One of my favorites and one I have read a few times. I can't help but visualize a hotter Eminem with better manners as I read it. Not necessarily the thug-white trash type but his talent. Some may not see that Eminem has talent but I disagree.

Anyway, thanks for putting this out there!

Ugh. That was really hard for me to read and not get angry. I don't quite understand why Edward couldnt have had a good old fashioned conversation about what she so innocently asked for. I get his perspective that a cum slut is only after their own pleasure and that he has no interest in that type of role play, but Bella is still learning all the many levels of this lifestyle and she didn't really know. 

I do not believe that I could have responded with her passivity. As soon as I caught on to your point of his cruelty - and YES I think it was a cruel way to teach a lesson - as soon as I caught on I had to stop reading. I have totally been enthralled with this story from the beginning and there's been some seriously hardcore shit that's happened with these characters...I just don't understand why it was done in this way. It's your story though and I respect that. 

Please do not mistake this review as a flaming response. I love this story and have been right there from day one following along. I also respect your ability to put yourself out there and take risk in writing. This just really hit a sour note for me. It almost felt like he was using sex and orgasms to punish her, and considering her background that's just not cool. 

This is just my opinion. It will not stop me from reading this story until the end though. I will even keep reading it after it is completed - I will probably just skip that chapter.  Thank you for writing ~ Carus

I don't give a hoot if she's pregnant and a product of her environment. Rude is rude and bad manners are what they are. It is Edwards house and Edwards life!!  He can do what he damn well pleases with it...just because her hormones are all out of whack that is not an invitation to be a spoiled fucking bitch. That is Ofcourse my opinion. 

Cant wait for the next!!

I love this fucking story...that is all...

No need to defend yourself baby. Tell all those classless hypocrites that have the nerve to consecend and ridicule you - to go fuck themselves!

I just want to pass along that this series is one of the best fucking set of stories I have read in this fandom. I have read the first story 4 times in the past two months alone! The writing is superb, the character building is phenomenal and you make me see the Stephanie Meyer version of Edward and Bella in a completely different yet believable way.

All of those worthless haters who think they are clever should be ashamed of themselves. I hate hypocracy, but what I hate even more are cowards. Worthless waste of space if you ask me. Everyone is entitled to their opinions but what's funny about opinions? They are like assholes and everyone's got one. Some are just bigger assholes really...

You keep your head up and be proud of what you have written here. Its real, honest, raw, empowering and above all fantastically written. I could see this as a published story outside of this fandom, and anything you continue to write I will be there to read it.

Thank you for listening to me rant - my apologies for potentially irritating anyone else who may read this. But I honestly cannot stand cowardice of this nature. It simply pisses me the fuck off. I also have to say that I agree with you...I'd rather laugh than cry.

Thank you for writing this story. I truly appreciate your efforts and appreciate your talent.

Gaaahhh!  I love me some gangstaBella!  I'm not into chicks but that was so hot I had a moment...I can totally relate to Edward loving that side of his wife. 

Esme fucked up and she knows it. Hopefully she gets a clue and shuts the fuck up. 

God I love this story!  Every week or so when the email comes to alert the next chapter I literally drop whatever I am doing to read it. Then I usually go back to the beginning and start the entire series over again.  This is my addiction - it seems lame but when you are broke I guess it's better than collecting koolaid points. I had no idea Mobward would affect me this way. 

Thanks for the update and I cannot WAIT for the next.. 

DUDE...totally didn't see that coming!  Aww...how long do I have to wait for the next chapter?  Will my whining help move things along faster?  Well - it was worth a shot. 

Man I love this story!

*sniff* I...I can't...almost over?  Wha?  *sniff*

That last shit was hot by the way...love me some Takeward. I could totally see the smirk he had at the end too. Love your writing!  

Please tell me you plan on writing more stories?  Not this particular one of course, because it's been written. But, continue to blow us away with your mad storytelling skills. Your public demands it!  :)

Ugh - total blocker!  Hurry up and bring on the good stuff. :)

I am so glad you aren't dragging out the "I'll make him jealous with another guy" storyline. Some angst is awesome but the stuff that drags in purely to keep the story going really bugs me. Thank you for having these characters exhibit some normalcy by communicating their thoughts, wants and needs. 

I can't wait for the next one!  This story has totally captured my heart...