Reviews by Dalamar of the Dark
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366570
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Dalamar of the Dark Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Crash & Burn

I was born with a vsd as well due some prenatal drugs my mom was on. My vsd is called ventricle septum defect causing one of the valves in my heart to not shut properly. The tiredness is something I've always had to deal with but I've let it stop me or get me down. I've come pretty close to dying from a bacterial infection 5 yrs ago that left me weak as a kitten for 2 months after that. It's something I've got to keep an eye on cuz it could happen again.

Reviewer: Dalamar of the Dark Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Perfect

The passion you have for writing shows through out this story! Do keep up the good work as they say

Author's Response:

Thank you and I def plan to ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Dalamar of the Dark Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: It takes Two to Tango

Not what I was expecting but her being away from dance for about a year now makes some sense, maybe. You haven't said it was hers yet ;)

Author's Response:

I'll be able to talk more about the timeline after the next chapter. but thanks for the review hopefully i can explain it all in the A/N.

Summary:

 

Winner of the Mine to Mark Judges Vote, 2nd Place Public Vote, two Judge Favorites and Most Original Public Vote. l Fueled by desperation, a queen turns to a king known by the world as an uncivilized barbarian. Will he be able to save her from a fate that seems unavoidable by taking her as his own or will he turn his back on her like everyone else? ExB

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11094 Read Count: 3103
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Dalamar of the Dark Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm very impressed with the detail in your writing, which paints a truly vivid picture. I hope that there will be more to this story!

CTA Dreams by Daphodill Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 112]
Summary: Past Featured Story

He's watched her for months; she doesn't know he exists. A train delay offers him the opportunity to make his dream a reality.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 99 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52934 Read Count: 59909
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Dalamar of the Dark Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Enjoying this story immensely!! Too funny!