Reviews by Twi-Holoic68
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Just send ing a note to say that I truely enjoyed this story!!!!!!!! the Epi made me cry!!!!!!!!!! so glad I found you here.....I have read FD&KK and loved it..... going to read some more of your work that you have here!!!!!!!!!! thx again for another great story!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you've enjoyed them.  Thank you for the review!

Summary:

msc

 

It has been an utter loss to Twilight fans that Stephanie Meyers did not finish Midnight Sun. I know I was devestated and could not let it end where she did. That is where my obsession began and it ended with the next three stories from EPOV. Sorry, but I couldn't help myself, I needed to know how it ended. But what came as the biggest surprise to me was how it did end... I never would have guessed after writing for the next three books it would have ended this way.

So join me on this most intriguing journey of Edward's. I promise some surprises, some good, some not so good. I do promise to give you an end, one hopefully you will enjoy.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74360 Read Count: 3200
[Report This] Published: 24 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Epilogue

so I have read all of the chapters..... and like you am heartbroken that SM will not continue Midnight Son as she would have seen it..... I do feel that you have done justice to what she started and did a fabulous job at capturing Edward's side of things. I do have a message for your Edward where he sees arrogance I see only the cockiness that all 17 year old males have..... both irritate you but you can laugh at the cockiness!!!!!!! moving on to Dark Moon!!!!!!! here come Emoward!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

THanks for reading and reviewing it's nice to hear how people like the stories. I'm glad it was acceptable. Hopefully Dark Moon will be just as good.

Dark Moon by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella told you the story of our life together, which according to her human memories was correct, she told the story, as she believed it to be. The problem with human memories is that they fade and become blurry over time. Vampire memories are stronger and more reliable. Not to say that Bella didn’t tell the story as she remembered it, but I remember it a bit different than she did.

There was quite a bit she had no knowledge of. A lot of things that happened with my family that she couldn’t know about and I never revealed to her. This is the story she wouldn’t have known to tell. My hope is that it will clear up a few misconceptions…

 

 

Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115560 Read Count: 6233
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Birthday

I am really enjoying seeing NM from edward's POV loved the message he gave us before the chapter!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for giving my book a chance. There will be a message from Edward before each book. What can I say the boy likes to have his say.

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Stitches

and of course as usual Edward knows nothing!!!!!!!!! I really do love throwing that in his face..... another excellent chapter...you have truly captured Edward'sPOV!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Ending

stupid stupid BOY!!!!!!!!! great chappie lady!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Seperation Anxiety

Loved this chapter a chance to see YOUR Edward...... I still like to have that little chuckle inside my head when I read how he thinks or feels about something..... my thoughts on the vision of Bella's wedding is that it is Her's and Edward's I don't believe that Alice's visions are subjective for everything!!!!!!!!!!!!! but that is just me!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Seattle

*ok Emoward... that is one smack to the back of the head for EVEN THINKING that Bella could move on!!!!!!!!*

Ren68
great chappie...... I will now be sending messages to Edward with ever chapter.....some might even make you giggle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I am giggling and thank you for leaving the messages. I'm glad you're enjoying the book.

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-The Search

I was reading The Hostage also and for some reason that was not totally explained ebalways decided to take it down...I don't know if it had to due with the fact that she was getting Near You Always published or not, but I was very heartbroken to hear that this happened........ hope that helps..... so the fam is keeping things from Edward could it be Alice saw Laurent with Bella before everthing went blank because of the wolves.....there is something for Edward to think about he said he didn't want to know!!!!!!!!! Watch what you ask for!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Friends

Even though New Moon is not my favorite book in the series I do love hearing Jake'sPOV.... he is a great character and has a bigger part than anyone could have expected...... I am forever Team E/B but stll love Jake!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for his insight!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Tracking

ok so a really big review for all the chapters before this...... reading Jacob'sPOV was interesting and I reeally did enjoy seeing his transformation to wolf.... but since I have just finished listening to New Moon on audiobook everything was still very fresh.....I do believe that you were able to capture Jake and his feelings and that is good to see alot of authors like to make him a "bad guy" and truly he is not but it does work for their story!!!!!!!!!! *message to Edward* Damn Emoward lets just sit down and wallow in your pity right now, beat yourself up a little more and when you're ready I have got a great therapist for you so you can on these issues you have!!!!!!!! either that or a great big "emmett style" smack to the back of the head....yeah yeah yeah, "i am all hard as marble and your would hurt yourself".... don't care right now you need some since knocked into you!!!!!!!!!!!* end message* Thx for another great chappie!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Misery

you had me scared there for a minute thought I was going to have to rip Edward apart and burn him!!!!!!!!!! that right eddie you heard me....(lol)ok so is the person calling Rose bet it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-Strategies

dun dun dun!!!!!!!!! there is it is the big news.......loved Alice'sPOV!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading this story and thank you for all the wonderful reviews you have written. It's really nice to know what people think of my stories.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389604
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

so I have read all the chapters and got caught up!!!!!!! now just one question... is this going to be finshed here or is it finished some where else... I noticed that it has been a while since the upate this chapter... just wanting to know because I really don't want to be left hanging... if it is RL messing with things I do understand but I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I found you... and can't wait for the rest... congratulations on the first place win with the public vote!!!!!!

Author's Response:

thanks :)