Reviews by sweetness109
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Heartfortwilight Productions

 

Wolf-Shifter and Earth Witch, Bella Swan, moves with her father to Forks, Washington to join the "Midnight Sun" Wolf Pack. After almost 21 years of living in hiding in the human world, Bella struggles to find her place amongst the Pack. There is so much she doesn't know or understand. Will she ever find her place when so many are against her? And why does she have such a strong connection to the pack's Beta, Edward? Will they both learn to follow their instincts, or will they simply be too stubborn?

 

Thank you Heartfortwilight Productions for this beautiful banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Mate Series
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105198 Read Count: 32341
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2019 Updated: 16 Jan 2020
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 11: A New Job

I love this love this story! The way you write the characters and allow the plot to write itself at its own pace, instead of rushing to one point or another is really beautiful. You are a great author and have given new life to characters that I’ll admit to having read a lot about but never quite in this way before. I really do love and appreciate the layering that your story and characters show. Hopefully you have an unrough rest of the year, fingers crossed. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving such a kind review. Your words were really uplifting and I really appreciate them! Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 15: A Bond

Gah! I love and hate the wait between chapters, because it allows me time to pay attention to the details and for my mind to wander with possibilities. Thank for another great continuation to an amazing story. 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 19: A Close Call

Gah, another fantastic chapter that leaves me wanting for more, y'all are doing a great job with this story! I hope y'all had a grrrreat(as Tony the Tiger would say) holiday!



Author's Response:

We are getting closer!

Summary:

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Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 38413
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 26: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 26: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 26: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 27: My Allies

Hopefully you feel better soon! I'm jumping in my skin to see how you reveal what Riley did and how much his brother was involved. Good luck on the Golden Onion Awards!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Working on editing it for now, but we shall see. Thank you for your awesome comments.

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 26: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Marking My Territory

I love how bella's developed into such a strong woman! Great chapter can't wait for the next one, you all create such a great story! Happy constitution day on Sunday, hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Marking My Territory

I love how bella's developed into such a strong woman! Great chapter can't wait for the next one, you all create such a great story! Happy constitution day on Sunday, hope you enjoy it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Yes, I love that she is finally putting her foot down and becoming the strong woman we all know is there.

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 4: My Request

Thank you, for giving your readers such beautiful chapters. I love your stories, they always keep me chomping at the bit for the next reveal and you have allowed me a reprieve from my everyday life and a dive into the world that you and your betas have created for your readers. So thank you. And have no fear you'll get the month of March, marching to the beat of your mind with the semester following suit. 

Summary:

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***This story has been pulled to be published under Lara Norman as Bloody Halo*** When notorious criminal mastermind Edward Cullen came back to town, Bella was blindsided by old feelings of infatuation. She knew better than to dance with the devil... but she did it anyway.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2502 Read Count: 76832
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2020 Updated: 27 Apr 2021
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

I love the way Edward takes such good care of Bella and the respect he has for her. That last sentence made me think of things I thought of as major tests Bella passed, standing up to Alice and deciding to stand firmly in a partnership with Edward are the two of the three big ones. The biggest test she's faced up till now not including the shooting, is truly listening to Rose's advice and not just hearing the words. Bella listened to Rose's words and deliberated on what she wanted to do/be, I feel like that was a very defining moment for her as a character as she started the process of taking control back in a major way that will impact her life and decisions as the story unfolds. Once again great job and stay safe out there!



Author's Response:

I have to say I really appreciate your words. I've worked hard on making Bella believable and to show realistic growth. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

Love the path and development you're carving out for the characters!



Author's Response:

Thank you! They're growing stronger. 

My Sun by kridafanfic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Leah Swan, member of a powerful wolf-shifter family, is struggling with the loss of two family members. Who will she turn to for comfort when all she wants to do is run away as fast as she can? Separate story from My Stubborn Mate Alternative Universe.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Paul/Leah
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56556 Read Count: 2487
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2020 Updated: 07 Jan 2021
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: That Time Something Important was Revealed

Poor Embry! To have a secret part of yourself so pure and innocent forcefully revealed is terrifying, and that's not even considering that it was a close loved one it was unexpectedly revealed to. My heart went out to Embry when Leah read the pain and on his face, made me wish as a society that we just accepted people for who they are and not who they love. Will you show us how Jared and Embry met in the next chapter or will it be focusing more so on Embry and Leah's relationship? I hope their talk goes well and brings some peace to Embry so that he can let go of the pain and shame  

Poor Leah, though she has had an eventful morning. I know she'll heal quickly but I still cringed at fall and when she blacked out. Here comes the Paul the soon to be unhappy Paul, who'll be an unhappy worry wart. All to the tune of here come the bride is all that briefly popped into my head at Jared expressing how Paul'll responds. Ahh, I probably should stop writing paragraphs as reviews, but I start writing and then it just keeps going  

Thanks for another great multilayered chapter and stay safe. 



Author's Response:

I adore your reviews! Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 5: That Time I Moved In

Let me just say your stories have become such an addiction to me! I wait for each chapter with bated breath to see how the plot thickens and actions unfold. I love that you are give Leah her own light to shine in, as a character I adore her and wish more people were as fierce, kind, and human as her. You do such a beautiful job portraying her strength and pain never letting us forget she's as human as the next person, even if she does shift into a wolf. Leah, Paul, Jared, and Claire seem like such a tight family enjoying each other's company at breakfast. Your depiction of your characters is always so refreshing and very much appreciated. 

On a side note, I did want to apologize, I recently noticed my reviews are showing twice when they are only submitted once. It always says fatal error when I try to submit a review for your story, I am happy they are at least going through. 

Hope you win the Golden Onion Awards and stay safe!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such an incredible review! Your words really mean a lot to me. Don't worry about the additional reviews, most likely a problem with the system. Again, thank you!

Summary:

double crossed


 


Edward Cullen was ruthless, deadly, a man whore and was damn proud of each title.  The only child of the West Coast Mob Boss, Carlise “The Lion” Cullen. From the age of thirteen, he had been groomed to take over for his father when he retired. The day before his twenty-five birthday, his father sat him down and informed him that he was ready to hand over the reins to him, that was after he performed two more acts of loyalty to the family. Edward grinned, knowing that there was nothing his father could throw his way that he wouldn’t do or could do.


 


Isabella Swan the daughter of Charlie “The Books” Swan, the accountant for the Cullen crime family for all of his adult life, as well as friend and confidant to his Boss.  Knowing from a young age what her father did for a living, she decided she wanted to develop her skills in weapons and combat so that one day she could find a place in the family. Called to a meeting with her father and Carlisle, she thought that her dreams were coming true.


 


What happens when they are Double Crossed? 


 


 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5939 Read Count: 2129
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2020 Updated: 03 Jun 2020
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great character introduction, I'm really excited to see where you take this storyline.

Summary:

R&R

 

Bella arrives in Forks, 20 years after the Cullens leave, for Charlie's funeral. The mansion is up for sale at long last and she gets roped into being part of the cleaning crew by Charlie's estate agent widow, Amanda. How is it she finds what no one else ever saw or heard?

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40458 Read Count: 8268
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2020 Updated: 22 Aug 2020
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Hiding In Plain Sight

I could taste the anticipation in the words and feel the tension as the chapter progressed. 



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

Your too kind, I'm so pleased you liked it xx

Alexis

Summary:

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FBI Agent Isabella Swan has been handed a case involving the murder of 4 women. After the 4th victim's death, her lead is led to Billionaire Edward Cullen who isn't all he seems....

Vampire/Human


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58100 Read Count: 7974
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2021 Updated: 07 Nov 2022
Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Another One

I'm in love with both of your stories! Please I'm begging you do not make your chapters smaller, the wait is more than worth it! Small chapters always feel like previews to me little taunting crumbs to follow and entice. Have a great day! :)



Author's Response:

Totally understand! I like long chapters to! It just takes awhile for an update.. I hear you though!