Reviews by Rita01tx
Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119017
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Damn paps! A plague on the people they stalk but a perverted kind of blessin' for those of us who can't get enough of a certain 35-year-old hottie who shall remain nameless *snort!*

Not sure Emmett and Rosalie will eventually join the community but it will be fun seein' their reactions at the club LOL!

As for the sicko watchin' the news, he needs a one-way ticket to hell!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Just when you think there's no such thing as guardian angels, one shows up to keep you safe *le sigh!*  I adore this Edward already! Oh, and I'd love a veeeery long vacation in his gorgeous home!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

It's not wise to underestimate Mother Nature but smart move to get everyone aboard Edward's more powerful yacht. Poor PrimaRose. Maybe she'll be found in fair shape!?

Billy Black just made the stupidest move of his long...soon to be short life!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

So relieved it was only a nightmare, although I'm still worried it might be a portent *nail bite!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Lordamercy, I was as shocked as Edward when he had to deliver baby Gracie in the back of his limo LOL! With Peter and his evil father no longer on this earth, life can only get better and better for Edward and Bella...I suspect they won't stop at 2 babies. Esme will be even more over the moon than she is now!

Hate to leave them but they'll do just fine without us, now LOL! Thanks for another fabulous story, Clo darlin'!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

After some education in the lifestyle, should they decide to pursue it, I would see Rose as the Domme and Emmett as her sub. Even if they don't, it will allow honesty in their relationships with Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Hmmm, I'm sure there must be a way for "him" to have an innocuous but ultimately fatal little accident, right? Nothin' that would lead back to Bella or Edward! 

Now to see Rose and Emmett's reaction to the sparkage I'm sure they can clearly see between Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Edward and Bella have the best of both worlds...well, they will as soon as he gets that gorgeous collar on her!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Damn, that man's just as sexy puttin' his clothes on as takin' 'em off LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

Angela didn't do half as much to Peter as he deserved but I can hardly blame her for not wantin' to spend another minute in his putrid presence *gag!* Clever of her to get him to admit his crimes on film *high five!*

Edward, Bella and the rest of the Cullen family can finally breathe again and so can we LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh, I do love it when Esme goes all Mama Bear and can't wait to see the considerable damage she inflicts on "his" family when she gets the green light!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Edward and Bella already read each other so well even if they've only known each other a short time. Plus, laughter is necessary for a healthy relationship although Edward might have some bruises to show for it LOL!

The bitch squad have just become useful idiots to an evil bastard who should have his own trackin' device up his ass!

ps: Bella's gown is absolutely gorgeous! 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

OMG! Angela is the QUEEN! Nice little trap Peter walked himself into, voluntarily, I might add, which makes his downfall that much sweeter LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

While Edward and Bella are still in a period of adjustment, it would appear that Edward is an expert in time management *wink!*

Also, glad Bella got to find out just how little those skanks meant to Rose!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

I like that Edward is a Dominant who doesn't withhold pleasure, either his own or hers. Of course, this could be a direct result of fallin' in love with Bella. It probably wasn't like that with his previous subs.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh, I just knew I was gonna love Nahuel LOL! Had he not come up the the loophole, I was wonderin' what would happen if Bella just returned the money!?!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-six

Poor Tyler got a first hand taste of what it's like to go up against Esme in mama bear mode and it wasn pretty LOL!

Finally gettin' closer to payback, especially now that Esme knows whose family to destroy...and you know she will *woo hoo!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

I'm sure Jasper and Alice will be appalled to hear about Peter and, as for Peter, he'll throw an enormous tantrum if his past is anything to go by...hopefully with lots of witnesses LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Not surprised Bella went Yellow at the sound of a camera even though she trusts Edward with her life. Perhaps he should have discussed its use beforehand *sigh!*

Felix has good instincts and I can't wait to see what tailin' those two sluts delivers LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

The Whitlock family needs to go down, as well, for coverin' for that heineous bastard...enter Esme Cullen who always keeps her promise and I can't wait!

Tia and Leah more than deserve to go down with him, too. As for the substitute Bella, no clue who it might be but the shock to Peter will be quite entertainin', I'm sure!

Summary:

Blood Demons

Edward “Viper” Masen is the president of the Blood Demons MC taking over after a rival club murdered his father. His life is busy with running the legal and illegal businesses of the club. No time or heart for a steady Old Lady, instead he took what the Blood Succubus offered. No one would take the place of his Little Isa in his heart. The girl who he fell in love with one summer, sharing all their firsts with each other until she disappeared without a trace. 

 

Bella “Isa” Stewart, daughter of Charlie “Crusher” Swan and Renee Stewart is in exile in New York when her father catches her with a boy. Not telling why she wasn’t allowed to be with him, she is commanded to stay as far away from Phoenix as possible. Over the years her father comes to visit a few times, bringing his VP Demetri, who looks at her like she is something to eat. 

What happens when she receives a phone call from someone in her father’s club to tell her that her father is dead and Demetri did it? Then Demetri shows up at her apartment building with several other members. Hopping on her bike she heads cross country to hide out with a high school friend. Arriving in Phoenix, memories of the boy she fell in love swirl in her mind. Pulling into the parking lot to meet her friend, she comes face to face with a sexy man, covered in tattoos and wearing a leather motorcycle club vest with a president patch. He is a stranger, but there was something about his eyes. 

Can Viper protect her from Demetri and take revenge for him killing her father? How will he react when he finds out who she really is? Will they be able to wipe years away and pick back up where they left off?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31201 Read Count: 20910
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2021 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Well, hell! Demetri not only cost Bella her father but her boomin' business, as well! Still, she outsmarted the bastard and got away *phew!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Fabulous introduction to this gnarly cast of characters, Clo darlin'! I'm already in love with them all, especially Viper, of course LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dudes look to be findin' a new home but I guess it wouldn't be prudent of Viper to try 'n recruit them...right?

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Awww, 3 babies for Slammer and Foxy! (Just got 3 babies home to one of my Arkansas cousins this week after a month in hospital...scary times but they all made it!)

Can't wait for Bella and Viper to recognize each other!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

If it was only the description, I wouldn't be impressed with Viper's digs but the photos completely changed my mind *WOW!*

Well, had Viper not turned on the news about Charlie's brutal death, Bella might not have had the breakdown that resulted in the discovery that he was her Edward and she was his Isa! Red's in for a surprise when she gets back LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

What a traumatic start to life...poor kid! She was lucky to get out of that situation alive, as was Charlie *sigh!*

But now Isa is right back where she belongs which is in Edward's arms! Demitri, or should I say Terror, has a lot to pay for and I'm sure Viper will make sure he does!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

The sooner Viper gets his cut on Bella, the better, although it looks like Candy's gonna cause a big stink. How she thinks that will get her Viper, I just don't understand. DEEELUUSION!!!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Well, it wasn't about Kevlar's cock, per se, but about the pearl piercin' so Viper could just get himself a pearl...problem solved!

Now to see our boys kick some Satan Savages ass *woo hoo!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Poor ol' Waylon! Bella will be devastated when she finds out *sigh!* As for Demetri and his evil henchmen, may they rot in hell forever when Viper gets hold of them!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 May 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Well, at least two people in the club have the potential of rattin' Bella out to Terror...Preacher and Candy. Maybe Tiny, too!? In any case, a shitstorm is brewin' on the horizon!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

I'm guessin' lockdown is only for women and children...the men, led by Viper, will be kickin' ass and takin' names, right? Otherwise, no tellin' how long they'd be in confinement *ugh!*

Summary:

A Christmas Miracle

Dr. Edward Cullen had it all. A job he excelled in, a high-rise penthouse apartment in the heart of New York city, and a wife he loved more than anything else in the world. Edward is called upon to perform life-saving surgery on a patient who cannot travel. He was excited to do it, until he found out where it was, the Arctic Tundra. It would require him to be away from his loving wife for at least two months.

Bella Cullen supported her husband and when he came home and told her someone needed him, she told him to go. Kissing him goodbye at the airport, he promises to be home soon, leaving his heart with her.

What happens when two months later when the plane Edward is on to come back home crashes? How will Bella survive without him? Wanting to give up herself until she finds out a piece of him still lives inside her.

 

Do Christmas Miracles still happen? Edward/Bella HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10134 Read Count: 7471
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2021 Updated: 01 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

We are all blessed by the dedicated medical professionals who fight for us every day! The bureaucrats can suck it but the first responders are angels!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Distance makes the heart grow fonder? Yeah, right! It's painful as hell, as Edward and Bella are about to find out! It will be worth it if Embry pulls through, though *fingers crossed!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

NOOOOO! Crap, my heart just broke *snotsob!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Worst news imaginable for anyone to receive *sigh!* Unfortuately, 99.999% of people don't get that kind of news reversed. However, this is fanfiction and we trust you to give Bella that slimmest of chances for a HEA!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

(didn't get update notice from STARS)

How lucky was Edward for Santa himself to have found him LOL! Too bad it took so long to get his memories back but better late than never!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Well, if you can believe in miracles, why not magic...especially Christmas magic!? What a fantastic ride with Santa that must have been for Edward but nothin' compared to holdin' his daughter in his arms (FLUV that manip of Edward holdin' the baby)!!!

Summary:

Although Edward and Bella were destined to be together, there may be obstacles. But their love for each other was never questioned, as evidenced with the letters of love.

Letters of Love


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13279 Read Count: 5705
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2022 Updated: 14 Feb 2022
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Oh, I'm so happy he came out of it with his memories in tact *phew!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

That family only schtick doesn't work when you lie! The love of my life was in critical condition after a motorcycle accident. I went straight through when I told them I was his wife and that his black best friend who was with me was his brother...they didn't bother to check!

Anyway, there's a special place in hell for drunk drivers!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

They grow up so fast...too fast *sniff!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn, girl! It's like havin' my birthday and Christmas all rolled into one as you couldn't have presented me with a better gift than this sweet, awesome story where Edward and Bella have a connection even before they were born LOL! 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

That's one rite of passage they were lucky went as well as it did!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Craftsman bungalow *drool!* Maybe I'll get one in my next life LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Necessity is the mother of invention and Esme, bein' an uber mother, came up with just the right "invention" to allow Bella to go to Edward's first game *woo hoo!*

Gotta say, both sets of parents are pretty darned awesome, understandin' and...I guess resigned is a good word, for now LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Didn't take Charlie long to give Edward the requisite "if you hurt her, I will end you" warnin' LOL! Well, all fathers do it, right? Tanya is a certified psycho who will probably end up on juvie if she doesn't stop stalkin' Edward...or Bella will end up in jail for aggravated assault LOL! I'm hopin' she will feel well enough to be at his game, after all!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

A fairytale endin' to a fairytale love story *le sigh!*