Reviews by Jane3105
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028218
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Sorry, can't call anyone sir, but hi anyway.

Either she's got an extremely high pain threshold or you're not being realistic with her reaction! LOL. I turned the air blue, (my friends persuaded me to do it during a pamper day at the spa).

Great story



Author's Response:

Not sure what you mean. I had my first one about 6 weeks ago. It really didn't hurt that bad. I know lots of people who get it done. They all say its not that bad. Hell one, cums from it.

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

What's she up to?

Guess this is how she gets to know Bella's name

:-)

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Enjoy? You've got us almost as worked up as Bella!

;-)



Author's Response:

I hope so. I love the idea of my readers touching themselves because of my writing.

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Hard limits: Blood play, breath play, age play, scat, golden showers, any form of beastiality, anything that could cause permanent marks or injury.

Whips and canes scare me so they're pretty undesirable too.

Excellent chapter.

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I think Sir would have preferred her to leave that spot this time.

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

The guy should have read your author notes at the beginning of the first chapter where you warned that the chapters would be short. Drabble fics have short chapters, the frequency of updates makes up for this (in my opinion). People have no place complaining about something they have had fair warning about.

You titillate and tease us with every chapter, always leaving us wanting more.

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Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

So am I. 

Great chapter

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 196: Chapter 196

Jeez,,,my screen is now covered in coffee!

That was some chapter end note!

Of course we're still reading

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 197: Chapter 197

;-)

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

He can do that to me too when his butterfly gets exhausted. Hell we can all form a line and he can keep going forever!

More please.

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

But what is he going to do about it?

Great chapter

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

Is he going to like what she suggests?

Great story

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

That picture is priceless! LOL

Great story

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Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

OMG how big is that thing???

 

Great story

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

She doesn't know who he is or what he is.  He's assuming that she will agree to being turned when she does find out.

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Date: 08 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 245: Chapter 245

*Licks lips in anticipation*

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 246: Chapter 246

Vanilla and hazelnut flavoured cum...mmmm, wouldn't that be nice?

Summary:

 

Bits and Pieces of WYP that didn't quite fit into the story and i loved too much to throw away.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12198 Read Count: 12054
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Santa can visit me anytime!

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135508
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ha! He's already a little in love with her, he just doesn't realise it yet. If he's thinking it could happen then it already is.

Great chapter

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

 Great chapter. Both sides of their relationship are really beginning to develop, I'm very curious to see how far and how fast you take this.

Frozen jeans - sounds like a typical man-excuse for neglecting to do the weekly wash!

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, fantastic chapter. More please

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: A Pale Fire

Great chapter.

:-)

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow....just wow!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94805
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
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Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Entryway

Poor Maggie, she didn't deserve to find out about her mother's affair that way.

Bella's reaction to this situation is so mature, much more mature than most 23 year olds. 

Great story



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was a really horrible way for her to learn the truth, wasn't it?  Bella's reaction was very mature.  Frankly, I think a lot of much older adults wouldn't have dealt with it as well either.  So glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!

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Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

Who would have thought that Heidi would be supportive of Edward and Bella's relationship and put Maggie first for a change.

Great story



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was a big step for Heidi.  She really was shaken up by the thought of losing her daughter and it made her re-evaluate her priorities.  So thrilled that you're enjoying the story and thanks for the review!

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Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - The Marketing Department

I'm sure the gossip was expected especially when hey had lunch together on her second day in her new job.  Maggie's really growing up, she was upset and lashed out at the first person she saw.  A few months ago she would have done the same thing then stormed off, blamed anyone but herself and then sulked about her punishment.  This time she's apologised and accepted her punishment without complaint.

Great story.

 



Author's Response:

Yep, they definitely expected the gossip.  Glad you liked the way Maggie's grown up.  You're absolutely right about the way she would have reacted months ago.  She's learned a lot since then, and it's huge progress for all of them.  Thanks for the nice review!

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Washington Square Mall

Edward and Bella's relationship has sailed into calmer waters....but is this just the calm before the storm?

Great story



Author's Response:

There will be a few waves, but nothing to capsize them, I promise!  They can handle everything ahead.  Thanks for the nice review, and I am glad to hear you're enjoying the story.

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Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - The Silverton Inn

This is progress, charli's gone from grudgingly tolerating Edward's presence in his home to accepting him as Bella's boyfriend.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the progress.  Charlie is coming around, and he'll continue to get to know Edward and like him more as they go.  Thanks for the review, I love getting feedback on the story.

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Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Conference Room

Fantastic chapter.  I was beginning to think this relationship was becoming very one-sided with Bella doing all the giving and Edward taking but I think this conversation may have redressed that imbalance, provided he's true to his word.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.  Things were getting a bit lopsided between them, but yes, this does address that and Edward will follow through.  He's not a perfect man, but he does his best and he's more than willing to learn from his mistakes. 

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

HOT!

Wow!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Glad you're enjoying it.  I appreciate that you took the time to review and let me know.  :)

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Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Home

What a beautiful Christmas.  

Wonderful chapter



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for the nice review!  It was a very memorable Christmas for them, wasn't it?

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

Fantastic chapter. Your story keeps getting better and better.

 



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I am glad to hear you're enjoying it so much.  I've been having a lot of fun writing it.  :)

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Living Room

The conversation was perfect for where their relationship is now. It would be totally unrealistic for them to be talking about living arrangements, marriage and babies at this stage, their relationship needs to develop first.

Great writing



Author's Response:

Good! Glad to hear you liked the talk.  I wanted it to be in-depth enough for them to cover all of the important things like Maggie, work, and the age difference.  But you're right, it's way too early to talk about living together, marriage and babies.  That will come once they've tackled the other things and have been together quite a bit longer.

 

Thank you for the nice review!

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Shower

Thankfully the only interruptions this time were Edward's negative thoughts.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Yes!  It's a step forward for them.  And his negative thoughts will disappear eventually, it'll just take a bit of time.  Thank you for the nice review!

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Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Terrace

:-D



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks for the nice review!

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Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom

They really should keep it out of the office, especially during office hours, they're bound to get caught sooner or later.

Heidi obviously knows something, it was no coincidence that she took the flyers to Bella's desk.

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yep, they were being really, really risky.  It wouldn't have been easy, but they should have been more careful.  

Heidi's questions and making a beeline to Bella's desk was very suspicious, wasn't it?

Glad you enjoyed the chapter!  Thanks for taking the time to review!

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The Dining Room

Dinner was a success. Let's hope they find some common ground when they are shopping.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Yes, it really went a lot better than I think either Edward or Bella expected.  The shopping trip will be the chapter after this one.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

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Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Front Porch

That was beautiful.

Great writing.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  I am glad you enjoyed it.  I appreciate that you took the time to review and let me know.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: EPOV Outtake - Maggie's Room

You've got great parents.

Great story



Author's Response:

I do! :)  And thank you, so glad you're enjoying the story.

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The Swan's House

Not so happy thanksgiving.  Let's hope shopping with Maggie goes a little better.

Great writing



Author's Response:

Yeah, definitely not a happy Thanksgiving for Bella.  The good news is, Maggie's maturity seems to be higher than Charlie's right now, so that's in Bella's favor.  ;)

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

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Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Pioneer Place Mall

Great chapter.  I think Maggie has realised that Bella might be a good friend.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter!  Yes, Maggie has realized that Bella might be a good person to have in her life.  And this is a good start to their relationship. 

Thanks for the review!

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Bella's Bedroom

Great chapter.  

Meet the families and a new job in the next chapter - that's going to be even better, i hope Renee locks the guns away too.  I'm really looking forward to Bella's other colleagues' reactions when they hear of her relationship with Edward.



Author's Response:

Well, Bella won't start her new job for a few more weeks.  Edward will meet her parents in the next chapter though.  It'll be a while before we get to Bella's other colleague's reactions to the relationship, but it is coming.

Thanks for the review, I love hearing your thoughts on the story!

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - University of Portland

Edward and Maggie attending Bella's graduation was a wonderful surprise.  I wonder if Alice will be more accepting of him when she and Bella spend tomorrow together.

Great story.

Author's Response:

So glad you liked the surprise.  I think you'll find that Alice is much more willing to be open-minded about Edward now, and they will be meeting in the near future.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - The Market

A beautiful, happy family.  I could imagine Maggie's face when she realised that she could do as she wished with the decorations.

Wonderful.



Author's Response:

Yes, they are really becoming a family, aren't they?  Maggie was utterly thrilled when she realized she could do whatever she wanted with the decorations.  Kind of sad though, isn't it? Thrileld that you liked the chapter.

Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it so much!

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - The Party

Beautiful party, can't wait for Christmas.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the party.  Christmas Even and Christmas Day will be in the chapter after next!  Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it!

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - The Rosewood Hotel Georgia

If she walks back into work with an engagement ring after New Year the gossip mill will go into overdrive but somehow, I don't think they'd care.

Great story



Author's Response:

Absolutely!  An engagement ring after they were supposedly only dating a few weeks would create quite the uproar (and everyone would assume she was knocked up).  They're going to wait a bit longer, to make sure Maggie's ready, and just enjoy their time together now that things have settled down.  But there will certainly be an engagement ring in the future!  And a nice little proposal from Edward (if I do say so myself).

I think you'll really enjoy the upcoming three chapters!  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95270
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She's such a pessimist.

Will Jake turn up for the party?

 

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Jake signed his rights away then asked to get to know his son...Nessie should dump him now.

Thank-you for the extra chapters.

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dirty, old man.....or just a man who wants sex with no strings attached?

i think it's probably going to turn out to be the latter.

:-)

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Is he paying for escort services too?

Great writing

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter.

They're already falling for each other

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

No bad guys except Jacob?

great chapter

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor little Liam.

Great chapter

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:-)

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

He's not going to be happy.

Good story

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

They're on a sharp learning curve. they have to get used to each other and Liam too.

I hope he's come to take her to lunch so they can talk.

Yes, yes, yes, please?

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That's what happens with kids in the house!

Good story

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Adult Content: BDSM When Isabella’s contract with Master Jasper Whitlock is ending. Master introduces her to his friend, Edward Cullen. Will Isabella be the perfect submissive for Master Cullen? Will Edward be the perfect Master for Isabella?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181505 Read Count: 281079
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 01 Sep 2013
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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Hit Me Baby One More Time

Wow! 

Fantastic story



Author's Response:

Thanks glad you liked it. Keep reading more coming soon.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Play With Me

Excellent story.

i'd love to know what Jasper thought of the scene.



Author's Response:

I have two outtakes... Jasper's POV on the night and Alice's POV. Alice's will cover more of the changes she sees in Bella, and the things she witness. She will briefly talk about saving Bella's life and how it changed hers. Thanks.

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Every Day of the Week

The plot thickens....

Great writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, yes, we are boiling down to seeing James. Every chapter takes us one step closer. Thanks for the review.

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Bound By My Love

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary:

Written for Fandom For Suicide Awareness. A possible futuretake for my character Wisp. Inspired by LyricalKris, who dared me to write angst at Disneyland! Mostly fluff, a little angst. Bella and Edward go on their first vacation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18096 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2012 Updated: 21 Nov 2012
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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's wonderful to think that they get their happy ever after and that the authorities found Felix and Dr. Gerandy.

Excellent writing, you make this visit and all the emotions involved seem so real.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113754
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Boy have they drifted apart and we're back to the old problem, no communication. Not even going to guess what's IN the envelopes, I think that's obvious but who's sent them?

Great start

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jane3105 xoxo

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Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Jackson is so lucky to have such broad minded parents.

Edward is right about Darryl, they need to keep him onside to get to the bottom of this threat.  He's going to be devastated when he finds out about Peter's betrayal.

Great story.

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter 

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

There's an awful lot of secrets in that family. Edward and Bella's lack of communication and his distancing himself has affected everyone.

Great chapter

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  We've got answers to a few questions but will they be able to overcome their reticence to talk and really open up to each other? 

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Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Fantastic chapter.  In this instance, it seems Carlisle's overprotective instincts are well founded.

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella seems to be able to sleep through anything!

Darryl White is obviously a rat in the nest. I hope Alexis tells Jasper about her suspicions.

Great chapter.

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Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward's reaction to the instant attraction between Alexis and Rio made me giggle, he's a typical, overprotective father who's not prepared to see his "little" girl grow up.

A lovely view of the family dynamic adjusting itself to Edward's renewed presence.

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Date: 03 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Phew, they're safe.

Great writing

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Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter. The strands of the storyline are really coming together.

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Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Tender, sweet and beautiful.

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Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter.  Good to know a little more about Jackson and Bonnie

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Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter.

Keep fighting

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Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So good to see this family reunited.

Great story

 

Summary:

The road of life is long and hard, filled with obstacles. The road of stardom is worse. There were many stops along that winding, challenging road, for the one and only, Mr. Edward Cullen.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6055 Read Count: 1274
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2013 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
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Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

He's better off without parents like them. His Father was, in the eyes of the law, poisoning him and his mother condoned it.

Great outtake

Hurt by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

Jasper is a carefree senior on the cusp of graduation, ready to settle down and play house with his longtime girlfriend. A new friend works his way into Jasper’s bed and gets a different reaction than he expected. When Jasper realizes he’s lost it all, how bad will it hurt? J/C lemon. Graphic descriptions of mayhem.

 

***Written for the 2012 Consumed In Blood contest***

NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2641 Read Count: 601
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A dark, twisted tale so excellently written



Author's Response:

*Takes a bow* Why, thank you, m'dear!

 

xoxo

tb

Butterfly by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

While on tour and on the way to Seattle, a musician struggles to write a song. While doing so, he recounts the only time he's ever been in love - and the one person that he just can't shake. E/B, All Human, One-Shot. Rated NC-17 for adult themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4197 Read Count: 1061
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2013 Updated: 20 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wonder if she accepted his apology?

great writing

Summary:

 

Dark desires and deep-seated fantasies. Edward watches the one he covets the most…with another man. Anger rages and plans are acted out. Will Bella survive the night he has in store for her? GRAPHIC SCENES DEPICTED

 

mdd 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3479 Read Count: 7972
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: My Darkest Desire - Black as Night

Very, very dark.

Great writing

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: None

He is what life is making him. He's never known love and attachment and he's been used by others to their own advantage, starting with his aunt, from an early age. Poor boy, at least he has his mother's music for comfort. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

bless him. i write it and even i get weepy woo about it sometimes!

Right There by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

*Sequel to Come Closer* Accepting your place in life–and letting go of all that kept you in the wrong–is a powerful thing. Edward Masen knows this. Knows it with his heart, his soul, his being. Forbidden doesn't exist anymore. 'Can't have' are no longer words in his mind's vocabulary. And were never in his claim's. Isabella is getting everything she's ever wanted. To be his.

 

Right There banner by Frozen Soldier


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45749 Read Count: 5376
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Stripped Bare

At last everyone is back where they belong - especially Emmett and Rose in the dog house because they're idiots who never listen or learn from their mistakes.

Jasper's overprotectiveness of Isabella becomes more understandable now we realise the lengths Ethan went to protect his family.

Great story

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

I wonder if she'll tell Jasper that he can burn the lingerie after all.

Great start.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: And Then Forever

I'm so glad she told Rose to go.  Her negativity, very obviously, even spread to Emmett.

Please don't leave us hanging for too long, like Isabella, we're impatient to get to the other thing.

Great story

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334118
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Never heard it called a "cleaning party" before, good cover, no man would be interested in the details of that one.  "Tupperware parties" cover for many things too, the only comment from husbands/boyfriends is "Is that stuff still going? My mum used that".

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 280982
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This may be a marriage of convenience for Edward but Tanya obviously doesn't think that way.

Great start

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It was worth waiting for.

Great story

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Beautiful.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow indeed!  Who would have thought that he would open up like that.

Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

She's not sinking, she's falling.

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I've loved every word of it.  I'm so glad it morphed from that one-shot into thirty chapters.  Brilliant writing.  Thank you.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272054
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great writing, it’s so good to see this original story being continued 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter

its good to see you writing again

Summary:

everythingIneeded_zps20a89799

 

Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87251
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter

Good to see you updating again