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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254878
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Oh shit...shes in trouble!!! Goals to set and accomplish in 2 weeks????? God, it would take me 2 weeks just to think of them. I always look more long term....Have to think about that.

Still somewhat confused on the Mike front. Who the hell, other than Jess, would want to be with Mike??? Ewwwwwww!
Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I had a felling that was why Jasper was getting her. She thinks she has todo things her way to be safe. He is there to take care of her...mind, body and soul.

The lesson sucked but hopefully she finally gets it.

Loves <3

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Well...its alwsys more interesting to see things in Edwards head. I think it is good that he struggles with the D/s relationship and wanting to comfort Bella. It shows that he truly is human and all he has is an unending love for her. I cant wait to mix the 2 families. That will be a hoot.

As for Alice...she needs to get her head out of her ass. She will not only lose a friend, but Im guessing a brother as well if she keeps this shit up.

I wanna hear the talk. Loves <3

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

There are no words. That was beautiful!!

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Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Jared is a jealous ass and needs to eff off!!!!

Good for Bells, bout damn time she knocked the shit out of him!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

jealous? maybe your right. Maybe he is just wondering what could have been, maybe he sees the changes in Bella and is wondering what happened, maybe she was his 1st love and he hurt her....ther are lots of things that could be the matter with him.....

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I wish I knew how to form words. That was something.....wow. Her realization about everything was overwhelming. For her to love and trust Edward in the magnitude and totally be willing to surrender to him in everyway is just...im in awe.

The lemon was beyond words. I cant stop rubbing my thighs together to get as much friction as possible without actually finger fucking myself. Yeah it got me that worked up.

The news cast....we'll just have to see what happens.

I will always wait patiently for your updates!!! Always!

Loves <3 

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I dont even know what to say. This is all just seriously FUCKED UP!

Charlie...just WOW is right. i believe that he knew it all before he got there, but her collar is what sealed the deal. yes, he has reached his limit and I HOPE & PRAY the Bella has reached hers. But I have a feeling it wont happen just yet. I think James is gonna do something more that will finally push her over the edge. I hate for it to happen that way, but I have a feeling its the only way for it to happen.

I dont even know what to day about Mike. Im in the same boat as Bella. WTF does this have to do with her? What does Karen want from her? I JUST DONT KNOW. 

Id love to see an OT for Charlie. He must be going crazy that he cant do anything and having to accept Bella liestyle.

I cant wait for the next chapter. Loves always <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Oh Hell, Jess is freaking dumber than a sack of rocks! I didnt realize people could be so stupid sometimes. Karen is certifiable. She is freaking crazy and I can just inagine what the hell she has planned.

Bella is gonna throw the biggest tantrum that we have ever seen!! I cant wait to see that one.

PLAYROOM TIME PLAYROOM TIME PLAYROOM TIME!!!! YEA!!!!

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Well my Love, I can honestly tell you that all those under false names are total ASSES. They couldnt find their asses without a map it sounds like. Screw them...they know nothing. And Im sorry that you have to deal with narrow minded people like that.

That did answer several questions as far as Im concerened. I still want to know what the 'plans' are to get DNA from Bella. That is really disturbing to me.

I reallycant wait for the Anniversary Party. Gos, she is gonna look fuckhot!!!

Loves You Hard <3



Author's Response:

yeah .. i think there might me an Aro/Marcus/laurant or Mike OT in the near future - and no there will be no slash ...lol....

Sorry had to say that ...but i think it might be called for so ...maybe i would say 90% sure the OT will be happening ...

The party will show a whole lot more of what happens at the club ...so - that might contain some slash...lol - but i don't know yet ...

Anyway, thanks for reading ...louise

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Well then....she gets full range of 'Os' for the evening. Interesting.....

Im wondering if he will just release her to go about at will??? I dont or rather cant see Edward doing that. He is too possesive of her. But I guess will just have to see.

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Well she really is a cum slut!!! Ill admit I totally love to watch others. Its a turn on no matter what anyone says.

Im guessing that she is learning her lesson on the sighing. Im guessing she wont hesitate next time.

Loved the pretty flogger. Not sure many of us buy them for that purpose. Im glad that she was able to roam freely and get use to it. I would have gone to Edward about the tattoo thing, but that is just me. She should have been told that the picture would be on display. JS

Loves <3

Summary:

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Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Forever part one

OMG....I dont know if I want this to end!!! This is how it should have gone. We didnt need Jacob at all!! This is the love story that we needed and the Bella that needed to come about.

Cant wait to see the final few chapters!! Loves <3

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184429
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening

Oh he is soooooooo fucked!!!

Well if I ever need to retrain on how to give a BJ, I know just where to go!!
Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Small World

OOOOOO...Chefward has a little competition. Serves him right! Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here

Oh this is gonna be good. My BFF started this not long after you started writing it. I waited till the end. It was KILLING me, but I did it. I CANT WAIT TO FINISH!!!!

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage

OK on the AU at the end...im not sure I agree with that one. I think Edward fingering ANYTHING is WAAAAYYYY Better!!!

Was Jake gay? I cant fathom why he would never touch her again.

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Revelations

Ha, i was right!!!!!

OK, Edward in jammies is just too much to take....swoon!!

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Reveal

OH HOLY CRAP!!! That was HAWT!!!

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught

Ha, bitch went down!!! Loved that one!!!

OK, shes alive and they are together!!!! Thank God!! I knew he would find her.

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

Loves <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99 Restored

It was the milk from her breasts that healed him. He hadnt fed from her in a few days since she was taken. Of course it was the milk.

Her body...that was all the venom. She is soooo ready to be changed.

Oh, and she is gonna get preggers REAL QUICK!!!!

I love that they are soo comfortable with each other. I LOVE THEM AND YOU!!!

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108 Moms

OH HOLY CRAP!!! Go Esme! Now that is what Im talking about. Can we really let her tear Sam apart??!! Please Please Please!!!

Im kinda wondering how they are gonna get preggers when she is still breastfeeding? For a human, its not really possible. Now, I get its a story and all, but still kinda curious.

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

I LOVE me some Esme!

Point of Fact - I had 5 kids in 6 years, one at a time.  The last three were in 2 and a half years.  I breastfed them all till they were at least 8 months old.  It is ENTIRELY possible to get pregnant while breast feeding - all you have to do is make one mistake, allow a supplemental bottle a day or some finger food once they are large enough and your body knows!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

OMG...that was...interesting. I never thought about circumcision that way. But my opinion is YES, he needs it. I dont care what the books say. It is just better. Only thing is...he is part vampire. When they get cut or whatever, it usually grows back. This should be interesting.

Poor Emily...I dont know what she is gonna do. Sam is an ass and just needs to go the F*** home!

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

The pros and cons are interesting - Less sensitivity but convenient clenliness ot increased sensitivity with a need to keep things clean - tough choice!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111 Delusions

OK, that kinds sucks. You want me to choose days...Friday def!! Ill let yiou choose the other day. Id like to have one to keep me going thru the weekend and Friday is the perfect day!!

As for Renee...well i think they should go with they reunited before the accident and it was just God's will that kept the baby. You cant argue with that one, right!!!???

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! (Ill never stop asking form more!!!)



Author's Response:

Friday is a great idea, you like it better than Saturday, obviously, so okay!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97 Burned

OK, Im not too worried about hi sarm. I have a feeling that Masons cells will take care of him!!!

As for Sam, I am getting kinda tired of him. I think Emily should leave his ass if not for a little while to show him what a HUGE ASS is really is. JS!!

What I really want is to see how Tanya comes into play here. We all know she lusts after Edward. But now he is married and will kill anyone that gets in his way or even trys to harm his family. This should be interesting!!

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Tanya will be a little while coming.  Lots to do first!

(besides, IF Bella gets pregnant again, Tanya while she is huge would be more fun!)

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104 Details

Oh, I thought of the perfect saying for Edwards arm being healed...what for it....

'Milk, it does a body good'...lol I guess a mothers milk is as awesome as they day it is!!!

Yes they need a new treaty and to still kick Sams ass...HARD!!!

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I remember the milk a body good ad campaign@!  Too funny!

Sam really does need his ass kicked, problem is that the vampires would finish him!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Surprise

That was perfect. WIsh I could trade like that!!!! Loves <3



Author's Response:

So glad you've joined us!  I love readers that comment and give me feedback!  Hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters

Oh, please tell me we get to have sexing at Disney World? That would be AWESOME!!!! Loves <3



Author's Response:

Sex at Disney!  pfffft . . . of course!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom

OK, soooo not fair! I want to stay in her castle too!! I want my HAWT ASS Vampire to make love to me in Cinderella's Castle!! Loves <3



Author's Response:

I Know!  I Know!

I want a prince in a castle and sex all the time!

I seem to make Edward into my ideal man!  lol

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52 Cinderella

Ooooo...daddies gonna be pissed at them...lol

I loved this chapter. Always love it when good things happen to great people! Loves <3



Author's Response:

Well, Edward just couldn't let it go that they would be in Disney and she needed the fairytale . . .

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 53 Images

He thinks too much...hehehe

Please tell me that the baby will go okay?? I dont think I could handle any angst with that one. Its just too perfect to mess with.

When do we get to kill Vic? She is kinda annoying ya know!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Glad someone else is annoyed vy Victoria!  She worries the heck out of me cause I know she is going to pull something . . .

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 Arrivals

OK, I like Jake...who am I kidding. I cant stand him! TEAM EDWARD! I know he was there for her, but MAN...cant we get rid of him?!?! He just annoyes the hell out of me!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Yea, Jake can be a handfull!  He comes in handy later though!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Bonding

Yeah, I would have liked for that gun to go off on Jake? Yeah yeah yeah...i know that i should like him cuz he gonna come in handy, but I still dont like him.

Can we just kill of Vic, she is kinda really annoying! She wants things that she should have thought about before she became a B*tch!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

She is sooooo annoying!  She has her part to play, though!  lol

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang

Oh they know where she is now!! GOOD! Why does Alice not see that she is sitting in the trees watching the houses? Vic has made decisions the get Bella, their money and to sit there and watch. Just a smidge confused on that part.

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Give it a minute - it will explain itself!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Jacob

OK, now we are getting somewhere. Hes finally a wolf....yeah! He can help Kill of Vic and Riley now. I will patiently wait for the next chapter to see what the hellis up with Alice.

Have to admit, just kinda wished that Jake would run and never come back. But that's the Team Edward in me, ALWAYS!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

ha!  Thanks for being patient!  Jake just running away would seemingly solve things, right?  He has a role to play, as always though!  Yes, we are starting to get into the drama!  Thanks so much for faithfully reviewing!  I really do need to hear what you think of what's going on or if yhou se any holes I left, like you're wanting to know why the hell Alice hasn't seen!

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Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71 Calling Sam

I think Pink Armani camo would ROCK!!!!

ok, Sue is just a tad annoying. She needs to get over herself and relax!!! My guess is that Charlie's not gonna let up about school from the sounds of things. But he is a dad, so cant totally blame him.

I cant wait till Sam shows. He needs a good ass kicking for his attitude...lol

Loves <3



Author's Response:

I so should have thought to make it PINK camo!  Brilliant!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Games

Fun with the dog is always enjoyable. But Em seems pretty hell bent on destroying Vic!!! Hope he gets the chance SOON!!!!

Loves you <3



Author's Response:

Love bantering with the dog - - - em is pretty intense, he wnts her almost as much as edward does!

They will all have a chance at going after her, soon to come!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Fishing

I love possesive and caring Edward!!! Hes one of my favs. Kinda glad we didnt get any Jake in here...hehehe

Loves <3



Author's Response:

I like that edward, too . . . but I also like uncontrolled passionate Edward!  Alot!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Fireworks

OK, now were talking!!!!! Lets get this showdown on!!! Im almost as giddy for this as I was when Edward got her after the accident!!!!!! Gimme Gimme Gimme woman!!! Loves <3



Author's Response:

I;m excited, too!  it is all I can do not to post a couple of chapters a day or more!  i am trying to stick to one a day, but as the excitement grows it;s gonna be hard!

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Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives

I like bumpy...as long as we get to kill the bitch Vic...lol

Sam needs a doggy valium...hahaha

Loves <3



Author's Response:

ROFLMAO!  Doggie Valium!  Love it!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend

Of course theyll get thru it. I have a feeling that little Mason is gonna make for one hell of a fight with Vic. I think with Bella's power and whatever this little guy can do, that Vic is in for the ride of her existence when she comes for Bells, not that shes gonna get close enough!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

I love your enthusiasm!  You energize me to put up another chapter - I'm having trouble resisting!  lol

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bella

Oh come on...you know you want toooooooo!!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

More coming soon . . .

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82 Hungers

Sorry I didnt post this last night, got really tired and fell alseep reading on the couch.

As usual, Sam needs a doggy valium...lol I told youi that Mason and Bella together are gonna make 1 hell of a massive power source. Vic is delusional as usual.

Think the blood is gonna do more to them then they realize, sex wise it seems. But I think there is something else with the 3 of them together. Not sure, but gonna be interesting.

Loves <3



Author's Response:

You KILL me with the doggie valium idea!  he needs a full prescription!

Unfortunately, Victoria is smart, too!

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Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Taken

FUUUUUCK!! OK, I was not expecting that one! You have got to be kidding me. How did they not smell him? Just FUUUUCK!!!!!

You cant leave me like this. I cant say that I didnt like any of this one. She managed to get her and I didnt even see it coming.

But I will say this...I cant wait to see Edward and Jake rip Vic and Riley up. There is NO WAY that they will get off in an easy form. As much as I do not like Jake, he is gonna lose it when he gets wind of this one.

COME ON, GIMME GIMME GIMME. Loves <3



Author's Response:

I told you that the update would not be setteling!  This is the second one today, more in the morning!  The rollercoaster is just going up the hill . . .

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Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 Frantic

CRAP!!!! Im holding on, but I want to see Vic NOW!!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Keep holding on, the rollercoaster is just starting down the first hill . . .

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89 Storm

Well just....crap!

Im goin gon an HEA here woman. Dont make me hate you at the end of this thing. I love you and your story. I want more more more!!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

I only write HEA.  The trick is, whose HEA!

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Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 Tracks

OK, that was mean about the HEA!!! There is only 1 HEA that we all ever want and that is E&B!!!

Her idea has to work!! She is just brilliant!!!

Gimme gimme gimme more more more!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Actually, I do agree with you about there only being one kind of HEA!

Shhhhh . . . don't tell anyone!

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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 Fire

OH DEAR GOD WOMAN!! I know that she got out, its just where they hell is she? Vic didnt say anything about seeing the car...maybe she got the car and took off in it!!!

Gimme Gimme Gimme More!!!

Thank for answering me on the HEA!! Loves <3



Author's Response:

Very observant of you to notice the car detail!  Well played!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 Delivered

OK, 1st thing...i know why Vic didnt hurt Bells. It was Mason!! Yeah see, I told you he would help her!!!!

OK, shes home and they are back together. Thank the Lord in Heaven!!!

Well now it seems that Little Mason wants to make a grand enterance. But E is there and he will make sure that all is well and that they all 3 get thru this alive!!

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Loves <3 



Author's Response:

Really glad you are still enjoying the story, lots more to come!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106 Realizations

OK, Bells needs to get over this idea that she is not enough for Edward. They both need to just realize that they are more than enough for each other!!!!

Mason is just the cutest thing EVER!!! I just ADORE him soooo.

Yeah, I agree, we need to bottle that shit up and fast. I may need some along with Bells breast milk.

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

I'm sayin . . . Bottle that shit NOW!  lol

Hope Renee comes along alright, would hate to have to fake some deaths!

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Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

I like it when the parents get a little alone time. But I totally think that Esme should be allowed to get her hands on Sam. Even if she doesnt get to kill him, she could still have a little fun!!! Mama Bear deserves it, dontcha ya think??!! =)

I want to see what happens when Eleazar shows. That should be interesting. I guess with the girls on vaca that no Tanya trouble as of yet. Damn...I was hoping that little Mason could have some fun with her head!!! That would be priceless.

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

I;m kind of scred to write Elesar, I just am not sure of his take - - - but I will figure it out!

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122 Reactions

Oh shit!!! This is total Possesiveward! He might be newly mated, but this was just possesivness coming out!!!

Bella's gonna be pissed when he gets back. Not only did he not ask her about it, he showed his crap in front of her mother!!!!

So this is what Alice saw happening. Kinda glad she didnt say anything to him. He needs to get his ass handed to him by Bella. This was sooooo uncalled for it isnt even funny. OK, thats a lie, this was sooooo funny!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review!  It sounds like you enjoyed it, and that makes me smile!

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Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133 Surprises

Love hearing from the fam. So the rents are heading to London!!

Can we have more babies now!!!??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Loves <3

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Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126 Venice

Oh Holy Hell!!! Here we go! This otta be interesting! I just wanna see her face when she sees Edward with Bella AND a baby!

I wish I could hear her thoughts! Please tell me that we get the next one FAST!!!!

Loves always <3

GIMME GIMME GIMME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep - we finally get Tanya!

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Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

That was perfect. Yea...the babies are coming!!!

Had a blast this Black Friday. But made even better by getting this.

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136 Content

I FINALLY GOT TO READ IT!!! YEAH!!!

Missed you...hate when RL gets in the way of my reading, but you of all people know how that is.

YEAH!!! BABIES!!! They are meeting Aro soon? WOW!

Cant wait to see how that goes. Hope you have a great Christmas and New Year!

Loves Always <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532880
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Well....I dont really know what to day right now. I dont know if Im glad she didnt kill him or upset about it. Yes, Aro deserved his vengence and Im glad he got it. But it woulda been interesting to see how that ended with her pulling the trigger.

E needs a little more time to cool off and come out of 'Kill' mode.

I wanna go to Disney too!

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

Yeah.,..this is why we ALWAYS make sure the door is locked...lol

The only time our son caught us...yeah NOT happening again!!!

Thank GAWD...E got his groove back...lol

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

If ppl cant figure out by NOW that E would NEVER do that to B...then fuck them. They can flounce.

My only issue and I understand B is just so damn lovable...but this shit with Aro has got to STOP. She needs to realize what its doing to all of them and walk away from him, their friendship and anything to do with him. He only exists now for 'the thing'.

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie

I love Esme as much as anyone else, but the bitch is gonna have to go. She is fucking nuts!!!!!

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

I know that I havnt reviewed till now....but oh fuck yes. I knew Esme was behind that hit. I just fucking knew it.

BOTH of these stories have been AMAZING!!! I cant tell you how much I love them. I just cant stop reading. THats why I havnt had a chance to review.

I just got so carried away reading, that I passed it by. Sorry love,

Loves <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Wow...now that was a lot of shit for them. I know with all my heart that they will be OK, but that was a HUGE test of their relationship.

The whole Aro thing makes me nervous. Guess we just have to watch it play out. But you know that someone is going missing.

Loves you hard <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Gotta love 'old' mob wives...lol They are some crazy ass women.

Edward needs to just relax...i know...like that will happen!

Dont know if I want this to end....kinda sad that way.

Loves you hard <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

It was DJ.....

LOVES U HARD WOMAN!!!!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

Yea...they both need to relax some. Bells needs to realize that she is all that he needs ever. Without her, he cant truly function the way he needs to. I know shes hurting and I TOTALLY TRUST YOU!!! But she needs to have a come to god moment and chill the fuck out a little on poor E.

I still want her to kill DJ, though, not sure how that will really affect her emotionally....guess if she wants her 10 minutes, lets give it to her.

Loves you hard woman!! <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Oh how I really needed Bebella from Edward. Yes, I had no doubt they would be OK!! But just to hear him call her that makes all the bad go away!

Yea, he let Lou off light...but whatever. He'll screw up somewhere else and just disappear.

Loves you hard <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Oh yes....Edward-works-fine alright!!

Yea..not sure what to do with Derek. Thats a tuffy.

Loves u hard <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

BAM...Bitch went dooooowwwn!! Bella...Super Bitch!!

Now there is the Bella we love so much! Glad that she got all that off her chest.

Loves you hard <3

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

Sex in the jacuzzi....yummy!!

Investing on porn...well its a living!

Alex, Alex, Alex. Whats a man-whore to do about his justafiably worried fiancee??? C needs to get that shit right, j/s

Awwww, looks like its time for E to take a major step back and be there more. Yea, hes doing good now, but cant keep saying 'I promise' and then breaking that shit. After awhile, it gets kinda annoying.

Loves you hard <3

Wrigley's by heartfortwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Wrigleys

 

A love story told on tiny sketches on gum wrappers.  E/B. HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6232 Read Count: 1670
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Jun 2016
Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the commercial but your story was so much better. Seeing him forget their 'I love you' anniversary and how it hurt her was heartbreaking but not as bad as her leaving for NY. But the proposal all but made up for it!!!! Perfect little one shot!!!