Reviews by frekles
Blood Ties by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

blood
She winced as he pressed her against a tree, the bark digging painfully into her back. She shuddered as he pressed his nose against the column of her throat. She struggled ineffectually against his superior strength. He didn't even look like he was trying. "Hold still, Granger," he murmured against her neck. "Let me go!" she snarled. "I don't know what kind of sick game this is but I don't want to play." "This is no game, Mudblood," he replied, his tongue lapping against her skin.

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Horror, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41446 Read Count: 72567
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2012 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

glad things are working out!

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

yes!!!!  well done

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

interesting story line-glad to see A good Draco!

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

the evil one appears......

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

haha  loved the ending!  I love Draco!!!!

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

glad it was Snape-he would make the most sense-always sofer at heart than outside appearances. Not sure about Dracos power. With their ability to apparate (or whatever that is called) it seems kinda useless, but not all vampires have power.....cannot wait for more!

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I think he will handle it as well as he did in the book-even though in the book, I do not think he realized it as soon, and was certainly not told. Interested in hearing your take of this!

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Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

glad Harry seems pretty understanding.......

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

love her growing attachment to Draco!!!!!!

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

oh Sirius- you are such the rogue!

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Draco to the rescue!

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

your stories do not sound the same!  Keep up the good work-I love them!0


Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Well done!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

it keeps getting better and better!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

love it! It just gets better and better! Thank-you for sharing this with us. Your hardwork and time spent are greATLY APPRECIATED!

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

so sorry for all of your bad news.....love the chapter and so anxious to see how this turns out!

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

awwww it was meant to be-perfect! Thank you for the update! Hope things are going better..........

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

excitement plus!

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Date: 08 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

awwwwwwwww  love it!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

here we go!

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

wow-absolutely love your story

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Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

go get him Mione! (and please let Draco be safe!)

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Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue

awww I like it too!  Only fitting for Harry to join their world....Now Iwant more for him to find his mate!  A typical author leaving their endings always open for another related story!  Really enjoyed it-will miss it-but will watch for your other stories as well!

Summary:

dam


Hermione didn't know what to expect when she was summoned to the Minister's office. She definitely didn't think that she'd be sent on the assignment of a lifetime. And she certainly didn't expect to catch the attention of the most infamous prisoner to ever grace the cells of Azkaban, Draco Malfoy. A Dramione Couple's Remix...


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Drama, Mystery, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5405 Read Count: 1288
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sounds like an interesting story!  I am intrigued!

Hurt by TheSongSmith Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Seth is attacked and left to die in the woods. Who would do this to him, and what happens when a certain vampire follows a trail of temptation to the broken boy? Will his attacker find him and finish the job, or will a new bond protect him from harm?

 

WARNINGS: Some adult language, violence. M just to be safe.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60841 Read Count: 3417
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 22 Jul 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great story line

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Help

interesting pairing-2 of my favorites-Seth and Jasper!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

interested in where this is going????????

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love Seth  love Jasper- am really enjoying your story!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow-this is a crazy story!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

love your story-so different from anything else I have read.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

love it! so sweet, but has me thinking what all of this could mean!

United We Fall by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary:

 

A bizarre twist of fate throws Jacob into a turmoil. Can he find a way for his life to be worthwhile, or is he doomed to misery and unfulfilment?

NB. If you like my awesome banner and would like one for yourself, it was kindly made for me by Mina Rivera, I know she would be happy to make you one too :)

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144329 Read Count: 11376
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

awww together at last......



Author's Response:

Thank you for readng - glad you're enjoying it so far :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

gotta love Jasper, the voice of reason and cupid himself, mr. emo man.....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I was pleased to bring Jasper back into the story :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

awwwwwww loved it!!!!!!!!! simple and sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SP

 

When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Visiting the Cullens

pine cones????????



Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!! I don't even want to know what Emmett is going to do with those!

Summary: Past Featured Story

reveal


Ever wondered why Draco never revealed Harry to Bellatrix when they were captured? Maybe it was because of one steamy night...


Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2018 Read Count: 413
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2012 Updated: 31 Oct 2012
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!

Summary:

moon

The prequel to The Moon Series Part One: Full Moon. Draco has been punished in a horrible way for his failure on top of the Astronomy Tower. What he didn't realize was just how much the event was going to change his life. Dark fic starring werewolf Draco...


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3191 Read Count: 826
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2012 Updated: 31 Oct 2012
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it!  very well done!

Perfect by cullens_pet Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

BannerFans.com

"Don't," I cut her off cruelly. I stood to leave and then turned back toward my broken witch. "Know this, Hermione. You are mine. You've always been mine. And I will wait for you until you realize it." Draco has fallen in love against his better judgement. Angsy one-shot from his POV.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Angst, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2743 Read Count: 698
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahhhhhhhh love it!

Incomplete by cullens_pet Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

BannerFans.com Excerpt: I steeled my resolve and calmed my nerves. I was about to stop her wedding. She might never forgive me for it, but I had to let her know. Just one last time. Sequel to Perfect. Rating for language and adult themes. An angsty story with a happily ever after...


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Angst, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1952 Read Count: 510
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahhhhhh  so sweet, how I love Draco! You do so well with him-every side-every feeling in your different stories! thank you!

Reunited by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary:

 

Sequel to "United We Fall". If fate united two hearts with the strength of an Imprint, can that connection be powerful enough to transcend death? Two boys meet in the future, discovering through a number of moments of deja vu that they have always been meant for each other.  

Banner by Mina Rivera - if you like this and the one on my story United We Fall, please ask, Mina would be happy to make you one!

REUNITED WON 2ND PLACE IN THE 'BEST SLASH' CATEGORY OF THE NON-CANON AWARDS, APRIL 2013.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123757 Read Count: 7439
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow-this was a big chapter with lots of information as things are moving along. Always loved the idea of Leah and Embry.  Only Embry could soften her hard heart....Really enjoyed this one-especially the shower!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the update - and the shower scene! :)

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow-so many memories! They are getting close now, so interested to find out how you are going to take this. Cannot wait for more! PLEASE do not have Edward really trying to kill himself........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - at least they are talking now. Next update will probably be at the weekend :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Reunited

really enjoying your story! Cannot wait to hear about when they finally talk and compare dreams.....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They are going to start talking in the next chapter after a little bit more drama :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thank goodness for Jacob.....so many young adults take safety for granted.....now maybe jacob and Edward will talk!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They will finally start talking in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

beautiful!  Feel so sorry for Edward and his parents though. Thank you so much for the nice Friday surprise!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the early update :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love following your stories! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoy them :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

so glad their relationship is going well.......love the story!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

nooooooooooo!!!!!!!! how could you do this to us!!!!!!!!!! Anxious to hear what is wrong.........these two are the best.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sorry for the cliffie ;) Next chapter will be up at the weekend.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

sad............but beautiful



Author's Response:

Thank you for readng :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

thank goodness!!!!! I would miss you too much!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks :)  Thank you for reading this one, and I'm aiming to have the first chapter for the final part done for the weekend :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you have peeked my interest for sure. Enjoyed your other story, but this one has me even more interested and curious!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy this one as much as its predecessor :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

was happy to see an update so soon!  Now want more! love your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

dying to hear if Edward has had any of these visions!?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Jacob will talk to him about his own dreams soon as he's dying to know as well :) Thank you for reading.  

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow-the story unfolds! You are doing a wonderful job with this-cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

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Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

awwwwwwww-this is great!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

poor Edward........but now that he has Jacob and his family.......loving the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like it! :)

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Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

love it! they are remembering piece by piece.......perfect!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

awwwwwww I just love your story........You are not rushing things but making it so much more real. You just have us hooked to keep coming back for more. Very well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much glad you're enjoying :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am so glad that you did not make it easy for them....this seems so much more real. I love the developing relationship-you are doing a fantastic job! I love this story and look forward to the updates. I am going to go back and make sure I have reviews for each chapter-you deserve a higher review count!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying - and thank you for the extra reviews :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

fantastic story!

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love your story.....

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You officially have me hooked! I anxiously wait for every Wed and Sunday for your update! I love how their feelings are progressing. You are doing such a wonderful job with it. Now what will happen if they meet the Cullens?????????



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. They will see the Cullens soon although I'm not quite sure how soon just yet ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow-please do not have Tanya with Jasper! You keep us guessing and trying to figure out how this is headed. Just what a good story should do!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Glad I am managing to throw in a few surprised :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

      love the love...............great start with the lemons!!!!!!! but now you leave us hanging with a call from Carlisle............and who are Jasper and Emmett married to? You just keep us dying for more!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed the lemons. I couldn't resist the cliffhanger, but Carlisle's chat with the boys will be in the next chapter along with a brief mention of Jasper and Emmett's wives.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ahhhhhhh of course it is............the Carlisle update was good, but am anxious to have them get together with the Cullens and find out more. Also to learn more about Edwards connection. You just keep us wanting more, a sure sign of a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; glad to know I'm keeping people eager for more :)  Edward will find out his connection to the past one before long ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

so glad that Carlisle and Esme are being so supportive and all of jacobs's family-and love the progression of Jacob and Edward's relationship!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the developments :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ahhhhhhhh love it

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Date: 05 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

glad they are so relaxed with their past now



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the updates :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

okay-I have to fess up-I cannot stand the wait and go peek at fanfiction if you have not updated here yet! So I read this a few days ago-and loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I do always update on here at the same time as on Fanfic, but I think the alerts on this site have not worked properly a couple of times; another reader said they found the chapter by accident so it sounds like just a small error on the site. I am aiming to write 3 chapters a week now though, so if it would be unlikely to be longer than 2-3 days between them :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

gotta love Emmett and Jasper........So glad that Jake's family is so accepting.

Interested to see where you are going to head with this now, everything seems to be going so smoothly........will it last?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing again :)  There is not actually much further to go with the story and although I'm going to upset the apple cart a bit, it won't be too horrible ;)

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Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

awww what a beautiful honeymoon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed it :)

I Live by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

 

Rebelling against Edward's crushing protectiveness, Bella raced for La Push. Goal in sight, she crashed, shattering her truck and her body. Jasper, discovering Bella gravely injured and bleeding profusely, pulled her from the wreckage. Fighting the lust for her blood was only the first battle. Violence, language, adult themes. Jasper/Bella

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice/None, Bella/Jasper, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Peter/Charlotte
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 374713 Read Count: 56488
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: I Mark

love your story-sorry I did not comment on each Chap-was to interested on getting to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Not reviewing each chapter is fine, Hon. Thanks for the review you did write. I do appreciate it. Oh! And make sure you tell all your friends!

 

~MizzRick~

 

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Chapter 30 has been accepted by the betas. They did not hate chapter 29. However, the commas and the dialog tags ...

 

*growl* is NOT a dialog tag. You'd think I'd learn.

 

*sigh*

 

An excerpt from

 

Chapter 30, I Fit

 

Jasper's POV

 

 Bella taking off into the wilds again worried me, despite the fact she was chasing Emmett. I knew he would look out for her - when he wasn't too preoccupied with trying to keep her from biting him or removing parts.

 

Trouble was you never knew where a human might happen to show up; even at night. They were always getting themselves hopelessly lost, stuck in crevasses, attacked by wild animals, caught in avalanches, drained by vampires ...

 

One good thing about chasing her down was it gave me the opportunity to check for the presence of any other vampires. Each time we had run through the national forest, I hadn't picked up any trace of another. If anyone else had, they would have mentioned it. We didn't perform perimeter checks like we should, and I couldn't currently do it, unless I took Bella with me. It didn't really seem like an option for me.

 

Though it became dark quickly as we entered the cover of the trees, Rosalie veered off to the right and grabbed what looked like a rag out of a clump low bushes. "Emmett's t-shirt ripped to shreds," she said with annoyance and tossed it away. "I wonder if we'll find an arm or a foot out here." She grumbled. "Or maybe even his head."

 

"Serves him right for being a stupid d*ck. I told him to get the hell out." Remembering his attempts at interrupting Bella and me was cranking up the anger a notch or two. I did recall our little birds-n-bees talk, and he had made a few valid points, but when your mate, who had been rejecting you, came right out and said she wanted you ... well, you didn't pass that sh*t up, I didn't care who you were. I couldn't get my hands on her fast enough. Though, next time, I thought I might start ripping clothes off first thing. I expected a next time very soon, too.

 

Well, I hoped there was a next time in the near future.

 

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Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 30: I Fit

what a great chapter! love how you are developing the characters as Bella continues to adjust to her new life........and as always-love JASPER!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Hon. Glad you like it. And Jasper? What's not to love?

Thanks for reviewing!

~MizzRick~

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Chapter 30, I Teach

Carlisle's POV

"Not that there have been any studies of vampire biting behavior - my knowledge is merely empirical and anecdotal - but biting, in some cases, is related to kissing and all it entails, along with that compulsion we have to mark or claim our territory." Warming to my subject, I continued eagerly. "Biting releases venom onto the skin and into the other vampire's system. This serves three purposes. Venom on the skin places your scent on them, and venom in the other vampire's system will alter their scent to a degree. As you know, venom leaves scars and marks the other vampire as your mate. So, along with scent, it is a visual cue to others. However, in Jasper's case, his many scars show that he has fought and won many battles. They are a warning to others that he is dangerous and vampires instinctively fear him."

Bella shifted her fingers slightly and peered from between them. "But he doesn't make me afraid."

"That's because he is your mate. He looks like a strong, capable male to you. To others, he may appear very strong but that makes him something to be avoided. Like in the animal kingdom, any elk or deer that has lived long enough to grow a large set of antlers has shown that he is not to be trifled with. Other bucks will avoid him, except the occasional male who feels the urge to challenge him, and does will find him attractive."

A very low growl began to rumble in Bella's chest. "But I don't want other does to find him attractive."

I chuckled lightly. "In my experience, most female vampires who have met Jasper have been initially wary of him."

She turned toward me and her hands dropped to grip her thighs. Her eyes narrowed, and she hissed. "Initially? THEN what did they do?"

Seeing that Bella was becoming angry, I tried to ease her concerns. "As you know, Jasper is quite handsome and ..."

Snatching her hands from her thighs, they curled into fists, and she hissed again through her clenched teeth. "Handsome? He's f*cking beautiful." Her eyes narrowed to mere slits. "Then what did they DO, Carlisle?"

 

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Eternally United by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

Third and final part of the United trilogy. Jacob and Edward's careers are about to begin and a new home awaits them. Everything seems perfect until an event threatens to snatch away their hopes and dreams. Are they destined for heartbreak, or will fate step in again to give them their happy ending?

The awesome banner is by Mina Rivera


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123564 Read Count: 4629
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2013 Updated: 07 Aug 2013
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Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

hope all is ok with Jacob-why the wierd fears???



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Jacob is fine, it was just a normal fear most people get when they have an operation coming up ;)

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow-great job with all of the emotions written into this chapter-you had me crying!!!!!! And while we all want everything to be fine quickly, I fully realize it is much more real when things must progress gradually......well done



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm happy it came across so well, although sorry for making you cry! There is still more sadness to come ;)

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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

so good!!! I love them!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed :)

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Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

progress......a long road......but definitely worth it!!!!!! Loved the chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the update :)

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Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

awww some good loving!  thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the update :)

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

you keep teasing us!!!!!!!Come on Jacob!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, sorry! Next chapter, I promise. Thank you for reading :)

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Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

their progress makes me smile...........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It'll be slow, but at least they're going in the right direction :)

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

had a feeling this was going to happen........poor Edward.......



Author's Response:

It will get worse before it gets better. Thank you for reading :)

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Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

you are breaking our hearts here.........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Sorry it's so sad at the moment :(

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Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

come on wolf genes!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. He'll get there eventually ;)

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Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I thought in the Twilight books, the presence alone of the Cullens caused the first of the pack to phase........but then shouldn't Jacob have already? So much to worry about!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. That was certainly the case in Twilight, but this is the United trilogy and things are different - veggie vamps don't cause wolves to phase, Edward can't mind read unless he can see the person in question and there are a lot of other differences throughout the trilogy.

Anyway, there is certainly more drama on the horizon and the next few chapters should have a lot going on :D

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow-cool description of the first phasing by the new wolves......now if just Jacob would get riled up a little........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing - glad you enjoyed the phasing. Poor Jake. But he gets some drama in the next chapter :)

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Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG  what a start, my heart is breaking..............please let a Cullen be near enough to hear and to start their lives in a different direction????? But what about Jacob's family....so sad I knew the happy ending at the end of the last story was to good to be true!!!!!  on a second note-so glad to see this started so soon.....I was missing your stories.....  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sorry or the awful cliffhanger ;)  They will be found in the next chapter. Hope you enjoy what I have in store.

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Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

glad Edward is making such yummy progress! Jacob is being so patient with him.....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - they're getting there slowly :)

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ohhh boy-hope Edward can handle this and they can get him back to casa Cullen!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It'll be a dramatic exit from PA, certainly :)

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Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes! Such a positive ending to a near disaster----Go Edward!!!!!!! and jacob is certainly his savior......such a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. The pair will always be each other's rocks. I'm glad you're enjoying this.

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh Jacob, if only it could be easy...and Edward, so much to worry about. They love each other so much, what a great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; the boys do have a tough time ahead to deal with ;)

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

is th phasing close????? Glad they worked out their probles...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Phasing isn't too far off ;)

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Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

YES! but please remember who you are Jacob-and who you love! Great job keeping us on the edge of our seats!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the suspense :)

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Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

glad the imprint worked-Jacob has so much to deal with, I understand his struggles....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; poor Jacob will have a tough time for a little while but at least he got what he wanted at last :)

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Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

YES! Glad you ended on a positive note-pretty heavy stuff with Wolf................



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - things will be on the up now for everybody for a while, Wolf and Zara included :)

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Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

YES! So glad our boys could finally be together the way they were suppose to be! Great lemony chapter! Nicely written "wink"!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the lemons :)

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Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

glad life is more normal for them now-so is the story coming to a close or do you still have sme twists for us?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There are one or two twists left yet and a few more chapters before we come to the end :)

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

love how you have developed the character of Wolf and so glad to see you show what a good teacher can do (Edward).......I am a teacher too!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like Wolf - he's a great character to write. You are in good company being a teacher, with Edward :)

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Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

love this story line..........you are doing such a great job with it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

been on vacation.......enjoying catching up. I am now in love with Wolf..........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you like Wolf, he's one of my favourites since he's a descendant of Paul ;)

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

now what is Aro up to? Oh what a tangled web you weave.......