I just read this straight through.

It is such a captivating story. I spent most of the story in tears. It could be because I am an abuse victim, but I don't think that is all of it. This story is beautifuly written, and covers so, so much material.

It really allows a person to look at life and see that there may be hope. It is a bit fairy tale in the whole find the new family etc, but why not. It makes for a wonderful story.

Thank you for the emotional roller coaster. Thank you for sharing your talent. I feel like I should say more, but I am literally at a loss for words.

VR13

Holly Hell!

THAT was one emotional roller coaster. At one point you actually had me thinking that they may not make it.

You did an awesome job. Reading stuff like the fight sucks, but sometimes that is how life is and you make it work. Scary Edward though.

As always your lemons are great. I am glad you resolved them and didn't leave it hanging til next chapter.

Almost over??? They say all good things must come to an end, but I just have to ask WHY??? LOL

Thanks for a great read. I love this story.

Most unconventional. However, extreamly handy. ;)

Not somthing I would want in my own house but I liked the idea of it.

I really liked the lemon(s). You did a great job. I would read an extened story. You caught my attention and kept it as well as intrigued me as to where the story could go.

Thanks

VR13

Awwww, sweet Edward shows through. :)

Liked this chapter. Think I am going to like the upcoming ones even more.

How sweet is it that he took the time to dig posters out of his attic??

I am really liking the direction this story is headed. Thinking that Mr. Ben will probably help ground him a little bit more.

I know Carlisle and Esme are just going to love Bella.

Thanks for the entertainment!

VR13

ROFLMAO!!

I just read from beggining to here straight through. I have not laughed so hard for AGES! I am REALLY, REALLY liking this story. I have the feeling that you are just about to take everything up a step.

Gotta say the "hat rack" and the giant vibe scaring Edward are two of the funniest things I have ever come across.

It's great. Thanks for sharing your talent and humor with us.

VR13

Holy Hell!!

You had my little heart beating. It was great. :)

As always I Love this couple. You have built the best rapport with them. Poor Bella, but man is she one "Bad Ass Bitch"! Of course she would have to be to be married to this Edward.

Carlisle is such a dick. You can't help but like him but he is such a dick!

This is going to be a long week. :( As always I am wanting more.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

I loved it!

Only Mobward would show his 11 year old porn to explain sex! LOL

Great lemon. Liking the chemistry with E&B. I feel trouble coming with his boredom, and look forward to what you have in store for us.

Like the way you are starting.

Thank You for continuing this story I love it.

Thanks!

Edward, in black leaning next to a limo with a red rose...... Drool. That was a great scene! I am glad they are back to being ok.

It is slightly unsettleing and a bit irritating sometimes, but I really do like the way you write about real life type situations. Everything is not always sunshine and roses, and if it is it tends to get boaring.

Roger is kind of a little weesel. I see some trouble brewing there, as he seems to be a bit on the dense side

I am starting to feel a bit sorry for Whorlisle for when Bells finds out. LOL

Love your entertaining me.

Thanks!!

Damn girl, you leave me wordless.

Bathroom sex with a housefull of family dinner! LOL I LOVE IT!!

Also love that Edward beat Carlisle's ass. Of course Carlisle finally actually fought back a bit. Not sure if that is a good sign or not, but am choosing to take it as one. Maybe he finally found something worth fighting for besides Bella. Probably not, but I can hope. Don't know why but I seem to have some kind of soft spot for the idiot. (shakes head)

Don't like the turn that Nanny took. Kind of understand it, but still don't like it. Guess I am protective of my bitch too.

You amaze me with your writing. You have so many different ranges and do them all well.

Thanks so much for sharing.

VR13

So sorry I haven't been good at reviewing lately.

I HAVE been reading. I LOVE this Edward, and even more through his eyes.

Carlisle is such a smage. I can't believe he actually manned up when Bella had the gun to Edwards head and admited that the kid was his.

Yeah, I think he is going to regret not kicking his ass. But maybe we will be lucky and both will actually happen. OR... Esme will just castrate him. Yeah, Carlisle could really mess him up business wise if he decided to.

Poor Edward, Sonny is already on his way to filling his shoes. One day he will have to open his eyes and realize it. I know why he doesn't want it to happen, but how can it not. I just hope that Dammion turns out to be a better person than Carlisle, since he reminds Nanny so much of him.

Thanks for the early update. :)

First of all I WILL NOT flounce from any of your stories. You are awesome. This has become such an intense story. I don't understand people's problem with it. It is fantastic! It sucks. But who likes a story that always goes good and according to plan?

Well those bitches can just heed the warnigns and stay the fuck out. JHC, you give amble warning every chapter. If you can't handle how the "creator" has decied to create the story then let it be and find one you will like and leave her alone so we who do enjoy it will be able to see it throught to it's rightful ending. I mean Holly Hanna.

That said, Damn. Girl i absolutly LOVE your mind and your story telling ability. You are getting a bit scarry now, but what the hell. It makes for a much more interesting story.

Poor Edward. Making the decision to keep Bella with him had to be one of the hardest of his life. And what a life it is. I still see Sonny taking over one day tough. I hope Carlisle and especially Aro pull through. Although Carlisle, I'm not sure why. He is kind of like the dog that dumps on the rug all the time but you can't help but love him anyway.

Will Edward and Bella take Anthony and raise him now? Especially if Carlisile dosent' make it??

One thing that is still bugging me. Nanny. Does she really feel Bella took Edward away from her? Or is she just getting old and cranky? Or is it just the live in the minute Itialian blood?

You are doing a fuck awesome job in my book. Please keep up the god work and post ASAP. :)

VR13

(Bonnie)

Jesus, just when I think you can't get any more intense, WHAM!!

That was a lot to take in. Not so much it was long, just a lot to take in.

Poor Edward, yet at the same time what a Bastard.

He has so much pressure. I just wish he would not have snapped on Bella, like that. Even though they say it is ok, it is not. He still crossed a line, even though she said he didn't. Even he knew it and thought so otherwise her wouldn't have done the thing with the gun!! OMG, you are giving me heart failures.

My heart is breaking for them both. It sucks that they have it all, yet have to give up so much. But I guess that is life. You don't ever get something for nothing in life, especially something as good as they have. The price is pretty high. I know they will be ok, (you promised) but my heart goes out to them both.

I hope Aro is going to be ok. What is it with guys? Why can't a guy and a girl be best friends without there being some kind of sexual inference at one point or another.  I totally understand where you are coming from in the story, and Edward had a valid point, even though it was exagerated due to his mental conditionitelia. But the world in general is that way. I don't understand why according to popular demand best friends must have the same genitalia. Yet on the other hand if you do have the same genitalia and you are sexual with one another THAT is wrong too.???

Sorry, get down off my bitch box.

Fantastic chapter. Hurtful and hard to swallow in places, but beautifully written.

Thank you so much. You provide awesome entertainment.

Like father like daughter. Marcus should have just trained Esme for the job!

You are starting to scare me. I didn't even get the last chapter read and reviewed before you posted this one. Don't get me wrong, this is great! I love being able to read new SexyLexi everyday, it it awsome! I'm just afraid that you are trying to finish up (of which I am glad) and quit. (of which I'm very sad, if that is the case.)

I understand this could be a hard story for some to read, but it is original, new and yes it is raw. It is also refreshing, horrifying, but very entertaining and at times humorous.

As you said, shouldn't it be just as horrible that Bella raped Edward. I appreciate what you have done with the story. You entertain me. That is MY point of reading it.

I am not sure I like where you are going with Aro, but hey, you don't usually go where I think you are going to go anyhow, so we will probably be ok. Haha.

Can Edward take out Esme for almost killing Carlisle? I mean is, or would that be considered acceptable? Or will it be more of a hand slap type of thing? Or will he just let Carlisle take care of it? Can't wait to find out.

I am still loving your stuff and I thank you SO, SO MUCH for sharing your talent and wonderful imagination with us.

VR13

You make me laugh!

You make me cry.

You make me laugh!

You make me smile.

I LOVE this story!

Thank you so much!!!

VR13

I know a lot of people don't like this E&B parenting, but I love Edwards no nonsense approach to sex when talking to his boys. (She's my woman. Get over it.) Somehow I think he is going to be just a little bit different when that precious little girl gets there. lol

Bitches at lunch. Jeeze. Gotta admire Bella just for going. Then to have a beat down on Esme. That's our Bella. :D Make that slimy little bitch perk up her ears and listen.

I hope Bella and Aro can get past Edward. They were great friends and could be again if he would let her get over it.

Once again thanks for sharing!! There is always SO MUCH yet they seem so short!

VR13

 Love this story.

Sorry I have not reviewed lately. I have been really sick for almost 2 months. I owe you 2 thank yous. (Well more actually. I owe you at least one for every chapter I read and didn't review.) But I owe you a big one because being able to read FF was really the highlight of my existence for a couple of months. So, Thank You for helping me through.

Now, thanks for this chapter. I love that E is "The Boss" yet he still loves his little girl enough to let her mush and sticky him all up while watching her. Not to mention loving his wife and family enough to let the entire situation be taking place to start with. Lesser men would have walked away.

Yeah, Esme. I think it is about time that bitch meets her demise. I am thinking you are thinking that too. Once again Carlisle proves what a scum bucket he is when he will do it for the money. But hey, 50 mil. that's a lot of money. So guess I can't really fault him since she does deserve it.

Thanks again!

Thanks for the update.

Hate it when RL gets in the way of fun life. LOL

Damn, but Emmet is an asshole!

Riyle is a kick!

Maybe he will take Jay's advice and talk to Paulie this weekend.

Thanks

Riley is such a crack up.

Is this the calm before the storm?

Thank You.

Awesome! You didn't kill him off! But...

What the hell is up with Edward schooling Jake on the business? I don't blame Jazz for being upset. 

Thank you.

That was interesting.

I have a feeling Emmett is going to have a few words to say. Not that it will mean anything to Edward. lol

Thank You.

I like this Mike. I think it is the first time I have seen a mature good natured good guy Mike. Nice.

No, I don't think she will let him. I think she still has to many issues left over from the rape. 

Good chapter. Nice he got to meet and spend some time with his boy.

Not sure if Pop's is goiong to give him a good reaming or figure he is and has been torturing himself enough. Pretty sure he will have something to say about his granddaughter and her best friend though.

Thank You

I can't believe that someone could be that evil. To line up a rape victim and then be there to watch and film it! And Alice, I don't understand AT ALL. 

I think their discussion is going well so far. I think it is great he is willing to move and give up his dream job, and not ask Bella to come back to Seattle.

I think the memory stick is a digital baby book so to speak. I think it will hurt, but he will also treasure it because it will show him everything he has missed so far.

I am looking forward to Pop's reaction and his subsequent discussion with his grandson.

Hoping this week is finding everyone doing better health wise.

Thank You for sharing your talents.

First an foremost I think Angela is one sick demented woman.

Like how things are progressing for our couple. Carlisel needs to get himself in therapy.

Poor Emmet. Hopefully it is a temporary thing from his head injury.

I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. The big C. What a worthless bastard.

Please travel safe, and remember if it is to bad, (the weather) don't take unnecessiary risks and create more need for funerals. It is not worth it. Your friend would not want you to put yourself and your family at risk.

Happiest Holidays that you are able this year.

Thank You for sharing your talents.

Everyone but Bella, Edward, and Esme as far as regulars go, seem to be a special brand of crazy. You are correct however in that Ben, Angela, Alice and Charlie have a VERY special brand. Angies parents are pretty special also.

Dinner was a bit humorous. 

The proposal was great! Very nicely done ladies. As was the bonding afterwards.

Thank You!

The wedding was great.

Go Bella, kicking some butt in Forks!

Like the baby's names.

I would like to see some kind of perment closure on Alice. To me she still kind of seems up in the air, so to speak, as far as the future is concerned. I feel like Carlisle would still indulge her if she should get out of the mental hospital. Personally I feel if she did ever get out she should serve some jail time for her involement in the rapes.

Thank You!

I think they are getting into dangerous territory. They are going to be doing more than cuddling and groping before they know it! Haha

Way to go Edward! So glad he verbaly bitch slapped that bitch! I fear it may have some bad after effects before it actually pays off though. Hope not, but wouldn't be surprised.

Had to laugh at Alice being timid about the wedding and Jasper being a looser at all things kids cards. LOL

Hope you both have a good Thanksgiving. Spend time with your families. We will be here when you get it done.

Thank You!!

About to get hot??

I would say they are heated up pretty high already! Whew!

Thank you!!

OMG. Could Maggie be any stupider? Like Edward would touch her with a ten foot pole, let alone his dick after all the trouble she is causing.

I just knew that asshole was involved somehow.

I like the cabin idea. That should be fun.

Thank you!

I have two words. Pompas Ass.

Loved Bella and Emmett's talk in the lounge. So many truths.

Thank you!

I think they are progressing well. The more boob action was great! lol. It is a good thing the girls are not older they would really be in trouble as far as the trap goes. Love this Jakey he is great.

Thank you!