Reviews by nell67
My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272409
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi! Had been following this story on FF, checking in every now and then to see if you'd been able to update so am beyond delighted that you've decided to post it here.  It's still a beautiful story even with the slight changes here and there.  I really hope the RL is treating you and your family well and look forward to the next chapter, I know there are many more to come!

Best wishes, Nell

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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this is great! Really enjoying your story and characters, certainly made me take a look at my surroundings and be thankful! Am looking forward to the next chapter!

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Yay, he's going to go for the treatment! Which can only mean one thing, more kleenex moments! So, there'll be plenty more traumatic chapters and the dreaded "chapter that broke you"! Nervous for that one.  I'd just be happy with him getting better and getting back to the painting, let alone sex (that would be a total bonus!) Will be interested to hear about Bella's past, which I know you'll get to in your own sweet time ;).  Thank you for not trying to tie up loose ends too fast, even when we put you under pressure for another chapter every five minutes.  Enjoy your holiday!



Author's Response:

Yes, this won't be easy, but at least he made the right decision and he had something worth fighting for!  Hmm ... I wouldn't say plenty more, but there will be a few.  And the chapter that broke me is coming up rather soon, but that one will have a warning, so you'll know not to read it at work.  Edward has many things to get back to, and I'm going to thoroughly enjoy sharing them with you.  Bella also has secrets to share yet.  There is still a good bit of story to tell yet, and I promise most of the ends will be tied up by the time we get there.  And it's nice to be in demand.  ;)

Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I would read your stories regardless of a warning, but if I was the author I'd probably put it at the beginning of the chapter.  I loved



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much!  I hope a solution for the waring thing--it'll be on Monday's post.  Too bad your review got cut off--I wanted to know what you loved!  :)

Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Bloody Hell!!! I really thought you'd had a change of heart half way down and I pretty much stopped breathing myself! I've been reading avidly and "lurking" in the background since the off, and I said after chapter one that I was in it for the long haul but it's been tough reading Lady!  I find it difficult witnessing and reading difficult and/or tragic circumstances in RL but with this story I'm like a scared child hiding behind a cushion but desperately wanting to know what happens next!  I'm too invested to leave the story now, your writing is heartfelt and sensitive as ever. Lovely!



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're not the first reader to use bloody hell for this chapter!  Thank you for the amazing review, and for staying with me.  I know this is a hard read, but hopefully you find it beautiful too, and there's more great things to come!  *hugs*  :)

Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Thank you for this gorgeous chapter! It was so touching and sweet, this Bella and Edward are utterly adorable, and as usual your writing is so believable. I don't know where you're going to go with this one but I'm excited, "champing at the bit" for the next chapter and here for the long haul. I urge anyone that hasn't already done so to go and read "How To Forget" too, it's beautiful!

Author's Response:

Oh my, what a lovely review!  Thank you so much!  I really enjoyed writing this one--I'm so glad you loved it too!  I'm happy you're here for the long haul--it will be a long road for this one, but it will be worth it.  Tahnk you also for your love of How to Forget!  Thank one is quite close to my heart!  :)

Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I've been having some laptop issues recently and none of my reviews have been appearing, and I so want to thank you for another beautiful, heartfelt and well written story! There were times I didn't think I could keep reading, and cried lots but if you've taken the time to write I'm always going to read it! Well done, looking forward to the next story. Til then best wishes.



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you so much!  What a lovely review!  I'm so glad you took this journey with me!  I hope to see you again, the next time I hit "post".  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109592
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yay, they finally meet!! Looking forward to see how the story plays out from here, it has to be Tanya working behind the scenes. If Bella hasn't got Alice to guide her can she keep Angela?!?

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Definitely in over her head, definitely going to get burned then, after much drama, heartache and redemption Edward will realise that she's the one for him. Nutshell?! Love it! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) And wow, what an accurate summary! ;)

Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hilarious, so gonna get busted! She's playing with fire right now, how on earth are you going to get her out of this one?!

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Bella is a single mom of two boys trying to make ends meet. Edward is a successful business man. Can he help her? Will she let him?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54251 Read Count: 71651
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2017 Updated: 23 Nov 2017
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww! Considering Edwards's back story he was bound to have a meltdown/disappointment at Bella's disclosure! Am hoping it doesn't take him too long to see past it, lovely story with the cutest kids. Looking forward to the update!



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Summary:

Skin Deep Banner

Some secrets will damage your reputation.  Others will ruin your social life.  But then there are secrets that will change the way the world looks at you, now and forever.  What would Edward be willing to do to keep such a secret?  And who will pay the price?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3367 Read Count: 31094
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2017 Updated: 09 Mar 2020
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2019 Title: Skin Deep

Nice one!! Thanks for finishing, your stories are always worth the wait! 😉

Reviewer: nell67 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Am strapped in and ready for the "Shadow Masen" ride!! Loving the twist on some of these characters and looking forward to the sweetly torturous, slow burn reveal!! Nice one Shadow!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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On an ordinary Friday in an ordinary town an ordinary boy meets an extraordinary girl. 

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Third place in the 2017 Twi Fic Fandom Awards Undiscovered Gem Category!!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152022 Read Count: 4571
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2018 Updated: 21 Apr 2018
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love this story!! I don't know where you're going to take this now, thought you were going to end up "turning" Edward after the motorcycle crash but nope, you turned  a different corner again. Can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  There are only two more chapters to go, but there is a second part of the story planned.  No promises on how long that'll take, unfortunately.

Chapter 19 will post on Friday, until then, here's a teaser.

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In the kitchen, Charlie busied himself making bacon and eggs. The first thing he'd done was close the curtain, but the skin on the back of his neck prickled nonetheless, like those creatures were out there, still able to see him through the window. He slammed the pan down on the burner. Billy and Harry had been right. Those creatures had been messing with his mind, and stupid as he was, he'd fallen for it. A pretty face, a little kindness, and he'd fallen for her tricks hook, line, and sinker. They'd been in cahoots. All of them. And they'd been after his son. All the attention that one had paid to him, all the stories they'd told him, all of it designed to knock him off his guard.

Well, that was over. He'd told them what he thought of them and that he wanted them to stay the hell away from his son and from him. That one, Tanya, had had the nerve to act devastated, clinging to that girl like she couldn't stand on her own.
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Men!

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing!

The Loser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 243]
Summary:

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Bella struggled with her weight throughout her life. Her problems are enhanced by the pressures society and her family place on her. How could someone like her ever find a decent husband? Her childhood best friend might have the answer to all her problems. A fake marriage. A rise in station for Bella and with the marriage, Edward stands to gain his full inheritance. How can anyone believe that a Cullen would ever want someone like Bella? Who is the real loser here? AU. Cannon. HEA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94730 Read Count: 19542
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2019 Updated: 30 Jul 2019
Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Fab idea, love the pace but desperate and greedy for updates! Can easily see myself

re-reading the finished story many times. ðŸ‘ðŸ»