Reviews by frekles
Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so sweet!  Did you guys actually write this? Just kidding, love your stuff...all of it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

loved it! While it would have been nice to know what Bella and Jake have been up to, It is nice to see how Fuckward has been..............I am glad to see you have not given up on this story, you two are the best!

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Diversion: Jacob's POV

love your story!!!!!!!!! just spent the last 3 days reading it al!

High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: 25. A new order

What a creative wonderful story!  In all that I have read, this went in a direction that I have not seen that really captured the essence of how I also felt about the true destiny of this band of vampires. I agree that Breaking Dawn went a little wierd for me. This was incredible!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: 25. A new order

Bravo!!! Great story and I agree, a much more satisfying ending then Breaking Dawn.

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

Absolutely love your story! I have made it almost halfway through what you have done so far and have to force myself to put it down to get something else done. You writing is so vivid and descriptive, and the emotions really let you feel the characters. Plus I love this version of Edward and Bella. I have read other stories where Bella goes back in time and they always jump in each others arms way to fast to be real. I mean while we all would like to believe in love at first sight, we know that is not reality. Not for a truely meaningful relationship. This story is so much more realistic and yet holds true to their images created in the book. Fantastic job! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Wow - what a wonderful review! Thank you so much - and I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! :-)

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

ahhhhhhh! this cannot be how it goes?  Why did she come back at all?

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper

you just contiue to amaze me. Your ability to describe and capture emotions is as good or better than any published romance writer I have ever read. You are the real deal here and do not need to stick with Stephanie's characters to get the feelings across. I absolutely love this story though, so please finish it before you head into something else! Then I am sure you have already captured a  million fans just waiting to read what you do next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much - what a lovely review! :-)

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions

Love the sexy Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anxious to hear more about Alice-is she feeling herself being changed during that same time period somewhere else? Will she change too?



Author's Response:

Hmmm... Alice's troubling vision will be explained in the next few chapters...

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Of Dancing and Dark Alleys

please do not let Alice get the flu!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

What's happening to Alice will be explained in the next chapter... :-)

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

absolutely lovvvvvvved the "heart and soul" on the piano part-giggle

but did not see the murder accusation coming wow-how does she think Carlisle can help? He can not go after James, that would mess up Alice's future...I am so confused!-great story line by the way, keeping us guessing!



Author's Response: Hee hee... glad you enjoyed the little piano lesson. ;-) As for how Carlisle can help... and what's happened to James... that will all be addressed in the next chapter. Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! Bring it on!!!!!!!!!!!!You just keep us dying for more and I can not wait for the games to begin. You are truely a tease...for us as well as Edward and Bella.  I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LoL! I know... I am a tease... but I hope you're at least having fun! :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

yes!One chapter of such extreme tease was really all I could take!!! lol !!! Loved the chapter, loved the little tidbits of history that you threw in (historical fiction is really my favorite genre next to romance!) Excellent as always and dying for more. I can not tell you how many times I checked for the update yesterday.....it's okay, I know you have a life besides writing for us and I do really appreciate your dedication and consistancy. I really enjoy the teasers on fictionaters on Monday, it keeps me going! Lots of things to think about before next week...Carlisle,  Edward's parents, what will Edward and Bella do now that it is official...........can't wait!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I know you warned us....and at least it is not something to worry about.....just the ultimate tease to what we have been waiting for, for the last 22 chapters!!!!!!!!! Loved every word as always. I cannot believe Edward took her seriously , but then again, I am not so sure he did. We all know the brain of an almost 17 year old boy and what he was thinking about had nothing to do with what Bella was saying. So I have a feeling that Bella has not really achieved what she wanted yet. We shall see. Now on to the good stuff!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

of course, perfect allibi! But if Edwards parents come visit, what if they bring the virus out with them....that would not be good....my what a web you weave!(makes for a great story of course)



Author's Response:

*trying to keep all the strings of the web straight* Weaving is tough! Lol!

Thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

sweeeeeeeet the moment we have all been waiting for-(and I did not mean at the ceremony!) well done

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the real life Edward and Bella, yes we all love and fight and make up................You make it all so real and so sweet!!!!!!!!!!Love it!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

of course he would not deny them, she had to know that was coming....ahhhhhhhh..I hope there is at least some twist for us, I do not want for him to catch it and just die after all.........

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

wow.....so cool

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

oh  my  god........I had wondered how this would end......but this is perfect.....what a great full length story.....and the best thing is-still a chapter to go!  You are bringing it to the finish so well, unlike so many other fanfics I have read that have great beginnings but just cannot pull it all together in the end...

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

loved it!!!!!!! such a gentle ending-filled with tenderness and love-perfect!

Summary:

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"Grrraaannngggeeerrrrr...." his voice called tauntingly. He was close. Too close. I ran faster, looking for somewhere to hide. I threw myself behind the first object I came across. "You can run, but you can not hide.."


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2444 Read Count: 2544
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it-wish you would continue. What happens now that they are mated?

Summary:

ihl

Kim Graystone has had a crush on Jared Thail since she was ten years old. However, to him she is invisible. That is, until Jared begins changing. As he changes, so does the relationship Kim never thought she'd have with him. As years go by the two fight to over come many challenges.

 

Disclaimer: I do not own Stephanie Meyer's characters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102235 Read Count: 4846
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Apr 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Sunbeam

nothing new to read so figured I might as well try your other story. I love it! I am enjoying the different characters, (that is one of the great things about your stuff) and the deeper look into the whole imprint thing. Plus it is so sweet! 



Author's Response:

glad your enjoying it frekles! this story was my first i call it my baby haha. its a long one but keep at it, hope you like the ending.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- Night of Firsts

okay, definately can use some more emotions and details in the sex scene.................



Author's Response:

haha im gonna try and do that in my second story. the first one i wasnt as brave, im not holding back now though

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70- Seventy Years

loved the ending.....so sweet

You covered so much time in this story, more details in some parts would have added but I know when the thoughts are going in your head it is hard not to just get them all down. Keep up the writing, you will just continue to get better and better!



Author's Response:

 glad you liked it!. it may not be much but its my first story ever and itl always be special for that. i'm posting a chapter on the other today hopefully.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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An evil Volturi experiment, Werewolves and Vampires, Imprints, and our favorite clumsy girl. This will be a much different Twilight story...Summary is in the first page, so click it!

Disclaimer: I do not own Stephanie's characters as you all know. I hope you enjoy!

fs

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141698 Read Count: 16318
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- Come True

ahhhhhhhhh!!! I had almost fogotten about this side of the story. Way to keep us guessing!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49- I'm On It

wow-had not expected that and yet it all clicked in-good work!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Let Me Go

growing up his hard on everyone, you did a great job with this. Please let Jake back soon though!!!!!!!! ps I read the whole story today-and am really enjoying a different version of the story then I have ever seen!



Author's Response:

thank you so much! this one hasn't been liked as much as my first one. i'm glad your enjoying and yes jake will return soon.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Bang Bang Bang Bang

wow!!!!!! Fantastic chapter.  As a parent that survived her kids teen years you really nailed this one. Well done. Your story and writing is just getting better and better with every chapter.  Now a cliffie   aaaaaaaaaaaaa! do not leave us hanging long!



Author's Response:

glad to hear i got it right. my mom said my teen years werent too hard on her so i was worried i wouldnt be good at that part. you wont be hanging long, im writing today.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- Vamanos Vamanos

yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!can not wait for more. Thank you for the quick updates!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- You Made Me Whole

ahhhhhhhhhhh so sweet. I am a sucker for happy stuff. Nice job! Good luck with finals. I will be watching for updates. Thanks for not leaving us hanging!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Snap Outta It

love seeing the fight in Rev!  It is great not to see the girl just bow down to the wishes of the boy, even if she does care so much. Honesty is so important. Great chapter!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Be Here

last sentence a little off but good talking between Jake and Rev.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- I Knew I Forgot Something

yeah!  okay, we are ready for this story to get to the rating it has been placed in!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- Hit Me

aaaaaaa! I hate cliffies!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Remove His Head From His Body

awwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand

sweet...........

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand

sweet...........

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- Fight or Flight

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!  Suspense is great!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts

enjoying the new direction this is taking-the wolves to Volterra!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts

enjoying the new direction this is taking-the wolves to Volterra!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- I Come To You In Pieces

love the details you are giving on the connections of the imprint, I have not read enough about Jake and Revi or Nessie to see anything on this.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- I Come To You In Pieces

love the details you are giving on the connections of the imprint, I have not read enough about Jake and Revi or Nessie to see anything on this.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You

sweet, but wait, you said she was created from a vampire and half vampire. Did you not mean vampire and human? Was Teegan or Edward a half vampire? I am confused.....but glad they have her back.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You

sweet, but wait, you said she was created from a vampire and half vampire. Did you not mean vampire and human? Was Teegan or Edward a half vampire? I am confused.....but glad they have her back.



Author's Response:

i just noticed that too. thats a mistake on my part i meant a human and a vampire. i must have been thinking of revi being the half vamp and screwed up. good eye

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35- Can’t Get Rid Of Us That Easily

sounds good  but why are they staying in Italy? And I forgot, how are Caarlisle and Esme connected to them?



Author's Response:

they were staying in italy because carlisle happened to be there and hes a doctor. they couldnt travel without getting revi checked out. i introduced carlisle in chapter 29 as an olf friend of alice and jaspers, that revi also knew as a child. hope that clears stuff up

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Before Us, None and After Us, None

sweet................

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41- Stumbling

I like it-definitely the way to start them off. Enjoying the frequent updates!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43- What I Was Missing, Is You

oh boy, now the fun begins!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46- No Thinking At Bellarmine

wow, that is creepy about the dorm. Love the way this is playing out. Always glad to see a story where Bella and Edward do not just jump into each others arms, but take some time.....

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47- Not A Fan

yeah ! some progress here?  I hope, but loving the tension too !

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52- Woo Girl

awwwwwwwwww keep trying Edward!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55- Something Wrong, That Feels So Good

sounded good

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56- It's A Hop, Skip, And A Leap

it's about time Jacob!!!!!!! I still cannot get used to Jacob and Edward getting along, I guess I am following too many stories at the same time!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61- Let's Not, And Say We Did

great chapter, loved the thoughts and actions. Sorry I have not reviewed lately but I have been reading each chapter! Keep up the good work-cannot wait for the big showdown.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76- Tearing Wail

can't they put him back together??????????? I guess not in your vampire world. Oh I always had a special spot for Jasper.........

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63- It Is Time

uh oh............I liked your way of having Charlie guess more than the books did, many things should have been more obvious, I agree with you!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66- Fight For The Magic, Not The Norm

sweet....I like Bella's thinking. Nice thought processing. Good work!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77- Our Lives Depend On Each Other

wow-did not see that direction coming. I thought Alec was working separate from the Volturi?



Author's Response:

yes in my world they cant but a vampire back together, i should have clarified that once the heads off, game over.

 

and alec is still a part of the volturi, he just is watching them on his own. this will be explained in a upcoming chapter

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67- It Was The Best Of Times

awwww cute-now lets get some action!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68- The Nightmare Became The Dream

sweet-good change

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69- The Whole Me, The Whole Us

sweet  : )

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70- Mirrors

uh oh........alec is back to avenge Jane....trouble!!!!!!!! Enjoyed the update!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71- Never Again

want some details! sorry, I know, keep it clean, but it does carry a rating for more!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73- Stranger, But Stronger

Love it! Bring on the wedding!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74- Perfect in it's Imperfections

sweeeeeeet!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75- I'll Show You Mad

Noooooooooooooo! I do not know which would be worse! (I was always a little team Jasper at heart)

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80- Moment of Completion

loved the ending, kinda tying things up..well done



Author's Response:

thank you

Haunted by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Draco has waited for years to claim her for his own. He has a plan and nothing the Head Girl does is going to stop him. Originally a one-shot song fic that due to demand has been expanded into a full story.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16310 Read Count: 9208
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 12 May 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so cool!!!  I always had a thing for Draco. I think this is going perfectly!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

but why wouldn't Draco have followedher, maybe he knew she needed to talk to Harry....

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love it! Cannot wait to see how you continue the story!! I have been so immersed in everything Twilight, this is getting me back in the HP frame of mind for the next movie coming out!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

loooooooove Draco too!  Please continue the story!

Summary:

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The newest Malfoy may not be in Slytherin but he still hates Ron Weasley. Scorpius is nothing like his father, however. When he finds something he wants, he takes it. He's got his sights set on Hermione Weasley and she won't escape!


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Scorpius Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46467 Read Count: 18224
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
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Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

luv the malfoys! great story!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ahhhhh I love Draco! He really is trying so hard......

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love Christmas! What a great touch! You were right, we did need a little fluff! Now on to some serious business!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

this helped alot with visualizing what is happening.....will be waiting anxiously for youe update!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow-that was fantastic!!!!!!  now----time for Draco!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle and Esme are the foundation of the Cullen Coven.  However, this love story started as a tragedy for Esme -- a loveless marriage, the death of her baby and finally an attempt at suicide.  This story traces how Carlisle and Esme eventually find each other and fall in love.  It weaves together Carlisle's and Esme's bio facts provided to Twilight Lexicon by Stephenie Meyer with some original ideas. Canon! Rated R for later lemon content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49807 Read Count: 3984
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Secrets

absolutely love this story. I have not read anyone that has gone this direction before and you do such an excellent job of filling in the story and fitting it so well with the characters and what an avid reader of the series would expect them to be like. I love your attention to detail and all of the "little things" that some writers neglect that are so very important to a good story. I cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Frekles (Lost reference??? or just your nickname?).  I'm so glad you like this story.  It has my heart and soul.  From what you wrote, I think you will like the rest of the story -- a lot of blanks are filled in and the details are fun.  Stay tuned, updates will be (in most cases) weekly, I promise.

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Chase

aaaaaaah! Esme's husband as a human!



Author's Response:

Hmmm, not such a big cliffie I guess (lol), but what happens was soooo fun to write!!  Thanks for leaving a comment!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Decisions

My only consolation is I know she wil come back!!!!!!!! But so glad the mean husband is out of the picture.....oh sweet Esme, you are writing her story so well!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  I haven't found a single person upset with me doing-in Charles!!  And I have to admit, I was so excited to get to the happy parts, I don't keep Esme away long.  So for those who love lots of angst, this IS NOT the story for them (lol).

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Dance

beautiful and just as SM would have them be. I think you did a great job of bringing ou details to the gentle, sensual, strong characters that Esme and Carlisle are.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Sorry no chapter posted on Friday -- RL got the best of me -- but the story is really moving along quickly and I promise a chapter this Friday.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254869
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

what did he have her write?  it has to be good!!!!!!! Loved their "practice" loved the lemons!



Author's Response:

You'll find out what she had to write.. soon

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you ...lml

            Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placinghis hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

 

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

loved it!



Author's Response:

Good,,,I loved writing it, thanks for the comment  ...lml

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh-all bad over shadowed with the L word. So glad they finally both admitted it!



Author's Response:

Yeah, they know what they have is special...thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Volturri have departed and life goes on for the Cullens and the pack. Renesme is growing up and Jacob is growing deeper and deeper in love. Their love is magical, but how with the magical world respond to it. What happens when Nahuel returns to fight for his percieved destiny? And can the Volturi survive a betrayal and a parting that will ally some with the Cullens and make others forever their enemies?

 I have the best Beta- daring2believe...You rock girl!

Thank you Moonlit-Dreams for the amazing banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50993 Read Count: 2294
[Report This] Published: 26 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Tribe-Chapter 1

What a great beginning!  I am overjoyed to read something different then the same old Bella/Edward stuff. Your writing is so well done, easy to follow but filled with emotions and details!  Anxious to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome Home-Chapter 2

awwww....  so cool. Glad Rosalie is even coming around!



Author's Response:

Time heals all things, even Rosalie. :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

a little bit of Aunt Alice in her!!!!



Author's Response:

Perhaps... but wait and see. It is explained.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Imprint 101-Chapter 5

so sweet to see that Edward and Jake have come the full circle-

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Coupled Off-Chapter 6

yes! she knows!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Growth-Chapter 7

yes-now for the good stuff!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Sunshine Can Burn-Chapter 12

interesting direction with this-Aro on the good side?

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Thirst and Addiction - Chapter 22

this story is so fascinating, interesting,  thought provoking!  I have been reading it all day after starting this morning. Not much accomplished today! Cannot wait to have more. Hope RL lets you get more written for us!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. I hd to walk away for a while, but am determined to complete it now. Thank you for the encouragement.

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Sharing Strength - Chapter 23

so cool!



Author's Response:

Glad you approve. Hope it keeps meeting your expectations

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner

Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19759
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 11 Nov 2010
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: With Flying Colors

love this side of Edward!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ouch that had to hurt!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar

hot!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ok-no ideas........but that was hot!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Enlisting of a Rose

can not wait to see what Rose comes up with!

Summary:

SEQUEL TO A Different Kind of Moon.  Fifteen years have passed since the fateful day that Angela Cullen (formerly Weber) was turned.  Follow her story as she recounts her adjustments to her new life as a vampire as well as becoming the newest member of the Cullen clan.  How does she really feel about her new life? Her family?  What does she want to do with the eternity that now lays before her?  Did Edward and Bella find their happily ever after?  Will Angela find love?  All this and more will be answered in Careful What You Wish For!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56150 Read Count: 4832
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2013
Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Home

ahhhhhhhhhhh! Please update soon



Author's Response:

:O) The next chapter is up now and the next one is coming soon!  Trying to post weekly!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Learning to Fly

love the new story! Something different, I am so tired of everything Edward and Bella with Jasper and Alice occasionally thrown in. Even Rsalie being such a big part is different and good. Always have loved your writing style as I also read the original story.



Author's Response: Wow!! Thank you so much for your comments! Really glad you stuck with me and followed through from ADKOM! Hoping to have a chap up a week so more coming soon! Thanks again!!