Reviews by xXxAllegraxXx
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515184
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

Wow, James is such a pig...I really don't like his attitude...Cheating on Bella while she goes through that training for him...

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6

What a sick fuck he is even thinking about dog tags with a chip in them...But this is so like him it shouldn't even surprise me...

He'd need a lesson in submission at the school, too. He should experience for himself what he wants the women to do for him. He'd appreciate it a hell of a lot more...

 

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

Omg, I so love your story.

But this guy infuriates me so much, I'd wish I could meet him and beat the shit out of him...

You're really an awesome writer. =)

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

Poor Bella...Hope they'll find out soon what James did...

As hot as her training sessions are (and they are REALLY hot) James got way too far with the pain play without her being asked.

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

Ohh how sweet. Bella deserved some care after all she went through without agreeing first. =)

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B

Sooow cute how they both don't realize that the're falling for each other... =)

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11

I had guessed Alice was into pain from her reaction in the dungeon, but I was a little surprised at the extent. But I think it suits her and Jasper. =)

But I guess Bella wouldn't like the intense pain of clips...but who knows what she'd explore with Edward...?! =)

 

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A

I loved the lesson Bella had with Edward. I could totally understand her frustration with Esme, she would have tried my patience too if I were in her shoes...

I hate that stupid as fuck Mike...I hope he'll be caught in time and get the shit beaten out of him...!

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

I hate James more wwith every chapter in his POV...

I sincerely hope Renee and Charlie will be able to blow this abusive fucker's cover.

Good to know Victoria still has a tiny bit of sense left in her...It won't so her any good since it will only make him increase his efforts to break her, but nevertheless it good...Hopefully he won't be able to break her comletely...

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A

Good, Edward caught Mike, I hope in time...BEFORE Mike had the chance to rape her...

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Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

I can't believe how smoothly everything went for him so far...But with his ever growing ego he made a couple mistakes like the meeting with Carlisle and getting the needle from the vet by saying he was a friend of one of the doctors...I hope they'll be noticed soon and all comes crashing down around him...

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B

Oh please let him get suspicious...No one can be that blind to not see Bella is afraid to death of him and not at all pleased with the thought of pain play and being branded...

And this call to her father...He simply needs to doubt her words and go in looking for her...

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

Mike got exactly what he deserves...He really didn't understand what it means to be a dom...He proved that with his "You fuck women who don't want it all the time. I thought that's the fucking point."

He rally thought they give him a free pass to rape women...Stupid jackass...

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A

She should really start to look around. I get why she's feeling the way she is, all alone not able to trust. But the freinds she's seeking are right in front of her eyes - Angela and Alice. And if she thought really haard about it, the school wouldn't seem half as bad to her if she realized that the others are here on their own accord and enjoying it. She just can't enjoy it cause it wasn't her wish to go there and she didn't know what to expect...Poor girl.

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Interview with the Master

That was a funny chapter! I loved the interview. And I'm glad to know that Carlisle was a little suspicious from the beginning and even more so since the meeting. I loke him a hell of a lot more. =)

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

Omg, he can't have a kid. He is in no way able to be a father or anything to anyone...He is just too fucked up!!

Plus he just hit another low for deciding to not even tell her about her pregnancy. Didn't expect him to turn around his attitude or even giving her a choice in the matter, but not even telling her? Asshole...

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A

How can one person be so ful off himself?? He really thinks he is godlike and perfect?? He so far from that and so far from being a "real man" like he puts it, it's not even funny anymore...This stupid little shit.

 

Oh yeah. The baby gives Victoria strenght. Now she just needs an opportunity to get awy from him. And if she does I get the feeling she will go straight to Charlie to tell him what James did. This be great...!

 

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

Oh this is better than I could've imagined!! Now he gets to taste his own medicine!! *evil chuckle*

I hope they will make his every second there a nightmare...

Bella and Edward should get a go on him, too...!

But what about Victoria?? Will she be found on time?? But I guess Bella will save her, she knew James was not there, when her mother broke in but knew that someone was...Bet she'll think about that the nbext morning and have someone look in or she'll go herself with Edward...

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21

Poor Victoria...I can't even begin to imaginf waht she must've been through being tied up on a bed with a ball gag and nothing to eat or drink in almost 2 days...Always afraid of James coming back and forcing her to have an abortion...

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21

I definately need to give him credit. Didn't think he'd be able to take that much. But that just makes it all the more fun. I love them torturing him!! <3

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21

Good thing Rose could finally let it all out and what better "person" for that than James? He deserves this and so, so much more...

 

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 62: James DAY 22

I hope they won't give him the chance to escape!! He NEEDS to break so that they can kill him (hopefully very slow and painfully)...!

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

This stupid as fuck Lauren!!! I could kill her right about now!!!! How can anyone be so stupid?? Couldn't they have locked this part of the school up?? FUCK!

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Fuck, how the hell did he find her?? This can't be good...

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Oh shit the fucking gps chip...totally forgot about that...

I can't wait for the moment everything turns around and he gets his well deserved punishment for all he did...

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I love that Bella was able to let out a little of her fear and frustration on him by beating him into unconsiousness!! =) And I really do hope Jake lets them deliver him to Aro....!