Reviews by krjemb
A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339524
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The End

One of her coworkers?  That's extra shady. Cheating is awful but when it's someone he spouse knows is worse. And Bella has to see the skank everyday. 

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Calm

Why is Bella not asking for alimony?  She's only hurting herself. 

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: The Funeral

What is Mike's deal?  He cheated and moved on with Jessica. Why is he obsessed with Bella. He wasn't this interested when they were married. 

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Talk

I'm not sure about the dates. Would Charlotte have been killed before Bella and Mike hooked up or during the relationship?

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: The Reality

Bella is killing me. I know she has issues from her marriage. But she left like as much as he left her. She wanted the divorce. And after what Mike has done him leaving is a blessing. And what "logic" is her mind using that would keep her in that condo after what happened?

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: The Conferences and Concerts

If she thought she was being followed then you never go to your house. Considering what's going on she needs to be smarter. Is she still going to therapy?

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: The Christmas Ball

I can't fathom Bella allowing Mike to alienate her from her father.  

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: The Emerald City

I'm surprised Bella would tell a complete stranger about Mike. 

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: The Fight

Totally disagreeing with Alice. 

Reviewer: krjemb Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: The Interview

Edward has money. Why hasn't he hired bodyguards or hired someone to find Mike.