Reviews by divyvicki
Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74921
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, when u said there was trouble up ahead, I never dreamed it would be a kidNapping!  

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Date: 14 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Very realistic reaction by both of them!

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Date: 24 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love how Bella put those skanks in their place.

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Date: 25 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great honeymoon!

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Date: 25 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great one!

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved the time jump and that they are having twins.  

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Twin Boys!  They'll have their hands full now!  

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good job describing how real life can get in the way of intimacy!  

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Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

Just a great story. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532857
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

Guess Bella told Esme!  

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Date: 09 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

I had forgotten this part!  I love that she confronted Renee!

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

I love how she just gets him!  

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Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

Poor Carlisle. I almost feel sorry for the douch

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Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

I'd forgotten how well Edward's meeting with Bella's father went.  

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Date: 09 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

I had forgotten this part!  I love that she confronted Renee!

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

She should be relieved that she doesn't belong to that asshat!

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

I had forgotten this chapter!  Loved the kickball, but hope Skip can find a way to let the Fosters know u don't mess around with Skip and his family!

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

I liked Skip's idea on what to do to Alice's father!

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Date: 17 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

Glad they are back to being Skip and Be-Bella!  

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Date: 17 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I understood what u were saying about Edward being miserable!  Guess people just can't believe that he would be faithful to his Be-Bella!  

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

I hate this part of Skip, but understand it's who he is.  

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Date: 16 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

Love that he is trying, but Bella is tight to be skeptical!

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Date: 09 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream

I love how realistic u have made their relationship!  

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Date: 22 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

Great info on Aro!

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Date: 20 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

Love this family!  

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Date: 20 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity

I love reading about Bella and Skip's family!  

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Date: 25 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

This is as much fun reading the second time as it was the first!  

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Date: 26 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

This is as much fun reading the second time as it was the first!  

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Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

Great chapter.  I get the feeling there is more to this Sandy person than just curiosity!  

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Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I love that he told Bella she could enlighten Esme as payback to Carlisle!

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Date: 31 May 2017 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I love that he told Bella she could enlighten Esme as payback to Carlisle!

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Date: 02 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I love that he told Bella she could enlighten Esme as payback to Carlisle!

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Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I love that he told Bella she could enlighten Esme as payback to Carlisle!

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Date: 06 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

It's such a shame that Carlisle and Aro can't be happy!

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Date: 06 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep

Such a great story!  

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Date: 13 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

Exciting chapter!  

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Date: 13 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

Poor Edward!  I'm not sure he would survive having to off Aro and I'm sure Bella would be devastated as well!

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Date: 21 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

Wow!  Skip's dream was weird!  I'm amazed at how u come up with this stuff!

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Date: 21 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

Master intense!  

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Date: 03 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

A bit sad.  I'm furious that people are being so horrible to you!  This is a blessing that you allow us to be entertained with!  This is my second time reading this series!  It is fabulous!

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Date: 04 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

I love take charge Bella!  

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Date: 10 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

Wow!  I did not remember that Esme had Candice whacked!  

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Date: 09 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

Wonder how Carlisle convince Esme to sign those papers!

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Date: 17 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

Love that u made Skip see Twilight!  

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Date: 17 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

Love that u made Skip see Twilight!  

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Date: 17 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 44: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

Skip is right about Alex being trouble!

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Date: 23 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

I love Bella and Skip together, but Alex makes me think that Carlisle might be redeemable!

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

This was sucky a great chapter!

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Date: 26 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Someone always has to,try to make trouble for these two.

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Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Glad things are semi back to normal.

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Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

I loved the conversation between Sonny and Skip!

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

I love that she finally got to tell Renée off and bitch slap Lauren!  Wonderful chapter!

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Date: 11 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

I’m so glad to be re-reading this!  I had forgotten that Sonny got shot. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

One of the more gruesome chapters.

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

One of the more gruesome chapters.

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

One of the more gruesome chapters.

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Difficult chapter,

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Difficult chapter,

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Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One

I love reading about Skip and his boys!  

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Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Fight Club Part Two

So, Alice gets her revenge!  Good for them!  

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Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

Carlisle is such a horn dog in this!

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Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

Carlisle is such a shit!

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Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

I so want Esme gone!  

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Date: 01 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only

Wow, she really gave it to Emmett!

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Date: 01 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

I love how they are together!

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Date: 11 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Great job!

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!! 
Click to visit & vote!

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**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery!  Click to visit!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, that was intense!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Been reading this on FanFiction.net, but this chapter was removed from that site.  Glad I found it here.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for being so understanding. Chapters are all back up on FFn for now. Some edited a little. Full lemons are still only found here. 

All My Best, 

Ginnie 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That's so sad that they finally get to be together and can't stay with each other!

Game of Love by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After the death of her father, Bella inherits the Seattle Mariners. Does she have the strength to run the team? Can Edward and the gang help her? Can they fight their feelings long enough to play the game and win? AH Canon Couples..M for Lang/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31124 Read Count: 25240
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue: Change of Season

Great story!  Love Baseballward!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I started this on Fan fiction, but realized it had been moved over here.  I'm so glad it wasn't pulled entirely.  Can't wait to read more.  I love Baseballward.  It was a Twilight FanFiction Recommendation.  

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Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Changes and Chances

So lovin this!  

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Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Trials

So apparently Jacob wasn't talking to Sam as I first thought.  Wonder who he was having that disgusting conversation with and why Carlisle didn't speak up in the meeting with Sam and Jacob especially after Sam indicated there had been previous problems.  

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Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Opening Day

Glad Jacob showed his stripes so soon, but I can't believe that Sam didn't shut him down when he was discussing her in that manner in his office.  

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Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Will

Oh, Bella, u can't hide from the inevitable! 

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Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Commitments

Yeah, I was wondering the same thing!  

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Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

Great deal!  

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Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Separations

Love this story!  

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Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Reporters and Recruiters

So glad he realizes he loves her.  

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Date: 14 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: The Press

I'm glad Jacob is married.  Bella won't put up with him long.  

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Date: 14 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Reality Bites

Damn Papparazzi!  They ruin everything!  

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Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Springtime

Well, they handled that well!  

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Date: 05 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

Wow, over react much, Edward.  He was acting like a spoiled child!  

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Surprises

Oh, no!  Someone is going to cause trouble.  

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Disturbances

How very foresighted of Charlie.  Love it!  

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Changes

Well, that went well!  

Glimpses by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

 

 

 

Glimpse- noun: A very brief, passing look, sight, or view. "These are the snapshots of marriage, stopped in places."-Anne Sexton


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9448 Read Count: 4398
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- High

This was recommended by the International Twi Sisters blog.  I can see why it won in the contest and am glad u expanded it!

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Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Forever

What a wonderful description of his feelings!

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Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Flame

Another great chapter!

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222305
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2

Glad they cleared that up!

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Date: 05 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!

Interesting twist!

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Date: 05 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2

Knew that sleezball Biera would try to cause trouble!

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Date: 05 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Complete Insanity

Wow,  thought Rose wanted to help!

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Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Spring Fling Pt. 3

How wonderful of Garrett to speak up and offer to help with the Irina situation!  

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Date: 25 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Spring Fling Pt 2

Pitchers are so temperament!

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Date: 21 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Details

Hmm, glad they are concerned about Bella’s needs.  

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Date: 24 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Road Trip!

That was so funny!  

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Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4

Well, at least they know who to look out for now!

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Date: 16 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3

I’m curious as to how this is going to work!  

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Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

She is certainly open minded!