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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1454039
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Interview with the Master

You wish!!!

But then ... don't we all?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow!  What a fantastic fic.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121567
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great chapter.
Don't think she's going to be happy when Carlisle tells her and Charlie's going to go ballistic!

Author's Response:

Charlie may pull out that shotgun he threatened Edward and Jacob with and shoot someone...

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Great to see a new chapter, looking forward to another soon

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

Great descriptive writing. I certainly wouldn't want to meet Felix in a dark alley, (or anywhere else).

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good to read another chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Will she believe Charlie now?

Great chapter, so good to see you writing again.



Author's Response:

Licking up her own blood is a pretty good indicator Charlie was telling her the truth. :)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Fantastic chapter, it's so good to see you back.

Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 19599
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Outtakes!

Just read your story from beginning to end today.  You made me cry several times and laugh occaisionally too!  Fantastic writing.  Hope the sequel is as well written.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Jane!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I hope you'll enjoy Road Maps as much (and maybe better?)  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 88272
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors

Great chapter. Good to see Bella getting stronger.  :)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still

Fantastic chapter (even without the smexy times)!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling

She's finally exorcising those demons.

Great writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapt 30 The Way We Were

Great chapter

Road Maps by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?

AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.SEQUEL TO BRANDED.  Please read Branded before reading this story.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149939 Read Count: 18027
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue-Bittersweet Symphony

Fantastic!  Sometimes sequels just don't live up to the original story but you managed to develop new plots and twists to this tale and kept the story fresh.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jane.  I feel the same way about sequels in a lot of cases, so I tried to keep it fresh.  I'm glad you feel that I did a good job.  :)  Thanks so much for reading!

I have a couple more stories over on ffn.  You can find me here:  www.fanfiction.net/~leelanoleander

Cheers!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3962]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 968170
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I'm sure many people, like me, are still reading and eagerly anticipate the next chapter.  Thanks for writing! 



Author's Response: thanks for the review

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

What an emotional rollercoaster of a "last" chapter but rest assured you've gone out on a high.  I'm looking forward to the sequel and in the meantime I will be reading your new story

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 35475
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What a powerful plot and great writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that... Its taken me forever to finish it but now we only have the epi left...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 41936
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle

Just read fhe whole story in a day - I couldn't stop reading!  I was on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen next.

Extremely well written, (I'm looking forward to reading your latest fic.) Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

wow! that's awesome! i'm so glad you liked it that much and were hooked.  what an amazing complimebt! and definitely check out my new fic, Dating in the Dark.  it's up on here, FF, GSF, MVF, and Twilighted, if you prefer to read on any of those other sites.  it's a lighthearted, humorous fic with minimal angst.  good to hear you're looking forward to it.  drop me a review and let me know what you think!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;) M

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4195]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1206708
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

What a party!  

Great chapter. Looking forward to Edward's reaction that surprise 



Author's Response:

It was  agood party and E&B had a great time ... ... thanks for reading ..louise

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Oh dear....  Light blue touch paper and stand WELL back.  These fireworks will not be pretty!

Great chapter. Really looking forward to Bella's reaction



Author's Response:

Thank you and Bella's reaction??? I'm sure it's going to be the same as mine or your's would be ...WTF??...lol

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Glad to see they're back on track. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

That was much more than a blow job - she made him loose control!

;-)



Author's Response:

He did loose control ....but in a good way ..lol

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Excellent chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Hmm, questions, questions.  Sorry, I don't have the answers - I'm not the author.

As for the chapter - the plot thickens.  I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.



Author's Response:

It souldn't be too long of a wait... thanks for reading ..louise

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you ...louise

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Wow, excellent chapter.  He's taught her a lesson she won't forget in a hurry.  I don't think she'll want to see that side of her master again.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Hmmm....So much going on in this chapter, but aside from the obvious, Demitri now knows her ring size and the type of ring that will suit her hand. 

Great story

 

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Great chapter

Good insight into what's been going on in Edward's head. I hope his prayers are answered this time.

My guess was wrong.... I thought Edward might have been trained by Demitri.



Author's Response:

I rememeber you saying that you thought Demetri trained him... Edward had already told Bella that he lived at Aro's for 6 months while he trained, and that was the straw that broke the camel's back with Esme and Jane....Esme was so upset that Edward came home from Darthmouth and moved in with Aro. She thought it was to bring closure to his greif over Mason but then she found out he was there to observe and train and Esme freaked out saying all kinds of nasty things to Jane... it was the end of - as Esme says "their already fragile relationship" ....anyway now you know the rest of the story (Edward & Demetri's) friendship and why he trust his friend so very much ...

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 38630
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Jasper's OT

Hmmm.  Jasper and Alice have no room to criticise or disapprove of anyone elses kink.

Brilliant story and outtakes.  ; )



Author's Response:

My nana use to say "those that protest too much are usually just as guilty of commiting the same sin" ...just thought I would show that to be true,,,loll....

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Esme's OT

I'd love an ctrussy outtake of Carlisle/Esme that Alice overheard from her bedroom as a child!

Great insight into extended family relationships.

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica's Dilemma - read after chapter 79

Glad I'm not inside her head all the time - I'd constantly be dizzy, the way it goes round at a mile a minute.



Author's Response:

LOL... I have to say that I wrote the OT in about three hours, and that was exactly how I felt. Jess was talking so fast in my head that my fingers couldn't keep up...lol...yes I've past the point of no return and listen to the voices in my head...LOL....Thanks for reading...louise

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 378869 Read Count: 224582
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Even after all this time you still have me hanging on to that cliff edge by my fingernails. Please don't leave it so long this time.

Great writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, what a chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! =D 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm sure you still have more than 5 readers. It's good to see a new chapter, especially one as good as this. I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen between Ben and his father, will Angela keep the baby and, most importantly, what about the release ceremony? Please don't take too long in updating - I might fall off!



Author's Response:

LOL I guess I do =)

 

Thanks so much, your comment made my day. 

 

The next chap will be up in a few days, I'm almost finished. =)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

:D

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 428]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 78845
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Just read your story from beginning to end over the last few days and really enjoyed it.  Thanks for writing - please keep up the excellent work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 303079
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

Back to reality for E & B.  Is Shane developing a crush on Bella?  I think Edward might have cause for concern there.

Love your story  :)



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. more to come soon....future take is posted!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Time Warps & Slow Motion

Great chapter.

Please don't leave us with this cliffie for too long



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Blessed Events & One Little Year

Fantastic

Can't wait for the sequel



Author's Response: Thanks so much! as soon as LRM is complete...watch for the sequel! (the future take is posted under Outtakes: Lullabies & Eternal Love)

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 74850
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Hilarious!!!!!  Absolutely brilliant



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Always glad to hear that.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Anger Management for the Insecure

Great to see this update.



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Beautiful ending. Can't wait to read the sequel.

The best parts for me were Edward's hilarious views of Emmett's behaviour. I couldn't stop myself from laughing out loud.



Author's Response: first chapter of sequel is almost ready to post. Thanks very much! I promise a lot more Emmett!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 380156
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...

Phew! That was hot
I'm going for a cold shower.

Looking forward to the next chapter. And that talk with Charlie!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

I hope Bella isn't still on her Master's time speaking to him like that!

Guess Edward promised Mojo some action of his own.  ;)

Keep writing pleeease.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Happy Birthday!  Good to see you writing again.

Who's the  crazy guy from college?  (James maybe?) He sounds positively evil.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...

Wow, Renee has a heart after all.  Wonder if Bella will phone Edward and let him know the change of plans - he'll be frantic if she gets on that plane and he can't contact her for hours!

Great chapter, please update soon.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Renee shocked me too!  She didn't let me know until the last minute how she was going to react!  Lol! Glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!

Krazi

xoxo

FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!

Hope to see you soon!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination

Great use of single sentence paragraphs to emphasise Bella's disjointed, drunken thoughts.

good chapter. Hope you've got your mojo back.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

So good to read another chapter.  Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 255868
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Fantastic story.  I've read all 32 chapters over 2 days, just couldn't stop reading.  Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Great to see Bella really making an effort with everyone.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Great chapter.  There's light at the end of Bella's tunnel at last

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Great writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

She's come a long way.

great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Great news, this is a wonderful story. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Great writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow, that was emotional, I'm not surprised it was difficult to write. 

Well done.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Wonderful story.  Thanks for writing

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 126838
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Fantastic chapter. Totally unique storyline. 

But why does Demitri not want Edward to transform?

I wish I could make you all the vanilla lattes you desire (especially if it makes you update faster!)

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 

You'll find out soon why Edward can't transform entirely. There's def more to it lol

 

Aww thanks. We love those vanilla lattes *giggles*

 

Thanks again and thanks for reading/commenting! We appreciate it!

 

Jells 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Wow.  What was that venom to make her so compliant.

Love your story (both versions)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

 

It's a special venom which calms a female vampire. It tends to be used in child birth too.

 

I'll try to have an update for LAV this weekend.

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Unbelievable Right?

Glad to be of help.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!

 

The story was taken down. =) I will have an update on the plagiarist and a chapter up asap.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 65766
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33,34,&35

Great story

Thank you for writing and sharing

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 218071
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Love it!!!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 130523
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So good to see her finally find herself.  Beautiful.  :)

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 989]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 140993
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

They both need a good slap!  What a pathetic excuse for an apology from him and it's about time she grew a pair and asks all of those questions.  :)

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

They're very stilted and awkward around each other, unsurprisingly. Two broken souls with no friends or family to speak to, could they really develop a friendship after all that's passed between them?

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 70622
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

Such a beautiful story. Very well written, your writing flows from one chapter to the next. Wonderful.

Summary:

Bella is asked out on a date by fellow student, at Seattle University, Jacob Black. She's somewhat eager to go out with him, having felt some kind of physical attractiont to him.

But what happens when she takes down his number incorrectly?

Bella and Edward had an unusual meeting just over a year ago. When Bella took down a friend's phone number, incorrectly, she proceeded to text Edward instead, forming a fast friendship with him and eventually falling in love. A year later and once again their relationship is via text and email as Edward is gaining some valid work experience while helping those less fortunate, in third world countries. Edward has big plans for his return and Bella has a secret which may throw a spanner in the works.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20337 Read Count: 6533
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thanks for writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  What a shame this is oly a oneshot.



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Common Ground by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Banner moved to chapter 1 to comply with Google Ad-Sense requirements

Bella has come to accept that her unusual fetish may mean she spends her life alone, that is, until she meets handsome OB Edward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11008 Read Count: 22552
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good to see you updating again.

Jasper's right but Edward should have thought about this before getting Bella pregnant! He's got to consider her opinion too.

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 34454
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Wow, that was hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Fantastic chapter.  Yes it was worth the wait but please don't leave us on this cliffie for too long.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 540]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 98296
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Birthing

Great chapter. Please update soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 407232
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Discipline

Great chapter - will we get to find out what happened with Charlie?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning

Great writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Panties

Can't wait!!!  ;-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Ohhhh....   The anticipation is killing me!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**

Poor Bella, she's going to take this hard. Guess the holiday is off

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Breaking

Poor Bella.  :(

Thanks for the update. 

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 100538
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Letting Go

No arrows will be fired from this direction.

You're right, the next part is a whole new story, where they'll both get what they've waited for (and what we've waited for), for so long.  It looks like Jasper and Emmett are already getting theirs.  Impatient boys.

Fantastic story, can't wait for the sequel

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Like it Could Be Anyone Else?

I want a forest too!

Great chapter, amazing writing.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Beneath the Surface

What has he done? 

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire

Bella's getting braver by the minute. Poor Riley's going to get caught up in her game with Edward, but will Edward still be alive after Jasper and Emmett have finished with him!

Anxiously waiting for the next installment. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time

Sweet. He's determined to do this right.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Nice and Not

Finally!  And Jasper's in jail and not getting out until he see's sense. He could be in for a long while then.

Great writing.

 

P.s. I miss Jamin, where's he gone?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice

Woah.  Bella took Dutch Courage to the extreme.  Glad I'm not her come the morning... wonder how much she'll remember??



Author's Response:

What can I say... the girl wants her man! :)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 : Masochists

Can't wait to see what happens next.  :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

Ruh-oh!  Guess Jasper's back.

More, please.  :-)



Author's Response:

More is up! Sort of. Which you may already know... but since I'm behind on the reviews, I don't know that right this moment ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drafted

Wonderful chapter.  Isabella, like most spoiled little girls, has grown up to be a master manipulator of the people around her.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... perhaps, but not with spiteful intentions, which some readers seem to think she's displaying. I was a bit saddened by that interpretation, because I think Isabella is very misunderstood, but I can't control how people think, I can only hope they gain a better understanding. Or keep their mean comments to themselves... ;) 

As for my feelings on her manipulative tendencies... what choice do they leave her?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: For Her

It's becoming clearer why they protect and indulge her as they do.  Great chapter  :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad, I really want people to understand. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Breaking Point

Phew!  What a chapter.  Who will help put her together again, Edward or Riley?



Author's Response:

I suppose by now you have some idea, but the teeter-totter seem to always be moving around here, so... ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty

Fantastic chapter.  Edward's opened his eyes at last!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Firsts

What a chapter! Hurricane Jasper wreaked through leaving destruction in his path.

Poor Bella, hearing those words from Jasper of all people, but poor Jasper, the ramblings of a drunken fool have come back to bite him.

Excellent writing. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Little Things

Bella's going to need to grow a thick skin to deal with all the skeletons in Edward's closet. Those two are just the first in a very long line.

No, not mad...because I know the next chapter will be worth it.

Update soon, please.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering

Death by blue balls? Painful, but not life threatening.

What fun, watching him squirm!

Great writing.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Revelations

Great chapter

has Jasper really learned his lesson from this? I hope so.

 

Hope your computer issues are solved soon

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Closer

Can Jasper see the light perhaps or will he plunge back into the dark depths of despair again? 

Great writing.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

Ohhhh

Another cliffie! Please don't keep me hanging too long, my fingernails won't be able to take it.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Beautiful Life

Glad to see some good come from a bad situation. 

As always your writing astounds me in the emotions it provokes. I've read this chapter with tears in my eyes from the start almost to the finish, a smile broke through when she asked how much trouble she was in and the guys' responses.

I'll wait for updates as long as I have to, RL has to be attended to at some point.

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different

Of course we still read! How could we not, when every chapter is such a treat.

Poor Bella, she's so frustrated but all good things come to she who waits and I'm positive you'll make sure it's good when it does!