Reviews by beachlover
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 96: Edward

He did promise her public sex :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 99: Edward

:-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 100: Edward

The dessert room gave it away for me. Ybor is struggling a bit these days.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 102: Edward

Loving this!!!
I've never been to Lowry Park in 40 yrs.
So did you mix in the flume from Busch Gardens or does the park have one ? flume

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 105: Bella

Totally understandable

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 111: Bella

:-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 114: Edward

I have been away so very far behind. Now you aregetting close to my home! I work in Dunedin and live in IRB

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 116: Edward

By the tome o get caught up they will be together again :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 119: Bella

Go Charlie!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

Bad pick up line Reply:
One asshole in my pants is enough!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 125: Bella

Only about 22 behind now

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

Great chapter

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 130: Edward

Down to 15. Maybe I will be caught up by the weekend!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 131: Bella

He is going to lose his stuff! Literally :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Better than Tampa!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 135: Bella

He is so responsible.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 138: Edward

He is so sweet

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 139: Bella

The elevator

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 141: Bella

Oooey Gooey Edward! Tum!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 145: Bella

I Love that he wants a kitten!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 146: Edward

I'm all caught up! I can't believe he is not there yet. But it has all been great!
Now I have about 10 more stories I am behind on.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 147: Bella

Oh Oh Oh

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

:-) :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 149: Bella

I suspect there will be lemons for a few of the upcoming days, for them anyways!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward

They are definitely made for each other!
Good job on the twin letters :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 156: Edward

:-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 162: Edward

Jake sucks balls

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 166: Edward

Fuc yeah

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 167: Bella

:-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 169: Bella

Love!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 170: Edward

No No No not over!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 171: Bella

I love the name "cookie"

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

I am in denial

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Just Wow! That gave me goosebumps. :-)
Thanks sooo much for writing this both of you!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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While on a much needed vacation, Bella discovers that it's not easy to leave work behind... and that this time, she doesn't really mind.

An endearing tale of trust, growth and love... all because of one special little girl and one little word.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18941 Read Count: 146957
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Jun 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Do the dogs have to go too?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mmmm It's a man!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awkward for Bella :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She always gets the damaged ones.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She always gets the broken ones

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Broken father...broken daughter. Bella will fix them!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

!!!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hmmm

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Have they even been introduced :-) :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

He is tongue tied now. ::-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Is he in love yet? Lol

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Soon come Bella, soon come.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

She is a fiesty one.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ah Duh

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awwwwe

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yummy all of him!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

How sad

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well guess what she is obviously special

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

MmHm

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks for updating

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Where is Edward?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Hmmm

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

A silent Alice, go figure

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Watch a pony be born?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Funny

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Gah!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh Bella Bella Bella

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OUI

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Yes she is going there

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Look at you with all the chapters!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

:-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Awwwwe

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

LOL

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

They are all 3 in love!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

:-) :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

:-(

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

"Bitch of an incubator " I like that one.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

:-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

:-) :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Hell yea

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Swan?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Loved it! You rock!!!

Summary:

Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, one of the most powerful men in the business industry. She left Forks years ago, acquired her MBA and set out for New York with a head full of dreams only to discover the only job she could get was working for an asshole as his personal assistant and being available for his every beck and call. Bella hates Edward but her feelings soon start to change as they go on a run of the mill business trip to Los Angeles. AH. AU. M for Lemony lemons.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30733 Read Count: 5523
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Just let go Bella :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Keep saying that Bella

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope not, but probably

Summary: Past Featured Story

ocmc

Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93682
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

He is sure moving along!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I liked the little longer chapters as well

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Perfect! She is clueless.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

!!!!!

Author's Response:

????? LOL

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:-) :-) :-)

Author's Response:

:D :D :D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Go Bella!!! LMAO

Author's Response:

*nods* yep! LOL

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Glad you posted here ! I loved what she did!!

Author's Response:

LOL thanks

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:-) She should definitely show the girls!

Author's Response:

LOL I know

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So not a 50 fan. LOL. More power to her :-)

Author's Response:

LOL it needed massive editing

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi Bella...it's Dr. Edward :-)

Author's Response:

LOL thats Dr. Feelgood to you!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think they will be lusting for each other a bit more now :-)

Author's Response:

LOL maybe, although, I think they will figure it out real quick when they "see" each other

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Mmmm

Author's Response:

Mmmmmm? do tell why

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

:-)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wonder what's in his box?

Author's Response:

hehe you will see

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am wondering if he should wait till the guys arent watching to open his present :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Envelope please