Reviews by divyvicki
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

do you plan to finish this story?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752196
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

This chapter was so different from what was posted on Fan fiction. Glad I read both. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251278
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh, my. That can't be good!  

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Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved reading that Bella had options. 

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Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I don't understand why Bella is suddenly so upset. She knew he was seeing other people.  She should believe him when he told her he hadn't been with Jessica. Hope he sues her for everything she has and black balls her. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 30: The Birth

Glad Charles finally woke up. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Well, that was solved quickly. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

I really love the way their family is coming together. 

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Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb

You made me cry, great job!

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Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So glad Charles apologized. 

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Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I so love that song by Adele. 

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Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I did enjoy this, but was a little confused as to where it fits in with the last chapter of the story. 

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Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wonderful ending!  

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Date: 06 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What a perfect moment!  

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Date: 27 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love what he said to the press!   Perfect!  

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Date: 12 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I'm so glad Edward didn't turn off the phone and she was able to hear how he really feels. 

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Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I was so afraid that Charles was going to find a way to kidnap Edward so he couldn't marry Bella and she would think he had stood her up at the altar. 

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Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

At least now we know why she thought she'd be welcome. 

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Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm glad she is letting him help her. Do we get to find out who the bimbo was and how she got up to Edward's place?

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Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

What a surprise, the old man maybe has decided he can't manipulate everyone to his bidding?

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Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Charles POV

I enjoyed reading Charles' POV. 

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was recommended to me by Paola Reyes. Very intriguing first chapter. Can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What a very emotional scene!  

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Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Seems as though he might be ready to accept responsibility for his part in this mess. 

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Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a sad chapter!  

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Date: 26 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was kind of sad. Glad he realizes what he is going to be missing if he doesn't make things right. 

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Date: 26 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, that was certainly an interesting ending to this chapter. 

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Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So, that meeting with Mother didn't go too badly. 

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Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What a vile man!  

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Date: 12 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Boy, grandpa is a piece of work!  Glad Esmeralda threw his stuff at his car! 

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is so great. 

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad he is away from that toxic environment. 

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV

Who knew that Carlisle was so devious. 

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter. 

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Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

A www, how sweet are they together. 

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I just love how he defended her and handled Jessica. 

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Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

So glad she liked the house. 

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Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So glad Bella has decided she doesn't want to fight anymore. I can't wait to see Jessica get what she deserves for causing this entire debacle with her lies. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm so excited to start another of ur stories!  Can't wait to read more.  This was recommended at the TFMU meeting in Nashville. 

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Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Glad u clarified that this wouldn't be an Alice /Bella story.   I was a little confused because I thought vampires mated for life and if Alice is mated to Jasper, how could she have feelings other than sister-like for Bella?

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Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Broken

So glad Alice decided to show herself.  

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Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I love Alice!

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Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm glad Jasper showed up so quickly!  

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Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

These chapters seem really redundant!  

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Date: 28 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

So glad she found those items before they left!

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Date: 28 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Poor Bella only she would break her leg the first month of college.  

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Is there life after true love?

So, what mythological creature is Tristan? 

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I'm wondering when Edward is going to show back up!  

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Sure wasn't expecting that!  

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Seems obvious to me that the kids with Alice reminds her of Edward

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Sure hope this is an Edward/Bella HEA!

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Well, this certainly wasn't thechapter ive been waiting for. I want the one with Edward in it!

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I'm glad u finished this story, but it is a little too far fetched. 

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Date: 28 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Family that will always be there

I love the direction this story is going!  

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Hope Edward hears the pain inthese songs and comes back!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

Well, that was unexpected!

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Date: 06 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 19: New Year, new beginnings, new discoveries.

Come onnnnnn, when does Edward get back?  

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Date: 06 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Losing a Piece of me

I hate that she was with someone else!

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Date: 06 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

Guess it's too much to hope that they will finally be together since there are so many chapters remaining!

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Date: 06 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Blissfully Unaware

I'm glad he is back with his family!  

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Perseaus

Well, that was certainly interesting!  Can't wait to see how the Cullen's handle Tanya!

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Man of Two Minds

Interesting POV!  

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Guess I'm going to have to re-read part of this as I don't remember Bella forgetting Edward!

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Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 27: You cocky bitch!

Way to go Rosie!

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Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 28: The Cracken

I thought maybe he was becoming human again!  

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Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Descending into the Darkness

So I guess we know why she was turned.  

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Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Mnemonic

Sure wish I'd know this wasn't going to be a HEA before I started reading it.  Since this is the first story of yours that I've read, I had no way of knowing.  

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Date: 08 May 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Home sweet Home

Your story and all, but I'm going to be very disappointed if she and Edward don't get back together.

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Date: 14 May 2017 Title: Chapter 32: If you love something, run away, right?

Well, that started out promising, but didn't end as I expected.  This is listed as an Edward/Bella fiction.  Sure hope they end up together as they are supposed to be!  

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Date: 23 May 2017 Title: Chapter 34: It Just Can't Be!

Well, that was u expected!  

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Date: 27 May 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.

Why would she let Tristan think the baby is his?  

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Date: 02 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Devastating Adversity

I'm pretty sure I'm not going to like the way this ends.  

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Date: 09 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Life's Little Mind Games

Since I can't say anything nice about Bella being with Tristan, I'm not going to say anything at all!  Just wanted to let u know that I'm still reading though.  

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Date: 18 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Goodbyes

Well, that was promising!  

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Date: 28 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Prodigy Child

I'm not enjoying this emo Edward at all!  

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Date: 08 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Revelations

I don't see how you can call this an Edward/Bella story if Edward and Bella aren't together!

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Date: 14 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Endings Lead to New Beginnings

Yeah, hating u is pretty much what I'm feeling right now!  I realize this is your story, but I don't see how u can list this as an Edward/Bella story when she is with someone else!  U should have just listed it as Bella, but then u probably wouldn't get as many readers!

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Date: 14 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue

Well, I won't be reading anymore of your stories if that's how u treat these beloved characters!  I thought for a brief moment that u were going to redeem yourself and let Bella and Edward have their HEA with their daughter since that meddlesome Tristan was out of the way, but Noooo! You had to go and ruin it by having Edward kill his own daughter!  It's ur story and u can do what u want with it, but I feel mislead and would never have started this had I known it wasn't about Edward and Bella getting their HEA!  I certainly won't be recommending this to anyone!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 134906
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
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Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

So, they finally showed their true colors. What hateful people!  

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Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Another great chapter. 

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Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'm glad she gets to confront those horrible men!  

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Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow, the parents really did a number on these poor kids. 

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Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was a couple of eventful chapters. 

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Date: 11 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Love that she was able to stand up to Mike and his cronies. 

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Date: 08 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Really a great story!  Thanks for sharing with us. 

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Date: 04 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What a horrible thing for that teacher to do to her. 

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Date: 04 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't think Bella is going to understand. 

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Date: 04 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She didn't handle that very well, but if anyone has the right to be angry, it would be Bella. 

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Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

That was a great chapter. 

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Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm guessing that Rose and Jasper aren't going to react well to their parents determination to keep them away from Bella. 

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Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

These kids are remarkable. It's great that they are so supportive of Bella. 

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Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What happened to Jasper and Rose's parents not wanting their children around Bella?

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Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I was reading this on Fanfiction.net, but it disappeared between chapters. Anyway, I'm glad it is over here so I can finish this wonderful story. What a horrible thing to happen to Bella, especially the hysterectomy. I hope they're able to find some of the other men involved in violating her. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It was great to hear from Edward. 

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was a touch chapter to read. Poor kid. 

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter. 

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad Bella had the idea. Can't wait to see how Emmett does in the kitchen. LOL

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Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

How horrible for Bella to have to endure that after everything else she has been through. I'm so sad u had to remove ur stories from FanFiction, but am so very grateful that they are still available on TWCS. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow, they have all been terribly abused. 

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Date: 11 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Such a great job giving us the details of Bella's horrible trial.