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Ménage Triste by LaurieLou Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

It is the eighteenth century and a young Isabella Swan is wedded to the older, harsher Edward Cullen, Duke of Washington. He needs a male heir. She just wants to be loved. A one-shot about loss, love, lust and hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7299 Read Count: 4401
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story!!!!!! Why was Edward so gruel to her, when he loved her at first sight? It took him a long time to confess his love to her. Lucky Edward, Bella was able to forgive him.


 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! He was cruel to her because he wasa being hard on himself, he didn't know what to do with his feelings for such a young girl, and being a Duke, he was used to harshness in those days :) He is indeed lucky!

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50406
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
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Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bella found a good way to relieve her tension :-)

Great chapter, loved it!!!!!!!

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

They brainwashed the serialkiller and made him confess all his crimes. Tanya's death, too, what a great idea. Way better than kill him.

Oh, the Volturi already found Bella. Curious what happened next.

Thanks for your update!!!! 

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Poor, brave Jacob. The elves know how to get to Bella. 

"SpongeBob t-shirt" - hilarious! I have a feeling the queen and the goddess will get along quite well.


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Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

"Need a cigar?" oh yeah, he knows what happend and it seems he is fine with it.
I'm amazed by Esme!!
Oh noooo, she can't be pregnant! This must be a lie!!! Poor Edward. Hmm, when I remember right, they didn't have much of a sexlife before Tanja ended the engagement.

Thank you so much for your quick updates, love this story, very unique :-)

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Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thrilling and captivating chapter, excellent! 

Years ago, I was in the sewers (they offer a tour), very exciting and a bit scary.

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Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Hopefully Bella doesn't get too exhausted from her exertions, after all she is a very old vampire. 

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Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella is so kind-hearted. No wonder everyone worshiped her once when she was the goddess. I'm totally intrigued by your story! Thank you :-)

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

No matter how they look at it, Bella is in big trouble. Edward is really cute, even as vampire he hasn't lost his shyness. Jake's phone call with Alice was very touching. I almost missed this excellent chapter ;-) 

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another mythical creature, how intriguing. Bella has taken the lead in order to satisfy her cuddle needs. They fit so well together, all three. All is new for her, so much to explore *lol*

Thank you for continuing the original version :-)

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Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Again an amazing chapter! Thank you :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks! That's kind of you to say.

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Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

 

The hiding under the desk was funny and very graphic written.  I envy Edward for his ability learning a foreign language within a short time *lol* I would be able to express myself better in English. 

 

 

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Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Your last paragraph makes me pondering. I like how you build up the suspense. I'm eagerly looking forward to your next update :-)

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Not the best place and timing to announce their special relationship. Shinx has a bad influence on Bella. Looking forward to your next update, I want read about the consequences of her behaviour.

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Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward gone??? Who kidnapped him??? Jinx to blackmail Bella?? Now she is forced to react.

Nice cliffie! Please update soon!!!! :-)

 

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Tanya is already a vampire? Faszinating! Curious about who was "He".

I'm on my way to Italy, maybe I meet a Volturi ????? *lol* See you again in a fortnight.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

* Sob * Heartbreaking chapter, very good! Edward is a vampire now, too.

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Looks like he enjoys his new vampire life. Wonderful chapter!

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

He has not lost his shyness, how cute! Now they are on their way to Italy, too? Next update will tell.

As always, great chapter!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hope they get themselves out of trouble soon. Great update, thanks!

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

"Shinx" has got what he deserved. The Edward-Bella-Jacob-circle is closing soon again.
Loved how you kept the tension high in this chapter.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Perfect ending to a great story! Thank you Lissa!