Reviews by Chloe Masen
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But I'm not in Forks! Keep looking, Edward! Head southeast! ;)



Author's Response:

I keep waiting for him to show up in Texas! lol! Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Did I really never make my way back to this? Yeah, I guess not, but something made me think of it today. And yeah, he should definitely familiarize himself with the term girlfriend. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Its not finished but the next chapter is in the works...if I could just get time to write.

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!! 
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**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery!  Click to visit!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88743
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good? Better than good. Much, much better than good. I loved the interaction between Edward and Bella. Every baby-stepping minute of it. This story is a gem.

 

And I wanted tomention-I clearly don't understand the 'ratings' system. As many cups that are possible is what I would give you. 

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really thought Emmett knew. In the car... on the way to the hospital... weren't things very clear? Hmmm...

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm very intrigued. This is the first story I've been tempted to read here. Well, that I opened right away. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved the developing tension between Anna Bella and Mr. Cullen. Looking forward to the time when their attempts to reign it in fail them both. Wonderfully intriguing story.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't quite know what to say... I adored it. Every part of it. Every word of it. Brilliance. Perfection. And the ending... my heart is pounding in my chest.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME????????????????????????????????????????

*tries to compose self* I think you are. I think you have. I know you have...

 

Dorky math teacher? GOD, NO! Or, if he is, then LONG LIVE DORKS! And MATH! Now, you don't know me, but let me tell you something... I DESPISE math. Hate it with a fucking passion. Like I hate Jacob Black. That kind of hate. EPIC HATE. So... do you see what you've done here? Yep.

"That's all I needed to hear." ... That. That right there... REQUIRES A CALL TO 911. I'm honestly praying that they can resuscitate me, because if I can't read the rest of this story... 

Yes, I am aware of my obvious current seemingly alive state... but don't be fooled... I'M DEAD-TYPING. 

And YOU are BRILLIANT. I am now dead-bowing at your feet. RIP me. 

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Something is different. I don't know what it is, but something has changed. Is it that I'm sensing some horrible dread that hasn't revealed itself yet? I suppose I'm asking myself that, but something is just different. It's a strange, unsettling feeling. I wish I understood it. Well...

Sorry for the thinking-out-loud ramble...

I'm so glad Edward is determined to stand by Bella's side through this. I pray that doesn't change. For both of their sakes. I hope tomorrow brings something other than tears.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm pretty sure Edward earned a gold medal of his own.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Nymph.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

No. I don't accept it. I can't. You wouldn't. You just wouldn't...

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You evil, evil woman...

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love getting a peek into Edward. Wasn't expecting that. I had faith in you that you weren't going to take him from us. As for Bella... WHERE THE HELL IS SHE?

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well, since you know how evil you are... and it is for Edward...

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hanging in. At leastwe know she's alive.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She seems to be breaking down. She needs a beacon of hope... a bronze haired beacon of glorious hope. Where there's a will there's a way... and something tells me as soon as he's able to put his legs in motion he'll find it. And her.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I thought sure a whole day alone would tempt her to make a run for it. Even if she knew she wouldn't get anywhere, I thought sure she'd try. I guess she has a firmer grip on reality than I thought she did. Or just faith, perhaps.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Swan's typical teenage life is forever changed, she's forced to rely on a brother she barely knows and the makeshift family that surrounds him.  AH, OOC, ExB

"Darlin’, I have some bad news,” Wes began, and what he said next ripped my world apart.

I knew he was talking, trying to explain what happened, trying to lessen the blow. His lips were moving, but the pain was so loud I couldn’t hear him. My father was dead. Dad, the only family I really had, was gone, and I was…what?

 

*banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17212 Read Count: 7816
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Exceptionally written. Wonderfully, though sadly, intriguing. I will definitely be back.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Familiar Things

Oh, no it's not! 

Sooo... like Bella, adore Wes, HATE Renee, and Jasper... we'll see. 

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Facing the Past

Yes, human... WITH A NEIGHBOR NAMED EDWARD!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Outsider

I'm still undecided on Jasper, but I can be won over. If he tries hard enough. Or introduces me to his neighbor.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking the News

Forgot this  from Ch 4-  I briefly considered letting her, half-hoping one of those cops would just shoot her, but Bella never was one to handle blood very well.     --- LOVED!

And... HELLO, EDWARD, I'M A GROWN UP! 

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Never the Same

Seattle, here she comes! That means you, Edward!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: House or Home

Well, I don't know the circumstances of your 'waiting room camping', but I hope things are better for you now. 

As for this chapter... Favorite chapter moment - Bella's Forks goodbye. Made my heart clench.

But aside from that, Bella seems suddenly different. Bitchier? Perhaps it's a stage of her grief, or getting over it just a bit, but it took me a little by surprise. 

And, forgive me, but I noticed it, so I have to mention it - I'm a bit OCD that way, and don't have a mute button - 2 chapters ago Jasper said that Alice had gotten Bella a laptop and filled the closet with clothes when she was getting her room ready for her eventual arrival. Those details, minor though they were, weren't supported here. Just a heads up... and now I'll shut up. 

I hope you have a happy New Year, wherever you're spending it. 

CM

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112984
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

I will love you forever for this. Seriously... FOREVER.



Author's Response:

:)

Any time you want a guest-starring role let me know! Hehe...

*MUAH*

<3<3

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: On the Edge

Forgot something on my ff review... You should totally write a HILARIOUS outtake of Newton's sub experience. DO EEEEEEEET! Bawahahahaha!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I went back in here to do reviews, because I had completely forgot you wrote this! 

I'm totally gonna do an outtake! Thank you for the genius idea! I can't wait now! :) 

*MUAH*

xoxo <3<3

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

Banner done by Christine: 

@Christag_banner
christag_banners@yahoo.com
www.christagbanners.blogspot.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, he's home...

 

I'll wait to assess that after reading more. But it's not looking good. 

Summary:

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Edward Cullen travels back to Chicago to see his former lover, Isabella Swan, one last time on the eve of her wedding.

Banner by sunray16.

-Winner: 3rd Place, Best Angst One-Shot, The Eclipse Awards-


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7311 Read Count: 1947
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2012 Updated: 03 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Someone Like You

I hope she doesn't break him.  I wouldn't blame her if she did, accidently of course... but I'd be hella jealous that it wasn't me. And she better stay away from my NECK :P

 

LOVE this banner, babe!! And yw, yw, yw! xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL -- I'll make sure to tell her the neck is yours! ;)

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the compliments! I LOVE this artist's banner work, I'll definitely be using her again in the future! 

No breaking Edward -- unless, of course, it's done in a pleasurable moment. Tee hee. 

*MUAH* ILY my dear! 

xoxo

Summary:

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A young woman sets out on her first adventure in the big world. She thought her father had prepared her for everything but she holds the key to much more than she ever thought, and now she sings for every vampire.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34870 Read Count: 9881
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I loved every word. You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow. Your banner is what caught my eye, but this... this is what will bring me back. Tremendous.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That is such a lovely compliment to both me and the banner maker!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I've been thinking about this story for a week. Well, much longer, actually, but I wasn't able to get to it for a while. And now, having found my way back, I'm just reminded of why it so often sneaks into my mind. Because I love it. I knew that already, but I like coming back and knowing instantly that I still do. Sometimes when I'm away, my return just makes me ask why I was there in the first place. I'm confident that will never happen here. Ever. But enough of my rambling...

 

He. Wants. Her. The thought makes me tingly. I like tingly.

 

See you soon.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

You gave me chills. That's a compliment, by the way. A big one.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

If only I was key to his survival... *sigh*

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Talk... Kiss... whichever. The choice is not mine. Drat.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Something about the simple 'What are you?'... has stayed with me.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Change is good. Or so I can hope.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Not alone? Well, that can't be good...

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I'm glad Charlie has found some happiness for himself, but it still makes me sad that he can't see his daughter.

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

'Isn't too much' doesn't matter. It was enough. You got me.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmm... I know he can't 'usually' hear her, but I won't assume you're going to follow that beaten path. As long as he doesn't drain her, I'm hopeful. ;)

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I probably shouldn't say what I'm thinking... so, I won't.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hurry, Edward!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

HE CAN HEAR HER! I was hoping for that. Maybe he won't have to do that other thing I was thinking...

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Might we have the same idea?

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Not the same at all. Maybe I'm just twisted.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Of course it was her. I have faith in you, Edward. You'll get through.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They should wear capes. Edward, at least. Or maybe that's simply my Zorro fantasy rearing its head? Zorro + Edward Cullen = Rawr.

John Doe by Lolo Eighty-Four Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

He scrunches up his nose. "You know, you seemed to like me more when you thought I was dying." I gasp, shocked and embarrassed. "I didn't think you were dying." He's smiling. Like a big toothy smile. Ugh! I can already tell he likes to mess with people. "No, but you sure thought I was in a coma and had amnesia." Dammit! He had me there. BPOV. AH. No Angst


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20465 Read Count: 6777
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You did not say 'cooter'... ugh. Well, I'll spank you for that one later. And you'll like it. As for Bella... yes! Kill a bitch! Cockblocking is not cool! And punishable by painful death when it involves Edward! Grrrr!

 

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Still reading, and still loving. These two are funny. It's wonderfully refreshing. Can't say more than that now, going to be late. Have a great day!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I want a chaste Edward kiss. And a not chaste one. Or ten.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Have I ever told you that I'm in love with your brain? Seriously... IN LOVE. You are a clever, clever girl.

And Bella... sadly reminded me of myself in this chapter. My horribly uncoordinated, clumsy self. LMAO at her! And thank you for making me laugh, smile, and ride my imaginary bike (cuz I can't ride a real one) through my embarrassing but funny memory lane.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Am I wrong in saying that if he truly cared about her, he would have called again or at least had someone else call her? It's all I can think about. Repeatedly. And that I'm glad she punched him, but frankly, I think he should have gotten that slap too.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Okay, HE DIDN'T KNOW she couldn't hear/understand his call. My apologies, Edward. And kudos for having a second call in place, too. And don't blame me, I have zero faith in men. And valid reasons for not. Unlike Angela, who I'm glad does, and was pushy and persisent for both of their sakes.

And so, I'm caught up now... 

I Live by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

 

Rebelling against Edward's crushing protectiveness, Bella raced for La Push. Goal in sight, she crashed, shattering her truck and her body. Jasper, discovering Bella gravely injured and bleeding profusely, pulled her from the wreckage. Fighting the lust for her blood was only the first battle. Violence, language, adult themes. Jasper/Bella

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice/None, Bella/Jasper, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Peter/Charlotte
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 374713 Read Count: 56484
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: I Flee

I have some thoughts about a few things, but I think I should hold on to them until I've read a bit more.  I don't want to make certain assumptions too quickly.



Author's Response:

I Live, ch 1

Hello! Thanks for giving the story a read. I hope you like it.

Thoughts? Those are certainly welcomed.

Thanks for taking time to write a review, too.

Rick

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86142
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Renee aside, everything seems far too perfect. And I only say 'too' because I have a feeling (your E/N also aside), that it isn't your intention for it to stay that way. *looks up at the ax looming overhead*

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, that was a delicious cherry-popping bash. He popped hers and you popped mine. My Carlisle cherry, anyway. I've never read him in all his glory before. Bravo for changing that. And making me like it.



Author's Response:

Hehe, you're welcome, I guess. I think too many authors, and I'm guilty of this, too, make Carlisle to be stiff (no pun intended) and boring. By changing his personia and making him more youthful, I think it adds a bit of fun to the mix! And he's hot! I mean, like really hot!

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I definitely did not expect more of this. That's by no means a complaint, just an admission of surprise. And a pleasant one. He's a sexy one, and, though, other than your first chapter of this that made me curious enough to delve into, I never imagined myself wanting to read this particular pairing, I'm in for it in this instance. 

See you next time. :)

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wish she'd have told them that it was Renee who hit her. Everyone will likely think Carlisle did it, no matter what she says, if she doesn't. 

It's definitely not going to be easy on them.