Reviews by niux
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533788
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: niux Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

This chapter was good but…

I just feel unsatisfied. I expected some huge storm with thunderbolts, with hail and hurricane… and maybe with a little rainbow in the end…not a self-crucifixion… I know they both feel guilty, see their mistakes, but… it was like rake over to meat… to bone. It was too much for me.

I hope they’ll make it up. Otherwise, this all story will not make sense to me anymore.

Lexi, like always I have faith in you… Please, don’t let me down.

Hugs :))

Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

I don't think that's DJ. I think it's someone less suspicious. I won't be surprised if it's Esme. That cunt beyond the grave could be dangerous. And her dead is such a mystery. Suicide but why?  I can't wait next chapter. Tkanx Lexi :))

Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Lexi, this chap was just... I have no words.

I love Aro even more :))  And B & E I know they'll be all right.

I always have faith in you. And I want to see them happy, again.

Love'ya, Monika :))

Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

And can't wait next chap :))

Hugs :))

Reviewer: niux Signed starhalf-star
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Lexi, I love you and your ff but WHAT THE HELL? No, no, no, that was horrible! Baby, what are you doing? Where are your balls? Come on... With all respect to your talent this chapter was the worst of all that you have been written until today... Please, DO NOT pull this on forever if you have no idea what to do with them... Don't screw up almost 3000 pages of fantastic story with terrible end. I hope you understand what I mean. Hugs :)) Love ya :))



Author's Response:

Wow . . . Thanks for reading? I actually loved that chapter. Things WILL be slowing down since the end of the story is VERY near. All I can say is, thank you for reading, reviewing, but if you do not like where the story is going maybe you should stop reading? Don't waste your time, or feel obligated to continue reading. 

 

Thanks again. 

Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

Hi Lexi, great chapter :))

Finally, Lauren's got what she deserved. LOL

Not only italian girls don't play nice with somebody who put the make on their mans ;)

Alex??? I hope she'll run away from an altar. She's too good for C :))

E?? What can I say? Like always B drives him crazy in so many ways ;))

Renee??? Mother like she should burn in hell.

Thanx for everything :)

Hugs, M.

Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

This chapter was so sweet. I love it :))

And last one was even better. I love Damion, just like that. His creepy fucke*. And Sonny, OMG :)) Just like Skip... The apple doesn't fall far from the tree ;))

I'm not disgusted by that. I think it's awesome :))

Maybe Sonny is hotheaded and very self-esteem but Damion is dangerous. Deadly dangerous... So quiet and calm he gives me chills.

Hihihihihi, and Kylie is crazy like Bebella and Ed knows that. She's up for everything. And his sa fucki*g vulpine. His plan was perfect.

Thaky so MUCH for everything.

Hugs :))

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806767
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

O My Fucking God! I love this chapter. I'd like squeeze the shit out of her by myself. Damn cunt Lauren. Go MC :)) She did good but I would be more happy if she pulled the trigger.

I can wait to see what Skip will do to her. I hope it'll be painful. I'm sorry but I am a mother, too. I understand...

And a second half... Hmmm, I'd like my sex life to be like this in next 20 years :))

And FuckStupid - priceless.

Thanx Lexi - once again - good luck and hugs from central Europe :)

Monika :))

 

Reviewer: niux Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

Oh, my :) This was so... so... fantastic :D When E, B and Ed Sr sat locked in bathroom... I almost piss myself 'couse I laughted so hard, hihihihi and Kylie, OMG :) The best part:

My father-in-law stared down at me. "You look horrible."

…………………………

When he was gone, I turned to my husband. "I look horrible?"

He wiped under my eyes with his thumbs. "You still have makeup all over." His thumbs were black.

"Ugh!" It came out squeaky as I scrambled to my feet. Looking into the mirror, I saw my sad reflection. It straightened my head, cleared it of the fog for a brief moment. I had mascara all over my eyes. I resembled a raccoon, and my hair was messy and knotted. "You fucked me while I looked like this?" I pointed to my face.

My husband was too busy playing with the bathmat.

"Edward!" I stomped my foot.

"What? You're beautiful. Shut the fuck up."

I kicked at him. "You shut up."

He did; he didn't say another word.

"Edward…?" I asked.

He shook his head. "What'd you say?"

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It's priceless :)) I love them, absolutely :-)

And Damion. I wish him the best. This Jordan is cute, I'm sure all his family will love her :)

I don't remember when I laughed so much :)) Thank you Lexi, you're amazing :))

I wonder what is going on with Skip and Sonny. What are they up to??? Hmm ;)