you won't have to wait long and your english is perfect :-) Thank you bb

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

wow so goood!!!!I want a kiss to me!!!!! here in Brazil we call mom of mama with a sound like italian!! you know??? mamabella here are mombeauty!!! is an idea

xoxo



Author's Response:

I really like mamabella makes me think of mama bear which is great for Bella, thank you bb

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 part 1

sound good!!!!is too cute to see Edward call Bella in phone!!!I loved it!!

xoxo 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13

God I miss this story so much!!I'm glad that things is better now for now!! hope you can keep updating, this story is too good to be endless!!!

 

take care

 

xxx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268790
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I read two chapters now and is so cute to see Jasper stay with Bella!!! I loved it, and now Emmett too, oh my, I missed Carlisle though, I loved the chapter!!! ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Hi!! I just found your story yesterday, and I have to say is good!!! hope to have a new chapter soon ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I would probably be lost for fear hurting everyone around me too, but I can´t be upset with Emmet yet lol I think can understand him!!! come back soon and have a great weekend



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89065
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi!!! I just found this story now and like yours other stories is really great !!! I loved Carlisle and read lemons with him, humm is so good!!! hope you can post more it have so much i wanted to see, and to know how Alice and Charlie will react and Esme lol I´m really anxious for more please keep going I see nothing wrong here!!! is one story very good, sorry my bad English

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71698
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hi!!! I´ll never see Peter the same again!!! it is so good and i like so much hope you can update soon.

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

for a little moment I felt sorry for your fingers!!!

Bella was so bad here I´m crazy to see what she will do with Riley lol

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74014
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

I just found your story today and I can´t stop read it now !!! is so cute and I have to say I don´t cry in chapter 7 but I cry a lot in chapter 6, when Edward talk with her, and now I´m sad because i don´t have no more chapter for read!!! please update?!?! I really loved it ;D

sorry my bad English  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review my story.  I am hoping to post a new chapter today.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

WOW!!! I have to say , I had a sickle in my hands!!! now, I don´t get any sleep, waiting the next chapter, please give it soon:D every chapter I loved it more!!!

xoxo



Author's Response:

A sickle?  Seriously?  Creative...and a little scary.  I am keeping my eye on you. ;)

Thanks for the review.  I am already hard at work on the next chapter, so feel free to get some sleep.  I will wake you when it is ready.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Oh dear god !!! I read entire chapter with smile on my face!!! i really loved it, until even kate and your bithiness!!! please don´t take so long!!! I missed it :D

xoxo



Author's Response:

Sorry about the delay.  I struggled through this one a bit.  But I am glad that you smiled for most of it.  I promise to write faster next time. :)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

hallelujah!!! with Carlilsle I think I´ll always to need a new panties lol the kiss was hot!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

sweet Jesus why Bela don´t ask for be one of them, I don´t understand if I was her would be begging to be one of them and have a little real love with Carlisle ;D



Author's Response:

All in good time my friend.  Thanks so much for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Fourth chapter

she don´t need the permission, but he need right??? in the first time in 4 chapter I hate Edward!!! and if I was Bella I probable would leave. my heart not are so strong lol I hate more Mike, this is the person in Twilight I hate more lol hope you can come back soon!!!

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth chapter

out of excuses?? ou please he let her give a blow job in Mike!!! I think she is ease with him!!! and you will finish it so soon??? no please so much can come this!!!Edward have to prove yourself not in bed but like a men!!!lol keep going!!!!

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124850
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hi there!! I started read it now and is so good, I was freaking out, because Í don´t know how bad Charlie will be, and when he caught her in bed, I was jumping in my chair lol I really loved it and hope you can update soon!?!?

thanks for writen and sorry my English

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! No worries about your English.  It's better than my second language, I'm sure!  Charlie's gonna be pretty bad in this story, but there's only one actually violent scene. Hope that helps!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

she will go with him?!?!?Oh dear I loved when Edward stand up Charlie and now I´m crazy here to see the next!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yes, she'll go with him...but for how long, is the question.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow so cute!!! Edward, Esme and rose was so cute here!!! I think this is my new favorite chapter!!! i loved it!!! and you are evil because now I´m think how much time Bella will be with them...

Summary:

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After years away, Bella is returning to a place she thought she'd left behind and a man she thought never wanted to see her again. Love often comes when you least expect it. There are lies that need to be confessed and secrets to reveal.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146616 Read Count: 43594
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 Jun 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

is so romantic!!! I just found it now and I loved everything here, My favorite part is when Bella punch Chelsia lol

hope have more soon!?!?

xoxo and sorry my bad English



Author's Response:

So happy that you like it. There should be an update Friday or Satirday. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Oh dear you are so evil!! take the lemons and give a cliffy like that!!! just kidding I loved the chapter, all was so sweet!!!



Author's Response:

just a little cliffy. The next chapter should be up by next Monday. Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I´m crazy to see that!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Next chapter will be up within the week. Look for a teaser on Monday at the fictionators.com blog

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Hi!! i read it here and I´m sorry for you had been taken but I´m happy because if you don´t post it here I probable not will read it, and Oh god, I read it all in one time, and I loved because I read stories where Edward says Bella is strong but I can´t see that!!! but here is a strong Bella and he never say it, I can´t wait for the next!!! will have next??? right??? please keep going!!! because  it sound like is the end, and I want so much more!! is really good!!!! congratulations!! and sorry my bad English

xoxo  

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

wow it was intense!! poor Bella , I think she is broken more of Edward was 5 years ago, I loved the chapter hope you can livve soon and come back

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Oh dear!!! I´m out of words!!! poor Bella she is so broken now and I don´t know if I´m angry for Edward or pity, and Renee what the hell!!!

hope you can come back and make it better lol

xoxo

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

wow it good I´m so anxious to know what the hell is in the dreams of Bella!! and the photos is so cool hope you can keep updating 

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

is too hard don´t be mad with Edward!!! poor Mac, and jacob lol... anxious for the next and Bella with Mac!!! ;D

xoxo



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh dear it is so cool!! and now, the next chapter can´t be fast enough!!! please keep going!!! 

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112168
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh my poor Bella!!! is getting very hard to get Edward to redeem!!! hope you can come back soon I loved how snippy Edward are!!!

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh my I ask me when Edward really will broke the spirit of Bella??? because I really want to see him beg for Bella lol I really like this Edward although he is funny!!!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I like this Rose!!! poor Bella have so many problem with Edward she don´t need more lol

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

is good to see Edward making sense!(a little) poor Bella so confused lol I loved it and I´m anxiousto see what more Emmett will do now !!!;D

xoxo

Summary:

Just because it's forbidden - does that make it wrong? Bella's mother brings home a new guy from the bar, but who will he end up in bed with???  Dirty dirty - not for the faint of heart. One-shot - One-Giant-Lemon!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4506 Read Count: 5702
[Report This] Published: 20 May 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi!!it was hot!!! i wold like to see you  continue with this story!!! and see what Renee will do lol keep going !!! :D

xoxo

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh dear I was out and I lost two chapter and read Edward die and Bella come home home in one time is so sad!!! I want so much to see when they will be together again lol

xoxo



Author's Response:

It was hard to go through Edward's last moments and it was even harder to break Bella's heart as she found out that he was gone. This chapter was definitely a tough one to write. You said it was hard to pick up and read both of the last two chapters together, at least you had a bit of a break before you read the next one. It's definitely another sad one. I promise to bring them back together as soon as I can so they can both be happy again.

See how Bella is handling life without Edward in this quick peek at chapter 10:

 

When morning arrived, I woke with swollen eyes from crying all night. I stayed hidden under my covers until my father left for the day. He wouldn’t want to see my face as it was, stained with tears, puffy and red. I didn’t have to look in a mirror to know because this was how I had looked every morning for the past eight months.

I was still playing the dutiful daughter this morning until my mother left to run her errands for the day. So I bathed, got dress and went downstairs to help Mrs. Jones cook breakfast and do my daily chores.

As soon as I turned the corner into the kitchen, I saw Mrs. Jones sitting at the table with her head hanging down and a tissue in her hand. I knew in a second why she sat there crying and I moved quickly to her side, throwing my arms around her.

 

 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm so sad now!!!I don't wanted Bella with Garrett but i don't wanted to heim dead lol 

Poor Bella are alone again!!! and Edward are lost!!! I can't see how you will get it better and have a happy end  lol I'm be dramatc here!!! just kidding!!! but I have a question!!! what happen when Bella can't move yourself ???the other times I understand had something about Edward, but now what would be ???hope you can understand my english ;D

anxious for more!!! 

xoxo



Author's Response:

I hated killing Garrett. I loved him and I knew what it would do to Bella when he died, but it had to be done if I want Edward to come back. I hated to keep them apart for so long but they will be seeing each other very soon. I promise. And you know I'll give you an answer for Bella's sudden fatigue. If you remember how strong their connection to each other is, it'll all make sense when I get there.  Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter which will be up later today:

Sitting alone watching the sky change colors, I thought of Bella and our lives together growing up. I replayed every moment and let the love we felt back then wash over me. I knew I couldn't, but I wanted to feel that again.

I wanted to look into her eyes again and see the love I used to see when she looked at me. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and promise that I would never let her go again. Assure her that if she still wanted me, if she still loved me, we could be together forever. It was possible now and I could take her with me.

As the sky above me grew dark, I made my decision. I had to see her and if she was happy, I would leave quietly and never return. I would find Carlisle and Esme and live my life with them.

But if happiness had not found her in all these years, I would go to her in the night, take her someplace where I could explain everything and beg for her forgiveness. And if by some miracle she still loved me, I would take her back to Carlisle so he could change her and I could keep her with me for the rest of eternity.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow Poor Papa Edward!!!! is too sad!!! but I think will be more sad to see Edward get sick :{ hope you can update soon!!!

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Author's Response:

Yes, having Papa Masen get sick is one thing but it's an entirely different story when Edward gets sick. If it's any indication, the next chapter made two pre-readers and one beta cry...so far. So my suggestion is Kleenex. LOL You will see the chapter come your way at the end of the week. Thanks for the review, darlin. It means a lot to me - D

Until next time...here is a short peek at chapter 8:

 

Leaning over the sink, I broke down and let go of all the stress, worry, fear, loss and anger that had been pressing on me for weeks. This was all too much and I wasn’t sure how much stronger I could be or how much more I could handle before I lost everything… my mother, my father, Bella and my life.

 

“Edward.”

 

Dr. Cullen’s voice was soft as he placed a hand on my shoulder. I didn’t hear him come in and I couldn’t stand for him to look at me right now, seeing the weakness that I let overwhelm me.

 

“Are you okay, Son?” I could hear his concern, but I still couldn’t speak. “I’m here if you need to talk. I’ll leave word with the nurses to find me if you need me.”

 

He patted my back softly a couple of times before his hand lifted and he walked towards the door.

 

“Is my mother going to die?” I choked out the words.

 

“We’re doing everything we…”

 

“I need the truth, Dr. Cullen.” I couldn’t relax my grip on the sink for fear of falling. “You’ve told me my father will die. Will my mother…” The words caught in my throat, unwilling to be spoken. Clearing my throat, I tried again with a different question.  “How much longer do I have with her?”

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi!!! I just found this story today and is so romantic I´m in love with this couple and crazy with curious to know who give a Bella the dress??? lol hope you can update soon!!! and give my tease??? sorry my english

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, darlin. I hope with Edward’s pov, you will fall even more in love with these two. He’s definitely in love with his girl and he’s excited to show everyone how much. As far as the dress, unfortunately, that answer won’t come until chapter 5. You will have to have patience. *wink*

Edward’s pov will go back in time a little so you can see how he got ready for the big day. So until next time…here’s your quick preview of chapter 4. Much love to you – D

“My intentions?” I asked.

“Yes, Edward,” he said. “It has been a year since you began your courtship. Have you considered what you want for your future?”

Thinking of Bella and our future always brought a smile to my face. She and I had talked about this so often, we had our whole life planned; my career, our home and our family, everything down to the last detail.

“Yes, Father. I want a future with Bella. I would take her as my wife tomorrow if I could, but I know that is not possible.”  My words were quick to leave my lips.

He laughed at my eagerness. “Well, there are a few things that need to be done first before that happens. You must speak to Mr. Swan before you begin to make any plans. He must give his consent before you can move forward.”

“I know, Father. As soon as I have a ring to offer, I will ask Mr. Swan for Bella’s hand.”

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow so cute!!!! is really his mother who give the dress!?!?!?

anxious for the next!!! and congratulations for the blog!!!!

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Author's Response:

Aww darlin, I’m glad you liked it. Edward is so fun to write because the early 1900’s was a time of pure romance and men went out of their way to show how much they loved a woman. I’ve always pictured Edward this way and every word, action and move he makes is for Bella. He lives for her. And yes, his mother made the dress what better way to make both your son and the girl he loves happy at the same time. Thanks so much for your review. I appreciate it. Until next time…much love to you – D

Bella’s birthday is here and Edward is going to round out the story by telling his side of what happened that night. All we can ask is how loving and romantic his proposal will be. Here’s a quick taste of  chapter 6:

 

I stood at the foot of the stairs with Mr. Swan, waiting for my angel to show herself, but when she stepped into view, I lost all ability to breathe. My eyes widened as I took in the beauty before me in her new blue silk dress.  My mother told me the dress was for the party, but I had no idea that it was a dress for Bella. It fit her perfectly and she looked more glorious tonight than she ever had.

 

I was supposed to take a step forward, but my frozen muscles wouldn’t move. Bella descended two stairs when my father nudged me from behind, clearing his throat to get my attention.  My smile was immediate as the trance she held me in was lifted, and I stepped forward, waiting for her to make her way down to me.

 

Her pace was torturous as she inched closer to me. When she finally reached the bottom step, my frantic heartbeat drowned out every other sound in the room. The spell she cast overtook me again and my body was still as a statue. Her giggle brought me back to my senses and I shook my head to clear my mind.

 

I took another step forward, reaching my hand out to escort my angel.  I wanted to speak but words failed me in her presence.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

humf!!! you are evil!!! let us here, now I want so much to see more, but I can't because you are evil!!!and I'm a spoiled girl lol, just kidding except the part of I want more !!!

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Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow who is the doctor??? lol I'm so anxious for the next part!!! and see when they will find one another again!!!

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Author's Response:

Sorry, I'm not quite sure who the doctor is since Bella never thinks about him again once she leaves the coffee shop. I'm glad you like it. Unfortunately, it's not quite time for Edward to come back into her life. It'll happen though so stick with me and we'll get there. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek at chapter 14:

I sat down at the counter right in front of her and she stared at me with her hands on her hips. I knew better than to say a word before she did, so we sat in silence for several minutes. She was definitely better at this game than Mrs. Jones was, she would have cracked by now and told me what she wanted. I was getting nervous, fidgeting on the stool and wringing my hands together until finally she took pity on me and spoke.

"Sweetie, what are you doing with kids like that?" She shook her head. "You're a good girl, sweetheart, and they're nothin' but trouble."

I didn't know how to answer without telling her the truth. I had to think fast.

What would Lizzy say?

And then it came to me. "I met them on one of my trips to the city with my Aunt. We became friends and I come and visit them all the time now."

She narrowed her eyes at me and I knew she didn't believe my story.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh my good!!! poor Bella I'm so anxious to know who will change Bella, I was think it would be that doctor lol but now I just want the next chapter and see what happen!!! ;D

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Author's Response:

Now you know I cannot reveal all my secrets just yet. The answers will come in time. And as for that gunshot... we'll find out what happens in chp 16. I know that's evil and I'm sorry. I can tell you though that the next chapter will answer your question about Carlisle. Thanks so much for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek at what Edward's been up to:

"Careful, Edward."

Carlisle's voice startled me, bringing my focus back to the park. Sitting next to me quickly, he reached out and pulled my hand from the park bench and smoothed out the grooves made by my fingers. I hadn't realized I was holding on so tight.

"Is everything okay, Edward?" I heard his concern.

I sighed. "Yes, just thinking."

"About Bella?"

"As always."

"I am truly sorry, Son." Carlisle leaned forward with his elbows on his knees, hands clasped in front of him. "Unfortunately, never having shared that kind of love myself, I can't begin to imagine the pain and heartache you're going through. I wish there was a way..."

"No, Carlisle," I said, halting his sentence. He looked up at me. "I understand and I'm not asking to go back. Bella deserves to live her life to its fullest and if I can give her that gift by staying away, then that's what I must do. It is my only way to honor her as I would have done as her husband."

Such a hard decision to make.

"The hardest one I'll ever make in my life," I answered his unspoken words.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wow that was close!!!I'm so anxious to see when they will be together  again!!!

 

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Author's Response:

They're close, just not quite close enough. It's coming though...I promise. A major jump in time in the next two chapters will bring them closer to finding each other again. Thanks for the review, darlin. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at the next chapter to be posted later today:

In the six years we'd been together, I'd never seen Carlisle so happy. Finally finding love had changed him completely and he was a whole new man. He actually reminded me of myself years ago when I was with Bella. She simply brought out the best in me and it was exactly what Esme did for Carlisle.

They could barely contain their love for each other so, after years of posing as husband and wife, they made the decision to make their relationship official. As they readied themselves to take this step together, Esme pulled me aside for a quick word.

"My dear Edward, for years you've played the role of brother to us and I have been proud to accept you in that role, but I want something more." She gripped my hand tightly as she spoke.

"Esme, you've brought so much happiness to Carlisle's life and I am grateful to you for making him the man he is today. So please, ask for anything you wish."

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh my god!!! I want so much to read more!!! you are kill me here!!!!

 

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Author's Response:

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow I'm so anxious for the next!!! I can't remeber when Victoria see Bella lol Poor Charlie and Renne!!! I loved it!!

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Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

why you do it with me??? Oh god I want so much the next chapter!!! I really missed this story and you will do me wait more :{ I'm crying now! lol poor Bella!!!I'm just kidding  hope you can come back soon!!! I loved it!!!

 

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Author's Response:

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow it´s so great I loved how you writen and this Bella is good!!! hope you can update soon!!! 

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Author's Response:

Reviewer: joice84 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

that´s funny!!! I like POVC and now I´m anxious to know your new story I have to say when I started read it I was thinking it will be more serious but I really like what you are doing here!!! hope you can post a new story soon!!!sorry my english.

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Author's Response: I'll be getting that new story out as soon as I get some chapters worked out. Thanks for reading Connie