Reviews by frekles
Eternally United by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

Third and final part of the United trilogy. Jacob and Edward's careers are about to begin and a new home awaits them. Everything seems perfect until an event threatens to snatch away their hopes and dreams. Are they destined for heartbreak, or will fate step in again to give them their happy ending?

The awesome banner is by Mina Rivera


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123564 Read Count: 4629
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2013 Updated: 07 Aug 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Is this the end? It seems like all is settled and life is good for our favorite twosome...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It's not the end yet, but I think there will only be one more chapter.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

great ending and tying things up.........glad you included Chloe and Wolf getting married! Thoroughly enjoyed your story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

The awesome banner is by Mina Rivera - feel free to ask if you would like her to create a banner for your story.

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Edward Cullen is a movie-star, born into the life of fame and fortune, but always wishing for something else. When his girlfriend Bella publicly humiliates and hurts him, he eventually finds the opportunity to look for something better; something that deep down he always wanted. Rated M for adult scenes (slash).  

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Twilight characters, but am merely borrowing them for this story.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119640 Read Count: 11557
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2013 Updated: 12 Jul 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

what a bitch!!!!! Find out the truth Edward!  Great job stirring up our emotions by the way!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad the emotions came across.  Edward will insist on tests to prove he's the father befoe he'll believe her :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

yes-Jacob cares for him so much...................



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and your reviews. Jacob will make everything easier to handle ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thank goodness that Paul is now a friend-oh the tangled web you weave!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

had a feeling that was coming........started reading this story of yours too as I have enjoyed your other ones so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - I hope you continue to enjoy this one :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

glad Paul is not such an ass-Edward needs him to much!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Paul is a good guy :)

Chains by TheSongSmith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Seth's fantasies existed only in his head. But when he decides to take the leap to real life, he realizes he has a lot to learn. Can the mysterious man he meets help him, and how will their relationship change? Can Seth let go of his fears? You'll have to read to find out!

 

Warning: BDSM story. If that's not your thing, don't read it.


Categories: Twilight, Making of a MASTERpiece Contest, All Human, Cracking the Whip, The Gentleman, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Emmett/Seth (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26118 Read Count: 6193
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So gentle-what a beautiful start. I love your Edward and Seth is perfect........

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a great teacher Edward is. With a Dom like him, everyone would want to be a sub!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

more please!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sounds great1 You have me intrigued.......keep it up please!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward and seth are perfect together-now anxious to see about Embry and Emmett!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

so glad to see you updating this again! Missed it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Story cover

The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

so what about Edward's job? Does he have the ability to do nothing but be with Bella?  Or is he hiding something?

Torn by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Mina Rivera

Family man Jacob has struggled to suppress his longing for guys, not always successfully, from a young age due to a strict upbringing. Outwardly he has everything, but what happens when he meets Paul on a business trip? Angst ensues and threatens the life has has made for himself.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jacob/OC
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115214 Read Count: 6092
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2013 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh what a tangled web you weave...lol....I hope Sarah is okay, but also hope leah is not just doing this because she might know Paul is there....so much to ponder-great chapter. jake is a good DAD!



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and I have a bit more tangling to do yet before things get any better for anybody ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Paul such a good boyfriend!!!!! So glad all is going well : )



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; at last they will be able to have some happy times together  again :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

poor Paul...........and Jacob, but he did make the right decision. This is heavy duty heartbreak!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There will be a few more tears before it gets better :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow-poor Jacob, but he did the right thing by going there, so Paul would know how serious he is.......maybe there is still hope!!!!!!! I am really enjoying your story, I almost teared up when I saw that a new chapter was up-I knew it would be a tear jerker!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing; I'm glad you're enjoying despite all the angst :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG,...........You have reached a new level in fantastic lemons. This chapter was so vivid.......absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the lemon-fest. There is a bit more to come in the next chapter before Jake has to go home ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

loved how you pulled Jasper into the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the update.

 

Thank you also for your review on Lost, that was one of my very earliest stories so happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow!! so much going on! Life is sure never easy..........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They have got through the worst part now and things will start to get better again :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I had kept by passing this story (kind of like Jacob...lol, figured I should not be so interested in this type of story) and finally found I could not resist-I love your M/M smut! Plus the writing/storyline is always interesting too! So yes, you have me hooked again........love that you update so much and you always have us thinking and guessing. (and you do such a good job with the lemon parts!!!)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm happy you gave this one a chance - and glad you like the lemons! Curiously I find them the most enjoyable part to write, haha :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

aww jacob---Paul is hottttt!



Author's Response:

Really he has no chance of resisting, does he? Haha!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:  (  feel sorry for Paul-you have me so hooked-well done!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Poor Paul will end up being hurt as well before too much longer :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love your frequent updates........oh Jake....you are playing with fire here....I keep wondering what part Edward will play in all of this, you always have me thinking...well done author!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I had some extra time this week to update a bit for often. Edward will feature quite a bit in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Your stories are the best-I cannot believe how they just pull me in and I am totally oblivious to the world going on around me!! Great chapter-so excited to have two to read when I checked in to the TWCS.....



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm glad you're enjoying this one :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ahhhhhh-I love Paul.....Please do not let Jacob hurt him, I know none of this is going to be easy.



Author's Response:

Sadly everybody is in for a hard time for a while :(  Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter.........now comes the hard part.......



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - the next chapter will definitely be tough for all concerned!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Life is never easy, so glad you are not making this easy either. Makes for a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you're enjoying the way I'm doing this :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

such a sad but necessary chapter......well done, really enjoying your writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

what a beautiful chapter! Your storytelling is fantastic. Your descriptions of every detail, from their feelings, to how they look, to where they are, paint a picture in the readers mind. It is like you are there, watching the actions unfold. I love it!  well done........



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you very much, I really appreciate your comments. I imagine the scene in front of me as if I'm watching a movie when I'm writing, so it helps me to try to describe things so the reader can see what's in my head :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yes! back together!!!!! oh crazy Edward-purple shirt and leather pants- I love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the latest.

Thank you for your reviews for Out Of Reach, I'm pleased you liked it too :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

awwwww he loves him too......do not hurt him Jacob!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - they final get some happy times and Jacob will behave himself and not mess with Paul's feelings from now on :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

YES!!!!!!!! Glad we are in a happy place now-some pretty hottt lemons too!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the lemons :)  Now I just need to throw a little spanner in the works for them ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oh man.............I hate this part of our world........but unfortunately, it is real. Please let them be okay......



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - it's awful that there are such vile, bigoted people out there and this is going to affect everyone quite badly :(  

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

ooooh Paul.........Hope all wil be okay.........so glad Sarah was so understanding-kids are so like that!!!! So much better than adults.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - Sarah was the one Jake worried about the most, and she's certainly had a more mature reaction than his dad will :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

so glad everyone is happy! You cover every aspect of the story so well, I have read some stories lately on FF that skip around, do not have enough depth.....I have become spoiled reading yours with such great writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - and flattering me again :)  Things are on the up for everybody now, I don't think I have any more cruel ideas to drop on anybody :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

loved the lemon-not too mushy-but very real! Paul is being such a good boyfriend, glad all is working out. I imagine it means things are coming to an end soon.... : (  So glad you already have another story in the works!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the lemon. Yes, this is sadly coming to an end now, but as well as 'Wish Upon a Star', I have another new story planned to start in a few weeks :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

awww will miss they boys (I am a softie for Paul) thanks for another good story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you've enjoyed this one :)

My Pereche by ggf83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Past Featured Story

pereche

 

Since the days when the Romanian Coven ruled the vampire world, Sufletul Pereche was a common vampire myth -- a vampire fairy tale.

When Jasper's own Pereche moves to Forks, he is torn. He already has a mate he loves, but how can you stay away from the other half of your soul?

How can he give up Alice to be with Bella, and how can he protect Bella from his brother who thirsts for her blood?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59848 Read Count: 20727
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

loved your story-and will be excited to continue with your story about Alice!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! (oops -- didn't see this review to reply to it until today)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Shy, introverted Edward makes a wish that he will find love, not really believing it will happen - until he meets Jasper. Could love find him in the unlikeliest place after all?

All human, slash story rated for adult scenes.

Banner by Mina Rivera.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103007 Read Count: 9908
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2013 Updated: 05 Nov 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hot loving!!!!!!! (but love how Edward was his typical awkward self...lol)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the hotness -more on the way :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

just waiting for everything to fall apart!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It eventually will, but not for a while ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

poor Jaasper,  easy to see how the scars from the mental damage can be harder to get over than the physical ones...........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. At least they both now have each other's support and can enjoy spending some time together :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

such novices to the world of love...........

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

awww missed this update on the weekend, and when checking your stories, saw that I had missed this new chapter! Now things are getting good! But you do such a wonderful job of driving us crazy, slowly leading up to the good parts-that is what makes it a story-well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; glad you are enjoying the slow build-up of this one. At least they can now be more open with each other and will quickly grow closer now :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

now the boys are getting some where!!  lol always love the lemons-you write them so well!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying the lemons - there are more to come ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

okay-this sounds different-anxious to see where you take us!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I hope you will enjoy this one.  Also, thank you for reading 'One Kiss', I wasn't able to reply on Fanfic as you weren't logged in. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm happy you noticed improvement in my writin :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

like how you take care to build the scene now-but I am ready for more action!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; there is action coming soon :)

 

Thanks also for reading Outcasts and Never To Late - I'm happy you enjoyed them :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

enjoyed the progress-hope Jasper does not have problems though!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; Jasper's dad will be a problem when he finds out :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It is such a shame that what Jasper is going through is real life for so many young people.....I hope in your story, Edward's love and family can keep him safe!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There will be tough times to get through for the boys, but I do plan on an eventual HEA :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I have a bad feeling about this........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They will be ok for a little while longer ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

beautiful-just as awkward as a first time should be, gay or straight! I will put my vote in for Torn!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the first time ;)  And thank you for voting!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

glad Edwards parents were as understanding as he had hoped, but so worried about Jasper.........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Jasper's POV for the next chapter, so we will find out exactly what happened to him after Edward left .

Summary: Past Featured Story

BannerFans.com

 

He was sharing his lifeforce with her, his very soul, binding them together for the rest of their lives. If one died, then so would the other. They were irreversibly linked. He only hoped that she wouldn't hate him for it.

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5208 Read Count: 557
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2013 Updated: 14 Sep 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this a great idea for a story-keep it up!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

I apologize for not reviewing before, but have been reading all along...I love your Bella because she seems more real-like most of us are!!!! Thinking she is fat, or not pretty enough....So do not listen to those other reviews-I think your story is great and I am really enjoying it!

Something New by wheather79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A glimpse of how Katniss and Peeta grew closer during the Victory Tour. Drabble. Everlark.


Categories: Hunger Games
Characters: Katniss/Peeta
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 760 Read Count: 163
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2014 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it! Please do Petta's now!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  xo

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Confession and Inspection

Love your story and so glad you are back at it!

Claiming by Lilith Blood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44807
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

your story is amazing-this Christian is so much more powerful and his actions more understandable than the real 50 shades-well done!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow!

Summary:

Scorpius needs a teacher before he goes to Hogwarts. Several teachers/tutors with the best credentials and impeccable background have been hired, then rapidly fired. Enter Harry Potter, who immediately hits it off with Scorpius. It takes a while longer for the Lord of the Manor to come around. (H/D Slash)

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37626 Read Count: 812
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2014
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it-the mature Draco is to die for, absolutely love your interpretation! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

cannot wait to find out Scorpius' room color! Your grown up versions of all the characters seems so spot on....now if Draco and Harry can find out they have the same preferences! Please keep up the story-so well done!



Author's Response:

Chapter four has been posted, along with the new color of Scorpius' room!  POTTER!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

absolutely loved it! You have captured the spirit of an older Draco just as I woud have invisioned it. Cannot wait to see where you go with the rest of the story!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  I'm posting the next chapter now.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What a match! If there is only 1 chapter to go you better make it happen!!!! Please!!!!

Love it!



Author's Response:

I promise!  Posting the next chapter shortly.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG!!!!! You did an amazing job. I had my doubts on how you could bring them together so quickly (when you said only 1 chapter was left!) But it was incredible and made you feel every emotion. Needless to say, I would have loved to see this story continue, but you tied it up neatly as well, leaving it for us, as the readers, to create in our mind the future possibilities. Thank you for sharing your story, I always was enamored with Draco (bad boy and all I suppose!) It was fun to think about him again!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reading and especially for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Such a wonderful job of capturing the pain and frustration of a horrible disease....



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you so much.  What a compliment to my work!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

probably does not matter, they are all pretty teary reads for me! Your ability to convey what is going on through Bella's thoughts and Edward's description do such a great job of visualization, that it all tears at our emotions.



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much!  I feel guilty for making you so sad, but what a compliment for my writing!  As to the warnings, I have a plan that should make everyone happy.  Look for it in Monday's post.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

nice job-you did a wonderful job of conveying the seriousness of what was going on, but not so much it made us ill!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yes, it's a fine line to walk to get everyone to see what's going on without grossing you out, because that's certainly part of what happens.  I'm glad it worked for you!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

intrigued with your story and where it will lead-well written!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you're along for the ride!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The banner for this story is just gorgeous! It really pulls you in-



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's the work of beffers87--isn't she awesome?

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

love this story-your insightfulness is amazing! To be able to convey what a character is thinking and processing is so critical to a good story and you are doing it so well!



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much!  What a lovely compliment!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

whoa-no HEA for this one, Edward is really sick, but I know you have been insinuating that all along. He just looks so damn good in the banner! It is good to hear something real for a change with no Prince charming ending. thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Erm...if you really want to know one way or the other, please see chapter two.  If not, then read on in suspense!  Yes, Edward is really in a bad place, and I've tried very hard to make this as real as possible.  Thanks for reading, and reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

so so good! Great to get to know Edward-you did so well showing us how words can tell us so much ......



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much!  I'm glad my words painted such a picture for you!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

very sweet....



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

just Yummy! Not sure that is the best way to describe it, but first words that came to mind. So tender.....



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'll take yummy!  Given the other content of this story, it's so nice to hear words like "yummy" and "hot" instead of sadness and tears.  Even I need a break once in a while!  So glad you enjoyed it!  :)

Chosen Mate by Mistress Minx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Hermione , Harry, and Ron have been camping in the Forrest of Dean while horicurx hunting. Ron says the dreaded Dark Lord's name and suddenly they are being surrounded by snatchers. They split up hoping for a better chance of escape and Fenrir Greyback is the one that captures Hermione. Only to decide that she will make a wonderful mate for him.      Fenrir/ Hermione 

 

 


Categories: Harry Potter, Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Other Male Character
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50558 Read Count: 3830
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2015 Updated: 16 Sep 2018
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

am really enjoying your story!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So happy to find this story again! I remember starting it on Fanfiction and then never being able to find it again!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story! so glad I found it again!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so good!!!!

Night Train by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's been doing pretty well after getting through that rough patch. Moved across the country, owns her little house, has a pretty good job, and discovered a fascination with watching trains. Life was good, though a little dull. She should have realized the supernatural was never far behind. Written for the 2016 BiT Awards at BetterinTexasFiction. Collaborator: rissbenzo. Peter/Bella

Title: Night Train

Author: GeezerWench  

Characters / Pairing: Bella / Peter 

Genre: romance, action, drama, humor  

Rating: MA / NC-17

Beta/Pre-Reader: none 

Banner by: GeezerWench 

Words: n/a

Prompt/inspiration: rissbenzo

Work in Progress

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.

A/N: With much prompting and encouragement from rissbenzo, I started writing. Entered the first chapter in the Better in Texas Fiction 2016 BiT Awards.

Charlie Hunnam as Peter Whitlock

Kristen Stewart as Bella Swan

Billy Burke as Charlie Swan


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23891 Read Count: 6226
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2016 Updated: 28 Mar 2017
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Night Train Chapter 5

you are laying the groundwork for so many possible directions and ideas-cannot to read where you decide to take this-



Author's Response:

Yeah, this could shoot off into so many places. I'll attempt to control myself and stick to the little plan in my head for now. And try to give rissbennett what she wants!

 

Thanks for reviewing!

 

GeezerWench

Summary:

Post-War - When a healer proposes an unorthodox idea of therapy to the Golden Trio and Draco Malfoy, they really have no choice but to accept. The War is over, but it has left scars on them all, some known and unknown. Will they all be able to open up about their most private thoughts and feelings brought on by war and their upbringings? Not only to themselves, but to one another?


Categories: After Hogwarts, Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Ginny Weasley, Hermione/Ron Weasley
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35841 Read Count: 828
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2016 Updated: 28 Oct 2016
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

so sad..... great chapteer though!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

we need to hear more about Astoria please!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

this is getting interersting!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ron is stil the insensitive clod as always, poor Draco-and i love your Scorpius!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

no! Still seems like there is so much more story to be told....



Author's Response:

There is more! There will be about seven more chapters. Don't worry - I'm just writing more chapters for you now! Thanks for all the reviews :D

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

not sure where this chapter is leading, but I am sure will all play out as I read on!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

just wish chapters were a little longer-but am so enjoying reading about these guys, they are such great characters! Keep it up!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

some precious family time for all-love Draco and little Scorpius

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

excited for updates!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I feel so sorry for them all, but that is what life is, not all sunshine and roses and they survived a war....and so much more for Draco. You are doing a great job getting into their feelings and developing them for the reader! well done

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

excited about this story!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love the characterization-so spot on!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Scorpius is adorable-and Dahdee-ahhh Draco!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

so spot on with these entries!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

now some real meat to the story-this is great!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

the journal entries add so much to their background thoughts and understanding the characters-well done

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor Draco (but his pain and your depiction of it is what makes this a great story!)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

glad Narcissa is still there for him-

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great story!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

so sad, but glad we were told the whole story!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well done